Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYF1W6VKA3V5KYDBMH2D7Y

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.010298
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement, a relentless curtain of grey that turned the London streetlights into smeared streaks of neon. Harlow Quinn vaulted over a discarded bin, her boots skidding on the slick cobblestones before finding purchase. The suspect was ahead, a silhouette in a dark hoodie cutting through the alley behind the Raven’s Nest. That distinctive green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a sickly glow on the wet brickwork. "Stop! Police!" Harlow’s voice cracked through the downpour, lost in the drumming of water on metal rooftops. The runner didn't even look back. He pumped his arms, legs driving him toward the dead end that Harlow knew wasn't actually a dead end. She’d been watching this stretch of Soho for weeks, waiting for the clique to slip up. She checked her watch, the worn leather strap digging into her wrist. Time was bleeding away. The suspect hit the chain-link fence at the back of the old textile factory. He didn't slow down. He didn't climb. He simply ran through it. The metal links seemed to part like smoke, wrapping around him for a split second before he tumbled out the other side. Harlow skidded to a halt, mud splashing her trousers. She stared at the fence. It rattled in the wind, solid and unbroken. No hole. No tear. "What the hell?" She slammed a hand against the cold metal. It rang out, solid and unforgiving. He was gone. Not gone-run-away, gone-vanished. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm that had nothing to do with the sprint. She looked left, then right. An open drain? No. Too small. A ripple of distortion hung in the air where the man had passed. Like heat haze rising from tarmac, but here in the freezing rain. She reached out, fingers brushing the space. Static electricity snapped at her skin, raising the hair on her arms. It tasted like ozone. Like the air right before a lightning strike. Three years ago, DS Morris had vanished. Just gone from a locked room. Harlow had spent a thousand hours staring at the crime scene photos, looking for a trap door, a vent, anything logical. There had been nothing. Until now. She gritted her teeth, her sharp jawline set hard. Logic be damned. She drew her service weapon, the grip slippery in her hand, and stepped forward. The world folded in on itself. Gravity shifted, her stomach lurching as the alleyway twisted and stretched. The sound of rain cutting through the Soho air abruptly silenced, replaced by the low, thrumming hum of something alive underground. Harlow stumbled, catching herself against a wall of rough-hewn stone. The air here was dry, smelling of burnt sage and copper. She spun around, weapon raised. The alley was gone. She stood at the edge of a platform overlooking a vast cavern. It looked like an abandoned Tube station, but the architecture was wrong. The arches were too high, the tiles stained with ancient soot that glowed with a faint, violet luminescence. This was deep. Deeper than the Northern Line. The Veil Market. Rumours whispered in the backs of interrogation rooms. A place where the unexplainable was traded for cash. She’d thought it was a myth addicts told to scare the rookies. Below her, a sprawling bazaar had been carved out of the darkness. stalls lined the old tracks, covered in awnings made of silk and leather. Figures moved between them, hoods drawn, faces obscured. Some walked on two legs, others... didn't. A tall, slender creature with skin like polished obsidian inspected a jar of floating light, its long fingers tapering into claws. Her breathing hitched. She tightened her grip on the gun. This wasn't just criminal activity. This was a war zone she hadn't been briefed on. Movement to her left. The suspect. He was scrambling down a rusted ladder towards the main floor of the market. He had pulled off his hoodie, revealing a shock of white hair and a vest that glimmered with shifting scales. He wasn't human. Or not anymore. He dropped the last few feet, landing silently in the crowd. The vendors and shoppers didn't scream. They didn't point. They simply melted back, creating a wide circle of avoidance around him. Fear. Even down here, he was dangerous. Harlow holstered her weapon. Drawing it down here felt like bringing a knife to a nuke fight. She needed to be smarter. She needed to be close. She climbed over the railing, sliding down the support pillar until she hit the concrete floor. The impact jarred her knees. She stayed low, using the shadows of the abandoned train carriages as cover. The smell here was overwhelming. Rotting fruit mixed with the metallic tang of blood and something sickly sweet, like overripe plums. She moved past a stall stacked high with books that whispered when she walked by. The stall keeper, a woman with eyes that were entirely black, watched her pass but said nothing. Harlow focused on the runner. He was heading for the back of the station, toward a heavy iron door flanked by two hulking figures. Guards. They carried staffs topped with jagged crystals that pulsed in time with the violet lights overhead. She couldn't just walk up to him. She needed to blend in. She glanced down at her soaked trench coat and badge. She stuck the badge in her inside pocket, zipping it shut. The rain had plastered her salt-and-pepper hair to her skull, obscuring her face. That would have to do. She slipped into the flow of the crowd, keeping her head down. A being made of writhing smoke brushed past her shoulder, leaving a trail of ice on her skin. Harlow suppressed a shudder and kept moving. Every instinct screamed at her to run back to the rain-soaked alley, back to the world where the bad guys just carried guns and the worst thing that happened was a stabbing. This was the deep end. She watched the suspect reach the guards. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small disc. A bone token. It caught the violet light, casting a skull-shaped shadow on the floor. The guard nodded, the heavy door groaning open to reveal a darkness absolute. He was getting away. Harlow scanned the area. A stack of wooden crates near the guards. It would give her the height she needed. She moved, stepping carefully over a puddle of glowing green sludge. The crowd was thinner here. More dangerous. "Fresh meat," a voice rasped. Harlow ignored it. She reached the crates, crouching behind them. The guards were five yards away. They were talking in a language that sounded like stones grinding together. She checked her watch again. No signal. No radio. She was alone. The suspect was halfway through the door. If it closed, he was gone. Harlow stood up. She didn't have a token. She didn't have magic. She had eighteen years of experience and a stubborn refusal to let the monsters win. "Hey!" The guards turned. Slow, deliberate. The crystals on their staffs flared brighter. Harlow didn't wait for them to raise their weapons. She sprinted. Not away. Toward them. Toward the door. Toward the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"lurching"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"hulking"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"lurching"
2"silk"
3"hulking"
4"pulsed"
5"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1191
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Harlow13
Soho2
Morris1
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Harlow"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like an abandoned Tube station, bu"
1"felt like bringing a knife to a nuke fi"
2"sounded like stones grinding together"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1199
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.55
std19.74
cv0.626
sampleLengths
070
12
256
316
448
526
63
748
856
940
1026
1138
1226
1354
143
1529
1661
1725
1846
1939
2027
2134
2253
2341
2451
2569
265
2746
284
2938
305
3128
3212
3313
3427
351
3612
3721
88.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences143
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was traded"
3"been carved"
4"been briefed"
5"being made"
6"was gone"
79.88% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs222
matches
0"was bleeding"
1"was scrambling"
2"was heading"
3"were talking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1200
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.0275
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0075
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean8.21
std5.77
cv0.702
sampleLengths
020
117
218
315
42
515
66
719
816
912
104
1114
124
133
145
1522
169
175
188
192
202
213
228
236
243
253
2617
275
283
291
302
3113
3212
337
3412
354
368
377
386
3921
404
412
429
433
4414
456
4611
4721
4810
4911
41.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3219178082191781
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners47
26.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"Just gone from a locked"
ratio0.008
49.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences127
matches
0"He pumped his arms, legs"
1"She’d been watching this stretch"
2"She checked her watch, the"
3"He didn't slow down."
4"He didn't climb."
5"He simply ran through it."
6"She stared at the fence."
7"It rattled in the wind,"
8"She slammed a hand against"
9"It rang out, solid and"
10"He was gone."
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"She looked left, then right."
13"She reached out, fingers brushing"
14"It tasted like ozone."
15"She gritted her teeth, her"
16"She drew her service weapon,"
17"She spun around, weapon raised."
18"She stood at the edge"
19"It looked like an abandoned"
ratio0.425
15.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount113
totalSentences127
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement,"
1"Harlow Quinn vaulted over a"
2"The suspect was ahead, a"
3"That distinctive green neon sign"
4"Harlow’s voice cracked through the"
5"The runner didn't even look"
6"He pumped his arms, legs"
7"She’d been watching this stretch"
8"She checked her watch, the"
9"Time was bleeding away."
10"The suspect hit the chain-link"
11"He didn't slow down."
12"He didn't climb."
13"He simply ran through it."
14"The metal links seemed to"
15"Harlow skidded to a halt,"
16"She stared at the fence."
17"It rattled in the wind,"
18"She slammed a hand against"
19"It rang out, solid and"
ratio0.89
78.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"Even down here, he was"
1"If it closed, he was"
ratio0.016
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Harlow Quinn vaulted over a discarded bin, her boots skidding on the slick cobblestones before finding purchase."
1"The arches were too high, the tiles stained with ancient soot that glowed with a faint, violet luminescence."
2"He had pulled off his hoodie, revealing a shock of white hair and a vest that glimmered with shifting scales."
3"A being made of writhing smoke brushed past her shoulder, leaving a trail of ice on her skin."
4"Every instinct screamed at her to run back to the rain-soaked alley, back to the world where the bad guys just carried guns and the worst thing that happened wa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9117%