Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYF37B8E6M0B4PMJVR8N6S

Run Details

Duration:
2m 26s
Cost:
$0.000932
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign cast its sickly glow across the wet pavement. Rory shouldered the heavy delivery bag higher, her breath puffing in the cold air. Golden Empress had been slammed tonight, and her last drop-off was a corporate flat two streets from The Raven’s Nest. The thought of Silas’s quiet bar, a single malt, and a booth in the corner was the only thing propelling her forward through the drizzle. She pushed the door open, the bell jangling softly. The familiar warmth enveloped her, along with the smell of old wood, spilled beer, and Silas’s particular brand of lemon polish. The place was quiet for a Friday; a couple at the far end of the bar, a man reading a paper in a booth. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes giving her a slow, appraising once-over. He gave a slight nod toward the back—his signal that the hidden room was occupied and she should keep to the front. She shrugged off her damp jacket and slung it over a stool at the bar. “The usual, Rory?” “Please, Si. Make it a double. It’s been a day.” He set the glass down with a quiet thud and poured two fingers of an Islay single malt, no ice. She was about to take it to her usual corner when the door chimed again. A gust of cold air swept in, followed by a man in a long, expensive-looking wool coat. He paused, scanning the dim room, his gaze sliding past her before snapping back. His eyes widened. “Laila?” The old name, her middle name, the one only a few people from her past ever used, hit her like a physical blow. The glass stopped halfway to her lips. She turned. The man was taller than she remembered, his face leaner, the boyish softness carved away into angles. His dark hair was shorter, expensively cut. But the eyes were the same—a warm, liquid brown she’d once known as well as her own. Evan. Not her Evan. A different one. Evan Pryce. “Evan.” Silas, ever perceptive, had gone still behind the bar, his polishing rag motionless on the glass. His gaze flicked between them. Evan’s smile was hesitant, disbelieving. “Bloody hell. Laila Carter. I thought… I heard you were in London, but I never…” He took a step closer, shedding the aura of the confident city professional. “You look… amazing.” She felt anything but. Her black hair was damp and lank from the rain, her hands chapped from the cold. She was wearing a faded band t-shirt under her delivery jacket. “You look…” She searched for a word that wasn’t a lie. “Different.” “Older,” he laughed, a short, nervous sound. “Can I…?” He gestured to the stool next to hers. She nodded, the motion stiff. Silas raised an eyebrow at her. She gave a minute shake of her head. *Stand down.* Evan shrugged out of his coat, revealing a suit that cost more than her monthly rent. He ordered a gin and tonic, specifying the brand. He turned the stool to face her, his knee almost brushing hers. The proximity sent a jolt through her, a memory of a different kind of closeness. “I was meeting a client,” he said, answering a question she hadn’t asked. “He’s late. Probably stuck in the bloody rain. And then I walk in here, of all places…” He shook his head, still marvelling. “How long has it been?” “Six years,” Rory said. The number fell between them, solid and heavy. “Since graduation.” “Six years.” He repeated it softly, sipping his drink. “You vanished, Laila. One day you were there, the next… Poof. Your number was disconnected. Socials went dark. It was like you’d been beamed up.” “I moved.” “To London.” “Eventually.” He studied her face, his eyes tracing the lines that hadn’t been there at twenty-one. “You were going to be a barrister. Like your dad. You were top of our class.” “Plans change.” “Mine didn’t.” He said it without arrogance, a simple statement of fact. “I’m a partner now. At Hartwell and Pryce.” She knew the firm. Prestigious. His father’s firm. The path had been laid out for him since birth, smooth and straight. She’d been on a similar path once, the gravel neatly raked by her father. She’d veered off into the brambles. “Congratulations,” she said, and meant it. The Evan she’d known had been ambitious, but kind. He’d wanted to change the world from the inside. She wondered if he still did. “And you?” He gestured vaguely at her clothes, the heavy delivery bag slumped by her feet. “What… what do you do now?” She saw the question in his eyes, the confusion. The Laila he’d known wore crisp blouses and talked about tort reform. This woman in a rain-spattered t-shirt was a stranger. A part of her wanted to lie, to construct a life that would make sense to him. Another part, the weary, honest part, couldn’t be bothered. “I deliver food. For a Chinese restaurant in Soho.” His carefully neutral expression faltered for a second. Just a twitch at the corner of his mouth, a blink. He covered it with another sip of his drink. “Right. Well. That’s… honest work.” “It pays the bills.” “You live around here?” “Above the bar.” His eyes flicked toward Silas, who was now ostentatiously rearranging bottles, clearly listening. “With… him?” “God, no. He’s my landlord. And a friend.” She felt a need to defend the simplicity of it. “It’s a good flat. Quiet.” An awkward silence descended, filled only by the low hum of the cooler and the distant sound of traffic. The weight of those six years pressed down on the space between them, filled with all the things they hadn’t shared: her flight from Cardiff, the months of terrified looking over her shoulder, the slow, cautious rebuilding of a life in London. His own journey—the promotions, the weddings of mutual friends she hadn’t been invited to, the slow solidification of the man he was meant to become. “Do you ever go back?” he asked finally. “To Cardiff?” “No.” “Your parents…” “Are fine. We talk.” “I saw your dad last year. At a charity function. He asked if I’d heard from you.” Her throat tightened. “What did you say?” “I said no.” Evan swirled the ice in his glass. “He looked… sad, I think. He didn’t talk about your brother, but everyone knows he’s in Dubai. And you’re here.” He looked around the dim bar, at the old maps on the walls. “He just said he missed your debates.” The memory was a sharp, sudden pain. Sunday dinners, arguing case law over roast chicken. Her father’s proud, challenging smile. She took a long swallow of whisky, letting the peat smoke burn away the feeling. “Why, Laila?” The question was quiet, stripped of judgement, full of a simple, profound confusion. “You were the brightest of all of us. You could have had anything. Why… this?” *Because ‘anything’ felt like a cage.* She couldn’t say that. The Evan sitting before her, in his bespoke suit, embodied that ‘anything.’ He wore it comfortably. “I needed to be somewhere else,” she said, her voice low. “Someone else.” “And are you?” He leaned forward slightly, his brown eyes intent. “Happy, I mean?” It was the most direct question anyone had asked her in years. People in her new life—Silas, Eva, Yu-Fei—they didn’t ask. They saw. They knew. Happiness wasn’t a relevant metric for the life she led. Satisfaction, perhaps. Purpose, in a twisted way. Safety, most of all. “I’m content,” she said, and it was mostly true. He searched her face, looking for the girl he’d known. Rory saw the moment he gave up. His shoulders relaxed, and a soft, resigned sadness settled in his eyes. He nodded slowly. “I’m glad. Really.” They lapsed into another silence, but this one was softer, the tension bled out. The past was a country they could no longer visit together. They were both exiles, just from different lands. His phone buzzed on the bar. He glanced at it. “My client. He’s downstairs.” “You should go.” “I should.” He didn’t move. He finished his drink and stood, pulling on his coat. He looked down at her, and for a second, the old Evan was there in his smile—the one who’d borrowed her notes and laughed at her terrible jokes. “It was really good to see you, Laila.” “You too, Evan.” He hesitated, then reached out and squeezed her shoulder. The touch was brief, warm, final. “Take care of yourself.” “You too.” He turned and walked out, the bell jangling behind him. The cold air rushed in and then was gone. Rory stared at the door, the ghost of his hand still warm on her jacket. Silas moved down the bar and refilled her glass without being asked. He didn’t look at her. “Old friend?” he asked, his voice neutral. “Something like that.” “He looked like he’d seen a ghost.” Rory picked up her fresh whisky, watching the amber liquid catch the light. “Maybe he did.”
created_at"2026-02-19T12:37:15.121Z" 2/19/2026, 12:37:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he asked finally [finally]"
2"He looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.656
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.094
77.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"scanning"
3"flicked"
4"eyebrow"
5"tracing"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"profound"
9"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1515
ratio0.005
matches
0"Stand down."
1"Because ‘anything’ felt like a cage."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1180
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
Friday1
Islay1
Evan9
Pryce1
Rory5
Laila1
Cardiff1
London1
Eva1
Yu-Fei-they1
persons
0"Empress"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Pryce"
4"Rory"
5"Laila"
6"Eva"
7"Yu-Fei-they"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1515
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean23.67
std22.06
cv0.932
sampleLengths
080
198
23
310
469
51
632
750
81
921
1036
1143
1217
1321
1452
1541
1614
1734
182
192
201
2131
222
2320
2441
2530
2622
2756
289
2933
304
314
323
3315
3423
3586
3610
371
382
394
4017
417
4250
4335
4430
4526
4613
4714
4846
499
90.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences117
matches
0"been slammed"
1"been laid"
2"been invited"
3"was meant"
4"was gone"
5"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was wearing"
35.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences160
ratio0.038
matches
0"The place was quiet for a Friday; a couple at the far end of the bar, a man reading a paper in a booth."
1"He gave a slight nod toward the back—his signal that the hidden room was occupied and she should keep to the front."
2"But the eyes were the same—a warm, liquid brown she’d once known as well as her own."
3"His own journey—the promotions, the weddings of mutual friends she hadn’t been invited to, the slow solidification of the man he was meant to become."
4"People in her new life—Silas, Eva, Yu-Fei—they didn’t ask."
5"He looked down at her, and for a second, the old Evan was there in his smile—the one who’d borrowed her notes and laughed at her terrible jokes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.035218783351120594
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.016008537886873
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean9.47
std7.05
cv0.744
sampleLengths
012
114
220
325
49
521
624
716
822
915
103
1110
1220
1315
1417
1514
163
171
1823
197
202
2117
227
2317
241
253
263
272
281
2916
305
315
3228
333
344
3516
3611
3711
381
397
4010
415
426
438
442
4516
469
4712
4815
4913
58.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38125
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners61
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just a twitch at the"
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences107
matches
0"She pushed the door open,"
1"He gave a slight nod"
2"She shrugged off her damp"
3"He set the glass down"
4"She was about to take"
5"He paused, scanning the dim"
6"His eyes widened."
7"His dark hair was shorter,"
8"His gaze flicked between them."
9"He took a step closer,"
10"She felt anything but."
11"Her black hair was damp"
12"She was wearing a faded"
13"She searched for a word"
14"he laughed, a short, nervous"
15"He gestured to the stool"
16"She nodded, the motion stiff."
17"She gave a minute shake"
18"He ordered a gin and"
19"He turned the stool to"
ratio0.579
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green neon sign cast"
1"Rory shouldered the heavy delivery"
2"The thought of Silas’s quiet"
3"She pushed the door open,"
4"The familiar warmth enveloped her,"
5"The place was quiet for"
6"Silas looked up from polishing"
7"He gave a slight nod"
8"She shrugged off her damp"
9"He set the glass down"
10"She was about to take"
11"A gust of cold air"
12"He paused, scanning the dim"
13"His eyes widened."
14"The old name, her middle"
15"The glass stopped halfway to"
16"The man was taller than"
17"His dark hair was shorter,"
18"A different one."
19"Silas, ever perceptive, had gone"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He paused, scanning the dim room, his gaze sliding past her before snapping back."
1"He studied her face, his eyes tracing the lines that hadn’t been there at twenty-one."
2"His eyes flicked toward Silas, who was now ostentatiously rearranging bottles, clearly listening."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
1"he asked, his voice neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he laughed (laugh)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.063
79.2703%