Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYF54AYZWNYS17MSTCZH53

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Duration:
59.3s
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$0.005993
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SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden hadn't seen a paying passenger since 1932. Yellow crime scene tape stretched across the rotting turnstiles, plastic fluttering in the draft from somewhere deeper in the tunnels. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath it, her worn leather watch catching the light from the constable's torch as she straightened. 'Down here, Detective. Mind the third step—rotted through.' She navigated the spiral staircase without faltering, military precision in every placement of her boots. The air grew thick as she descended, carrying the stench of damp concrete and something else. Something that prickled at the back of her throat. Copper. Old copper. The platform spread before her, tiled walls covered in graffiti tags and fungal growth. Two uniformed officers stood near the edge, their torches cutting pale beams through the darkness. Between them, a shape lay crumpled against the platform's lip. 'Male, mid-thirties, no identification.' DC Marcus Webb stepped forward, his round face catching shadows that made him look younger than his thirty years. 'Uniforms found him at oh-four-hundred during a routine sweep of the tunnels. Homeless bloke reported hearing something fall.' Quinn crouched beside the body. The victim's clothes were quality—wool coat, leather brogues, a watch on his wrist that probably cost more than her monthly salary. No visible wounds. No defensive injuries on his hands. She leaned closer, studying his face. His eyes were open. Cloudy, fixed on the arched ceiling above, but open. And his mouth— She tilted her head. His jaw hung slack, but not in the relaxed way of death. Something had forced it open. Strained the muscles around the hinge. 'Pathologist puts time of death between midnight and two a.m.' Webb flipped through his notebook. 'Likely cardiac arrest. No signs of struggle, no defensive wounds, wallet still in his pocket with seventy-three quid and a credit card in the name of Oliver Bancroft. We're running him now, but initial thoughts? Poor bastard got lost, panicked, heart gave out.' 'He's wearing a four-hundred-pound coat and shoes handmade on Jermyn Street.' Quinn didn't look up. 'Men who can afford Jermyn Street don't get lost in abandoned Tube stations.' 'Spooked, then. Mugging gone wrong, he ran—' 'His shoes are clean, Webb. Not a scuff on them. Not a speck of tunnel muck.' She stood, surveying the platform. 'Where's the homeless witness?' 'Gone. Officers said he took off before they could get a statement.' Quinn walked the perimeter, her torch sweeping across the grimy tiles. Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a slow metronome counting seconds no one would remember. She paused at the far end of the platform, where an archway led deeper into the station. A security gate blocked the passage. Heavy iron, bolted into the stone. A sign hung crooked from one rusted chain: AUTHORIZED PERSONNEL ONLY. Beyond it, blackness. 'That gate locked?' she called back. Webb consulted his notebook again. 'Officers said it was secured when they arrived. Chain and padlock, still intact.' She approached, her torch beam finding the padlock. Heavy iron, old but functional. No rust on the shackle. She reached through the bars and tested it. Solid. Her beam swept the floor beyond the gate. Nothing. Smooth concrete, dust undisturbed. She returned to the body, kneeling again. The victim's hands were manicured, soft. A ring on his right hand—gold, set with a stone that caught her torchlight in an odd way. Not a diamond. Something darker, almost black, that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it. 'What do we know about Bancroft?' 'Works in finance. Some investment firm in the City. Lives alone in a flat in Islington.' Webb paused. 'No criminal record. No known associations with any groups we're tracking.' Quinn turned the man's hand over. No calluses. No ink stains. The hands of someone who made money by moving other money around, who never lifted anything heavier than a pen or a crystal tumbler. She reached into his coat pocket. Fabric, cool and dry. She found a silk handkerchief, a set of keys, a small tin of mints. In the inner breast pocket, her fingers brushed something hard. A coin. No—she pulled it out, holding it up to the torchlight. A token. Bone-white, carved with symbols she didn't recognise. The edges were worn smooth, as if it had passed through many hands before this one. 'What's that?' 'Evidence.' She slipped it into an evidence bag. 'Where was he found exactly? Right here?' 'Uniforms said he was lying face-up, head toward the tracks. They didn't move him.' She looked at the tracks below the platform edge. Rusty rails, rotted wooden sleepers. The tunnel stretched in both directions, swallowing her torch beam. But something caught her eye—a faint glint from the left-hand tunnel, maybe ten metres in. 'Shine your light down there.' Webb obliged. The beam caught the glint again. Brass. 'Stay here.' She climbed down onto the track bed, gravel crunching beneath her boots. The smell was stronger here—copper and something else, something that made her skin prickle. She walked toward the glint, crouching when she reached it. A compass. Small, brass casing covered in verdigris, the face etched with markings that looked almost like writing but weren't any alphabet she recognised. The needle spun in lazy circles, never settling. She picked it up. The brass was cold enough to burn. 'Detective?' Webb's voice echoed from the platform. 'What have you found?' She pocketed the compass without answering, her mind working through the impossibilities. A man in expensive clothes, dead of no apparent cause, in a sealed location he had no business being. A bone token in his pocket. A compass that pointed nowhere. And that smell. Copper, yes, but underneath it— Ozone. The sharp, electric tang of lightning, or something like it. She climbed back onto the platform, brushing gravel from her knees. Webb watched her with the patient wariness of a man who'd learned that Detective Harlow Quinn saw things other officers missed—and that following her observations usually led to paperwork no one wanted to file. 'Well? You want to tell me what you're thinking, or do I have to guess?' 'The gate.' She jerked her chin toward the archway. 'Show me the chain again.' They walked back together. Webb shone his torch on the padlock, the chain threaded through the iron bars. 'See how it's fastened?' He leaned closer. 'The chain's looped through itself. Standard padlock attachment.' 'But look at the links. The ones nearest the padlock.' She pointed. 'Scratched. Fresh metal showing through the rust. Someone threaded this chain back through after opening it, but they did it in a hurry. The scratches weren't there before.' Webb squinted. 'Could be old damage.' 'It isn't.' She pulled a pen from her pocket, touching the scratch marks. 'These are bright. Fresh. Someone was on the other side of this gate recently, and they came back through from whatever's back there.' 'Then where's the key? The padlock wasn't picked—uniforms checked.' 'A key isn't the only way to open a padlock.' She turned, looking back at the body. 'And our Mr Bancroft might not have been the only one here tonight.' 'You think there was someone else? A second person?' 'I think a man who can afford handmade shoes doesn't wander into abandoned Tube stations alone at midnight and die of fright.' She walked back toward the turnstiles, her mind already constructing and discarding theories. 'I think someone put that token in his pocket, or he was bringing it somewhere. And I think that compass was dropped—by him, or by whoever else was here.' 'A compass?' She stopped at the bottom of the stairs, turning back. Webb's face was caught between curiosity and the weary resignation of a man who'd followed her down enough rabbit holes to know better. 'The gate leads somewhere, Webb. And someone doesn't want us to know what's back there.' She started up the stairs, her torch beam bouncing off the curved walls. 'I want officers posted at every entrance to this station. Round-the-clock rotation. And I want to know if anyone else comes asking about Oliver Bancroft or what he was doing down here.' She reached the top of the stairs and stepped over the crime scene tape, the morning air hitting her face. The sky was lightening toward dawn, Camden's streets beginning to stir with early risers and delivery lorries. In her pocket, the compass needle still spun, searching for something that shouldn't exist. And in her other pocket, the bone token sat heavy against her hip, its carved symbols pressing through the evidence bag like a question waiting to be answered.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:37:17.073Z" 2/19/2026, 12:37:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"glint"
count3
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"crystal"
2"silk"
3"glint"
4"etched"
5"echoed"
6"electric"
7"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1432
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1067
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Webb"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Webb"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden2
Harlow2
Quinn5
Oliver2
Bancroft2
Mugging1
Officers1
City1
Ozone1
Detective2
Fresh2
Webb6
Round-the-clock1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Oliver"
4"Bancroft"
5"Mugging"
6"Officers"
7"Webb"
places
0"City"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1432
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"learned that Detective"
1"think that compass"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.27
std16.68
cv0.687
sampleLengths
053
18
240
33
439
541
641
716
827
958
1028
117
1225
1312
1443
1526
166
1718
1835
195
2048
216
2229
2335
2434
2512
2625
272
2815
2914
3039
315
329
332
3436
3532
3611
3711
3842
398
4011
4145
4215
4314
4418
454
4611
4740
486
4936
96.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"were manicured"
1"was dropped"
2"was caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was doing"
1"was lightening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences164
ratio0.067
matches
0"Mind the third step—rotted through.'"
1"The victim's clothes were quality—wool coat, leather brogues, a watch on his wrist that probably cost more than her monthly salary."
2"And his mouth—"
3"A ring on his right hand—gold, set with a stone that caught her torchlight in an odd way."
4"No—she pulled it out, holding it up to the torchlight."
5"But something caught her eye—a faint glint from the left-hand tunnel, maybe ten metres in."
6"The smell was stronger here—copper and something else, something that made her skin prickle."
7"Copper, yes, but underneath it—"
8"Webb watched her with the patient wariness of a man who'd learned that Detective Harlow Quinn saw things other officers missed—and that following her observations usually led to paperwork no one wanted to file."
9"The padlock wasn't picked—uniforms checked.'"
10"And I think that compass was dropped—by him, or by whoever else was here.'"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount53
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.018867924528301886
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean8.73
std6.65
cv0.761
sampleLengths
013
120
220
33
45
515
616
79
81
92
1014
1115
1210
1323
1412
156
165
1721
183
196
206
214
229
233
244
2512
265
276
2815
293
3025
317
328
3315
3413
352
365
375
385
3911
404
411
4211
4311
4415
4517
466
476
4811
493
70.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45121951219512196
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners74
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences104
matches
0"She navigated the spiral staircase"
1"She leaned closer, studying his"
2"His eyes were open."
3"She tilted her head."
4"His jaw hung slack, but"
5"We're running him now, but"
6"She paused at the far"
7"She approached, her torch beam"
8"She reached through the bars"
9"Her beam swept the floor"
10"She returned to the body,"
11"She reached into his coat"
12"She found a silk handkerchief,"
13"They didn't move"
14"She looked at the tracks"
15"She climbed down onto the"
16"She walked toward the glint,"
17"She picked it up."
18"She pocketed the compass without"
19"She climbed back onto the"
ratio0.24
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences104
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"She navigated the spiral staircase"
3"The air grew thick as"
4"Something that prickled at the"
5"The platform spread before her,"
6"Quinn crouched beside the body."
7"The victim's clothes were quality—wool"
8"She leaned closer, studying his"
9"His eyes were open."
10"She tilted her head."
11"His jaw hung slack, but"
12"Something had forced it open."
13"We're running him now, but"
14"Officers said he took off"
15"Quinn walked the perimeter, her"
16"Water dripped somewhere in the"
17"She paused at the far"
18"A security gate blocked the"
19"A sign hung crooked from"
ratio0.654
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"A ring on his right hand—gold, set with a stone that caught her torchlight in an odd way."
1"The smell was stronger here—copper and something else, something that made her skin prickle."
2"Small, brass casing covered in verdigris, the face etched with markings that looked almost like writing but weren't any alphabet she recognised."
3"Webb watched her with the patient wariness of a man who'd learned that Detective Harlow Quinn saw things other officers missed—and that following her observatio…"
4"Webb's face was caught between curiosity and the weary resignation of a man who'd followed her down enough rabbit holes to know better."
5"In her pocket, the compass needle still spun, searching for something that shouldn't exist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Homeless bloke reported (report)"
1"You want (want)"
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
81.7130%