| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "crystal" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "glint" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "standard" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1432 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Webb" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Webb" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 5 | | Oliver | 2 | | Bancroft | 2 | | Mugging | 1 | | Officers | 1 | | City | 1 | | Ozone | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Fresh | 2 | | Webb | 6 | | Round-the-clock | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Oliver" | | 4 | "Bancroft" | | 5 | "Mugging" | | 6 | "Officers" | | 7 | "Webb" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1432 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "learned that Detective" | | 1 | "think that compass" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 24.27 | | std | 16.68 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 96.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "were manicured" | | 1 | "was dropped" | | 2 | "was caught" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "was lightening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Mind the third step—rotted through.'" | | 1 | "The victim's clothes were quality—wool coat, leather brogues, a watch on his wrist that probably cost more than her monthly salary." | | 2 | "And his mouth—" | | 3 | "A ring on his right hand—gold, set with a stone that caught her torchlight in an odd way." | | 4 | "No—she pulled it out, holding it up to the torchlight." | | 5 | "But something caught her eye—a faint glint from the left-hand tunnel, maybe ten metres in." | | 6 | "The smell was stronger here—copper and something else, something that made her skin prickle." | | 7 | "Copper, yes, but underneath it—" | | 8 | "Webb watched her with the patient wariness of a man who'd learned that Detective Harlow Quinn saw things other officers missed—and that following her observations usually led to paperwork no one wanted to file." | | 9 | "The padlock wasn't picked—uniforms checked.'" | | 10 | "And I think that compass was dropped—by him, or by whoever else was here.'" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 53 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.018867924528301886 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 8.73 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 70.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.45121951219512196 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated the spiral staircase" | | 1 | "She leaned closer, studying his" | | 2 | "His eyes were open." | | 3 | "She tilted her head." | | 4 | "His jaw hung slack, but" | | 5 | "We're running him now, but" | | 6 | "She paused at the far" | | 7 | "She approached, her torch beam" | | 8 | "She reached through the bars" | | 9 | "Her beam swept the floor" | | 10 | "She returned to the body," | | 11 | "She reached into his coat" | | 12 | "She found a silk handkerchief," | | 13 | "They didn't move" | | 14 | "She looked at the tracks" | | 15 | "She climbed down onto the" | | 16 | "She walked toward the glint," | | 17 | "She picked it up." | | 18 | "She pocketed the compass without" | | 19 | "She climbed back onto the" |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath" | | 2 | "She navigated the spiral staircase" | | 3 | "The air grew thick as" | | 4 | "Something that prickled at the" | | 5 | "The platform spread before her," | | 6 | "Quinn crouched beside the body." | | 7 | "The victim's clothes were quality—wool" | | 8 | "She leaned closer, studying his" | | 9 | "His eyes were open." | | 10 | "She tilted her head." | | 11 | "His jaw hung slack, but" | | 12 | "Something had forced it open." | | 13 | "We're running him now, but" | | 14 | "Officers said he took off" | | 15 | "Quinn walked the perimeter, her" | | 16 | "Water dripped somewhere in the" | | 17 | "She paused at the far" | | 18 | "A security gate blocked the" | | 19 | "A sign hung crooked from" |
| | ratio | 0.654 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 38.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "A ring on his right hand—gold, set with a stone that caught her torchlight in an odd way." | | 1 | "The smell was stronger here—copper and something else, something that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "Small, brass casing covered in verdigris, the face etched with markings that looked almost like writing but weren't any alphabet she recognised." | | 3 | "Webb watched her with the patient wariness of a man who'd learned that Detective Harlow Quinn saw things other officers missed—and that following her observatio…" | | 4 | "Webb's face was caught between curiosity and the weary resignation of a man who'd followed her down enough rabbit holes to know better." | | 5 | "In her pocket, the compass needle still spun, searching for something that shouldn't exist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Homeless bloke reported (report)" | | 1 | "You want (want)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |