| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.423 | | leniency | 0.846 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 87.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "hungrily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "almost alive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1168 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1039 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Silence | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.634 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like hours, though the pendant's w" | | 1 | "seemed deeper here, as if they were gathering, pooling in the spaces between the oaks" | | 2 | "as if containing a tiny storm" | | 3 | "teeth that seemed to multiply with each passing second" |
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| 28.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.712 | | wordCount | 1168 | | matches | | 0 | "Not uncomfortably so, but enough to remind her it was there" | | 1 | "neither male nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 20.86 | | std | 12.98 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 45 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "were gathering" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "The creature's eyes—suddenly there, gleaming like polished obsidian—fixed on the glowing stone." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1044 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "white-hot against Rory's" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.038314176245210725 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013409961685823755 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 8.98 | | std | 5.62 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 51.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3384615384615385 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the rustle of leaves" | | 1 | "Then, from somewhere far too" | | 2 | "Only the shadows remained." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Its crimson glow illuminated the" | | 1 | "She'd been walking for what" | | 2 | "She'd chosen this route specifically" | | 3 | "Her voice sounded small in" | | 4 | "She continued forward, each step" | | 5 | "She pulled it out, examining" | | 6 | "Its surface seemed to swirl," | | 7 | "Her breath fogged before her" | | 8 | "she called again, her voice" | | 9 | "It seemed to come from" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "She'd come here seeking answers" | | 12 | "She backed away faster, her" | | 13 | "It wasn't human." | | 14 | "Its face was a smooth" | | 15 | "it said, its voice taking" | | 16 | "it said, its voice taking" | | 17 | "She screamed, tearing at the" | | 18 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 19 | "She backed away slowly, keeping" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 16.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "Its crimson glow illuminated the" | | 2 | "She'd been walking for what" | | 3 | "Time moved differently here." | | 4 | "Something crunched behind her." | | 5 | "Rory froze, hand instinctively reaching" | | 6 | "The sound had come from" | | 7 | "She'd chosen this route specifically" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded small in" | | 9 | "The pendant grew warmer." | | 10 | "She continued forward, each step" | | 11 | "The air grew thicker with" | | 12 | "Something sweet and cloying, like" | | 13 | "This time to her left." | | 14 | "Rory's heart hammered against her" | | 15 | "Nothing but darkness and trees." | | 16 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 17 | "She pulled it out, examining" | | 18 | "Its surface seemed to swirl," | | 19 | "The silver chain felt warm" |
| | ratio | 0.888 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "But the shadows seemed deeper here, as if they were gathering, pooling in the spaces between the oaks." | | 1 | "Its face was a smooth expanse of flesh, devoid of features except for a mouth that stretched too wide, filled with rows of needle-like teeth." | | 2 | "The creatures lunged as one, their mouths stretching wide to reveal rows of teeth that seemed to multiply with each passing second." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called again, her voice stronger this time" | | 1 | "it said, its voice taking on a new quality" | | 2 | "it said, its voice taking on a singsong quality" | | 3 | "it said, its voice a chorus of whispers" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |