Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYFDFSZ99Q2RYQ2HZE63D1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.007803
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement and turned the streetlights into smears of amber across the wet asphalt. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her shoulder against the brick corner of a building, her breath coming in controlled bursts that misted in the cold air. Three weeks of surveillance. Three weeks of watching, waiting, cataloguing faces and tracking movements. All of it came down to this moment. The man she'd been following—a reedy figure in a dark coat who moved with the practiced ease of someone who knew how to disappear—had spotted her. Of course he had. Eighteen years on the force, and still she could be made by an amateur. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Quarter past midnight. The streets of Soho had emptied hours ago, leaving only the rain and the shadows between street lamps. He was running now. She heard the splash of his footsteps echoing off the buildings two streets over. Quinn pushed off from the wall and gave chase. Her boots struck the cobblestones with military precision, each footfall deliberate despite the slick surface. The salt-and-pepper crop of her hair was already soaked through, and rain traced cold lines down her sharp jaw. She didn't care. The man had been leaving the Raven's Nest through a side entrance when she'd caught sight of him—something that shouldn't have been possible, given that Silas kept that door alarmed. The pursuit cut left down an alley that stank of old rubbish and cat piss. Quinn's torch beam caught the glint of wet bins, a broken fire escape, the flutter of a discarded newspaper. The suspect was fast, she'd give him that. But she knew these streets. She'd walked them a thousand times since Morris died, memorizing every corner, every shortcut, every dead end. She emerged onto a side street and caught sight of him fifty metres ahead, running toward the mouth of an abandoned Tube station. The entrance was cordoned off with yellow police tape that had long since faded to a sickly grey. Boards covered the stairs, but one had been pried loose. The suspect glanced back. His face was obscured by shadow and the downpour, but she saw the flash of something in his hand. Not a weapon. Something small. He ducked through the gap in the boards and vanished into the darkness below. Quinn slowed to a walk as she approached. The rain drummed against the boards, filling the silence. A sign overhead—rusty and bullet-holed—proclaimed this as Camden Road Station, closed since the fifties. She knew the history. Everyone did. What the public records didn't mention was what the tunnels beneath had become. She crouched near the gap and ran her torch beam across the ground. Footprints in the grime. Fresh. And beside them, carved into the concrete with something sharp, a symbol she'd seen before in case files that had been sealed before she could read them. A spiral that didn't quite close. Morris had drawn that symbol. She'd found the sketch in his notebook the night he died. Her jaw tightened. For three years, she'd chased answers. For three years, doors had slammed in her face. Witness statements redacted. Evidence locked away in archives she couldn't access without clearance from people who wouldn't return her calls. And now this suspect—this lead—was disappearing into a part of London that every whisper on the force told her to avoid. She pulled out her phone. No signal. Of course not. "Police!" Her voice echoed down the stairwell. "Stop where you are!" No response. Just the drip of water somewhere far below, and the distant rumble of what might have been a train on an active line, or might have been something else entirely. Quinn descended. The stairs were slick with decades of accumulated moisture and something that smelled faintly of copper. Her torch picked out graffiti on the walls—not the usual tags and crude drawings, but symbols that made her eyes itch if she looked at them too long. She kept her gaze fixed on the steps, one hand near the baton on her belt. The stairwell opened onto a platform that stretched into darkness. Old advertisements peeled from the tiled walls, promoting products that hadn't existed in half a century. A newspaper rack stood frozen in time, its contents yellowed and crumbling. She moved forward, tracking the wet footprints on the platform floor. They led toward the tunnel mouth, past a turnstile that had been bent outward with considerable force. Beyond it, light flickerednot the steady glow of electric bulbs, but something that pulsed and wavered like firelight. Quinn stopped at the turnstile. The footprints continued into the tunnel, but they weren't alone anymore. Other prints crossed and recrossed the ground. Bare feet. Boots with soles that left strange patterns. Claw marks that might have been made by dogs, if dogs walked on two legs. She heard voices. Distant, echoing, carrying up from somewhere deep in the tunnel system. Words she couldn't quite make out, in languages she didn't recognize. Morris had followed a suspect into a place like this. That much she'd pieced together from the fragments of his final report. He'd gone in alone, against protocol, because he'd trusted his instincts more than he'd trusted the procedures that kept them safe. He hadn't come out. The memory rose unbidden—his body in the morgue, the look on the coroner's face when she'd asked for cause of death. "Inconclusive," he'd said, but his hands had shaken as he'd signed the certificate. "Natural causes." As if a healthy thirty-eight-year-old detective just stopped living for no reason. Quinn looked back the way she'd come. The stairwell was still visible, a rectangle of slightly lighter darkness against the black. She could turn around. Return to the station. File a report about a suspect who'd escaped into an abandoned station. No one would blame her. No one would even question it. But the symbol carved into the concrete burned in her memory, and the footprints led forward, and somewhere down in the dark, answers waited. She could almost see Morris standing beside her, that crooked smile he got when he was about to do something stupid. "We're partners, Harlow. Means we don't quit." He'd been wrong about that, in the end. He'd quit. He'd left her alone with nothing but questions and a sharp jaw that people said made her look severe and a military bearing that kept everyone at arm's length. Rain continued to fall somewhere above her, filtered through layers of concrete and earth until it was just a distant whisper. Quinn checked her watch again. The leather band was soaked and clung to her wrist. She thought about the suspect—about the flash of something small in his hand. A token. She'd heard rumours, whispers from informants who'd gone pale when she'd pressed for details. Bone tokens. Things you needed to get into places that weren't on any map. He'd had one. Which meant he'd expected to find a door at the end of this tunnel. A sound drifted up from the darkness. Not footsteps. Not voices. Music, thin and strange, played on instruments she couldn't identify. It wavered in the air like smoke, and for a moment, she thought she could hear her name woven into the melody. Quinn's hand tightened on her torch. Her heart beat steady and slow against her ribs—military training, keeping her calm when every instinct screamed at her to turn back. The footprints stretched ahead of her, leading toward the flickering light. Behind her, the station sat silent and empty, a tomb of forgotten things. Ahead of her, the underground waited. She took a breath. Then another. The air tasted wrong—thick with scents she couldn't name, sweet and sour and something underneath that made her think of burning leaves. Morris had come this way. She was certain of it now. The symbol, the location, the way the evidence had been scrubbed from his case file—it all pointed here, to this threshold between the London she knew and something else entirely. Three years of dead ends. Three years of silence. And now, finally, a door that might open. Quinn stepped away from the turnstile and moved to the edge of the tunnel mouth. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, illuminating the tracks ahead—rusted and warped, leading deeper into the earth. The light caught something glinting on the ground. Glass, maybe. Or bone. She could follow procedure. Call for backup. Wait for uniformed officers who would arrive too late, find nothing, and file a report that would join the others in the growing stack of unresolved cases on her desk. Or she could go forward. The music shifted. Lower now. Hungry. Quinn looked down at the tracks, at the footprints, at the darkness that waited beyond the reach of her torch. Her hand dropped from the baton. She wasn't sure what she was about to walk into, but she knew one thing with absolute certainty. She wasn't turning around.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"echoing"
count2
3
word"footfall"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count2
13
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"footfall"
4"traced"
5"glint"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"echoed"
9"flickered"
10"electric"
11"pulsed"
12"wavered"
13"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1498
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1483
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas1
Morris5
Tube1
Camden1
Road1
Station1
London2
Three4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"Road"
3"Station"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite close"
1"quite make out, in languages she didn't recognize"
66.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.335
wordCount1498
matches
0"not the usual tags and crude drawings, but symbols"
1"not the steady glow of electric bulbs, but something"
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences141
matches
0"given that Silas kept that door"
1"drawn that symbol"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean31.21
std18.53
cv0.594
sampleLengths
063
144
231
318
49
567
664
751
842
950
1051
1116
1259
1310
1411
1532
162
1760
1838
1946
205
2142
2225
2343
244
2548
2652
2724
2828
2939
3036
3143
3217
3343
3428
3511
3613
376
3828
3941
4017
4145
4237
435
446
4520
4624
474
87.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences139
matches
0"was cordoned"
1"been pried"
2"was obscured"
3"been sealed"
4"been made"
5"was soaked"
6"been scrubbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs248
matches
0"was running"
1"was disappearing"
2"wasn't turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences141
ratio0.085
matches
0"The man she'd been following—a reedy figure in a dark coat who moved with the practiced ease of someone who knew how to disappear—had spotted her."
1"The man had been leaving the Raven's Nest through a side entrance when she'd caught sight of him—something that shouldn't have been possible, given that Silas kept that door alarmed."
2"A sign overhead—rusty and bullet-holed—proclaimed this as Camden Road Station, closed since the fifties."
3"And now this suspect—this lead—was disappearing into a part of London that every whisper on the force told her to avoid."
4"Her torch picked out graffiti on the walls—not the usual tags and crude drawings, but symbols that made her eyes itch if she looked at them too long."
5"Beyond it, light flickered—not the steady glow of electric bulbs, but something that pulsed and wavered like firelight."
6"The memory rose unbidden—his body in the morgue, the look on the coroner's face when she'd asked for cause of death."
7"She thought about the suspect—about the flash of something small in his hand."
8"Her heart beat steady and slow against her ribs—military training, keeping her calm when every instinct screamed at her to turn back."
9"The air tasted wrong—thick with scents she couldn't name, sweet and sour and something underneath that made her think of burning leaves."
10"The symbol, the location, the way the evidence had been scrubbed from his case file—it all pointed here, to this threshold between the London she knew and something else entirely."
11"Her torch beam cut through the darkness, illuminating the tracks ahead—rusted and warped, leading deeper into the earth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1504
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02526595744680851
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004654255319148936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean10.62
std7.62
cv0.717
sampleLengths
016
125
24
310
48
526
64
714
810
93
1018
114
1214
139
1415
1519
163
1730
1815
1919
208
215
2217
2323
2418
2510
264
2719
283
292
3014
318
329
3314
344
352
3613
3713
384
391
4027
416
425
4311
443
456
469
473
4817
4921
63.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.425531914893617
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners60
81.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Of course not."
2"Just the drip of water"
ratio0.025
92.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences122
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He was running now."
2"She heard the splash of"
3"Her boots struck the cobblestones"
4"She didn't care."
5"She'd walked them a thousand"
6"She emerged onto a side"
7"His face was obscured by"
8"He ducked through the gap"
9"She knew the history."
10"She crouched near the gap"
11"She'd found the sketch in"
12"Her jaw tightened."
13"She pulled out her phone."
14"Her voice echoed down the"
15"Her torch picked out graffiti"
16"She kept her gaze fixed"
17"She moved forward, tracking the"
18"They led toward the tunnel"
19"She heard voices."
ratio0.32
99.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences122
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
1"The man she'd been following—a"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"Quarter past midnight."
4"The streets of Soho had"
5"He was running now."
6"She heard the splash of"
7"Quinn pushed off from the"
8"Her boots struck the cobblestones"
9"The salt-and-pepper crop of her"
10"She didn't care."
11"The man had been leaving"
12"The pursuit cut left down"
13"Quinn's torch beam caught the"
14"The suspect was fast, she'd"
15"She'd walked them a thousand"
16"She emerged onto a side"
17"The entrance was cordoned off"
18"Boards covered the stairs, but"
19"The suspect glanced back."
ratio0.721
40.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"As if a healthy thirty-eight-year-old"
ratio0.008
46.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The man she'd been following—a reedy figure in a dark coat who moved with the practiced ease of someone who knew how to disappear—had spotted her."
1"The man had been leaving the Raven's Nest through a side entrance when she'd caught sight of him—something that shouldn't have been possible, given that Silas k…"
2"Old advertisements peeled from the tiled walls, promoting products that hadn't existed in half a century."
3"They led toward the tunnel mouth, past a turnstile that had been bent outward with considerable force."
4"He'd gone in alone, against protocol, because he'd trusted his instincts more than he'd trusted the procedures that kept them safe."
5"She could almost see Morris standing beside her, that crooked smile he got when he was about to do something stupid."
6"He'd left her alone with nothing but questions and a sharp jaw that people said made her look severe and a military bearing that kept everyone at arm's length."
7"She'd heard rumours, whispers from informants who'd gone pale when she'd pressed for details."
8"Wait for uniformed officers who would arrive too late, find nothing, and file a report that would join the others in the growing stack of unresolved cases on he…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he'd, but his hands had shaken as he'd signed the certificate"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he'd (would)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
80.0964%