Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYFPNFGEEVNEFCMGV9VE80

Run Details

Duration:
36.0s
Cost:
$0.034520
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Tuesday night crowd bled out of The Raven’s Nest an hour before closing, leaving a comfortable quiet in their wake. Aurora wiped down the last of the sticky rings on the polished mahogany bar, the familiar scent of lemon and old wood a balm. Behind her, Silas moved with his quiet, halting rhythm, the slight drag of his left foot a percussive beat against the floorboards. He restocked shelves, the clink of glass on glass methodical and soothing. The green neon sign from the window cast a mellow glow over the old maps on the walls, turning the known world into a strange and mysterious landscape. This was her sanctuary, the calm eye of her London storm. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, unwelcome sound in the near-silence. Rory looked up from her work, a generic customer service smile ready on her lips. It faltered. The man who stood there, shaking rain from a ridiculously expensive-looking trench coat, was a ghost in a tailored suit. Older, his face filled out and chiselled in a way that spoke of money and confidence. The boyish softness she remembered was gone, replaced by a severe, handsome architecture. But the eyes were the same. A shade of blue so pale it was almost colourless, and just as cold. He scanned the room, his gaze sweeping past her before snapping back. A slow, disbelieving smile spread across his face, a performance of delighted surprise. “Rory? Aurora Carter? My God, is that you?” His voice, deeper now, still had the same lyrical Welsh cadence that once felt like home and later, a cage. She kept her hands flat on the bar, anchoring herself. Silas stilled behind her, a silent, looming presence. “Evan.” The name felt like a shard of glass in her mouth. He strode towards the bar, shedding his coat and draping it over a stool. The suit was immaculate, dark grey wool that probably cost more than her rent for the year. He took the stool opposite her, leaning forward on his elbows, the picture of casual intimacy. “I can’t believe it. After all this time. What are you doing here? Working here?” His gaze flicked around the dimly lit pub, taking in the black-and-white photographs, the worn leather of the booths. It was a look that assessed and dismissed in one clean motion. “It pays the bills.” She picked up a glass and began to polish it with a clean cloth, her movements deliberate, contained. “Of course.” He gave a small, indulgent laugh. “But… this? After Cardiff, after everything? I always pictured you in a courtroom, a proper barrister like your dad. Tearing some poor sod to pieces.” She moved to the next glass, not meeting his eyes. “Plans change.” “They certainly do.” He watched her for a long moment, the silence stretching. “You just… disappeared, Rory. One day you were there, the next, gone. No call. No note. I was out of my mind. Jenny and Brendan had no idea where you were. I thought something had happened to you.” She felt a flicker of the old anger, hot and sharp. He’d hounded her parents for months, playing the part of the distraught boyfriend so perfectly that even her own mother began to doubt her. She placed the polished glass back on the shelf with a firm click. “I needed a change of scenery.” “A change of scenery?” He leaned closer, his voice dropping. The scent of his cologne, something sharp and citrusy, cut through the familiar aroma of the bar. “You moved cities, you changed your number, you fell off the face of the earth. That’s a bit more than a change of scenery, wouldn’t you say? I looked for you.” The admission hung in the air between them. A threat wrapped in a confession. Rory finally looked at him, her own bright blue eyes holding his. She had forgotten how he could command a space, how he made the world shrink until he was the only thing in it. Silas came to stand beside her, placing a heavy hand on the bar. His signet ring caught the green light. He didn’t look at Evan, just at Rory. “Everything alright here, Carter?” The use of her surname was a small, significant thing. It was Silas’s way of reminding her who she was now, in this place. Not Evan’s Rory. Just Carter. She gave a tight, almost imperceptible nod. “Just catching up with an old… acquaintance.” Evan’s smile tightened at the edges. He straightened up, his posture shifting as he acknowledged the older man for the first time. His charm switched on like a lightbulb. “Evan Pritchard. I was at university with Aurora. A lifetime ago, it seems.” He extended a hand. Silas looked at it for a second before wiping his own on his apron and giving it a brief, firm shake. The spymaster’s assessment was swift and silent. “Silas Blackwood.” He released Evan’s hand and his gaze returned to Rory. “You need me to cash out the till?” “I’ve got it, Si. Nearly done.” It was an out, a dismissal. But Evan didn’t take it. He turned his attention back to Rory as Silas retreated to the back, his limp more pronounced than usual. “So, this is your new life. A quiet little pub in Soho.” He made it sound like an epitaph. “And here I am. In town for a few days, finalising a merger for the firm. Funny how things work out.” He gestured around again, a sweep of his hand that took in her entire world. The unspoken words screamed at her: *Look at me. Look what I’ve become. And look at you. You chose this over me.* “I’m happy for you, Evan. You always knew what you wanted.” She started wiping down the counter again, a clear sign of finality. He reached across the bar, his fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She flinched, pulling her arm back as if his touch were a flame. The motion was so sharp and sudden it made him blink. The mask of pleasant nostalgia cracked, and for a half-second, she saw the boy she had fled from—the tight jaw, the flash of possessive anger in his pale eyes. “Still so jumpy.” His voice was soft, laced with something that sounded like pity, but felt like venom. “I worried that about you. That you’d never…” “Never what?” Her voice was low and quiet, but it cut through the air. All the practiced cool-headedness was gone, replaced by a raw, protective instinct. “Finish my law degree? Settle down? Live up to my potential?” He held her gaze, his own expression unreadable. The practised smile returned, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I was just going to say I worried you’d never be happy, Laila.” It was a punch to the gut. *Laila*. The pet name he used when he was trying to smooth things over, to paper over the cracks his anger had made. The name no one else had ever called her. He stood up, pulling his coat back on. He was all smooth lines and expensive fabric. A man who had remade himself into something successful and respectable. A man who looked nothing like the monster she kept locked in her memory. “It was good to see you, Aurora.” He placed a business card on the clean countertop. The lettering was embossed, the corners sharp. “If you ever get tired of this and want to talk to someone about a real job, give me a call. For old times’ sake.” He gave her one last look, a long, searching appraisal, then turned and walked out. The bell above the door chimed his departure, and the silence he left behind was heavier than the noise had been. Rory stared at the business card as if it were a poisonous insect. Her hands trembled. Silas reappeared at her side, a lowball glass in his hand. He pushed it towards her across the bar. It was filled with amber liquid. “Drink this.” His voice was gruff but gentle. He nudged the card with his thumb, sending it skittering off the edge of the bar and down into the waste bin behind it. He didn’t ask who Evan was. He didn’t ask what had happened.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:37:35.033Z" 2/19/2026, 12:37:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The name felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.069
96.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"charm"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"potential"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"familiar"
2"methodical"
3"sanctuary"
4"silence"
5"scanned"
6"looming"
7"flicked"
8"flicker"
9"charm"
10"unspoken"
11"potential"
12"unreadable"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"Look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords17
totalWords1388
ratio0.012
matches
0"Look at me. Look what I’ve become. And look at you. You chose this over me."
1"Laila"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1094
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
London1
Welsh1
Evan6
Rory7
Carter1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like home and later, a cage"
1"felt like a shard of glass in her mouth"
2"sounded like pity, but felt like venom"
3"felt like venom"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1388
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean37.51
std22.6
cv0.602
sampleLengths
0118
199
225
38
438
512
662
731
822
933
1012
1151
1248
136
1458
1549
1632
1729
1814
1942
2032
2120
226
2330
2440
2537
2623
2768
2826
2937
3031
3139
3241
3348
3436
3541
3644
90.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was embossed"
3"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences110
ratio0.009
matches
0"The mask of pleasant nostalgia cracked, and for a half-second, she saw the boy she had fled from—the tight jaw, the flash of possessive anger in his pale eyes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1102
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02722323049001815
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0054446460980036296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean12.62
std6.97
cv0.553
sampleLengths
021
124
222
312
428
511
613
715
82
920
1016
1113
126
1314
1412
1513
168
1720
1810
198
2012
2114
2217
2316
2415
2519
2612
2722
288
2925
3010
312
3213
3338
3411
3524
3613
376
3810
3917
4031
418
426
4312
4423
4513
467
478
484
4910
43.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences90
matches
0"He restocked shelves, the clink"
1"He scanned the room, his"
2"His voice, deeper now, still"
3"She kept her hands flat"
4"He strode towards the bar,"
5"He took the stool opposite"
6"His gaze flicked around the"
7"It was a look that"
8"She picked up a glass"
9"He gave a small, indulgent"
10"She moved to the next"
11"He watched her for a"
12"She felt a flicker of"
13"He’d hounded her parents for"
14"She placed the polished glass"
15"He leaned closer, his voice"
16"She had forgotten how he"
17"His signet ring caught the"
18"He didn’t look at Evan,"
19"It was Silas’s way of"
ratio0.533
4.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences90
matches
0"The Tuesday night crowd bled"
1"Aurora wiped down the last"
2"He restocked shelves, the clink"
3"The green neon sign from"
4"This was her sanctuary, the"
5"The bell above the door"
6"Rory looked up from her"
7"The man who stood there,"
8"The boyish softness she remembered"
9"A shade of blue so"
10"He scanned the room, his"
11"A slow, disbelieving smile spread"
12"His voice, deeper now, still"
13"She kept her hands flat"
14"Silas stilled behind her, a"
15"The name felt like a"
16"He strode towards the bar,"
17"The suit was immaculate, dark"
18"He took the stool opposite"
19"His gaze flicked around the"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The man who stood there, shaking rain from a ridiculously expensive-looking trench coat, was a ghost in a tailored suit."
1"She flinched, pulling her arm back as if his touch were a flame."
2"A man who had remade himself into something successful and respectable."
3"A man who looked nothing like the monster she kept locked in her memory."
4"He nudged the card with his thumb, sending it skittering off the edge of the bar and down into the waste bin behind it."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.8389%