| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the leaves rasped again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 88.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1274 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1274 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "spectral" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "navigated" | | 16 | "churning" | | 17 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1271 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Snap." | | 1 | "Slurp. Thud." | | 2 | "Slurp. Thud." | | 3 | "Slurp. Thud." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1224 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | English | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Closer | 1 | | Ten | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Roehampton" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a footstep" | | 1 | "looked like jagged teeth piercing the gum" | | 2 | "rough the air, seemingly coming from right n" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1271 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 20.17 | | std | 17.61 | | cv | 0.873 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 99.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "was churning" |
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| 81.19% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "It was beautiful in the way a poisonous dart frog is beautiful—vibrant, inviting, and deadly." | | 1 | "It wasn't just pulsing; it was vibrating, the silver chain trembling against her collarbone." | | 2 | "The smell of jasmine had curdled into something metallic—copper and old meat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1227 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02852485737571312 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009779951100244499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 9.14 | | std | 6.38 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 49.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.33093525179856115 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the distant city ambience" | | 1 | "Just the swaying heads of" | | 2 | "Just tangled branches and shadow." | | 3 | "Just fifty yards." | | 4 | "Dark, viscous fluid." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 71.72% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 1 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 2 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 3 | "It started as a dull" | | 4 | "They looked like jagged teeth" | | 5 | "She took a breath, holding" | | 6 | "Her ears popped." | | 7 | "She swept the light low." | | 8 | "It was beautiful in the" | | 9 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "She had been here weeks" | | 11 | "She straightened slowly." | | 12 | "She turned back to the" | | 13 | "She jerked the light toward" | | 14 | "She forced her feet forward," | | 15 | "She pulled it from beneath" | | 16 | "It wasn't just pulsing; it" | | 17 | "She struck a hand over" | | 18 | "She held perfectly still, straining" | | 19 | "She backed away, placing her" |
| | ratio | 0.371 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Mist tangled around the ankles" | | 1 | "Richmond Park slept under a" | | 2 | "The cold bit through her" | | 3 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 4 | "Shadows stretched and snapped back" | | 5 | "Every rustle of dry bracken" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 7 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 8 | "The rhythmic friction grounded her." | | 9 | "It started as a dull" | | 10 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed beneath" | | 11 | "They looked like jagged teeth" | | 12 | "She took a breath, holding" | | 13 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 14 | "The transition hit her like" | | 15 | "Her ears popped." | | 16 | "The biting chill of the" | | 17 | "She swept the light low." | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, their" | | 19 | "Blues, violets, and whites glowed" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the trees on the" | | 1 | "Before, it was empty." | | 2 | "Now, it felt attentive." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The cold bit through her denim jacket, sharp and wet, clinging to the strands of black hair that had escaped her ponytail." | | 1 | "The biting chill of the English autumn vanished, replaced by a humid, cloying warmth that smelled of wet earth and over-ripe jasmine." | | 2 | "Blues, violets, and whites glowed faintly, as if they held their own luminescence." | | 3 | "She moved deeper into the clearing, boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, like flesh yielding under pressure." | | 4 | "Thorny vines that hadn't been there a moment ago lashed out, snagging her jacket, scratching at her denim." | | 5 | "It rose, unfolding limbs that had too many joints, stretching taller than any man." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |