Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYFPQT196RVFTRFDXRFDRQ

Run Details

Duration:
44.2s
Cost:
$0.041454
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Mist tangled around the ankles of the ancient oaks, burying the forest floor in a shifting, spectral ocean. Richmond Park slept under a heavy, moonless sky, the distant hum of London traffic severed the moment Aurora stepped off the paved path and onto the deer trail. The cold bit through her denim jacket, sharp and wet, clinging to the strands of black hair that had escaped her ponytail. She adjusted her grip on the flashlight, the beam cutting a weak, jittery cone through the dark. Shadows stretched and snapped back like elastic bands as she swept the light across the gnarled bark of the trees. Every rustle of dry bracken sounded like a footstep. "Just trees, Rory. Just overgrown, creepy trees." Her voice sounded thin, swallowed instantly by the vastness of the park. She rubbed her left wrist, thumb tracing the crescent scar there out of habit. The rhythmic friction grounded her. Against her sternum, the Heartstone warmed her skin. It started as a dull hum when she hopped the fence near the Roehampton Gate, but now, a mile deep into the scrub, the pendant burned with a feverish intensity. The crimson gemstone pulsed beneath her shirt, a second heartbeat out of sync with her own. She stopped. Ahead, the two massive oak standing stones loomed out of the fog. They looked like jagged teeth piercing the gums of the earth, marking the threshold. Between them lay the entry to the Grove. She took a breath, holding it until her lungs burned, listening. Silence. absolute and oppressive. No wind rattled the dead leaves. No owls hooted. Even the distant city ambience had vanished, as if the world effectively ended at the perimeter of the trees. Rory stepped between the stones. The transition hit her like a drop in cabin pressure. Her ears popped. The biting chill of the English autumn vanished, replaced by a humid, cloying warmth that smelled of wet earth and over-ripe jasmine. "Okay. Strange weather patterns. totally normal." She swept the light low. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, their petals fully open despite the dark. Blues, violets, and whites glowed faintly, as if they held their own luminescence. It was beautiful in the way a poisonous dart frog is beautiful—vibrant, inviting, and deadly. The heavy air pressed against her eardrums. She moved deeper into the clearing, boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, like flesh yielding under pressure. The layout was wrong. She had been here weeks ago during the day, and the clearing had been a perfect circle. Now, the trees on the eastern edge seemed to have stepped closer, distorting the geometry into a claustrophobic oval. *Snap.* The sound cracked like a whip behind her. Rory spun, dropping into a crouch, the flashlight beam slashing through the dark. Nothing. Just the swaying heads of foxgloves and the dark wall of the forest. She straightened slowly. "Isolde? If this is some Fae prank, I'm not in the mood." Silence answered, but it felt different now. Before, it was empty. Now, it felt attentive. She turned back to the path, intending to check the center of the grove, but movement flickered in the corner of her eye. A tall, thin shape standing just behind a hawthorn bush. She jerked the light toward it. Branches. Just tangled branches and shadow. Rory exhaled, a harsh sound in the stillness. "Get a grip, Carter. You faced down a possessive ex and London rent prices. A bush won't kill you." She forced her feet forward, but the sensation of being watched clawed at the back of her neck. The heat from the pendant flared hot enough to sting. She pulled it from beneath her shirt. The crimson gem glowed violently, casting a bloody light onto her palm. It wasn't just pulsing; it was vibrating, the silver chain trembling against her collarbone. The Heartstone warned of portals to Hel. This wasn't just Fae magic. Something else was here. Something that didn't belong in a grove meant for peace. Another sound drifted from the trees to her left. A wet, slurping noise. Like a boot pulling out of deep mud. *Slurp. Thud.* Rory killed the flashlight. Being able to see ten feet in front of her wasn't worth being a beacon to whatever was out there in the dark. The crimson glow of the pendant was the only light left, painting her face in steep, red shadows. She struck a hand over the gem, smothering the light. Blindness took her. She held perfectly still, straining her senses. The smell of jasmine had curdled into something metallic—copper and old meat. *Slurp. Thud.* Closer. She backed away, placing her feet with agonizing care, heel to toe, rolling her weight to avoid crunching the undergrowth. Her hand brushed against a tree trunk. The bark felt slick, warm, and pulsing. She snatched her hand back, wiping the slime onto her jeans. A whisper slithered through the air, seemingly coming from right next to her ear. "Rory." It wasn't a voice. It was the sound of dry leaves scraping together, manipulated to mimic the syllables of her name. She spun, swinging her fist into the empty air. Nothing. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She needed to leave. Now. The questions could wait. She oriented herself toward where the standing stones should be. The exit was straight back the way she came. Just fifty yards. Rory moved, abandoning stealth for speed. She navigated by memory and the faint, greyish contrast of the sky above the canopy. The moss snagged at her boots. Thorny vines that hadn't been there a moment ago lashed out, snagging her jacket, scratching at her denim. She reached the perimeter. The standing stones were gone. A wall of dense, impenetrable briar stretched across where the path had been. "No." She shoved at the thorns. They were hard as iron, digging into her palms. She kicked at the base, but the wall was solid. *Slurp. Thud.* Ten yards back. Rory turned, her back pressing against the thorns. She uncovered the pendant. The red light washed over the clearing. The wildflowers were gone. The ground was churning, the earth rolling like boiling water. And in the center, where the beautiful clearing had been, a shadow detached itself from the ground. It rose, unfolding limbs that had too many joints, stretching taller than any man. It didn't have a face, just a slick, smooth surface where features should be. But it tilted its head, mimicking the exact angle she held hers. "Rory," the leaves rasped again. The shape took a step. The sound was wet and heavy. Rory scrambled sideways, forcing her way through a gap in the ferns, plunging into the deeper woods away from the blocked exit. She didn’t know this part of the grove. The trees here grew close together, their branches interlocked like skeletal fingers barring the sky. She ducked under a low bough, the wood scraping her scalp. The air grew colder, biting at her exposed skin, yet the pendant seared her chest. She paused behind the thick trunk of an ancient yew, chest heaving. She clamped a hand over her mouth to stifle her breathing. Wait. The footsteps had stopped. She peered around the bark. The red glow of the pendant illuminated the small patch of forest around her. Empty. A drop of liquid landed on her cheek. It was warm. Thick. Rory wiped it away, looking at her finger in the crimson light. Dark, viscous fluid. She slowly tilted her head back, looking up into the branches of the yew tree directly above her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the leaves rasped again [again]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
88.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"spectral"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"navigated"
count1
16
word"churning"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"spectral"
1"tracing"
2"rhythmic"
3"intensity"
4"pulsed"
5"loomed"
6"silence"
7"oppressive"
8"chill"
9"warmth"
10"perfect"
11"flickered"
12"beacon"
13"weight"
14"whisper"
15"navigated"
16"churning"
17"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords7
totalWords1271
ratio0.006
matches
0"Snap."
1"Slurp. Thud."
2"Slurp. Thud."
3"Slurp. Thud."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1224
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Aurora1
Heartstone2
Roehampton1
Gate1
Grove1
English1
Hel1
Fae1
Rory8
Closer1
Ten1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Roehampton"
3"Grove"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a footstep"
1"looked like jagged teeth piercing the gum"
2"rough the air, seemingly coming from right n"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean20.17
std17.61
cv0.873
sampleLengths
068
146
27
331
454
52
634
743
85
935
106
1144
1266
131
148
1513
1614
1715
1815
1933
206
216
2227
2361
2426
2521
262
274
2851
293
3019
312
321
3334
3411
3514
361
3721
3810
3922
4022
4145
429
4313
441
4524
462
473
4819
4945
99.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"were gone"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"was churning"
81.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences139
ratio0.022
matches
0"It was beautiful in the way a poisonous dart frog is beautiful—vibrant, inviting, and deadly."
1"It wasn't just pulsing; it was vibrating, the silver chain trembling against her collarbone."
2"The smell of jasmine had curdled into something metallic—copper and old meat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1227
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02852485737571312
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009779951100244499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean9.14
std6.38
cv0.698
sampleLengths
018
128
222
317
420
59
67
712
814
95
108
1130
1216
132
1412
1514
168
1711
181
193
206
213
2219
235
2410
253
2622
276
285
2911
3013
3115
327
3319
344
3517
3619
371
388
3913
401
4113
423
4312
447
454
464
4723
4810
496
49.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.33093525179856115
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences116
matches
0"Even the distant city ambience"
1"Just the swaying heads of"
2"Just tangled branches and shadow."
3"Just fifty yards."
4"Dark, viscous fluid."
ratio0.043
71.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences116
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
2"She rubbed her left wrist,"
3"It started as a dull"
4"They looked like jagged teeth"
5"She took a breath, holding"
6"Her ears popped."
7"She swept the light low."
8"It was beautiful in the"
9"She moved deeper into the"
10"She had been here weeks"
11"She straightened slowly."
12"She turned back to the"
13"She jerked the light toward"
14"She forced her feet forward,"
15"She pulled it from beneath"
16"It wasn't just pulsing; it"
17"She struck a hand over"
18"She held perfectly still, straining"
19"She backed away, placing her"
ratio0.371
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences116
matches
0"Mist tangled around the ankles"
1"Richmond Park slept under a"
2"The cold bit through her"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"Shadows stretched and snapped back"
5"Every rustle of dry bracken"
6"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
7"She rubbed her left wrist,"
8"The rhythmic friction grounded her."
9"It started as a dull"
10"The crimson gemstone pulsed beneath"
11"They looked like jagged teeth"
12"She took a breath, holding"
13"Rory stepped between the stones."
14"The transition hit her like"
15"Her ears popped."
16"The biting chill of the"
17"She swept the light low."
18"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, their"
19"Blues, violets, and whites glowed"
ratio0.828
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"Now, the trees on the"
1"Before, it was empty."
2"Now, it felt attentive."
ratio0.026
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The cold bit through her denim jacket, sharp and wet, clinging to the strands of black hair that had escaped her ponytail."
1"The biting chill of the English autumn vanished, replaced by a humid, cloying warmth that smelled of wet earth and over-ripe jasmine."
2"Blues, violets, and whites glowed faintly, as if they held their own luminescence."
3"She moved deeper into the clearing, boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, like flesh yielding under pressure."
4"Thorny vines that hadn't been there a moment ago lashed out, snagging her jacket, scratching at her denim."
5"It rose, unfolding limbs that had too many joints, stretching taller than any man."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3949%