Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
142
glossingSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"not quite smiling, choosing to study the room instead, as if the Nest could tell him what to do with this moment"
1
"sounded like a lesson learned too late"
2
"quite left her, like a ship’s bell that never stops ringing once the harbor’s left behind"
3
"something close to a smile, a bit brittle, a bit"
4
"tasted like a warning half-swallowed"
5
"looked like a river and let the image hol"
6
"make the words obviously true and achingly p"
7
"as if drawing a line between what had happened and what hadn’t, between what left marks and what healed"
8
"as if listening for the faint, inevitable sound of closure or confirmation, not the kind you spell out with sentences but the kind that lands in a quiet, unspoken agreement"
"She wore a coat that had seen better winters, a courier’s satchel at her feet, and eyes that skipped across faces the way penguins skim ice—deliberate, measuring, almost clinical in their cool."
1
"His hair wore grey like someone who had earned it, and his eyes—hazel, always watching—missed nothing."
2
"The bar’s hum pressed close—the soft clink of glass, a dry cough of a wood crack, the distant chatter of a late crowd, and the whispered breath of the back room door sliding slightly but never opening."
3
"The Crescent Scar on her wrist came into view as she rolled the sleeve back with a practiced courtesy—nothing dramatic, just a habit she kept in check."
4
"The scar wasn’t loud, but its shape—a small crescent—had followed her through the years like a discreet map marker, reminding her of a childhood accident that hadn’t quite left her, like a ship’s bell that never stops ringing once the harbor’s left behind."
5
"The bar’s quiet seemed to lean in; the green glow etched the lines of his face, the way a river carves through stone."
6
"He didn’t reach for a chair; he simply stood, as if the space between the stool and the bar would yield if he waited long enough."
7
"She hadn’t lost that brightness; she’d rearranged it into something sharper, something a person could rely on in a rainstorm."
8
"\"That room hasn’t changed,\" Silas said, and he allowed himself the faintest of grins—the kind of smile that knows the truth inside a lie and chooses to keep it quiet."
9
"Rory tucked a strand of hair behind her ear—the black of it catching the green light, turning it into a ribbon of night."
10
"The gesture wasn’t boastful; it was a reminder of the kind of leverage a man could clothe in a ring and call etiquette."
11
"\"Sometimes you wonder what?\" Silas pressed, choosing the edge of the stool with a careful lucidity—the way a hunter chooses his aim."
12
"He did not rush to answer; he did not pretend this wasn’t the weight of years sitting in their laps."
13
"He could tell every story in the room; the stories would tell themselves through the way the customers shifted on their stools, the way a glass was set down a fraction too hard."
14
"\"Tell me what you want from this moment,\" Silas asked, though he knew there was a ledger in the back of his mind—entries of the people who’d passed, the lies that helped them survive, and the ones that had survived them."
15
"He lifted the mug, tapped it against hers in a quiet, almost ceremonial toast—the kind of ritual that both celebrated and mourned what time had done to them."
16
"The crescent scar winked again in the neon’s tilt—small, stubborn, a reminder that some marks do not vanish with time or courage."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
90
technicalSentenceCount
19
matches
0
"She wore a coat that had seen better winters, a courier’s satchel at her feet, and eyes that skipped across faces the way penguins skim ice—deliberate, measurin…"
1
"His hair wore grey like someone who had earned it, and his eyes—hazel, always watching—missed nothing."
2
"She kept her voice level, as if she were reading from a script she hadn’t written."
3
"The scar wasn’t loud, but its shape—a small crescent—had followed her through the years like a discreet map marker, reminding her of a childhood accident that h…"
4
"He looked at her then, with the patient intensity of a man who had spent his youth mapping people’s lies and truths, whose life had become a corridor of doors t…"
5
"The Nest exhaled a breath around them, a collective pause that made the room feel suddenly intimate, as though the walls remembered more about them than either …"
6
"He wasn’t a man who apologized for the past, not in front of other people."
7
"But he kept the same soft gravity that had kept his networks intact for decades, that had earned him the name of the Spymaster even now, when the books had clos…"
8
"She met his gaze, which was not unkind, only tired in a way that suggested mornings that began with too much to do and not enough time to do it."
9
"Rory looked at the shelf, her fingers brushing the air near the spines, as if she could sense the old mechanism even when the dust wrote its own history across …"
10
"He touched the silver signet ring on his right hand with a thumb as if it were a relic."
11
"A waitress changed a bottle, a couple argued softly at the end of the bar, and a man in a long coat watched too intently as if too much depended on the next cho…"
12
"The words felt heavy on her tongue, as if she’d rehearsed them in the dark, and she wasn’t sure she wanted to pour them out into a room that already carried too…"
13
"Rory exhaled, a long, almost theatrical release, the breath of someone who had learned to carry more than her body could contain without breaking."
14
"Rory lifted her gaze, capturing his face in a moment of clarity that felt almost sacramental."
15
"The Nest seemed to lean closer as if listening for the faint, inevitable sound of closure or confirmation, not the kind you spell out with sentences but the kin…"
16
"Silas nodded, slow and approving, as if the answer had arrived on its own, like night finding the city."
17
"Outside, the street’s rain began to tap at the window, a soft percussion against glass that matched the rhythm of two lives trying to decide which lane to trave…"
18
"The Nest observed, patient as a confidant, and Rory, with a small, almost indiscernible nod, settled back into the chair as if the old years might finally offer…"