| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory's hand closed around [around]" | | 1 | "It gestured languidly [languidly]" | | 2 | "It stopped directly [directly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.905 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 70.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "languidly" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "happened to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1171 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.8 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | London | 1 | | Male | 1 | | Useless | 1 | | Anger | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Movement | 1 | | Smiled | 1 | | Don | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Anger" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.6 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 22.96 | | std | 16.32 | | cv | 0.711 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been to the Grove twice before—once with Isolde during daylight, once at dusk with Silas—but never alone." | | 1 | "She checked her phone—no signal, the clock frozen at 00:00." | | 2 | "Men, women, children—ages and eras blending together." | | 3 | "Don't—" | | 4 | "Skin that shifted like water, revealing glimpses of something else beneath—scales, fur, raw meat, naked bone, cycling through possibilities." | | 5 | "\"Oh, we couldn't possibly. Contracts are binding. But we could make another arrangement.\" It stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that she could smell it—roses and rot, honey and bile." | | 6 | "\"Because it's not yours to have.\" The creature's face cycled faster now—child, crone, beast, beauty." |
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| 91.94% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 894 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.049217002237136466 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012304250559284116 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 8.74 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 78.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.5074626865671642 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the distant hum of" | | 1 | "Just bare earth where the" | | 2 | "Of course she looked." | | 3 | "Too tall to be human." | | 4 | "Too fluid in its motion." | | 5 | "Too many joints in its" | | 6 | "Only the eyes remained constant:" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been to the Grove" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "Her boots crunched on frost-brittle" | | 3 | "Her voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 4 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 5 | "She forced strength into her" | | 6 | "She'd entered from the north" | | 7 | "She took three steps forward" | | 8 | "She jerked her foot back," | | 9 | "She gasped, hand flying to" | | 10 | "They swayed gently though no" | | 11 | "Their eyes were open." | | 12 | "She caught herself, forced herself" | | 13 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 14 | "It wore the shape of" | | 15 | "Its face was beautiful one" | | 16 | "It gestured languidly at the" | | 17 | "She forced herself to look" | | 18 | "Her friend's head turned." | | 19 | "Her words cut off in" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 99.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's breath misted in the" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed on" | | 2 | "She'd been to the Grove" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 4 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 5 | "The message had been clear:" | | 6 | "Her boots crunched on frost-brittle" | | 7 | "The wildflowers that bloomed eternal" | | 8 | "Her voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 9 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 10 | "The very air tasted stale," | | 11 | "A branch snapped behind her." | | 12 | "Rory spun, hand instinctively reaching" | | 13 | "The trees stood motionless, shadows" | | 14 | "She forced strength into her" | | 15 | "The clearing stretched before her," | | 16 | "She'd entered from the north" | | 17 | "She took three steps forward" | | 18 | "The ground squelched beneath her" | | 19 | "The earth glistened black-red in" |
| | ratio | 0.72 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that bloomed eternal here drooped with unnatural stillness, their petals drained of color in the darkness." | | 1 | "The earth glistened black-red in the faint light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once." | | 2 | "Skin that shifted like water, revealing glimpses of something else beneath—scales, fur, raw meat, naked bone, cycling through possibilities." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The voice slithered, seeming to speak from multiple directions at once" | | 1 | "The creature circled, each step splashing in the blood-soaked earth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |