Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYG1Q4FZ4V2RFZCQ6W6PWH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.150315

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's breath misted in the cold night air as she stepped through the gap in the ancient oaks. The standing stones loomed on either side, their rough bark black against the starless sky. She'd been to the Grove twice before—once with Isolde during daylight, once at dusk with Silas—but never alone. Never at midnight. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, its usual warmth absent. She pressed her palm against it through her jacket, seeking reassurance in its familiar weight. The message had been clear: come alone, bring the pendant, learn the truth about what happened to Eva. Her boots crunched on frost-brittle grass as she moved deeper into the clearing. The wildflowers that bloomed eternal here drooped with unnatural stillness, their petals drained of color in the darkness. No wind stirred the leaves overhead. No insects chirped. Even the distant hum of London traffic had vanished the moment she'd crossed the threshold. "Hello?" Her voice fell flat, swallowed by the oppressive quiet. "I'm here. I brought what you asked." Nothing. She checked her phone—no signal, the clock frozen at 00:00. Time behaving strangely was normal for the Grove, Isolde had warned her, but this felt different. Wrong. The very air tasted stale, like breathing inside a sealed tomb. A branch snapped behind her. Rory spun, hand instinctively reaching for the pepper spray in her pocket. The trees stood motionless, shadows pooling between their trunks like spilled ink. "I know someone's there." She forced strength into her voice. "You asked me to come. Here I am." The clearing stretched before her, perhaps fifty meters across. She'd entered from the north side, she thought, though direction felt meaningless here. In daylight, a small stream had bubbled through the center, feeding the perpetual flowers. Now she saw no water, heard no gentle burble. Just bare earth where the stream should run, the soil dark and damp-looking. She took three steps forward and froze. The ground squelched beneath her boot. Not water. Something thicker. Don't look down. Keep moving. But she looked. Of course she looked. The earth glistened black-red in the faint light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once. Not soil. Not water. She jerked her foot back, bile rising in her throat. A low chuckle drifted from somewhere to her left. Not quite human. Not quite not. "You came." The voice slithered between the trees, seeming to speak from multiple directions at once. Male, female, neither, both. "Good. We have been waiting." "Where's Eva?" Rory's hand closed around the pepper spray. Useless, probably, against whatever inhabited this place, but the solid cylinder gave her something to grip. "Your message said you knew what happened to her." "Eva." The voice savored the name like wine. "Such a pretty thing. So trusting." Anger flared hot in Rory's chest, burning away some of the creeping dread. "If you've hurt her—" "Hurt?" Laughter again, closer now. "We don't hurt. We preserve. We keep. Forever and ever, world without end." Movement in her peripheral vision. Rory whipped her head right, caught a glimpse of something pale sliding behind an oak. Too tall to be human. Too fluid in its motion. "Show yourself." "But we are showing ourselves. Look closer, Aurora Carter. Look with eyes that truly see." The pendant flared sudden heat against her skin. She gasped, hand flying to her chest. The crimson stone pulsed through her jacket, its glow visible even through the fabric. In its light, the Grove transformed. The trees still stood, but now she saw what hung from their branches. Not leaves. Bodies. Dozens of them, suspended by threads so fine they might have been spider silk. They swayed gently though no wind blew, heads lolling, limbs slack. Men, women, children—ages and eras blending together. Their eyes were open. Staring. Aware. Rory's knees buckled. She caught herself, forced herself to remain standing. Don't show weakness. Don't— "Eva's not here." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "I've looked at every face." "Haven't you?" The thing emerged from behind the oak, and Rory bit down on a scream. It wore the shape of a woman, but wrong. Too many joints in its arms. Skin that shifted like water, revealing glimpses of something else beneath—scales, fur, raw meat, naked bone, cycling through possibilities. Its face was beautiful one moment, rotted the next, ancient the next. Only the eyes remained constant: black, depthless, hungry. "Perhaps you don't recognize her. Time moves strangely here. A day outside..." It gestured languidly at the hanging bodies. "A century within. Or perhaps a century outside, a heartbeat within. We lose track." The creature glided closer. Rory backed away until rough bark pressed against her spine. Trapped between the monster and whatever tree held her. No. Not whatever tree. She forced herself to look up. Eva hung directly above her. Still twenty-two, still wearing the red dress from her birthday party three months ago, still perfect except for her eyes. Those bright green eyes Rory had known since childhood now stared at nothing, pupils dilated so wide the irises had all but vanished. "Eva." The name tore from Rory's throat. Her friend's head turned. Looked down. Blinked. "Rory?" Eva's voice, but distant, hollow. "Is that you? I've been waiting so long. So long. They said you'd come. They promised." "I'm here. I'm getting you down—" "No." Eva's face contorted in terror. "No, you have to run. You have to—" Her words cut off in a strangled gasp. The silk threads tightened, jerking her head back to its previous position. "She tried to warn you." The creature circled Rory like a shark, each step splashing in the blood-soaked earth. "Sweet girl. We offered her a bargain, you see. Her suffering for your safety. She chose you. Touching, really." "Let her go." "Oh, we couldn't possibly. Contracts are binding. But we could make another arrangement." It stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that she could smell it—roses and rot, honey and bile. "You have something we want." The pendant burned hotter. Rory's hand closed over it protectively. "This? Why?" "Because it's not yours to have." The creature's face cycled faster now—child, crone, beast, beauty. "Because it calls to those who should remain sleeping. Because its very presence here is an abomination we cannot tolerate." "Then take it." Rory yanked the chain over her head, held the pendant out. "Take it and let Eva go." The creature recoiled as if burned. "We cannot touch it. Only the bearer may surrender it. Only the bearer may—" It stopped. Smiled with too many teeth. "But you would trade it? Truly? Your protection for her freedom?" Rory looked up at Eva's vacant eyes. Three months. Three months of this nightmare while Rory had lived above Silas' bar, delivered Chinese food, pretended life was normal. Eva had been here. Suffering. Waiting. "Yes." "Rory, no—" Eva's protest strangled off again. "Then we have a bargain." The creature extended one impossible hand. "The pendant for the girl. Freely given. Freely received."
total_cost0.150315

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory's hand closed around [around]"
1"It gestured languidly [languidly]"
2"It stopped directly [directly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.905
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.143
70.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1183
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"languidly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"truly"
2"gently"
3"languidly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1183
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"silk"
count2
7
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"oppressive"
5"pulsed"
6"silk"
7"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"d in terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1171
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount889
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove3
Isolde2
Silas1
Heartstone1
Eva7
London1
Male1
Useless1
Anger1
Rory16
Movement1
Smiled1
Don3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Anger"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.6
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1171
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.96
std16.32
cv0.711
sampleLengths
054
145
255
317
41
538
65
724
818
958
1017
115
127
1332
1415
1525
1634
1714
1817
1918
2030
212
2215
2335
2454
2515
2616
2716
2854
2933
3023
314
326
3348
347
357
3622
376
3834
3938
403
4137
4210
432
4435
4520
4638
4734
481
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences134
ratio0.052
matches
0"She'd been to the Grove twice before—once with Isolde during daylight, once at dusk with Silas—but never alone."
1"She checked her phone—no signal, the clock frozen at 00:00."
2"Men, women, children—ages and eras blending together."
3"Don't—"
4"Skin that shifted like water, revealing glimpses of something else beneath—scales, fur, raw meat, naked bone, cycling through possibilities."
5"\"Oh, we couldn't possibly. Contracts are binding. But we could make another arrangement.\" It stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that she could smell it—roses and rot, honey and bile."
6"\"Because it's not yours to have.\" The creature's face cycled faster now—child, crone, beast, beauty."
91.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.049217002237136466
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012304250559284116
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean8.74
std5.96
cv0.683
sampleLengths
018
115
218
33
412
515
618
713
818
96
103
1115
1210
137
141
1510
1616
171
1811
195
2012
2112
2210
238
249
2513
2614
279
2813
297
306
312
322
333
342
353
364
3718
382
392
4010
419
423
433
4416
454
465
479
4816
499
78.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5074626865671642
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences93
matches
0"Even the distant hum of"
1"Just bare earth where the"
2"Of course she looked."
3"Too tall to be human."
4"Too fluid in its motion."
5"Too many joints in its"
6"Only the eyes remained constant:"
ratio0.075
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences93
matches
0"She'd been to the Grove"
1"She pressed her palm against"
2"Her boots crunched on frost-brittle"
3"Her voice fell flat, swallowed"
4"She checked her phone—no signal,"
5"She forced strength into her"
6"She'd entered from the north"
7"She took three steps forward"
8"She jerked her foot back,"
9"She gasped, hand flying to"
10"They swayed gently though no"
11"Their eyes were open."
12"She caught herself, forced herself"
13"Her voice came out steadier"
14"It wore the shape of"
15"Its face was beautiful one"
16"It gestured languidly at the"
17"She forced herself to look"
18"Her friend's head turned."
19"Her words cut off in"
ratio0.226
99.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences93
matches
0"Rory's breath misted in the"
1"The standing stones loomed on"
2"She'd been to the Grove"
3"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
4"She pressed her palm against"
5"The message had been clear:"
6"Her boots crunched on frost-brittle"
7"The wildflowers that bloomed eternal"
8"Her voice fell flat, swallowed"
9"She checked her phone—no signal,"
10"The very air tasted stale,"
11"A branch snapped behind her."
12"Rory spun, hand instinctively reaching"
13"The trees stood motionless, shadows"
14"She forced strength into her"
15"The clearing stretched before her,"
16"She'd entered from the north"
17"She took three steps forward"
18"The ground squelched beneath her"
19"The earth glistened black-red in"
ratio0.72
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Now she saw no water,"
ratio0.011
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The wildflowers that bloomed eternal here drooped with unnatural stillness, their petals drained of color in the darkness."
1"The earth glistened black-red in the faint light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once."
2"Skin that shifted like water, revealing glimpses of something else beneath—scales, fur, raw meat, naked bone, cycling through possibilities."
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The voice slithered, seeming to speak from multiple directions at once"
1"The creature circled, each step splashing in the blood-soaked earth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5068%