Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYG7EZGTCJE9VZVMEPCZMB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.028277
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement of Camden High Street. Quinn sprinted. Her boots slapped against the wet concrete. The sound echoed off the red brickwork. Shadows stretched long under the orange glow of sodium streetlights. Ahead, the figure ducked into an alleyway between a kebab shop and a closed boutique. Quinn tightened her grip on her torch. The beam cut through the downpour. Dust motes danced in the light before the rain swallowed them. She checked her wrist. The worn leather watch ticked. The second hand swept past the twelve. Three years since Morris vanished. Three years since the file went cold. She pushed the memory down. Focus on the present. Focus on the target. The suspect wore a dark hoodie. Olive skin flashed under the streetlamp as he glanced back. Tomás Herrera. She recognised the curl of his dark brown hair. She recognised the limp favouring his left leg. Quinn increased her pace. Her breath came in sharp bursts. The air tasted of ozone and wet rubbish. Her jacket soaked through at once. The cold bit into her shoulders. Herrera scrambled over a chain-link fence surrounding a construction site. Quinn vaulted it. Her hips cleared the top wire. She landed hard. Pain shot up her shins. She ignored it. Herrera disappeared into the mouth of a sealed tunnel entrance. Graffiti covered the corrugated metal sheets. A faded sign read Camden Town. Underground. Quinn slowed. She approached the gap in the fencing. Darkness yawned inside. The smell changed. Damp earth replaced the city smog. Something else lingered beneath the rot. Sulphur. Burnt sugar. Old blood. She stepped onto the tracks. Gravel crunched underfoot. The tunnel widened into a cavernous space. Lights flickered to life ahead. Not electric bulbs. Torches. Lanterns. Stalls lined the platform. Herrera stood near a turnstile. He turned. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted against his throat. He reached into his pocket. You should not be here. Quinn raised her torch. The light caught the scar running along his left forearm. White tissue against olive skin. A knife attack. She remembered the report. Move away from the entrance. Herrera held up an object. Bone. Carved. Rough edges. A token. He slid it into a slot on the turnstile mechanism. The metal groaned. The bars spun freely. This stops now. Quinn drew her service weapon. The steel felt cold in her wet hand. She aimed at his centre mass. Her stance widened. Military precision. You do not understand what this place is. I understand you are obstructing a police investigation. Herrera stepped back. The medallion disappeared under his collar. He gestured to the space behind him. The market hummed with activity. Figures in cloaks bartered over jars containing glowing liquids. A woman sold bundles of dried herbs that smoked without burning. A cage held a creature with too many limbs. It clicked its beak. Look around you, Detective. Quinn kept the gun steady. Her finger rested on the trigger guard. She scanned the perimeter. Exits. Threats. Weapons. The crowd noticed her. Heads turned. Eyes glowed in the dim light. Some pupils slit like cats. Others entirely black. Put the weapon down. Drop the token. Herrera shook his head. He placed his hand on the turnstile bar. Once you cross, there is no going back. The Veil does not forgive trespassers. Quinn stepped forward. Water dripped from the brim of her hair onto her cheek. She wiped it away. Her sharp jaw set hard. She thought of Morris. The empty chair in the briefing room. The unanswered questions. The supernatural origins she could not prove. I am not here to trade. Then you are here to die. Herrera pushed the bar. He vanished into the crowd. Quinn moved to follow. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. The sounds of the city above faded. No traffic. No rain. Only the murmur of the market. She stood at the threshold. The bone token slot glowed faintly blue. Beyond lay rows of stalls selling things that defied logic. A man sold vials of memory extracted in swirling grey smoke. Another peddled banned alchemical substances in crystal vials. The liquid pulsed. Quinn holstered her weapon. She needed answers. The file on Morris pointed to this underworld. Rumours of unauthorized treatments. This was the source. A figure blocked her path. Tall. Cloaked. No face visible beneath the hood. Entry requires payment. I am police. The figure laughed. A dry, rattling sound. Authority holds no weight beneath the earth. Quinn reached for her badge. The leather wallet felt heavy. She flipped it open. The Metropolitan Police crest shone dull in the lantern light. The figure did not move. That piece of plastic protects you up there. Down here, it marks you as prey. Quinn lowered the badge. She looked past the figure. Herrera moved deeper into the market. He stopped at a stall covered in surgical tools. Rusty scalpels. Bonesaws. He spoke to the vendor. She had seconds. If she retreated, the trail went cold. If she advanced, she entered a jurisdiction where her gun would not fire. Where the laws of physics bent to the will of the sellers. Her hand hovered over her watch. The leather strap felt rough against her thumb. She twisted the bezel. A habit. A grounding mechanism. What is the price? The figure extended a hand. Pale. Long fingers. A memory. One you cherish. Quinn stiffened. The rain still soaked her clothes. The cold seeped into her bones. She thought of Morris again. The last case they worked together. The night he disappeared. The blood on the pavement that vanished by morning. That is not currency I can spend. It is the only currency accepted. Quinn looked at the turnstile. The bars stood still. The market waited. The silence stretched between them. The creature in the cage clicked its beak. Louder this time. She stepped up to the figure. Her height matched his. She looked into the shadow of the hood. Nothing stared back. I have nothing to give you. Then you cannot pass. Quinn glanced at Herrera. He looked back. He shook his head. A warning. Or a plea. He turned away. He picked up a jar containing a floating eye. Quinn tightened her fist. Her knuckles turned white. She could arrest him later. She could bring backup. Swat. Armed response. But they would not believe what lay beneath Camden. They would call it mass hysteria. A hallucination. She looked at the bone token slot. It waited for an offering. The figure waited. Quinn reached into her pocket. Her fingers brushed against a lighter. Morris's lighter. Zippo. Engraved with his initials. She pulled it out. The metal was cold. She held it over the figure's palm. This is all I have. The figure took the lighter. He flipped the lid. The spark caught. The flame burned blue. He closed the lid. The sound echoed like a gunshot. Pass. Quinn stepped toward the turnstile. The air grew thicker. Harder to breathe. The lights dimmed. She placed her hand on the bar. It felt warm. Like skin. She pushed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"electric"
3"scanned"
4"crystal"
5"pulsed"
6"weight"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences239
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences239
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1179
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1179
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden3
High1
Street1
Morris5
Herrera10
Town1
Saint1
Christopher1
Detective1
Veil1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Quinn19
persons
0"Morris"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Veil"
5"Quinn"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Town"
globalScore0.694
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1179
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean19.98
std17.18
cv0.86
sampleLengths
074
141
265
353
432
529
620
75
826
95
1028
113
1224
138
148
1554
164
1739
184
193
2012
2114
2244
236
246
2537
2644
2723
2813
293
303
317
327
3324
345
3515
3632
3735
3823
394
408
415
4238
437
446
4528
4621
476
484
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1180
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.017796610169491526
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00423728813559322
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences239
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences239
mean4.93
std2.56
cv0.519
sampleLengths
09
12
27
37
410
515
67
76
811
94
105
117
125
137
145
154
164
176
1810
192
209
218
224
236
248
256
266
2710
283
296
303
315
323
3310
346
356
361
372
387
393
403
416
426
431
442
452
465
473
487
495
50.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3598326359832636
totalSentences239
uniqueOpeners86
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences200
matches
0"Once you cross, there is"
1"Then you are here to"
2"Only the murmur of the"
3"Then you cannot pass."
ratio0.02
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences200
matches
0"Her boots slapped against the"
1"She checked her wrist."
2"She pushed the memory down."
3"She recognised the curl of"
4"She recognised the limp favouring"
5"Her breath came in sharp"
6"Her jacket soaked through at"
7"Her hips cleared the top"
8"She landed hard."
9"She ignored it."
10"She approached the gap in"
11"She stepped onto the tracks."
12"He reached into his pocket."
13"You should not be here."
14"She remembered the report."
15"He slid it into a"
16"She aimed at his centre"
17"Her stance widened."
18"You do not understand what"
19"I understand you are obstructing"
ratio0.32
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount170
totalSentences200
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement"
1"Her boots slapped against the"
2"The sound echoed off the"
3"Shadows stretched long under the"
4"Quinn tightened her grip on"
5"The beam cut through the"
6"Dust motes danced in the"
7"She checked her wrist."
8"The worn leather watch ticked."
9"The second hand swept past"
10"She pushed the memory down."
11"The suspect wore a dark"
12"Olive skin flashed under the"
13"She recognised the curl of"
14"She recognised the limp favouring"
15"Quinn increased her pace."
16"Her breath came in sharp"
17"The air tasted of ozone"
18"Her jacket soaked through at"
19"The cold bit into her"
ratio0.85
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences200
matches
0"If she retreated, the trail"
1"If she advanced, she entered"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.8574%