Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYGHDAZZM9CYJ2GPV6X29D

Run Details

Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.003886
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The drizzle slicked the path, reflecting the anemic glow of Rory’s phone. A chill, damp and persistent, had set in with the dusk. Overhead, skeletal branches writhed against a bruised sky. The entrance to Richmond Park had been simple enough to find, the wrought-iron gate a familiar sight. The path beyond, however, had dissolved into something else entirely. Thick oak trees, their trunks gnarled and ancient, pressed close, forming a tunnel. The air hung heavy, smelling of wet earth and something else, something sharp and metallic, like old blood. She clutched the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem, usually dormant, throbbed with a faint, insistent warmth against her palm. It had guided her here, the unknown benefactor's words echoing in her mind: *When it awakens, seek the Grove. It needs you.* Rory wasn't sure what "it" was, or what "it" might need, but the urgency in the message had been unmistakable. The path twisted, the light from her phone struggling against the encroaching darkness. A whisper, gossamer thin, drifted from the dense undergrowth. It sounded like her name, *Aurora*, drawn out and mournful. She froze, her breath catching in her throat. The sound dissipated, leaving only the relentless patter of rain and the distant, almost inaudible drone of city life, a hum swallowed by the oppressive quiet of the woods. She took a hesitant step forward, then another. The sound returned, closer this time, clearer. It *was* her name. A shiver traced its way down her spine. The rational part of her mind, the part that dealt with unruly pub patrons and the dizzying London traffic, tried to dismiss it as the wind. But the air was still, heavy, almost breathless. A flicker of movement in her peripheral vision. A shadow, too quick, too fluid to be a creature. It darted between the thick trunks, a fleeting suggestion of form against the blackness. Her bright blue eyes darted, searching. Nothing. Just the endless, dripping canopy. The sense of isolation intensified. She was not just alone; she was utterly, completely unmoored. The park had vanished, replaced by a place that felt older, wilder, entirely outside the city she knew. The standing stones, described in such vague terms by her benefactor, now loomed ahead, almost swallowed by the gloom. They were not mere rocks, but towering monoliths of dark, rough-hewn oak, their surfaces textured like ancient bark. They stood in a broken circle, marking a boundary to a clearing. As she stepped between two of them, the change was instantaneous and profound. The rain ceased. The air grew still, infused with the scent of wildflowers – impossible, in this season, in this cold. But here they bloomed, a riot of impossible colour in the deepening twilight. The wildflowers swayed, though no breeze stirred. A faint, almost imperceptible ringing started in her ears, a high-pitched hum that seemed to resonate within her very bones. The pendant in her fist pulsed hotter, a frantic beat. Then, the shadows moved again. Not just one this time, but many. They coalesced at the edges of the clearing, vague, indistinct shapes that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness. They weren't solid, not quite, but their presence was undeniable. A cold, pressing weight settled on her chest, stole her breath. She stood perfectly still, her heart hammering against her ribs, a frantic drum in the suffocating silence. She strained her ears, hoping to catch a stray rustle, a snap of a twig, anything to confirm they were animals, not… not what her gut screamed they were. But the silence held, vast and unforgiving, broken only by the insidious ringing in her ears. The shapes began to shift. They elongated, twisting, becoming less like shadows and more like gaunt, starved figures. Hands, long and spindly, unraveled from the darkness, reaching. Not towards her, not yet, but out into the empty air, as if grasping at threads only they could see. A whisper, like dry leaves skittering across stone, brushed against her ear. It wasn't the sweet, mournful call from before. This was a guttural sound, layered with a sickening rasp, a sound of ancient hunger. It spoke no words she understood, but the intent was clear, chilling her to the bone. The ground beneath her felt wrong, almost spongy. Her foot sank slightly, a cold dampness seeping through her trainers. She looked down. Not mud, but a thick, black viscous substance that oozed between blades of grass. It glistened faintly, like oil in the dim light. It smelled like decay, like forgotten things. One of the figures detached itself from the fringe of the trees. It moved with a jerky, unnatural grace, no discernible footsteps, just a glide. It was tall, impossibly thin, its form a patchwork of shadow and distorted angles. Two pinpricks of light, like dull embers, glowed within the featureless expanse of its head. It stopped several yards away, its head tilting. The motion was slow, deliberate, like a predator assessing its prey. The ringing in Rory's ears intensified, a piercing whine that threatened to shatter her eardrums. She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to block out the terror, trying to hold onto the cool logic that usually anchored her. When she opened them, the creature was closer. Its "face," if it could be called that, remained a void, but the sense of intense scrutiny was palpable, a gaze that stripped away pretense, laid bare her fear. The reach of its spindly hand, a skeletal parody of human form, extended slightly, not towards her, but past her, as if beckoning something from behind her. A sound, a wet, sucking gasp. It came from the trees directly behind her, deep in the shadows where the other figures still lurked. It was a sound of immense pain, and of something struggling, something alive and desperate, being pulled into the blackness. Rory’s breath hitched. She spun around, her phone light cutting a weak arc through the oppressive gloom. The shadows deepened, consumed the light before it could fully penetrate. But for a fleeting moment, she saw it: a flash of white, a pale limb disappearing into the grasping dark. The gasp, choked and broken, faded into a sickening silence. The figure in front of her remained still, its head still tilted. The two ember-like eyes seemed to expand, growing brighter, fixing on her with an unnerving intensity. The black ooze on the ground around her seemed to pulse faintly. The pendant in her hand burned, a searing heat that promised to brand her flesh. The creature took another step. Then another.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"completely"
2"very"
3"perfectly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"oppressive"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"fleeting"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count2
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"silence"
count3
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"predator"
count1
21
word"palpable"
count1
22
word"intensity"
count1
23
word"pulse"
count1
24
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"throbbed"
3"warmth"
4"echoing"
5"whisper"
6"oppressive"
7"traced"
8"down her spine"
9"flicker"
10"fleeting"
11"sense of"
12"loomed"
13"gloom"
14"profound"
15"pulsed"
16"weight"
17"silence"
18"chilling"
19"footsteps"
20"predator"
21"palpable"
22"intensity"
23"pulse"
24"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
46.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords11
totalWords1092
ratio0.01
matches
0"When it awakens, seek the Grove. It needs you."
1"Aurora"
2"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1089
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Grove1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"sounded like her name, *Aurora*, drawn out"
1"hum that seemed to resonate within her very bones"
2"not quite but their presence was undeniable"
3"as if grasping at threads only they could see"
4"smelled like decay, like forgotten things"
5"as if beckoning something from behind her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords6.41
wordCount1092
matches
0"not mere rocks, but towering monoliths of dark, rough-hewn oak, their surfaces t"
1"Not just one this time, but many"
2"not quite, but their presence was undeniable"
3"Not towards her, not yet, but out into the empty air, as if grasping at threads only they"
4"not yet, but out into the empty air, as if grasping at threads only they"
5"Not mud, but a thick, black viscous substance"
6"not towards her, but past her, as if beckoning something from behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
44.40% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean54.6
std16.67
cv0.305
sampleLengths
089
161
269
361
444
582
654
730
852
962
1047
1151
1252
1354
1456
1564
1644
1758
1855
197
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences89
ratio0.022
matches
0"She was not just alone; she was utterly, completely unmoored."
1"The air grew still, infused with the scent of wildflowers – impossible, in this season, in this cold."
82.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"ancient, pressed close, forming"
1"thick, black viscous substance"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.045829514207149404
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01833180568285976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.27
std6.09
cv0.496
sampleLengths
012
111
28
317
410
513
618
75
814
919
1023
1113
129
1310
148
1529
168
177
184
198
2026
218
228
2310
2414
256
261
275
285
2910
3018
3119
3218
3312
3413
353
3618
3713
387
3920
4010
415
427
4319
4410
4511
4617
4722
487
4916
30.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.23595505617977527
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners21
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just the endless, dripping canopy."
1"Then, the shadows moved again."
ratio0.023
77.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences87
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone pendant."
1"It had guided her here,"
2"It needs you.* Rory wasn't"
3"It sounded like her name,"
4"She froze, her breath catching"
5"She took a hesitant step"
6"It *was* her name."
7"It darted between the thick"
8"Her bright blue eyes darted,"
9"She was not just alone;"
10"They were not mere rocks,"
11"They stood in a broken"
12"They coalesced at the edges"
13"They weren't solid, not quite,"
14"She stood perfectly still, her"
15"She strained her ears, hoping"
16"They elongated, twisting, becoming less"
17"It wasn't the sweet, mournful"
18"It spoke no words she"
19"Her foot sank slightly, a"
ratio0.356
51.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences87
matches
0"The drizzle slicked the path,"
1"A chill, damp and persistent,"
2"The entrance to Richmond Park"
3"The path beyond, however, had"
4"The air hung heavy, smelling"
5"She clutched the Heartstone pendant."
6"The crimson gem, usually dormant,"
7"It had guided her here,"
8"It needs you.* Rory wasn't"
9"The path twisted, the light"
10"A whisper, gossamer thin, drifted"
11"It sounded like her name,"
12"She froze, her breath catching"
13"The sound dissipated, leaving only"
14"She took a hesitant step"
15"The sound returned, closer this"
16"It *was* her name."
17"A shiver traced its way"
18"The rational part of her"
19"A flicker of movement in"
ratio0.816
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A faint, almost imperceptible ringing started in her ears, a high-pitched hum that seemed to resonate within her very bones."
1"Not mud, but a thick, black viscous substance that oozed between blades of grass."
2"The ringing in Rory's ears intensified, a piercing whine that threatened to shatter her eardrums."
3"The reach of its spindly hand, a skeletal parody of human form, extended slightly, not towards her, but past her, as if beckoning something from behind her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it could (could)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
71.7646%