Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYGHXTA38HE57KD8NFHN54

Run Details

Duration:
3m 25s
Cost:
$0.002415
Provider:
Inceptron

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bicycle leaned against the oak boundary stone, its front wheel still spinning weakly as Rory turned away from it. Her lungs burned from the ride across Richmond Park, legs trembling from the effort of pedaling through darkness lit only by her phone's dying flashlight. She had come here because the pendant had grown warm against her chest, warmer than it had ever been, pulling her forward like a hook behind her sternum. The clearing opened before her, though calling it a clearing felt wrong. The space existed differently here—not quite a gap in the trees but a pause in reality itself. The standing stones rose in a rough circle, ancient oaks that had been shaped by centuries of wind and something else, something patient. Between them, wildflowers bloomed in colors that didn't belong to any season she knew. Pale blue petals caught moonlight that shouldn't have been able to reach the grove's floor. She checked her phone. No signal, of course. The battery icon showed four percent, its fading glow the only artificial light in a world gone old and strange. The pendant pulsed. Rory pressed her palm against it, feeling the warmth bloom beneath her fingers. Whoever had left it on her doorstep three months ago, wrapped in brown paper and twine with no note, had known something. She'd assumed it was junk, a weird gift from some customer at the restaurant. But the first time she'd walked past The Fae Grove's boundary during a delivery, the thing had practically scorched her skin. Now she understood. Whatever had been waiting for her here had finally called her home. The silence was the first wrong thing. Richmond Park never went quiet. Even at night, there were sounds—foxes calling, cars on the distant perimeter road, the rumble of planes descending toward Heathrow. But the grove held its breath around her, a bubble of stillness that pressed against her ears like deep water. She walked toward the standing stones, her trainers crushing wildflowers that left no trace beneath her feet. The air tasted sweet, thick with pollen that coated her tongue. Too sweet. The kind of sweetness that belonged to things growing in places where the rules had been forgotten. "Hello?" Her voice fell flat, absorbed by the trees before it could travel far. "I know someone's there. The pendant—它让我来的." The Chinese came out rusty. She'd learned it from Yu-Fei, picking up phrases during quiet shifts at the restaurant, but it felt wrong in her mouth now. The words belonged to a world that suddenly seemed very far away. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Rory spun around, heart lurching into her throat. Nothing. The trees stood silent, their branches reaching toward a sky that had gone the color of a bruise. She counted to five, forcing her breathing to slow. Cool-headed. That was what people said about her. Aurora Carter didn't panic, didn't jump at shadows. She turned back toward the center of the grove. The standing stones had changed. No—not changed. Moved. One of them, the largest, had shifted position while her back was turned. It no longer faced the way she'd entered. Instead, its gnarled surface seemed to lean toward her, oak bark folding into patterns that almost resembled a face. Rory's hand went to her pendant again, finding it hot now, almost uncomfortably so. The warmth spread up her arm, settling behind her eyes like the beginning of a migraine. "Okay," she said, and this time her voice came out steadier. "Okay. I get it. You want me to come farther in." She started walking. The ground beneath her feet grew softer with each step, as if the earth itself were becoming something other than earth. The wildflowers reached up around her ankles, their petals cool and damp against her skin. She kept her eyes forward, fixed on the center of the circle where the trees opened into a space that shouldn't have existed. The second wrong thing was the sound. It came from everywhere and nowhere, a low hum that started just below the threshold of hearing. Not quite music. Not quite voice. Something in between that made her teeth ache and her vision swim. She couldn't tell if it was getting louder or if she was simply becoming more aware of it, the way you suddenly notice your own heartbeat in a quiet room. The pendant burned now, a brand against her chest. She pulled it out from under her shirt, watching the crimson glow pulse in a rhythm that didn't match her pulse. Faster. Faster. The gem inner light flickered, casting red shadows across the clearing that moved independently of the source. Something was here. Not someone—something. The awareness crept up her spine like cold fingers tracing the vertebrae. She was being watched by more than eyes. "Show yourself." The command came out stronger than she felt. "I'm not here to fight. I'm here because your—because this called me." The hum stopped. The silence that followed was worse, heavier, a void filled with the expectation of sound. Rory stood frozen, her breath shallow, her hand still clutching the pendant. The red glow had stabilized now, steady as a heartbeat, showing her the edges of the clearing and nothing beyond them. She couldn't see the trees anymore. The boundary stones had disappeared. She was standing in a circle of red light with no walls, no exit, no proof that the world she'd known still existed outside this space. Then came the third wrong thing. The footsteps. Soft, padding, multiple—circling her. Moving just outside the reach of the pendant's light, keeping to the shadows it couldn't pierce. She tracked them by sound alone, turning slowly, trying to keep them in front of her. But there were too many, or they were too fast, or they weren't moving the way things were supposed to move. "This is pointless." She heard her own voice, distant, as if someone else were speaking. "If you wanted to hurt me, you'd have done it already." The footsteps stopped. In the silence, she heard breathing. Not her own. Something larger, lower, coming from everywhere at once. The air had gone cold, her breath misting in front of her face, but the ground beneath her feet remained soft and warm, holding a heat that seemed to be draining up through her soles. The pendant jerked in her hand, pulling toward a point to her left. She looked. At the edge of the red glow, standing where nothing had been a moment before, a figure waited. Tall and thin, shaped wrong—the proportions off in ways that made her eyes water when she tried to focus on them. Its features were blurred, as if it existed slightly out of phase with the light that revealed it. But she could see its eyes. Two points of darkness that reflected her own red-lit face, watching her with an intelligence that made her stomach clench. It didn't move. Didn't speak. Simply waited, patient as stone, while the pendant burned in her grip and the cold pressed in from all sides. Rory understood then, with the cold clarity of true fear, that she'd made a mistake. Whatever had called her here, whatever had led her to this place with its impossible flowers and its circling sounds and its figures at the edge of vision—it wasn't offering her answers. It was offering her a door. And doors, she knew from experience, went both ways.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1257
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1257
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"lurching"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"lurching"
4"pulse"
5"flickered"
6"tracing"
7"footsteps"
8"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
96.88% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0.01
matches
0"\"I know someone's there. The pendant—它让我来的.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1199
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Richmond2
Park2
Fae1
Grove1
Heathrow1
Chinese1
Yu-Fei1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Chinese"
2"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heathrow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a gap in the trees but a pause in reality itself"
1"seemed very far away"
2"heat that seemed to be draining up through her soles"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.803
wordCount1246
matches
0"not quite a gap in the trees but a pause in reality itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean30.39
std23.02
cv0.757
sampleLengths
073
181
228
33
470
515
67
745
847
920
1039
118
1252
139
145
1543
1630
1722
183
1959
207
2165
2249
2325
2422
253
2648
2737
288
2957
3026
313
3252
3313
342
3557
366
3745
3847
396
409
87.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"been shaped"
1"been forgotten"
2"being watched"
3"were supposed"
4"were blurred"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was getting"
1"was standing"
2"weren't moving"
3"were speaking"
4"wasn't offering"
5"was offering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences105
ratio0.067
matches
0"The space existed differently here—not quite a gap in the trees but a pause in reality itself."
1"Even at night, there were sounds—foxes calling, cars on the distant perimeter road, the rumble of planes descending toward Heathrow."
2"No—not changed."
3"Not someone—something."
4"Soft, padding, multiple—circling her."
5"Tall and thin, shaped wrong—the proportions off in ways that made her eyes water when she tried to focus on them."
6"Whatever had called her here, whatever had led her to this place with its impossible flowers and its circling sounds and its figures at the edge of vision—it wasn't offering her answers."
92.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1209
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own red-lit face,"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.0413564929693962
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011579818031430935
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.87
std7.81
cv0.659
sampleLengths
020
125
228
312
417
523
614
715
84
94
1020
113
1213
1322
1414
1521
163
1712
187
195
2020
2120
2217
2311
242
2517
2614
276
285
2922
3012
318
328
331
3418
359
361
377
388
399
405
412
421
4313
448
4519
4614
4716
4811
4911
58.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Pale blue petals caught moonlight"
1"Instead, its gnarled surface seemed"
2"Then came the third wrong"
3"Simply waited, patient as stone,"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences90
matches
0"Her lungs burned from the"
1"She had come here because"
2"She checked her phone."
3"She'd assumed it was junk,"
4"She walked toward the standing"
5"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
6"She'd learned it from Yu-Fei,"
7"She counted to five, forcing"
8"She turned back toward the"
9"It no longer faced the"
10"she said, and this time"
11"She started walking."
12"She kept her eyes forward,"
13"It came from everywhere and"
14"She couldn't tell if it"
15"She pulled it out from"
16"She was being watched by"
17"She couldn't see the trees"
18"She was standing in a"
19"She tracked them by sound"
ratio0.267
93.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences90
matches
0"The bicycle leaned against the"
1"Her lungs burned from the"
2"She had come here because"
3"The clearing opened before her,"
4"The space existed differently here—not"
5"The standing stones rose in"
6"She checked her phone."
7"The battery icon showed four"
8"The pendant pulsed."
9"Rory pressed her palm against"
10"She'd assumed it was junk,"
11"Whatever had been waiting for"
12"The silence was the first"
13"Richmond Park never went quiet."
14"She walked toward the standing"
15"The air tasted sweet, thick"
16"The kind of sweetness that"
17"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
18"The Chinese came out rusty."
19"She'd learned it from Yu-Fei,"
ratio0.733
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Whoever had left it on"
1"Now she understood."
2"Even at night, there were"
ratio0.033
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones rose in a rough circle, ancient oaks that had been shaped by centuries of wind and something else, something patient."
1"Pale blue petals caught moonlight that shouldn't have been able to reach the grove's floor."
2"The ground beneath her feet grew softer with each step, as if the earth itself were becoming something other than earth."
3"It came from everywhere and nowhere, a low hum that started just below the threshold of hearing."
4"She pulled it out from under her shirt, watching the crimson glow pulse in a rhythm that didn't match her pulse."
5"The air had gone cold, her breath misting in front of her face, but the ground beneath her feet remained soft and warm, holding a heat that seemed to be drainin…"
6"Two points of darkness that reflected her own red-lit face, watching her with an intelligence that made her stomach clench."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.8505%