Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYGR4Y72Y00X712BNDCKTW

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Duration:
50.5s
Cost:
$0.003012
Provider:
Parasail

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for three days straight, turning London's streets into rivers that pooled in the gutters and reflected the neon signs like bleeding wounds. Detective Harlow Quinn ran through Soho, her boots splashing through ankle-deep water, the wet fabric of her coat dragging against her shoulders like weights. Eighteen years on the force had taught her body to move without thought, to compress fear into kinetic energy and expel it through her legs. Ahead of her, the suspect darted between two closing cabs, his dark jacket disappearing around a corner. Quinn pushed harder, feeling the stitch in her side bloom into something sharper. Younger men had outrun her before. She'd learned to make that work for her. "Stop! Police!" The words echoed off the wet brick and bounced back meaningless. The suspect didn't slow. He cut down a narrow alley between a chip shop and a shuttered bookmaker, and Quinn followed, pulling her torch from her belt as the alley plunged into darkness. The smell hit her first—rot and cooking oil and something else, something metallic that clung to the back of her throat. Her torch cut a pale wedge through the dark, illuminating graffitied walls and a rat that froze mid-scurry before vanishing into a drain. The alley ended at an iron gate, rusted and half-open, the padlock torn clean off. Quinn slowed, sweeping her torch across the gate. Beyond it, concrete steps descended into the earth, and the temperature dropped ten degrees in the space of a breath. Cold air rose from below, carrying with it whispers and the distant thrum of music. She'd heard rumors about places like this. Underground markets that didn't appear on any map, that moved like phantoms through the city's veins. Her partner had been looking into something similar before he died. Before whatever had taken him had left his body on a rooftop with marks on his throat that the coroner couldn't explain. Morris had been chasing shadows. Quinn had promised herself she wouldn't become him. But the suspect had vanished down those stairs, and he was her best lead in six months of following the clique's money trails through shell companies and offshore accounts. Six months of dead ends and intimidating calls from the Commissioner. Six months of watching her reputation crumble while the rich and powerful laughed their way through loopholes she'd spent her career learning to close. The decision took less than a second. Quinn descended. The stairs turned twice before opening into a corridor lit by hanging lanterns that burned with no visible flame, their light shifting between amber and something deeper, something that made the shadows move wrong. The walls were tiled in white and black in a pattern that pulled at her eyes, and the floor was worn smooth by countless feet. Voices filtered up from below, layered and strange, speaking in languages she recognized and some she didn't. She kept one hand on her service weapon and her badge in the other, though she wasn't sure either would help her here. The corridor ended at a threshold, and Quinn stepped through into chaos. The market sprawled before her like a fever dream. Stalls constructed from what looked like bone and glass lined curved pathways that wound between pools of still water and statues that seemed to watch her with eyes carved from quartz. Vendors called out in half-whispers, their wares laid out on velvet: jars of something that shifted inside, leather-bound books with covers that moved when she looked away, racks of weapons that glowed faintly blue. People moved through the market in layers, some appearing solid and others flickering at the edges like dying television signals. A woman with too many joints walked past holding the hand of a child whose shadow pointed the wrong direction. A man in a Victorian coat examined a compass that spun without stopping. And in the center, near a fountain that ran with something darker than water, the suspect stood talking to another man. Quinn moved forward, badge raised, voice steady despite the hammering in her chest. "Metropolitan Police. You're under arrest." The suspect turned. In the lantern-light, she could see his face now—young, sharp-featured, with dark curls plastered to his forehead from the rain. His eyes met hers, and something flickered in them. Recognition. Or pity. "You shouldn't be here," he said. His accent was foreign, Spanish maybe, but his English was flawless. "This isn't your world." "Every world is my world when there's a warrant involved." Quinn closed the distance between them, reaching for her handcuffs. "Turn around. Hands behind your back." The man beside the suspect stepped forward. He was older, silver-templed, dressed in a suit that cost more than Quinn's car. His face was pleasant and utterly blank. "Detective Quinn," he said. "We've been expecting you. Well, not you specifically. Someone like you. The curious ones always find their way here eventually." Quinn's hand found her weapon. "Step aside. This doesn't involve you." "It involves us everything." The silver-haired man smiled, and the expression didn't reach his eyes. "You've been asking questions about the clique. Following money. Looking for proof. You're very persistent." "Guilty as charged." "You should have stopped when the warnings started." He gestured vaguely at the market around them. "Some doors, once opened, don't close again." The suspect—the young one—spoke again, his voice quieter now. "The Saint Christopher medallion. You should have looked at it closer." Quinn's blood went cold. She didn't know how he knew about that. The medallion had been in her partner's effects. She'd kept it as a reminder, though she couldn't say of what. A promise. A debt. She wore it now beneath her shirt, pressed against her sternum like a talisman. "You knew Morris," she said. "We knew what killed him," the young one replied. "We also know you've been dreaming about the case. The streets that don't exist. The figures in the dark. You've been seeing things that aren't there, Detective. That happens when you get too close." Quinn's hand tightened on her weapon. The market had gone quiet around them. The vendors watched. The flickering people had stopped flickering. Even the fountain seemed to have stilled. "I don't believe in ghosts," she said. "Then you should leave." The silver-haired man stepped aside, revealing a passage at the back of the market that Quinn hadn't noticed before. "Go back to your streets, your warrants, your normal crimes. Forget about the clique. Forget about Morris. Forget about this place." "Or what?" "Or you find out what's really at the bottom of the stairs." The young suspect spoke once more, his tone almost gentle. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. Tonight, it's beneath Camden. Tomorrow, it could be anywhere. You can't follow what you can't find. But if you stay—" He didn't finish. He didn't have to. Quinn looked at the passage. At the shadows that seemed to breathe and move of their own accord. At the two men who knew too much about her life and her dead partner. At the market full of things that weren't quite human, full of wares she couldn't begin to understand. Eighteen years. She'd survived eighteen years by trusting her instincts, by walking into rooms that wanted her dead and walking out again with her suspect in cuffs. She'd survived by refusing to look away from the ugly truth, no matter how hard it tried to look back. Morris had looked. And Morris was gone. But Morris had also trusted her with his medallion, had left it for her to find, had made her promise without words to keep asking questions. Quinn holstered her weapon. "I'm not leaving," she said. "Not without answers." The silver-haired man's pleasant expression cracked, showing something underneath. Something older. "Then you're making a mistake." "Maybe." Quinn met his eyes. "But I made the same mistake three years ago. I let Morris walk into this alone. I'm not making it again." The young suspect and the silver-haired man exchanged a look that carried weight Quinn couldn't measure. Then the younger one nodded, just once, and reached into his jacket. Quinn didn't flinch. He pulled out a bone token, small and white and carved with symbols she didn't recognize, and held it out to her. "Then you need this," he said. "To get back out. And to come back in, if you choose." Quinn took the token. It was warm, almost alive, and it hummed against her palm. "My name is Tomás," he said. "And I think we need to talk. But not here." The fountain behind them resumed its flow. The market noise rose again, like a held breath released. And somewhere in the darkness at the bottom of the passage, something shifted and waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"haired man stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.121
89.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"constructed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"flawless"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"almost alive"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"constructed"
2"velvet"
3"flickered"
4"flawless"
5"charged"
6"reminder"
7"weight"
8"almost alive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
72.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1463
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1180
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn20
Soho1
Commissioner1
Victorian1
Spanish1
English1
Morris4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Commissioner"
3"Victorian"
globalScore0.653
windowScore0.5
44.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"statues that seemed to watch her with eyes carved from quartz"
1"looked like bone and glass lined curved p"
2"shadows that seemed to breathe and move of their own accord"
3"quite human, full of wares she couldn't begin to understand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1463
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"make that work"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.09
std19.73
cv0.728
sampleLengths
076
144
22
344
459
543
656
713
864
97
102
1159
1240
1312
1474
1553
1621
1713
185
1935
2021
2126
2228
2324
2411
2530
263
2723
2820
2950
305
3143
3229
337
3444
352
3612
3737
387
3951
4047
417
4226
434
448
4516
4626
4728
483
4922
98.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"were tiled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs217
matches(empty)
72.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences121
ratio0.025
matches
0"The smell hit her first—rot and cooking oil and something else, something metallic that clung to the back of her throat."
1"In the lantern-light, she could see his face now—young, sharp-featured, with dark curls plastered to his forehead from the rain."
2"The suspect—the young one—spoke again, his voice quieter now."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inside, leather-bound books"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.023411371237458192
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0033444816053511705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean12.09
std8.34
cv0.69
sampleLengths
027
124
225
317
413
56
68
72
811
94
1029
1121
1223
1315
148
1520
1615
177
1816
1911
2022
215
228
2329
2411
2524
267
272
2834
2925
3017
3123
3212
339
3431
3534
3620
3720
3813
3921
4013
415
423
4320
449
451
462
476
4811
494
50.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3884297520661157
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners47
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Even the fountain seemed to"
1"Then the younger one nodded,"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences87
matches
0"She'd learned to make that"
1"He cut down a narrow"
2"Her torch cut a pale"
3"She'd heard rumors about places"
4"Her partner had been looking"
5"She kept one hand on"
6"His eyes met hers, and"
7"His accent was foreign, Spanish"
8"He was older, silver-templed, dressed"
9"His face was pleasant and"
10"He gestured vaguely at the"
11"She didn't know how he"
12"She'd kept it as a"
13"She wore it now beneath"
14"He didn't finish."
15"He didn't have to."
16"She'd survived eighteen years by"
17"She'd survived by refusing to"
18"He pulled out a bone"
19"It was warm, almost alive,"
ratio0.23
69.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences87
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through"
2"Quinn pushed harder, feeling the"
3"She'd learned to make that"
4"The words echoed off the"
5"The suspect didn't slow."
6"He cut down a narrow"
7"The smell hit her first—rot"
8"Her torch cut a pale"
9"The alley ended at an"
10"Quinn slowed, sweeping her torch"
11"She'd heard rumors about places"
12"Underground markets that didn't appear"
13"Her partner had been looking"
14"Morris had been chasing shadows."
15"Quinn had promised herself she"
16"The decision took less than"
17"The stairs turned twice before"
18"The walls were tiled in"
19"Voices filtered up from below,"
ratio0.782
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before whatever had taken him"
ratio0.011
14.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The rain had been falling for three days straight, turning London's streets into rivers that pooled in the gutters and reflected the neon signs like bleeding wo…"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through Soho, her boots splashing through ankle-deep water, the wet fabric of her coat dragging against her shoulders like weights."
2"Her torch cut a pale wedge through the dark, illuminating graffitied walls and a rat that froze mid-scurry before vanishing into a drain."
3"The stairs turned twice before opening into a corridor lit by hanging lanterns that burned with no visible flame, their light shifting between amber and somethi…"
4"The walls were tiled in white and black in a pattern that pulled at her eyes, and the floor was worn smooth by countless feet."
5"Vendors called out in half-whispers, their wares laid out on velvet: jars of something that shifted inside, leather-bound books with covers that moved when she …"
6"And in the center, near a fountain that ran with something darker than water, the suspect stood talking to another man."
7"She'd survived eighteen years by trusting her instincts, by walking into rooms that wanted her dead and walking out again with her suspect in cuffs."
8"The young suspect and the silver-haired man exchanged a look that carried weight Quinn couldn't measure."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.424
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5775%