Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYHAN5FPEBY4EQ5N7NMPA2

Run Details

Duration:
47.7s
Cost:
$0.001501
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign above the heavy oak door buzzed with a dying low-frequency hum. The bell above the frame chimed, a cheerful, jarring sound that broke the damp London night air. The door pushed open, letting in a rush of cold wind and the scent of exhaust fumes. Rory Carter stepped inside, the warmth of the bar washing over her instantly, a physical barrier against the chill outside. She didn’t look back out at the Soho street. She knew the routine. She knew the reflex to check for foot traffic, to ensure she wasn't being followed. It was muscle memory now, deep in the marrow of her bones, developed over the last two years of sleeping with one eye open and the door to her flat deadbolted by three different locks. The room inside was a cave of shadows and amber light. The walls, covered in peeling black-and-white photographs and maps of a world she barely recognized anymore, seemed to close in slightly. It smelled of lemon polish, stale gin, and the faint, metallic tang of gun oil that Silas had tried to scrub out but never quite managed. She walked to the far end of the bar. The floorboards groaned under her weight, a familiar sound, but the person behind the mahogany seemed less familiar. Silas Blackwood was wiping down a glass with a blue rag. He didn’t turn immediately. He knew her gait. He knew the hesitation before the determination. He’d taught her enough about surveillance to know that reaction time dictated whether you lived or died. "Rory." The single word was rough, like gravel ground between stones. He didn't look up. His hand tightened on the glass, the ceramic creaking under the pressure. "A drink, then?" His voice was lower than she remembered, lacking the baritone warmth that used to rumble when she first knocked on the door of his flat above this place five years ago. She slid onto the stool. The leather squelched. "I thought you were closed on Mondays," she said. Her voice was steady, flat. Too flat. "Never closed." He put the glass down. It clinked against the wood. Rory watched his hands—gnarled, veins blue against the skin, the ring she’d admired as a teenager, a heavy silver band, now a symbol of a past life she had run from. He turned, his movements fluid despite the slight hitch in his left leg. The limp wasn't as pronounced as it had been after Prague, but it was there, a ghost in his walk. He looked at her. Really looked at her. The blue light of the sign overhead flickered, casting long shadows across his grey-streaked auburn hair and the neatly trimmed beard that matched in color. The hazel eyes behind his glasses were sharp, dissecting her. "You’ve grown," Silas said softly. "You haven't." He laughed, a short, sharp bark that died in his throat. "Old age is a seesaw, Rory. We all take lumps." He reached for the bottle behind the counter, pouring amber liquid into a tumbler with a practiced hand. He didn't offer her one. She had never been a drinker, at least not back then. She was the one who kept the tea water boiling while Evan screamed at her from the other room. But something in her chest had felt wrong lately—a tightness that tea couldn't fix. Maybe being a messenger for Yu-Fei's kitchen hadn't inoculated her against the weight of the world. "The usual?" "No. Whisky. No ice." He pulled a bottle of scotch from the shelf, unmarked and dark. "You know I don't stock this. It doesn't sit right with the locals." "I'm not a local anymore." He paused, his hand hovering over the glass. A muscle in his jaw ticked. He poured two fingers of the dark liquid. He set the glass down in front of her and retreated to his end of the bar, leaning heavily against the counter, the silver ring glinting in the dim light. She picked up the glass. The burn in her throat was immediate and terrifyingly familiar. It reminded her of the nights she stayed awake in Cardiff, pacing the floor of the flat she’d shared with Brendan and Jennifer before the screaming started. Before she’d met Silas. Before she’d run to London. "How long have you been back in London?" "A month." "Living above the flat?" "Converting to office space," she lied. The rent was too high. She was squatting in a basement in Islington now. It was safer that way. Less light. Fewer questions. "I heard about Evan." The name hung in the air between them, stagnant and heavy. It wasn't a surprise she had heard. In Silas’s line of work, information was currency, and despite his claim that the Nest was a front for quiet conversation, his ears were as dangerous as his past. "He didn't do much. Just moved on." "You didn't." "Correction. I moved back." Silas reached into his pocket and pulled out a set of keys, jingling them against the counter. He tossed them across the counter toward her. She flinched, but caught them with a reflex so fast her hand blurred. The silver keys hit her palm, cold and solid. "The keys to the flat?" "Yes. I had them sent to you. Came in the mail with a letter from Brendan. He's retiring. Buying a place in the Cotswolds. Doesn't have the energy to look after it anymore." She stared at the keys. She remembered the flat. It was her only safe harbor, the place where she had slept without nightmares for the first six months of her time in London. She had assumed they had burned them when she left. "You sent them?" "After I spoke to your mother. I told her if you ever came back... or if you didn't." Silas turned away, looking out at the darkened street through the grimy window. "I regretted not coming after you that night. Not the night you ran to Eva's, but the weeks after. I should have gone to Cardiff. I should have pulled Brendan aside." "You couldn't have." "I could have tried. Intelligence is about leverage, Rory. About knowing where the pressure points are. I didn't push hard enough on your father. I thought if I stayed out of it, let you have your law degree, your quiet life..." He trailed off, his hand tracing the edge of a coaster. "It didn't work out." She took another drink of the whisky. It tasted like fire. It tasted like history. "I didn't want to be a lawyer. I didn't want a quiet life." "And now?" Silas turned back, his expression grave, the worn lines on his face deepening. "Now what do you want?" "I don't know," she lied again. But she did know. She wanted to be invisible. She wanted the world to pass her by like the wind through the narrow streets of Soho. But she had changed. She had hardened into something sharp and unrecognizable. The girl with the crescent scar on her wrist was gone, replaced by a woman who knew how to spot a tail in three seconds flat. "You're drinking like a spy, Rory." "I'm drinking like someone who needs to forget." Silas moved from behind the bar, the springs of the floorboards groaning under his slight weight. He came around the counter, stopping at her side. He looked down at her. He was a head taller, but she didn’t shrink back. She didn't look up to him. She met his eyes, defiant. "You've got marks on your jaw. A bruise?" "Boxing." "Sparring?" "Fighting." Silas reached out, his hand hovering over her cheek. For a moment, she thought he might touch her, to check if she was real, to offer that comfort he used to give her when she cried in his spare room after a nightmare about Evan. But he stopped. His hand dropped to the counter. "I worry about you," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I'm fine." "You're not fine. You're dangerous, and you're lonely, and you're drinking scotch at one in the morning in a bar that smells like gin and fear." She smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "It's the little things that count." "I miss the girl who thought wearing her hair in two braids made her invisible." "That girl died in Cardiff, Silas. Before you got your knee fixed, before Yu-Fei even hired me." He sighed, a sound of profound exhaustion. He walked back to the other end of the bar, pouring himself a fresh glass. "There's a back room if you need it," he said, not looking at her. "Bookshelf. You know how it works." "I know." "Go on. Clear your head. I'll lock up at closing." She looked at the door. She could leave. She could go down into the damp London underground and disappear into the cavern of the tube station. But instead, she turned and walked toward the shadowy corner where the heavy oak bookshelf stood. It was ancient, covered in layers of dust and alcohol stains. She knew the mechanism. She had pressed the loose brick with her own hands a thousand times during her late-night panic attacks. She didn't press the brick. She stopped, her back to the bookshelf, looking at Silas's silhouette in the mirror behind the bar. He was watching her, waiting. Waiting for her to break, or for her to realize she was broken. Rory took a deep breath, the air in the bar tasting like old secrets, and turned back toward him. "Another round, Silas." He didn't smile. He just poured.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:38:28.265Z" 2/19/2026, 12:38:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Silas said softly [softly]"
1"Silas turned back [back]"
2"she lied again [again]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.125
87.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"ensure"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"ensure"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"flickered"
6"glinting"
7"tracing"
8"grave"
9"whisper"
10"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1604
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1233
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London4
Carter1
Soho2
Silas11
Blackwood1
Prague1
Evan2
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff1
Brendan1
Jennifer1
Islington1
Nest1
Rory3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Evan"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Brendan"
6"Jennifer"
7"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
4"Islington"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.623
wordCount1604
matches
0"Not the night you ran to Eva's, but the weeks after"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences151
matches
0"know that reaction"
1"offer that comfort"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean24.68
std23.6
cv0.956
sampleLengths
069
163
258
370
41
526
634
78
816
92
1074
118
1235
135
142
1521
1683
172
184
1925
205
2152
2251
238
242
254
2629
274
2847
297
302
314
3247
335
3433
3543
363
3718
3844
393
4052
4132
4220
4370
446
458
4651
478
481
491
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"being followed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was squatting"
2"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences151
ratio0.013
matches
0"Rory watched his hands—gnarled, veins blue against the skin, the ring she’d admired as a teenager, a heavy silver band, now a symbol of a past life she had run from."
1"But something in her chest had felt wrong lately—a tightness that tea couldn't fix."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1241
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0249798549556809
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009669621273166801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean10.62
std8.68
cv0.818
sampleLengths
015
117
217
320
49
54
615
735
811
921
1026
119
1218
1311
144
154
167
1717
181
1910
204
2112
2234
235
243
259
265
272
282
295
305
3131
3213
3320
344
354
3625
3710
385
392
4011
4110
4218
435
4411
4519
4614
4716
482
494
30.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.26490066225165565
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners40
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Really looked at her."
1"Maybe being a messenger for"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences108
matches
0"She didn’t look back out"
1"She knew the routine."
2"She knew the reflex to"
3"It was muscle memory now,"
4"It smelled of lemon polish,"
5"She walked to the far"
6"He didn’t turn immediately."
7"He knew her gait."
8"He knew the hesitation before"
9"He’d taught her enough about"
10"He didn't look up."
11"His hand tightened on the"
12"His voice was lower than"
13"She slid onto the stool."
14"Her voice was steady, flat."
15"He put the glass down."
16"It clinked against the wood."
17"He turned, his movements fluid"
18"He looked at her."
19"He laughed, a short, sharp"
ratio0.639
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences108
matches
0"The neon green sign above"
1"The bell above the frame"
2"The door pushed open, letting"
3"Rory Carter stepped inside, the"
4"She didn’t look back out"
5"She knew the routine."
6"She knew the reflex to"
7"It was muscle memory now,"
8"The room inside was a"
9"The walls, covered in peeling"
10"It smelled of lemon polish,"
11"She walked to the far"
12"The floorboards groaned under her"
13"Silas Blackwood was wiping down"
14"He didn’t turn immediately."
15"He knew her gait."
16"He knew the hesitation before"
17"He’d taught her enough about"
18"The single word was rough,"
19"He didn't look up."
ratio0.889
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Before she’d met Silas."
1"Before she’d run to London."
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The blue light of the sign overhead flickered, casting long shadows across his grey-streaked auburn hair and the neatly trimmed beard that matched in color."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He trailed, his hand tracing the edge of a coaster"
1"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
2"he said, not looking at her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she lied again (lie)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.083
83.7355%