Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYHJPJ9MAFQAP5XYRQ6F01

Run Details

Duration:
2m 17s
Cost:
$0.027921
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest hissed against the November dark, painting the cobblestones outside with jade light that fought against the sodium orange of the streetlamps. Inside, amber sconces cast pools of illumination that barely reached the nicotine-stained maps lining the walls—Yugoslavia as it was before the fracture, Berlin with its_wall intact, territories that existed now only in ink and regret. Aurora Carter sat at the corner of the zinc bar, her left thumb tracing the crescent scar on her wrist, following the pale ridge of tissue without conscious thought. Three years in London had roughened her Cardiff polish; her black hair, chopped blunt at the shoulders, framed cheekbones that had sharpened from too many shifts carrying thermal bags through rain-slicked streets for the Golden Empress. Silas Blackwood limped behind the counter, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the light as he reached for the bourbon. His silver signet ring clinked against the glass bottle, a sound that had become part of the bar's architecture, as constant as the drip of the tap or the groan of the radiator. He poured two fingers for Rory and said nothing. He never asked why she drank whiskey on a Tuesday instead of sleeping in the flat above, never questioned the way she checked the shadows near the door every time it opened. The door opened. Cold air cut through the tobacco fog, carrying the smell of diesel and frying garlic from three streets over. A man stood silhouetted against the streetlamps, his charcoal overcoat tailored with the precision Rory recognized from her father's chambers in Cardiff, from courtrooms where justice wore horsehair wigs and spoke in dead languages. He scanned the room, his gaze sliding past the black-and-white photographs of anonymous men at café tables in Vienna and Prague, and stopped when it found her. His face shifted. The professional mask slipped, revealing something raw underneath, a boyish shock that ill-suited the expensive wool. "Rory?" Her shoulders tightened until the tendons stood like cables beneath her skin. The name sounded foreign here, in this den of shadows and retired intelligence officers. She turned fully on the stool, her bright blue eyes narrowing against the gloom, adjusting from the maps to the doorway. "Marcus." He crossed the floor with strides too confident for these sagging boards, this cramped space where walls held decades of whispered confessions. Rory watched him approach, cataloguing the alterations: the silver threading his temples like frost on copper wire, the lines etched deep around his mouth that spoke of sleepless nights, the weight he carried in his shoulders that definitely was not there when they were undergraduates together at Cardiff, when he wore thrift-store jumpers and argued about jurisprudence until three in the morning. He had been soft then, soft in that way of boys who grow up with court orders and country clubs, all idealism and unearned certainty. Now his jaw carried a bluntness that suggested impact, and his hands, when he stripped off his leather gloves, revealed knuckles ridged with fresh scar tissue, shiny and pink against the bar's dim light. "You cut your hair." He stopped two feet away, still standing, looming in a way that made her spine straighten involuntarily. "It used to fall past your shoulder blades. You used to twist it around your finger when you were nervous." "You grew a backbone." She lifted her glass, watched the liquid catch the light from the neon sign. "Drink?" Marcus hesitated, then settled onto the neighboring stool. The wood groaned beneath his weight. "Whiskey. Neat." Silas materialized, pouring with economy. The signet ring flashed in the gloom. Marcus didn't acknowledge the bartender; his attention remained fixed on Rory as though she might evaporate, a phantom conjured by guilt and London particulate. "I called your mother last month," Marcus said. The whiskey sat untouched, a miniature amber lens reflecting the fractured topography of the Balkans on the wall behind the bar. "She told me you were in London. Didn't say you were working in a place like this." "And what kind of place is that?" "The kind where people come to disappear." He looked at the photographs, the men in tweed standing outside shuttered bakeries inCheckpoint Charlie. "The kind where no one asks for transcripts." Rory laughed, a short sound that scraped her throat. She wore no makeup, her uniform—a simple black turtleneck and jeans that carried the faint grease stains of her delivery work—speaking of a life knit together from necessity rather than design. "I'm not disappearing," she said. "I'm just not where you expected to find me." "Where I expected..." Marcus finally drank. The liquor flushed color into his throat, and she watched his Adam's apple bob as he swallowed against the burn. "Rory, we were going to change the world. You had the acceptance letter to the Inns of Court. We were going to take down barriers from the inside, remember? Reform the system. Justice with a capital J. You were the sharpest mind in our cohort, the one who spotted the loopholes before the lecturers did." "Evan happened." The name hung between them like smoke, thick and acrid. Rory's right hand crossed to her left wrist, fingers covering the crescent scar, hiding it though the gesture betrayed its location. Marcus's jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath the skin. "I know." "You don't know anything." She leaned forward, her voice dropping to a register that made Silas pause in his wiping of the far end of the bar, his hazel eyes assessing, his limp barely audible over the hum of the refrigerator. "You stayed in your towers. You finished your degree. You became—what exactly? Commercial law? Banking? You're wearing three thousand pounds on your back, Marcus. Don't pretend you stayed to fight the good fight while I ran away like a coward." "I looked for you." His voice cracked, then steadied. He turned the glass in his scarred hands, the tissue catching the neon light filtering through the window. "When you vanished from the dorms in second term. When your mobile went dead and your university email bounced back. I went to the police in Cardiff, then the Metropolitan lot here. They said you were twenty-two, of age, that people leave degrees every day without filing missing persons reports. But I knew. I knew it was him. I saw the way he looked at you in the law library, like you were a brief he owned." "And did you find him?" Rory's nails dug into her palm. "Did you mount a rescue? Storm the flat? Break your civilized rules?" "Did you want me to?" The question broke something open, a seam stitched tight for three years. Rory looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar, distorted by rows of green bottles and amber spirits. The woman there looked harder than twenty-five, the skin beneath her eyes bruised with fatigue, the mouth set in a line that suggested permanence. She saw the residue of the girl who had believed in systems, in the law as shield rather than sword, who had trusted men because they wore the correct uniforms or spoke the correct precedents. "I wanted you to find me," she said quietly. Marcus reached into his coat. Rory flinched—an old reflex, muscle memory of raised hands in confined spaces—and he froze, his eyes widening at the instinctive cringe she couldn't quite suppress. He moved slowly then, with the careful gestures of someone disarming a mechanism, and withdrew a folded envelope, aged at the corners, the blue paper faded to grey. He placed it on the zinc between them, not pushing it toward her, simply setting it down like an offering at a shrine for expired things. "Your notes," he said. "From second year. The dissertation research on coercive control in domestic partnerships. You'd left them in the library carrel, scattered across the desk. I collected every page." He touched the corner of the envelope with one scarred finger. "I kept them in my flat in Bloomsbury. Sentimental, I realize. But I thought... if you came back, if you ever wanted to finish what you started, to use the research..." Rory stared at the envelope. Three years. Three years of delivering wonton soup through the maze of Soho, of listening to Silas's stories of Prague and botched extractions and the calculus of survival, of learning that sometimes flight is not cowardice but the only strategy that keeps the blood inside the body. And this man, who had become something harder and more angular than the boy she remembered, had carried her abandoned scholarship like an amulet, waiting for a resurrection that would never come. "I can't go back," she said. "Not to those rooms. Not to that skin." "I'm not asking you to." Marcus sipped his whiskey again. His hands were steady now, though she remembered them shaking when he presented his first moot court argument, when winning had mattered more than truth. "I'm asking if you're happy." "Happy is a child's word." "Then what are you?" She looked at Silas, who stood beneath a photograph of men in tweed outside a Berlin checkpoint in 1968, his bad leg braced against the brass rail, watching the room with the quiet authority of someone who had learned that most wars end not with victory but with survival. She looked at Marcus, with his Savile Row coat and his scarred knuckles and his archival devotion, this man who had occupied the coordinates between who they were and who they had promised to become. "Alive," she said. "That's new enough." Marcus nodded slowly, his eyes glistening in the low light. He drained his glass and stood, buttoning his coat with fingers that still showed those strange new scars, the ones she didn't ask about, the ones that suggested he hadn't spent these years in safe towers after all, but in his own brutal educations, his own falls from grace. "Your eyes are still the same," he said. "That impossible blue. Everything else..." "Everything else had to change." She didn't stand. "Goodbye, Marcus." He walked to the door, then paused with his hand on the brass handle. "The law misses you, Rory. Not the profession. The mind. You were the keenest blade I knew, and that was before you understood what damage really looked like." "That's because you didn't know yourself," she said. "Not then." He smiled, sad and brief, a ghost of the boy who had once known the price of everything and the value of nothing, and stepped out into the Soho night. The door swallowed the draft behind him, sealing the cold outside. Rory didn't open the envelope. She left it on the bar, a marker of a life aborted, while Silas limped over and refilled her glass without asking, pouring one for himself. They didn't toast. They simply drank while the maps above them whispered of other borders crossed, other names abandoned to the dark, and the radiator hissed its agreement that some warmth must be bought with silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His voice cracked then [then]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.091
91.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1853
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1853
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"looming"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"glistening"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanned"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"weight"
5"looming"
6"fractured"
7"glistening"
8"warmth"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1838
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1384
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Yugoslavia1
Berlin2
Carter1
London2
Cardiff3
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Rory11
Tuesday1
Vienna1
Prague2
Marcus9
Balkans1
Charlie1
Adam1
Silas6
Soho2
Savile1
Row1
Three3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Marcus"
6"Charlie"
7"Adam"
8"Silas"
places
0"Berlin"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Vienna"
4"Prague"
5"Soho"
6"Three"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite suppress"
91.19% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.088
wordCount1838
matches
0"not cowardice but the only strategy"
1"not with victory but with survival"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean42.74
std36.52
cv0.854
sampleLengths
0128
193
222
361
419
51
647
71
8143
941
1019
1116
1236
1346
147
1530
1654
1781
182
1931
2011
2181
22104
2323
245
2591
269
2784
2873
2984
3014
3140
325
334
3484
356
3659
3713
3810
3942
4010
4141
4267
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
2.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences102
ratio0.049
matches
0"Inside, amber sconces cast pools of illumination that barely reached the nicotine-stained maps lining the walls—Yugoslavia as it was before the fracture, Berlin with its_wall intact, territories that existed now only in ink and regret."
1"Three years in London had roughened her Cardiff polish; her black hair, chopped blunt at the shoulders, framed cheekbones that had sharpened from too many shifts carrying thermal bags through rain-slicked streets for the Golden Empress."
2"Marcus didn't acknowledge the bartender; his attention remained fixed on Rory as though she might evaporate, a phantom conjured by guilt and London particulate."
3"She wore no makeup, her uniform—a simple black turtleneck and jeans that carried the faint grease stains of her delivery work—speaking of a life knit together from necessity rather than design."
4"Rory flinched—an old reflex, muscle memory of raised hands in confined spaces—and he froze, his eyes widening at the instinctive cringe she couldn't quite suppress."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1397
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02720114531138153
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.009305654974946313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean18.02
std14.87
cv0.825
sampleLengths
028
135
229
336
419
533
69
732
83
919
1034
1127
123
1316
141
1512
1614
1721
181
1922
2062
2125
2234
2321
2420
2518
261
278
286
292
305
317
3224
338
3421
3517
367
3722
388
399
4031
415
429
436
4420
4555
462
4710
4821
499
46.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences68
matches
0"His silver signet ring clinked"
1"He poured two fingers for"
2"He never asked why she"
3"He scanned the room, his"
4"His face shifted."
5"Her shoulders tightened until the"
6"She turned fully on the"
7"He crossed the floor with"
8"He had been soft then,"
9"He stopped two feet away,"
10"She lifted her glass, watched"
11"He looked at the photographs,"
12"She wore no makeup, her"
13"She leaned forward, her voice"
14"His voice cracked, then steadied"
15"He turned the glass in"
16"She saw the residue of"
17"she said quietly"
18"He moved slowly then, with"
19"He placed it on the"
ratio0.456
4.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences68
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Aurora Carter sat at the"
2"Silas Blackwood limped behind the"
3"His silver signet ring clinked"
4"He poured two fingers for"
5"He never asked why she"
6"The door opened."
7"A man stood silhouetted against"
8"He scanned the room, his"
9"His face shifted."
10"The professional mask slipped, revealing"
11"Her shoulders tightened until the"
12"The name sounded foreign here,"
13"She turned fully on the"
14"He crossed the floor with"
15"Rory watched him approach, cataloguing"
16"He had been soft then,"
17"He stopped two feet away,"
18"She lifted her glass, watched"
19"Marcus hesitated, then settled onto"
ratio0.912
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now his jaw carried a"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The green neon above The Raven's Nest hissed against the November dark, painting the cobblestones outside with jade light that fought against the sodium orange …"
1"Inside, amber sconces cast pools of illumination that barely reached the nicotine-stained maps lining the walls—Yugoslavia as it was before the fracture, Berlin…"
2"Aurora Carter sat at the corner of the zinc bar, her left thumb tracing the crescent scar on her wrist, following the pale ridge of tissue without conscious tho…"
3"His silver signet ring clinked against the glass bottle, a sound that had become part of the bar's architecture, as constant as the drip of the tap or the groan…"
4"Rory watched him approach, cataloguing the alterations: the silver threading his temples like frost on copper wire, the lines etched deep around his mouth that …"
5"He had been soft then, soft in that way of boys who grow up with court orders and country clubs, all idealism and unearned certainty."
6"Marcus didn't acknowledge the bartender; his attention remained fixed on Rory as though she might evaporate, a phantom conjured by guilt and London particulate."
7"She wore no makeup, her uniform—a simple black turtleneck and jeans that carried the faint grease stains of her delivery work—speaking of a life knit together f…"
8"Three years of delivering wonton soup through the maze of Soho, of listening to Silas's stories of Prague and botched extractions and the calculus of survival, …"
9"And this man, who had become something harder and more angular than the boy she remembered, had carried her abandoned scholarship like an amulet, waiting for a …"
10"She looked at Silas, who stood beneath a photograph of men in tweed outside a Berlin checkpoint in 1968, his bad leg braced against the brass rail, watching the…"
11"He smiled, sad and brief, a ghost of the boy who had once known the price of everything and the value of nothing, and stepped out into the Soho night."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.2957%