Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJ9N81Q5ACRCPTXAYW3GP

Run Details

Duration:
51.5s
Cost:
$0.001775
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The taxi driver had looked at her with the same wary expression he usually reserved for drunks and junkies. The meter ticked over into the triple digits before he’d even cleared the perimeter of Kensington. "You can't go back there, love. It's too dark." She’d slid the card through the plastic reader before he could restart the engine. "Now where do you think you’re going?" he’d grunted. "Nowhere you need to worry about." She’d pulled her collar up, ignored the question, and stepped out into the biting chill of the November night. The rain hadn’t started yet, but the air was thick with the smell of wet fur and wet earth. The cab had peeled away instantly, tires hissing on the wet asphalt. She stood alone on the edge of King Henry’s Mound, the hum of the city traffic fading into a distant, muffled roar. The map on her phone had been glitching for the last ten minutes, the compass needle spinning violently before settling on a direction that pointed straight into the dense, ancient woods of Richmond Park. She wasn’t supposed to be here. The Golden Empress didn’t deliver into the middle of a nature reserve at two in the morning. But Silas had insisted. The address on the package had been vague—a single name written in an erratic hand on a slip of paper he’d shoved into her hand with a greasy £20 tip. *“Gold, bright crimson. Know what it looks like. Find it.”* She shifted her weight, the gravel crunched loudly under her boots. She shoved the phone back into her pocket. The signal bar dipped to zero. Figures. She pulled the silver chain from beneath her coat. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her collarbone. It was supposed to lead her to something, or warn her away from something. So far, it was doing neither. It felt like a piece of cold, dead metal, dull and indifferent to the looming oaks and twisting branches that clawed at the twilight sky. She walked. The path twisted left, then right, disappearing under a canopy of skeletal branches that blocked out most of the moonlight. Her breath formed white clouds in the frigid air. She kept her hands in her pockets, gripping the pendant hard enough to bruise. Stop. Wait. She froze. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. Something moved in the brush to her right. A footstep? No. The leaves didn't rustle. They didn't crunch. They simply... slid. A dry, slick sound, like skin dragging over coarse bark. She held her breath, the air tasting metallic. She focused on the shadowed periphery of her vision. There was a tree with a gnarled, almost humanoid shape. As she stared, the shadows on its trunk elongated. They didn't stretch with the slant of the light; they stood up. Three distinct shapes detached themselves from the bark, hovering an inch off the surface. Her throat clicked. She didn't run. She didn't turn to look at them. Rory had left Evan, and she’d left the safety of the flat above Silas’s bar. Fear was a luxury she couldn't afford. She just walked faster. The woods were unnervingly quiet. In the city, at night, the sound of sirens, distant shouting, and car alarms was a constant companion. Here, there was only the wind. And the wind didn't just blow; it seemed to whisper, moving through the tree trunks like a breath exhaling into a giant's chest. It was a low, melodic susurrus, a language she almost understood, its vowels tasting like copper. She checked the map again. Dead screen. She was lost. The path had vanished completely, replaced by a carpet of moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple. The pendant suddenly yanked against her neck. It was a violent, jarring sensation. Not a vibration, but a tug, as if a string tied to her chest were being pulled taut. She gasped, her hand flying up to fumble with the chain. The silver chain was cold enough to burn. The stone itself was humming now, a low, resonant thrum that vibrated in her fingertips. The Grove. The memory of the stories Silas had half-jokingly told her floated to the surface. *“Beware the standing stones, Rory. Time doesn't play nice there. Don't step past the oak line.”* Ahead of her, a break in the tree line revealed a clearing. In the center, four massive oak trunks stood like pillars of the earth, their branches intertwined to form a natural archway. They were the standing stones. Or the standing oaks. She couldn't tell which. She stepped toward the opening. As soon as she crossed the invisible boundary, the temperature plummeted. The rain finally broke, heavy, freezing droplets slapping against her face. But the darkness wasn't the problem. The flora was. Wildflowers bloomed in a chaotic swirl around the perimeter of the clearing. They were impossible. Petals the color of burnt blood and viscous black swirled together, defying the season. The scent hit her next—sweet, cloying, and rotting all at once. It smelled like a bouquet found in a graveyard. She stepped onto the grass. It felt spongy, almost wet. It sucked at her boots with each step, reluctant to let her go. The Heartstone was burning now. It was radiating heat through the chain, searing the skin on her neck. It wasn't just a glow anymore; the deep crimson gemstone was pulsing, sending ripples of light through the clearing. *Look.* The thought wasn't in her head. It was in the air, vibrating in her teeth. *Look.* She looked down at the flower bed closest to her. A dark spot had formed in the center of a ring of black lilies. It was throbbing. A heartbeat. *Thump. Thump.* The flowers weren't just plants. They were alive. She spun around, scanning the dark treeline. "Who's there?" Her voice didn't echo. The silence of the Grove swallowed it whole. It was heavier than the silence in the city. It felt like a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders, squeezing the air out of her lungs. A twig snapped. This time, she reacted. She spun toward the sound, her hand going to the coat pocket, but her fingers brushed nothing but the fabric. She froze. The snap had come from *behind* her. She slowly turned. There was nothing there. Just a pair of large, dark eyes reflecting the crimson pulse of the pendant from deep within the brush. "Show yourself," she commanded. Her voice was steadier than she felt. The cold hands in her pockets were trembling, but her face remained a mask of indifferent calculation. The eyes moved. They didn't blink. Then, the light shifted. The crimson glow of the pendant pulsed harder, drowning out the moonlight. In the sudden burst of scarlet illumination, the shadows in the clearing detached themselves from the trees. They weren't silhouettes. They were shapes—overly elongated limbs, faces with no features, composed entirely of shifting leaves and thorns. They began to emerge from the gloom, shuffling toward her. They weren't running. They didn't need to. They were merely... appearing. One of them passed between the ancient oaks, stepping out of the dark like stepping out of a dream. It was tall, unnaturally so, and it held something in its hands—something wrapped in golden paper. "Silas was right," she whispered, backing up until her heels hit the thick, roots of an oak tree. "The time." She looked at her watch. The hands weren't moving. She tried to rub her eyes, but her hands wouldn't obey her commands. They just hung there at her sides, useless, trapped by the cold grip of the grove. The Heartstone was scorching her skin now, leaving a red mark on her neck. It pulsed in time with the thing in front of her. The thing in front of her held up the package. It grinned—a jagged tear in the wrapping. "You're late, Carter." The voice didn't come from the creature's mouth. It came from everywhere at once, a chorus of whispers that mimicked the sound of Evan’s voice, then her mother's, then Silas’s, then her own. "Give it back." The thing tossed the package. It sailed through the air, landing softly at her feet. Before she could touch it, the creature reached out a hand made of twigs and grasped her wrist. The skin was as cold as ice, hard as wood. "It belongs to the Grove now." She looked at the package. It was already starting to mold, the gold paper turning to ash. "No," she hissed, yanking her arm back. Her hand slipped free, but the creature didn't stumble. It just loomed over her, the leaves on its head rustling in a wind that didn't exist. She could feel it now. The wrongness. The heavy, humid air that tasted of pine and copper pressing against her skin. The images of leaves and branches began to crawl over her vision, blurring her perception of the world. The creature raised its other hand, and the ground beneath her began to tremble. Not an earthquake, but a subtle vibration, like a drumbeat emanating from deep underground. The pendant stopped pulsing. It went dark. And in the sudden, absolute blackness that swallowed the clearing, Rory heard the first human footsteps of the night coming from the path she had just left.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"searing"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"looming"
3"whisper"
4"vibrated"
5"chaotic"
6"searing"
7"scanning"
8"echo"
9"silence"
10"pulse"
11"pulsed"
12"gloom"
13"loomed"
14"could feel"
15"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences159
matches(empty)
79.96% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences159
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords31
totalWords1565
ratio0.02
matches
0"“Gold, bright crimson. Know what it looks like. Find it.”"
1"“Beware the standing stones, Rory. Time doesn't play nice there. Don't step past the oak line.”"
2"Look."
3"Look."
4"Thump. Thump."
5"behind"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1495
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.27
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Kensington1
November1
King1
Henry1
Mound1
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas4
Heartstone3
Evan2
Grove2
Rory2
persons
0"King"
1"Henry"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Grove"
6"Rory"
places
0"Kensington"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a piece of cold, dead metal,"
1"moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple"
2"smelled like a bouquet found in a graveyar"
3"felt like a physical weight pressing do"
72.20% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.278
wordCount1565
matches
0"Not a vibration, but a tug, as if a string tied to her chest were being pulled ta"
1"Not an earthquake, but a subtle vibration, like a drumbeat emanating from deep unde"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean26.08
std19.19
cv0.736
sampleLengths
035
19
214
39
444
568
623
744
888
945
102
1111
1239
1354
143
1536
1668
1738
187
1958
202
2130
2233
2313
2433
253
2649
2723
2837
291
3016
3129
322
338
349
3539
3627
379
3826
3928
406
4152
4221
4335
4420
4538
4625
4717
483
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences159
matches
0"was supposed"
1"being pulled"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was doing"
1"was humming"
2"was burning"
3"was radiating"
4"was pulsing"
5"was throbbing"
6"were trembling"
7"weren't running"
8"was scorching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences167
ratio0.054
matches
0"The address on the package had been vague—a single name written in an erratic hand on a slip of paper he’d shoved into her hand with a greasy £20 tip."
1"They didn't stretch with the slant of the light; they stood up."
2"And the wind didn't just blow; it seemed to whisper, moving through the tree trunks like a breath exhaling into a giant's chest."
3"The path had vanished completely, replaced by a carpet of moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple."
4"The scent hit her next—sweet, cloying, and rotting all at once."
5"It wasn't just a glow anymore; the deep crimson gemstone was pulsing, sending ripples of light through the clearing."
6"They were shapes—overly elongated limbs, faces with no features, composed entirely of shifting leaves and thorns."
7"It was tall, unnaturally so, and it held something in its hands—something wrapped in golden paper."
8"It grinned—a jagged tear in the wrapping."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1502
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03595206391478029
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.011318242343541944
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean9.37
std6.8
cv0.725
sampleLengths
019
116
29
314
49
525
619
712
822
934
106
1117
124
1330
1410
1511
168
176
181
199
208
2114
226
2325
242
2520
269
2714
281
291
302
319
328
332
341
354
363
372
381
3910
408
419
4210
439
4412
4514
463
473
487
4915
35.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.2694610778443114
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners45
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"So far, it was doing"
1"Just a pair of large,"
2"Then, the light shifted."
ratio0.022
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences138
matches
0"She’d slid the card through"
1"She’d pulled her collar up,"
2"She stood alone on the"
3"She wasn’t supposed to be"
4"She shifted her weight, the"
5"She shoved the phone back"
6"She pulled the silver chain"
7"It was supposed to lead"
8"It felt like a piece"
9"Her breath formed white clouds"
10"She kept her hands in"
11"Her heart hammered a frantic"
12"They didn't crunch."
13"She held her breath, the"
14"She focused on the shadowed"
15"They didn't stretch with the"
16"Her throat clicked."
17"She didn't run."
18"She didn't turn to look"
19"She just walked faster."
ratio0.5
36.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences138
matches
0"The taxi driver had looked"
1"The meter ticked over into"
2"She’d slid the card through"
3"She’d pulled her collar up,"
4"The rain hadn’t started yet,"
5"The cab had peeled away"
6"She stood alone on the"
7"The map on her phone"
8"She wasn’t supposed to be"
9"The Golden Empress didn’t deliver"
10"The address on the package"
11"She shifted her weight, the"
12"She shoved the phone back"
13"The signal bar dipped to"
14"She pulled the silver chain"
15"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
16"It was supposed to lead"
17"It felt like a piece"
18"The path twisted left, then"
19"Her breath formed white clouds"
ratio0.848
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences138
matches
0"As soon as she crossed"
1"Before she could touch it,"
ratio0.014
65.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It felt like a piece of cold, dead metal, dull and indifferent to the looming oaks and twisting branches that clawed at the twilight sky."
1"The path had vanished completely, replaced by a carpet of moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple."
2"The stone itself was humming now, a low, resonant thrum that vibrated in her fingertips."
3"It felt like a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders, squeezing the air out of her lungs."
4"It came from everywhere at once, a chorus of whispers that mimicked the sound of Evan’s voice, then her mother's, then Silas’s, then her own."
5"The heavy, humid air that tasted of pine and copper pressing against her skin."
6"And in the sudden, absolute blackness that swallowed the clearing, Rory heard the first human footsteps of the night coming from the path she had just left."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.308
74.2984%