| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "looming" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "chaotic" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "loomed" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.96% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1565 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "“Gold, bright crimson. Know what it looks like. Find it.”" | | 1 | "“Beware the standing stones, Rory. Time doesn't play nice there. Don't step past the oak line.”" | | 2 | "Look." | | 3 | "Look." | | 4 | "Thump. Thump." | | 5 | "behind" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1495 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Kensington | 1 | | November | 1 | | King | 1 | | Henry | 1 | | Mound | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Evan | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Rory | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "King" | | 1 | "Henry" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Kensington" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a piece of cold, dead metal," | | 1 | "moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple" | | 2 | "smelled like a bouquet found in a graveyar" | | 3 | "felt like a physical weight pressing do" |
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| 72.20% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.278 | | wordCount | 1565 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a vibration, but a tug, as if a string tied to her chest were being pulled ta" | | 1 | "Not an earthquake, but a subtle vibration, like a drumbeat emanating from deep unde" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 26.08 | | std | 19.19 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 88 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "being pulled" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "was humming" | | 2 | "was burning" | | 3 | "was radiating" | | 4 | "was pulsing" | | 5 | "was throbbing" | | 6 | "were trembling" | | 7 | "weren't running" | | 8 | "was scorching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The address on the package had been vague—a single name written in an erratic hand on a slip of paper he’d shoved into her hand with a greasy £20 tip." | | 1 | "They didn't stretch with the slant of the light; they stood up." | | 2 | "And the wind didn't just blow; it seemed to whisper, moving through the tree trunks like a breath exhaling into a giant's chest." | | 3 | "The path had vanished completely, replaced by a carpet of moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple." | | 4 | "The scent hit her next—sweet, cloying, and rotting all at once." | | 5 | "It wasn't just a glow anymore; the deep crimson gemstone was pulsing, sending ripples of light through the clearing." | | 6 | "They were shapes—overly elongated limbs, faces with no features, composed entirely of shifting leaves and thorns." | | 7 | "It was tall, unnaturally so, and it held something in its hands—something wrapped in golden paper." | | 8 | "It grinned—a jagged tear in the wrapping." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1502 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03595206391478029 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011318242343541944 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 9.37 | | std | 6.8 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 35.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.2694610778443114 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "So far, it was doing" | | 1 | "Just a pair of large," | | 2 | "Then, the light shifted." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d slid the card through" | | 1 | "She’d pulled her collar up," | | 2 | "She stood alone on the" | | 3 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 4 | "She shifted her weight, the" | | 5 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 6 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 7 | "It was supposed to lead" | | 8 | "It felt like a piece" | | 9 | "Her breath formed white clouds" | | 10 | "She kept her hands in" | | 11 | "Her heart hammered a frantic" | | 12 | "They didn't crunch." | | 13 | "She held her breath, the" | | 14 | "She focused on the shadowed" | | 15 | "They didn't stretch with the" | | 16 | "Her throat clicked." | | 17 | "She didn't run." | | 18 | "She didn't turn to look" | | 19 | "She just walked faster." |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 36.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 117 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi driver had looked" | | 1 | "The meter ticked over into" | | 2 | "She’d slid the card through" | | 3 | "She’d pulled her collar up," | | 4 | "The rain hadn’t started yet," | | 5 | "The cab had peeled away" | | 6 | "She stood alone on the" | | 7 | "The map on her phone" | | 8 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 9 | "The Golden Empress didn’t deliver" | | 10 | "The address on the package" | | 11 | "She shifted her weight, the" | | 12 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 13 | "The signal bar dipped to" | | 14 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 16 | "It was supposed to lead" | | 17 | "It felt like a piece" | | 18 | "The path twisted left, then" | | 19 | "Her breath formed white clouds" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "As soon as she crossed" | | 1 | "Before she could touch it," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 65.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt like a piece of cold, dead metal, dull and indifferent to the looming oaks and twisting branches that clawed at the twilight sky." | | 1 | "The path had vanished completely, replaced by a carpet of moss that seemed to shift color as she looked at it—shifting from deep green to a bruised purple." | | 2 | "The stone itself was humming now, a low, resonant thrum that vibrated in her fingertips." | | 3 | "It felt like a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders, squeezing the air out of her lungs." | | 4 | "It came from everywhere at once, a chorus of whispers that mimicked the sound of Evan’s voice, then her mother's, then Silas’s, then her own." | | 5 | "The heavy, humid air that tasted of pine and copper pressing against her skin." | | 6 | "And in the sudden, absolute blackness that swallowed the clearing, Rory heard the first human footsteps of the night coming from the path she had just left." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |