Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
154
glossingSentenceCount
14
matches
0
"as if resetting its heartbeat to hers"
1
"felt like old teeth grinding in a mouth"
2
"not quite wind, almost a feeling that the world had decided to lean a little closer, listening"
3
"not quite human appeared at the edge of her vision—a figure formed from shadow and breath, nothing more than a suggestion, a silhouette that did not quite align with the trunk it clung to"
4
"not quite align with the trunk it clung to"
5
"quite reach for her but hovered near enough to feel the air change, as if a corner of the grove had exhibited a hesitation before making a decision"
6
"as if listening to the exchange with the same careful attention she used when navigating a crowded street at night"
7
"sounded like wind breaking into a chant"
8
"not quite human—stared back at her, a face that might have belonged to Eva, or to another you could mistake for Eva if you squinted against the night and believed in the possibility of meetings that did not require daylight"
9
"sounded like the rustling of a thousand dr"
10
"felt like it carried a living memory"
11
"something like a room in a house that existe"
12
"not quite human—something like a room in a house that existed in a dream people only barely remembered when they woke"
13
"heartbeat that seemed to last an hour—she wasn’t certain how long it actually lasted here"
14
"something like the soft clink of metal on wo"
15
"seemed almost sacramental and in that quiet, she heard a new sound—other than the whispering leaves or the water, something like the soft clink of metal on wood, as if someone had placed a small, deliberate weight upon a stone"
16
"not-quite empty space that felt both dangerous and protective in the same breath"
"The grove breathed around her, and for a long moment, she stood without moving, listening not with her ears but with something else—an awareness that prickled the skin along her wrists, where the crescent scar rested like a small, stubborn souvenir from a childhood accident."
1
"The flowers still bloomed—as they did year-round—little bursts of colour in the dim, self-contained light of the grove."
2
"Shapes weren’t there, and then they were—just enough to catch the corner of her eye, the kind of thing you blink at and the world has changed shape when you look again."
3
"A line of movement, nothing more; a shift between branches that suggested someone, or something, might be watching from behind bark that wore the marks of time like wrinkles on an old face."
4
"The grove responded to her tension with small perturbations—the way a field of grass shivers when a cow wanders through, careful to leave no obvious path."
5
"The first true flash of something not quite human appeared at the edge of her vision—a figure formed from shadow and breath, nothing more than a suggestion, a silhouette that did not quite align with the trunk it clung to."
6
"It didn’t need eyes to study her; the space between their breaths conveyed more than sight could."
7
"The Head of the Grove—if one could call it that in a way that human language could understand—said nothing, but the question that followed arrived as a palpable weight, pressing on her cheeks and the line of her jaw."
8
"A soft laugh—no more than a sigh, but somehow thick with permission—rippled through the space between her and the shadow."
9
"She did not deny or confirm; she kept walking, letting the energy of the pendant guide her toward the pool’s edge, where the surface held a stillness that wasn’t calm, only paused."
10
"The edge of the water showed a flicker—no, a recognition—an image that did not belong to the surface of the pool but to the truth beyond it."
11
"A face—faint, blurred, not quite human—stared back at her, a face that might have belonged to Eva, or to another you could mistake for Eva if you squinted against the night and believed in the possibility of meetings that did not require daylight."
12
"The grove shifted somewhere behind her—a subtle, almost invisible alteration as if the forest owed a debt to a memory that had not yet been paid in full."
13
"It wasn’t a natural sound; it wasn’t the crack of wood or the branch falling."
14
"The light didn’t burn; it warmed."
15
"The air didn’t feel humid; it felt like it carried a living memory."
16
"She stood in the middle of the chamber and realized she had entered something not quite human—something like a room in a house that existed in a dream people only barely remembered when they woke."
17
"It wore a silhouette that could have been a woman if the world had not shown it to be something else entirely—an outline of limbs and a face that blurred at the edges, as though it existed because someone believed in it more than it existed in the real world."
18
"Her eyes locked on the figure for a long heartbeat that seemed to last an hour—she wasn’t certain how long it actually lasted here."
19
"The door—no, the chamber—seemed to tilt again, and the walls began to drift with a slow motion that felt almost ceremonial."
20
"Then a sudden quiet fell, so complete it seemed almost sacramental, and in that quiet, she heard a new sound—other than the whispering leaves or the water, something like the soft clink of metal on wood, as if someone had placed a small, deliberate weight upon a stone."
21
"The light dimmed but did not vanish; the shadows receded to their natural places, leaving a serene, not-quite-empty space that felt both dangerous and protective in the same breath."
22
"Outside, the night remained as it had always been—dark, quiet, full of unspoken promises."
23
"The pool’s surface returned to its still, glassy calm, reflecting not the sky but the possibility of what lay beyond it—the possibility of Eva’s shadow becoming a map again, a route she could travel if she learned to trust the next moment as carefully as she trusted the last."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
118
technicalSentenceCount
36
matches
0
"The air smelled of something ancient and patient, as if the grass itself had listened to centuries of secrets and decided to keep them for a little longer."
1
"The grove breathed around her, and for a long moment, she stood without moving, listening not with her ears but with something else—an awareness that prickled t…"
2
"The border stones hummed beneath her palms, a muted chorus that felt like old teeth grinding in a mouth full of secrets."
3
"The unknown benefactor who had handed her the Heartstone Pendant wouldn’t have asked for nothing, would never have risked giving her something so personal if th…"
4
"The air around her trembled as if someone had exhaled a breath that wasn’t their own, a wind that carried the scent of rain and something sweeter and older, a s…"
5
"A line of movement, nothing more; a shift between branches that suggested someone, or something, might be watching from behind bark that wore the marks of time …"
6
"The first sound she heard was not a sound you could name: a soft creak, a sigh of air through a hollowed trunk, a rustle that could have been a bird’s wing or a…"
7
"The cadence indicated something ancient and amused, something that had learned to wait for the right moment."
8
"She kept moving, not walking but gliding along the edge of the pool, careful not to disturb the surface and draw attention to herself as one might do in a home …"
9
"The first true flash of something not quite human appeared at the edge of her vision—a figure formed from shadow and breath, nothing more than a suggestion, a s…"
10
"The shadow moved, a slender elongation that didn’t quite reach for her but hovered near enough to feel the air change, as if a corner of the grove had exhibited…"
11
"The figure stepped back a fraction, and the grove’s trees gave a creak, as if listening to the exchange with the same careful attention she used when navigating…"
12
"The leaf-laden air grew heavier, and the glow of the Heartstone brightened further, as if the pendant itself approved of the honesty."
13
"The edge of her vision caught another movement, a second shadow flickering along the bark of a tree as if a second someone had decided to reveal themselves, the…"
14
"The Heartstone Pendant brightened, sending a soft, almost shy glow through the fabric of her coat, casting her features in a pale red halo."
15
"She pressed a finger to her scar, the crescent curving under her skin as if it remembered the old pain better than she did."
16
"The grove shifted somewhere behind her—a subtle, almost invisible alteration as if the forest owed a debt to a memory that had not yet been paid in full."
17
"She stepped forward, letting the grove’s gravity tug at her feet, letting the pendant’s warmth spread through her like a measured flame."
18
"The passage opened into a corridor of roots and light, a tunnel that looked carved by hands older than cities, older than even the memory of a girl who fled fro…"
19
"It spoke, and the sound came through the pendant and the walls, a soft, old language that did not demand translation so much as a surrender to its cadence."
20
"The words pooled in the chamber, gathering in the space around Rory, and she listened without a reaction she could name other than the way her breath slowed, ho…"
21
"The figure stepped a little closer, the light bending around its form in a way that kept its true shape just beyond comprehension."
22
"The pendant’s warmth rose, a steady pulse that reminded her she wasn’t alone in this motion through the unknown."
23
"She opened her mouth to respond, but the chamber answered first, the room answering for her, answering with the cadence of rain on a slate roof and the memory o…"
24
"Her eyes locked on the figure for a long heartbeat that seemed to last an hour—she wasn’t certain how long it actually lasted here."
25
"The chamber exhaled in a whisper of cool air, and the figure’s silhouette softened into a form that had a human touch but belonged to something greater, somethi…"
26
"The Heartstone Pendant’s glow surged with a bright, relentless warmth, and Rory felt a curious strength rise in her chest, as if a fresh thread of resolve had b…"
27
"It wasn’t a face she could read, not with certainty, but its expression carried a certain tenderness, as though it understood that fear was a currency one could…"
28
"Then a sudden quiet fell, so complete it seemed almost sacramental, and in that quiet, she heard a new sound—other than the whispering leaves or the water, some…"
29
"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed once, a deeper, steadier beat that asked for attention, asked for a decision, asked for a promise to keep moving even when the pat…"
30
"The figure inclined its head a fraction, a skeptical, almost affectionate nod that said this was the moment the grove had waited for, the moment Rory had found …"
31
"The light dimmed but did not vanish; the shadows receded to their natural places, leaving a serene, not-quite-empty space that felt both dangerous and protectiv…"
32
"The grove’s boundary stones hummed softly with a sound she could feel in her teeth, a whisper that suggested the world was listening, waiting for the decision s…"
33
"The Heartstone Pendant glowed with a steady warmth, a quiet, stubborn flame against a night that did not want to be dispelled."
34
"She didn’t look back toward the grove as she step by step, careful as a person who has learned that the most important truth hides inside the steps you take rat…"
35
"And then, as the path wound toward the edge of the Richmond Park dark, a shadow in the trees shifted in a way that did not belong to any creature Rory had ever …"