Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJP3FXD848BFVR0YTD983

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.006944
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Dew-slicked ferns brushed against Aurora’s shins, drenching her denim jeans in a creeping, rhythmic chill. She checked the silver chain at her throat for the tenth time in as many minutes. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her collarbone, a thumbnail of solid blood that hummed with a heat far exceeding the humid London night. Usually, Richmond Park offered a sanctuary of shadows and the distant hum of the A3, but the moment she stepped through the gap in the oak standing stones, the city died. Silence rushed into her ears, thick and heavy as mountain silt. The Grove didn't just look different; it felt hungry. "Just a drop-off, Rory. Five minutes in, five minutes out." Her own voice sounded thin, swallowed by the canopy of interlocking branches. She clutched the thermal delivery bag tighter. Steam from the Golden Empress’s ginger beef wafted up, a mundane scent that felt like an insult to the ancient, loamy air of the clearing. Yu-Fei had been insistent. The coordinates led here, to a pocket of land that shouldn't exist on any GPS, for a customer who had paid in heavy, gold sovereigns. The moon hung above the clearing like a cataract-clouded eye. It cast a bleached, unnatural light over the wildflowers that choked the forest floor. Bluebells and foxgloves stood tall and rigid, frozen in a bloom that felt permanent and porcelain. No wind stirred them. No crickets chirped. The Heartstone gave a sudden, sharp throb against her skin. Aurora stopped. Her boots sank into moss that gave way with the consistency of rotting meat. To her left, something crunched. It wasn't the snap of a twig or the rustle of a fox. It was the wet, deliberate sound of a heavy weight shifting on bone. She swung her flashlight beam toward the noise. The light hit the gnarled trunk of a willow. The bark seemed to ripple, a slow-motion heave of gray wood that settled back into place the moment the beam centered on it. Aurora’s pulse hammered against the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "Is someone there? I have the order for Isolde." The silence stretched, elastic and tense. Then, a soft, wet slither echoed from the canopy above. Aurora didn't wait for an answer. She picked up her pace, her breath hitching in her chest. The clearing was supposed to be small, a mere fifty yards from the stones to the center where the stone altar sat, yet the path seemed to elongate with every step. The trees leaned inward, their branches knitting together like skeletal fingers. A flicker of white caught her periphery. She spun, the flashlight beam dancing wildly. A pale shape retreated behind a thicket of thorns. It moved with too many joints, a jerky, puppet-like gait that left no footprints in the mud. "Stop it. Eva told you this place was weird. You knew it was weird." She forced her legs to move. The air grew colder, tasting of iron and old copper. The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just warm; it burned. A dull, rhythmic crimson glow pulsed from beneath her shirt, casting her shadow long and distorted against the white flowers. In the center of the Grove, the stone altar finally appeared. It was a flat slab of granite, stained dark with centuries of rain or something more viscous. On top of it sat a single, empty porcelain tea set, the cups thin enough to see through. Aurora lunged forward, desperate to rid herself of the bag and the obligation. She set the Golden Empress container on the stone. The plastic looked garish and foul against the ancient rock. "Your food is here. I’m leaving now." She turned to bolt, but her foot snagged. Not on a root. Something cold and slick wrapped around her ankle, gripping with the strength of a vice. Aurora gasped, shining her light down. A pale, translucent hand emerged from the earth itself. The skin was the color of a drowned man’s belly, the fingernails jagged and caked in black soil. It didn't pull her down; it simply held her, a tethering anchor. "Wait." The voice didn't come from behind her. It sprouted inside her skull, a sound like dry leaves skittering across a tombstone. Aurora kicked out with her free leg. Her heavy boot connected with something solid, but there was no grunt of pain, only the sound of air escaping a punctured lung. The hand tightened. The silver chain of the Heartstone bit into her neck as the pendant flared a violent, angry red. The shadows at the edge of the clearing began to detach themselves from the trees. They weren't people. They were silhouettes of hunger, elongated limbs and heads that sat at impossible angles. They moved in unison, a slow, crawling tide of darkness that crept over the white wildflowers, turning the bluebells to ash where they touched. "I caught the scent of ginger," the voice whispered, closer now, a foul breath tickling the hair behind her ear. "But that is not what I’m craving, Malphora." Aurora’s skin crawled at the name. She fumbled in her pocket, her fingers closing around the small iron pocketknife she kept for protection. She didn't slice at the hand; she slammed the butt of the knife into the wrist bones. A high-pitched keen pierced the air, a sound that set her teeth on edge. The grip slackened. Aurora ripped her leg free, stumbling back toward the direction of the standing stones. The Grove had rearranged itself. The path was gone. Where there had been a clear line of sight to the park beyond, there was now a wall of brambles that shimmered with a faint, oily light. The trees were closer, their trunks pressing together to form a wooden cage. She swung the flashlight, but the beam was dying. The light flickered, turning orange and weak before plunging her into the crimson-tinted gloom provided by the pendant. In the red strobing light, she saw them. Dozens of faces peered through the gaps in the leaves. They had no eyes, only deep, vertical slits that wept a clear, thick fluid. Their mouths were stitched shut with silver wire, yet they were grinning, the skin stretching and tearing at the corners. They didn't speak; they vibrated. The sound was a low-frequency hum that vibrated in Aurora’s marrow, making her vision blur. One of the creatures stepped into the red light. It was tall, its torso thin as a rake, draped in rags that might have been silk a century ago. It reached out a hand, fingers tapering into points that looked like polished obsidian. "The Heartstone is a loud bell, little bird. Did you think we wouldn't hear you ringing it?" Aurora backed away until her spine hit the altar. The thermal bag was gone. In its place sat the ginger beef, spilled across the stone like a messy sacrifice. The steam rising from it was no longer white, but a thick, sickly violet. "I'm just the delivery girl," she hissed, her voice cracking. "Take the food and let me go." The creature leaned in, its face inches from hers. It had no nose, only two small holes that whistled as it inhaled. It smelled of wet earth and something ancient, something that had never known the sun. "We do not want the salt of the earth. We want the heat in the stone." The creature’s hand moved toward her throat. Aurora squeezed her eyes shut, clutching the pendant. The heat was unbearable now, a searing brand against her chest. She felt the silver chain tighten as the creature’s fingers hooked into the metal. A sudden, deafening crack echoed through the Grove. The ground beneath Aurora’s feet buckled. The stillness of the night broke into a cacophony of screeching birds and the roar of a wind that shouldn't be there. The red light of the Heartstone exploded, blinding and hot, pushing the shadows back into the wood. Aurora didn't wait to see if the creatures were hurt. She threw herself toward the wall of brambles, North, South—she didn't care. She ran until her lungs burned and the scent of ginger beef was replaced by the acrid smell of ozone. The trees thinned. The oppressive weight of the air lifted. She stumbled through a gap in two moss-covered stones and collapsed onto the manicured grass of Richmond Park. The distant sound of a car horn on the A3 was the most beautiful thing she had ever heard. She lay there, gasping for air, her heart trying to kick its way out of her ribs. The Heartstone was cold now, a dull, inert piece of glass against her skin. Aurora sat up and looked back. There was no Grove. Behind her stood only a cluster of ordinary oaks, their leaves rustling in a gentle London breeze. The moon was yellow and distant once more. She looked down at her wrist. The crescent-shaped scar was glowing a faint, bruised purple. And on her delivery jacket, right over her heart, was a single, wet handprint of black, oily mud. She reached into her pocket to find her phone, but her hand brushed against something cold and hard. She pulled it out. It was a porcelain teacup, thin as an eggshell, filled to the brim with a thick, crimson liquid that didn't spill, even as her hands began to shake. The hum started again, low and vibrating, not from the trees, but from the ground directly beneath her feet. Aurora scrambled to her feet, leaving the cup on the grass, and didn't stop running until she saw the lights of a petrol station. She told herself it was just the shadows. She told herself the park was just old. But as she reached the pavement, she glanced back at the dark silhouette of the trees. A single, white shape stood at the edge of the woods, waving a long, many-jointed arm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1667
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1667
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"porcelain"
count3
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count2
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"cacophony"
count1
19
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"chill"
2"sanctuary"
3"silence"
4"porcelain"
5"throb"
6"weight"
7"pulse"
8"echoed"
9"flicker"
10"dancing"
11"pulsed"
12"shimmered"
13"flickered"
14"gloom"
15"vibrated"
16"silk"
17"searing"
18"cacophony"
19"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1654
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1554
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Heartstone6
Pendant2
London2
Richmond2
Park2
Grove5
Golden2
Empress2
North1
South1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Grove"
4"Empress"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Golden"
globalScore0.985
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like an insult to the ancient, loa"
1"looked like polished obsidian"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.605
wordCount1654
matches
0"not from the trees, but from the ground directly beneath her feet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean32.43
std19.13
cv0.59
sampleLengths
096
19
210
373
447
510
655
742
89
916
1059
1140
1214
1346
1446
1532
167
1733
1839
191
2021
2151
2256
2328
2440
2531
2649
2727
288
2964
3043
3117
3243
3317
3437
3516
3640
378
3845
3942
4010
4137
4231
436
4429
4533
4622
4728
4843
4932
91.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences126
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
2"were stitched"
3"was gone"
4"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was dying"
1"were grinning"
2"was glowing"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences135
ratio0.044
matches
0"The Grove didn't just look different; it felt hungry."
1"The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just warm; it burned."
2"It didn't pull her down; it simply held her, a tethering anchor."
3"She didn't slice at the hand; she slammed the butt of the knife into the wrist bones."
4"They didn't speak; they vibrated."
5"She threw herself toward the wall of brambles, North, South—she didn't care."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1566
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, many-jointed arm."
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02362707535121328
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008301404853128991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean12.25
std6.3
cv0.514
sampleLengths
015
116
223
331
411
59
610
712
87
925
104
1125
1210
1314
1416
154
163
1710
182
1914
205
2113
2213
238
249
2523
2610
279
286
2910
306
3111
3231
3311
347
357
369
3717
3814
396
4010
4110
4220
4311
4417
4518
4613
479
4810
497
35.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.26666666666666666
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners36
53.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"Usually, Richmond Park offered a"
1"Then, a soft, wet slither"
ratio0.016
82.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences125
matches
0"She checked the silver chain"
1"Her own voice sounded thin,"
2"She clutched the thermal delivery"
3"It cast a bleached, unnatural"
4"Her boots sank into moss"
5"It wasn't the snap of"
6"It was the wet, deliberate"
7"She swung her flashlight beam"
8"She picked up her pace,"
9"She spun, the flashlight beam"
10"It moved with too many"
11"She forced her legs to"
12"It was a flat slab"
13"She set the Golden Empress"
14"She turned to bolt, but"
15"It didn't pull her down;"
16"It sprouted inside her skull,"
17"Her heavy boot connected with"
18"They weren't people."
19"They were silhouettes of hunger,"
ratio0.344
28.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences125
matches
0"She checked the silver chain"
1"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
2"Silence rushed into her ears,"
3"The Grove didn't just look"
4"Her own voice sounded thin,"
5"She clutched the thermal delivery"
6"Steam from the Golden Empress’s"
7"Yu-Fei had been insistent."
8"The coordinates led here, to"
9"The moon hung above the"
10"It cast a bleached, unnatural"
11"Bluebells and foxgloves stood tall"
12"The Heartstone gave a sudden,"
13"Her boots sank into moss"
14"It wasn't the snap of"
15"It was the wet, deliberate"
16"She swung her flashlight beam"
17"The light hit the gnarled"
18"The bark seemed to ripple,"
19"Aurora’s pulse hammered against the"
ratio0.864
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"To her left, something crunched."
ratio0.008
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"Dew-slicked ferns brushed against Aurora’s shins, drenching her denim jeans in a creeping, rhythmic chill."
1"The Heartstone Pendant rested against her collarbone, a thumbnail of solid blood that hummed with a heat far exceeding the humid London night."
2"Steam from the Golden Empress’s ginger beef wafted up, a mundane scent that felt like an insult to the ancient, loamy air of the clearing."
3"The coordinates led here, to a pocket of land that shouldn't exist on any GPS, for a customer who had paid in heavy, gold sovereigns."
4"It cast a bleached, unnatural light over the wildflowers that choked the forest floor."
5"Bluebells and foxgloves stood tall and rigid, frozen in a bloom that felt permanent and porcelain."
6"The bark seemed to ripple, a slow-motion heave of gray wood that settled back into place the moment the beam centered on it."
7"They moved in unison, a slow, crawling tide of darkness that crept over the white wildflowers, turning the bluebells to ash where they touched."
8"A high-pitched keen pierced the air, a sound that set her teeth on edge."
9"Where there had been a clear line of sight to the park beyond, there was now a wall of brambles that shimmered with a faint, oily light."
10"They had no eyes, only deep, vertical slits that wept a clear, thick fluid."
11"The sound was a low-frequency hum that vibrated in Aurora’s marrow, making her vision blur."
12"It smelled of wet earth and something ancient, something that had never known the sun."
13"The stillness of the night broke into a cacophony of screeching birds and the roar of a wind that shouldn't be there."
14"She lay there, gasping for air, her heart trying to kick its way out of her ribs."
15"Aurora scrambled to her feet, leaving the cup on the grass, and didn't stop running until she saw the lights of a petrol station."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she hissed, her voice cracking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the voice whispered (whisper)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.364
75.1724%