Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJPF3S0YJ5JSPARD5CH7Z

Run Details

Duration:
2m 8s
Cost:
$0.008836
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn's trench coat as she sprinted through the narrow Soho alley. The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—had led her on a winding chase for the past ten minutes. Her breath came in sharp bursts, visible in the cold night air. Thunder rumbled overhead as she rounded a corner, her worn leather watch catching the faint glow of streetlights. The suspect glanced back, panic in his eyes, before ducking into what appeared to be a dead-end alley. Quinn's sharp jaw tightened as she pushed herself faster, the salt-and-pepper of her cropped hair darkening with rain. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Her voice cut through the downpour, barely audible over the deluge. The suspect reached the brick wall at the alley's end and paused, his hands scrambling against the damp surface. Quinn watched, fascinated, as a section of the wall seemed to shimmer and dissolve. He slipped through the opening, and it solidified behind him. She skidded to a halt, rainwater pooling at her feet. Her military bearing kept her upright despite the slick pavement. Quinn approached the wall, running her hands along the bricks. Solid. No seams. No door. Her brown eyes scanned the alley, noting the small symbol etched near the base of the wall—something resembling a serpent coiled around a crescent moon. She'd seen similar markings before, during the investigation that had cost DS Morris his life three years ago. The case with the unexplained elements she still couldn't reconcile. A muffled sound from behind the wall drew her attention. She pressed her ear against the cold brick, listening. Distant voices. Music. The unmistakable hum of activity. Quinn pulled out her phone, but the screen flickered and died—no signal, no power. Typical for this part of Soho, but the timing felt deliberate. She tucked the useless device back into her pocket, her fingers brushing against something cold and metallic. A bone token she'd confiscated earlier in the week. It matched the crescent moon symbol on the wall. The memory returned in a flash—her informant's words about the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that moved with the lunar cycle. About its entry requirements. About its dangers. Rain continued to pour as Quinn weighed her options. Protocol demanded she call for backup, wait for reinforcements. But the suspect had crucial information about the recent string of ritualistic murders across London. Information that could lead her to answers about Morris's death. She pulled out the bone token, examining it in the dim light. The crescent moon symbol pulsed faintly. Without hesitation, Quinn pressed the token against the matching symbol on the wall. A low vibration resonated through the brickwork as the wall shimmered again, this time forming a dark passageway. The air that rushed out carried strange scents—ozone, something metallic, and an underlying sweetness that made her head spin. The distant sounds grew louder, forming a cacophony of haggling voices, otherworldly music, and what might have been chanting. Quinn drew her service weapon, checking the magazine. Fifteen rounds. Probably insufficient for whatever lay beyond, but better than nothing. She hesitated at the threshold, the professional investigator in her warring with the woman who had lost her partner to forces she couldn't explain. The passage remained open for only a moment longer before beginning to seal. A decision had to be made—abandon the chase and return to the safety of familiar territory, or follow the suspect into the unknown depths of the Veil Market. Her fingers tightened around the grip of her pistol. Quinn stepped through the opening just as the wall solidified behind her, plunging her into darkness. The underground space revealed itself gradually, lit by an assortment of glowing crystals, floating orbs, and traditional lanterns that burned with colored flames. The tunnel sloped downward, opening into a vast cavern where stalls and booths formed a chaotic marketplace. Creatures of every description browsed the wares—some humanoid, others barely recognizable as such. Quinn pressed herself against the tunnel wall, her brown eyes scanning the crowd for her suspect. He was nowhere in sight, but her gaze caught on a familiar figure at a nearby stall—Tomás Herrera, the paramedic who'd lost his NHS license under suspicious circumstances. His Saint Christopher medallion glinted in the strange lighting as he haggled with a stall keeper over what appeared to be jars of glowing liquid. Their eyes met across the crowded market. Herrera's warm brown expression shifted from surprise to concern. He excused himself from the stall and moved toward her with deliberate calm. "Detective Quinn. You're a long way from your jurisdiction." "I'm in pursuit. Male suspect, dark hoodie, entered about two minutes ago." Herrera's olive skin paled slightly. "You shouldn't have followed him. Not in here. Not without protection." "He has information about the murders. About Morris." The paramedic's gaze flickered to the scar on his left forearm, a subconscious gesture Quinn had noted before when discussing dangerous topics. "Morris got too close to things he didn't understand. This place... it operates under different rules. Your authority means nothing here." Quinn's military bearing straightened further. "I'm aware of the risks. But I'm not leaving without him." Herrera sighed, running a hand through his short, curly dark hair. "The man you're following—Marco. He deals in information. Dangerous information. If he's connected to your case, it's because someone wanted you to follow him here." The detective's eyes narrowed. "A trap?" "Perhaps. Or a test. The Market has its own way of dealing with outsiders." Herrera gestured toward a tunnel branching off the main cavern. "He went that way. Toward the Bone Exchange. But I'd advise against following him." "Since when do you give advice about police procedure, Herrera?" "Since I learned that your service weapon won't stop what's down there." He stepped closer, lowering his voice. "I know you want answers about Morris. I want them too. But rushing in blind won't bring him back." Quinn's fingers tightened on her pistol grip. The professional part of her mind screamed that this was a bad idea, that she was out of her depth, that protocol existed for a reason. But another part—the part that had been chasing shadows for three years, the part that still woke from nightmares of Morris screaming her name before the line went dead—that part demanded she press forward. "I can't turn back now." Herrera reached into his jacket and pulled out a small vial filled with luminescent blue liquid. "Then at least take this. It won't make you invincible, but it might give you a fighting chance if things go wrong." She eyed the vial suspiciously. "What is it?" "Something the NHS would definitely not approve of." A faint smile touched his lips. "Drink it if you need to see what's really here. Not everyone in the Market appears as they seem." Quinn pocketed the vial. "And you? Why are you helping me?" "Because someone needs to make sure you don't get yourself killed." He adjusted his Saint Christopher medallion. "And because I never got to properly thank you for what you did for my sister." Before Quinn could respond, Herrera melted back into the crowd, leaving her alone at the crossroads. The main cavern bustled with activity, while the darker tunnel where her suspect had disappeared promised answers—and danger. The distant sounds of the Market surrounded her as Quinn made her decision. She checked her weapon one last time, took a deep breath, and ventured into the darkness of the Bone Exchange.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"resonated"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"cacophony"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"etched"
2"flickered"
3"pulsed"
4"resonated"
5"shimmered"
6"cacophony"
7"otherworldly"
8"familiar"
9"depths"
10"chaotic"
11"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount984
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Soho2
Morris3
Veil2
Market3
London1
Tomás1
Herrera7
Saint2
Christopher2
Bone1
Exchange1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.687
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1246
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.95
std17.13
cv0.536
sampleLengths
047
154
214
343
435
553
627
760
829
943
1049
1138
1244
1341
1425
1553
1669
1729
189
1912
2016
218
2222
2321
2416
2536
266
2738
2810
2937
3067
315
3238
338
3433
3511
3633
3734
3833
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences95
ratio0.105
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—had led her on a winding chase for the past ten minutes."
1"Her brown eyes scanned the alley, noting the small symbol etched near the base of the wall—something resembling a serpent coiled around a crescent moon."
2"Quinn pulled out her phone, but the screen flickered and died—no signal, no power."
3"The memory returned in a flash—her informant's words about the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that moved with the lunar cycle."
4"The air that rushed out carried strange scents—ozone, something metallic, and an underlying sweetness that made her head spin."
5"A decision had to be made—abandon the chase and return to the safety of familiar territory, or follow the suspect into the unknown depths of the Veil Market."
6"Creatures of every description browsed the wares—some humanoid, others barely recognizable as such."
7"He was nowhere in sight, but her gaze caught on a familiar figure at a nearby stall—Tomás Herrera, the paramedic who'd lost his NHS license under suspicious circumstances."
8"But another part—the part that had been chasing shadows for three years, the part that still woke from nightmares of Morris screaming her name before the line went dead—that part demanded she press forward."
9"The main cavern bustled with activity, while the darker tunnel where her suspect had disappeared promised answers—and danger."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount999
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"short, curly dark hair."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02002002002002002
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01001001001001001
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.12
std7.09
cv0.541
sampleLengths
016
119
212
318
418
518
614
719
814
910
1010
1110
1210
131
142
152
1625
1718
1810
1910
209
212
221
235
2414
2511
2617
279
289
2922
304
313
329
339
3415
3510
3612
376
3813
3918
4019
4119
428
432
4410
4524
4613
4728
489
4916
61.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Probably insufficient for whatever lay"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her breath came in sharp"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"He slipped through the opening,"
3"She skidded to a halt,"
4"Her military bearing kept her"
5"Her brown eyes scanned the"
6"She'd seen similar markings before,"
7"She pressed her ear against"
8"She tucked the useless device"
9"It matched the crescent moon"
10"She pulled out the bone"
11"She hesitated at the threshold,"
12"Her fingers tightened around the"
13"He was nowhere in sight,"
14"His Saint Christopher medallion glinted"
15"Their eyes met across the"
16"He excused himself from the"
17"He stepped closer, lowering his"
18"She eyed the vial suspiciously."
19"He adjusted his Saint Christopher"
ratio0.292
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"The suspect—a wiry man in"
2"Her breath came in sharp"
3"Thunder rumbled overhead as she"
4"The suspect glanced back, panic"
5"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened as"
6"Her voice cut through the"
7"The suspect reached the brick"
8"Quinn watched, fascinated, as a"
9"He slipped through the opening,"
10"She skidded to a halt,"
11"Her military bearing kept her"
12"Quinn approached the wall, running"
13"Her brown eyes scanned the"
14"She'd seen similar markings before,"
15"The case with the unexplained"
16"A muffled sound from behind"
17"She pressed her ear against"
18"The unmistakable hum of activity."
19"Quinn pulled out her phone,"
ratio0.889
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Before Quinn could respond, Herrera"
ratio0.014
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She'd seen similar markings before, during the investigation that had cost DS Morris his life three years ago."
1"The memory returned in a flash—her informant's words about the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that moved with the lunar cycle."
2"The air that rushed out carried strange scents—ozone, something metallic, and an underlying sweetness that made her head spin."
3"She hesitated at the threshold, the professional investigator in her warring with the woman who had lost her partner to forces she couldn't explain."
4"The underground space revealed itself gradually, lit by an assortment of glowing crystals, floating orbs, and traditional lanterns that burned with colored flam…"
5"But another part—the part that had been chasing shadows for three years, the part that still woke from nightmares of Morris screaming her name before the line w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7598%