| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The word tasted like [like]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 75 | | tagDensity | 0.307 | | leniency | 0.613 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 86.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 64.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1124 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 613 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 4.08 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 7 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | October | 1 | | Aurora | 24 | | Eva | 25 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Prague | 1 | | Dutch | 1 | | Used | 1 | | Despite | 1 | | Tears | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Tears" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 15.19 | | std | 11.67 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The friendship bracelet they'd made at fifteen—gone." | | 1 | "He took in the scene with practiced ease—Aurora's rigid posture, Eva's designer everything, the crackling tension between them." | | 2 | "Eva's perfume—something expensive and unfamiliar—competed with decades of cigarette smoke embedded in the walls." | | 3 | "The bar's noise washed over them—laughter, arguments, the clink of glass on glass." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 622 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "outside painted strange shadows" |
| | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.022508038585209004 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008038585209003215 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 8.78 | | std | 5.85 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 79.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.5078125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the tap, watching" | | 1 | "They stared across the bar's" | | 2 | "Her hands stayed steady." | | 3 | "He took in the scene" | | 4 | "he said quietly" | | 5 | "She untied her apron" | | 6 | "They settled into cracked leather" | | 7 | "They sat in silence." |
| | ratio | 0.11 | |
| 35.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "Aurora wiped down the mahogany" | | 2 | "The green neon from outside" | | 3 | "A patron slid his empty" | | 4 | "She pulled the tap, watching" | | 5 | "The door chimed." | | 6 | "Aurora glanced up, then froze." | | 7 | "The woman in the doorway" | | 8 | "Designer heels clicked against worn" | | 9 | "The name escaped before Aurora" | | 10 | "Eva's perfect composure cracked." | | 11 | "They stared across the bar's" | | 12 | "Aurora became acutely aware of" | | 13 | "Eva's voice carried forced brightness" | | 14 | "Aurora finished pouring the bitter," | | 15 | "Her hands stayed steady." | | 16 | "Eva approached the bar, each" | | 17 | "A hardness in her jaw" | | 18 | "The friendship bracelet they'd made" | | 19 | "Eva perched on a barstool," |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A hardness in her jaw that hadn't existed during their Cardiff days." |
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| 81.52% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora gestured, her bag, the gold watch glinting on her wrist" | | 1 | "Eva studied, those green eyes seeing too much" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Tears threatened (tear)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 75 | | tagDensity | 0.027 | | leniency | 0.053 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.027 | |