Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJSHEZE9XS7BBTXW9KHRE

Run Details

Duration:
57.3s
Cost:
$0.052608
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Soho rain tasted of grit and diesel, a stark difference from the clean, cold bite of a storm rolling off the Bristol Channel. It fell in sheets, drumming against the neon green sign that buzzed with an irritable electric hum above the door. Aurora Carter shoved her shoulder against the wood, the bell overhead announcing her arrival with a brassy clatter that barely cut through the low fog of jazz and cigarette smoke. She stripped off her sodden helmet, her black hair plastered to her neck. Water dripped from the hem of her oversized jacket, pooling on the floorboards that Silas insisted on waxing despite the parade of wet boots that assaulted them nightly. Behind the mahogany counter, Silas Blackwood polished a highball glass with the rhythmic precision of a machine. He didn’t look up. The faint hitch in his step as he moved to the optics rail was the only betrayal of the damp weather gnawing at his bad knee. "Rough night on the road?" Silas asked, his voice a gravel rumble that matched the bass in the speakers. "Traffic on Dean Street is a nightmare. Some tourist got clipped by a black cab." Rory tossed the helmet onto a stool and shook her hair out like a wet dog. "Yu-Fei wants the thermal bag back by ten, but I told him I’m taking five." "Take ten. You look like you’ve been dragged through the Thames." Rory snorted, wiping rain from her eyes. She turned to scan the room, looking for an empty booth to collapse into. The Raven’s Nest was mostly empty, a sanctuary for the lost and the lurking, walls lined with monochrome photos of places that didn't exist anymore. Her gaze swept past the regular melancholy drinkers and snagged on a figure in the corner booth. The woman sat with a posture that screamed 'billable hours.' Her trench coat was dry, beige, and draped impeccably over the cracked leather of the seat. She nursed a glass of white wine as if she were dissecting it for evidence. Rory froze. The air in her lungs turned to cement. The woman looked up. Recognition hit like a physical blow, widening eyes that had once mirrored Rory’s own back in lecture halls and coffee shops. "Laila?" The name was a ghost. A dead thing Rory had buried under three years of silence and a Greater London postcode. Rory didn’t move. Her feet seemed nailed to the floorboards. "It’s Rory now." Tessa Williams stood up. She looked exactly the same and entirely different. The messy bun from university was gone, replaced by a sharp, architectural bob. The charity shop sweaters had evolved into tailored silk. She looked like the future Rory was supposed to have. "Rory," Tessa tested the word, her mouth curling around it like it was something sour. "My god. We thought... honestly, we didn't know what to think." "I see the bar exam went well." Rory walked over, the instinct to flee warring with the sudden, crushing weight of gravity. She gestured to the silk blouse. "You look expensive." "I made associate at Davies & Moore." Tessa remained standing, a barrier of professional success between them. "I’m in town for a deposition. I just... I saw the sign. Brendan always talked about a place like this. I didn't think I’d find you in it." Rory flinched at the mention of her father. She hooked a thumb toward the bar. "I live upstairs. Work delivery. Help out here." Tessa’s gaze dropped to the helmet on the stool, then back to Rory’s wet jacket and the fraying seams of her jeans. The assessment was clinical. It wasn't pity: it was confusion. "You were top of the class, Laila. You were the only one who understood constitutional law without needing the cheat sheets." Tessa sat down slowly, gesturing to the empty seat opposite her. "Sit down. Please. Unless you have to rush back to... Yu-Fei?" Rory took the seat. The leather creaked under her. She kept her hands under the table, thumb rubbing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous tic she hadn't shaken since childhood. "I didn't vanish, Tess. I left." "You left a note on the kitchen counter and blocked our numbers." Tessa took a sip of wine, her knuckles white against the stem. "Eva cried for a month. Brendan called me every week for a year asking if I’d heard from you." "I couldn't stay." "Because of Evan?" The name hung between them, heavier than the smoke in the air. "Because of all of it," Rory said, her voice dropping. "Because I was suffocating. The degree, the firm, the house in the suburbs. It was all laid out like a corpse on a slab. I didn't want to be a barrister, Tess. I wanted to breathe." Tessa laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "So you’re breathing diesel fumes in Soho? This is the grand escape?" "It’s mine," Rory snapped. The blue of her eyes hardened. "I pay my rent. I answer to no one. I don't have to defend corporate landlords evicting pensioners." "No, you just deliver their kung pao chicken." The insult landed effortlessly. Silas appeared at the table, a shadow falling over the tense tableau. He placed a tumbler of whiskey in front of Rory—no ice, top shelf—and looked at Tessa with eyes that had seen governments fall. "Another round?" Silas asked, his tone devoid of hospitality. Tessa looked at the bartender, then at Rory. She sensed the wall closing ranks. "No. I’m fine." Silas limped away, the drag of his leg a rhythmic scuff against the floor. Rory wrapped her hands around the glass, absorbing the cold comfort of the crystal. "Look," Tessa softened, leaning forward. The aggression bled out, leaving only the ache of a friendship amputated without anesthesia. "I miss you. We all do. It’s just... seeing you like this. It’s a shock. You had so much potential." "I still have potential," Rory said, watching the amber liquid in her glass. "It just looks different than you thought it would." "Does it?" Tessa reached across the table. Her hand, manicured and soft, covered Rory’s rough, rain-chapped one. She pulled Rory’s hand out from under the table. The sleeve of Rory’s jacket rode up. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the dim light. Tessa’s thumb brushed over it, a memory of a fall from a tree when they were ten, when Laila Carter had been fearless and loud. "You look tired, Laila." "I’m working." "You’re hiding." Tessa withdrew her hand. She opened her purse, a sleek leather clutch that probably cost more than Rory’s motorbike, and pulled out a business card. She slid it across the sticky table. "I’m at the hotel on Wardour Street until Thursday. If you want to talk. Really talk. Not this defensive crouch you’re doing." Rory looked at the card. *Tessa Williams, Senior Associate.* The font was serif, serious, permanent. "I’m not coming back to Cardiff, Tess." "I’m not asking you to paint the guest room." Tessa stood up, gathering her coat. She looked around the bar again, taking in the gloom, the damp, the solitude. "But you can't stay here forever. This place... it feels like a waiting room." "Maybe I’m waiting for something." "Or maybe you’re just wasting time." Tessa buttoned her coat, shielding herself against the world Rory lived in. "It was good to see you. Even if it was just Rory." She didn't wait for a goodbye. The door opened and closed, admitting a gust of wind and the rumble of a passing bus. The bell clattered, then fell silent. Rory stared at the business card. The white cardstock was already absorbing a ring of moisture from the table, the sharp edges blurring. Silas returned, carrying a rag. He wiped the table where Tessa had been, erasing the circle of condensation left by her wine glass. He didn't touch the card. "Old friend?" he asked, not looking at her. "Something like that." "She thinks you’re broken." Rory took a drink. The whiskey burned, a clean, honest fire that settled in her chest. "She thinks I’m lost." Silas stopped wiping. He leaned his weight on his good leg, looking at the door where the rain continued to lash against the glass. "People who walk straight lines always think the ones taking the scenic route are lost, Rory. Doesn't mean they're right." Rory picked up the card. She ran her thumb over the raised lettering, feeling the texture of a life she could have had. A life of security, praise, and slowly dying of boredom in a wig and gown. She looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar, then at the photos on the wall—spies, traitors, heroes, people who lived in the shadows because the light was too blinding. She crumpled the card in her fist. "I need to get the thermal bag back to Yu-Fei," she said, her voice steady. "Finish your drink first," Silas said, moving back to his station. "The rain isn't letting up anytime soon." Rory smoothed the crumpled paper on the table, looked at it one last time, and swept it into the ashtray. She took a sip, the warmth spreading through her limbs, watching the green neon sign flicker against the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"silk"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"potential"
count2
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"electric"
2"rhythmic"
3"sanctuary"
4"silence"
5"silk"
6"weight"
7"crystal"
8"potential"
9"gloom"
10"warmth"
11"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1545
ratio0.003
matches
0"Tessa Williams, Senior Associate."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1078
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Bristol1
Channel1
Carter2
Silas9
Blackwood1
Rory27
Raven1
Nest1
Greater1
London1
Williams2
Tessa17
Laila1
Senior1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Raven"
5"Williams"
6"Tessa"
7"Laila"
places
0"Bristol"
1"London"
globalScore0.248
windowScore0.167
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed nailed to the floorboards"
1"looked like the future Rory was supposed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1545
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean25.75
std17.09
cv0.664
sampleLengths
073
141
247
319
446
511
646
717
841
910
1025
111
1221
1313
1444
1526
1631
1745
1823
1932
2043
2133
226
2343
243
253
2612
2746
2818
2928
308
3139
329
3317
3428
3539
3622
3726
3842
394
402
4156
4215
437
4443
455
4630
4729
4823
4928
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"was gone"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"were dissecting"
97.86% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences127
ratio0.016
matches
0"He placed a tumbler of whiskey in front of Rory—no ice, top shelf—and looked at Tessa with eyes that had seen governments fall."
1"She looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar, then at the photos on the wall—spies, traitors, heroes, people who lived in the shadows because the light was too blinding."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount576
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03993055555555555
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013888888888888888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean12.17
std7.88
cv0.648
sampleLengths
023
120
230
313
428
517
64
726
819
931
1015
1111
127
1314
1425
1517
1626
1715
182
198
204
2121
221
235
2416
253
267
273
284
298
3013
319
3210
3315
3411
3522
366
373
3817
3928
408
417
428
4322
444
456
4632
4711
484
495
41.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.29133858267716534
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences93
matches
0"It fell in sheets, drumming"
1"She stripped off her sodden"
2"He didn’t look up."
3"She turned to scan the"
4"Her gaze swept past the"
5"She nursed a glass of"
6"Her feet seemed nailed to"
7"She looked exactly the same"
8"She looked like the future"
9"She gestured to the silk"
10"She hooked a thumb toward"
11"It wasn't pity: it was"
12"She kept her hands under"
13"He placed a tumbler of"
14"She sensed the wall closing"
15"Her hand, manicured and soft,"
16"She pulled Rory’s hand out"
17"She opened her purse, a"
18"She slid it across the"
19"She looked around the bar"
ratio0.323
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences93
matches
0"Soho rain tasted of grit"
1"It fell in sheets, drumming"
2"Aurora Carter shoved her shoulder"
3"She stripped off her sodden"
4"Water dripped from the hem"
5"He didn’t look up."
6"The faint hitch in his"
7"Silas asked, his voice a"
8"Rory tossed the helmet onto"
9"Rory snorted, wiping rain from"
10"She turned to scan the"
11"The Raven’s Nest was mostly"
12"Her gaze swept past the"
13"The woman sat with a"
14"She nursed a glass of"
15"The air in her lungs"
16"The woman looked up."
17"Recognition hit like a physical"
18"The name was a ghost."
19"A dead thing Rory had"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It fell in sheets, drumming against the neon green sign that buzzed with an irritable electric hum above the door."
1"Water dripped from the hem of her oversized jacket, pooling on the floorboards that Silas insisted on waxing despite the parade of wet boots that assaulted them…"
2"The Raven’s Nest was mostly empty, a sanctuary for the lost and the lurking, walls lined with monochrome photos of places that didn't exist anymore."
3"Recognition hit like a physical blow, widening eyes that had once mirrored Rory’s own back in lecture halls and coffee shops."
4"She took a sip, the warmth spreading through her limbs, watching the green neon sign flicker against the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Tessa remained, a barrier of professional success between them"
1"Tessa took, her knuckles white against the stem"
2"Rory said, her voice dropping"
3"Silas asked, his tone devoid of hospitality"
4"he asked, not looking at her"
5"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.157
leniency0.314
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.039
77.2110%