Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJV0FEXHXTE59DSGRVP51

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Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.001448
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green buzz of the Raven’s Nest sign pulsed rhythmically against the brick wall, the only heartbeat in a city that usually felt like a thunderstorm. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of stale smoke, old wood, and the sharp tang of gin. Aurora Carter swiped a damp cloth over the grain of the oak bar, her movements mechanical and precise. Her knuckles brushed against a glass left behind by a careless customer, sending a jolt of irritation through her. She was thirty minutes past her shift at the Golden Empress, but the stacks of delivery slips in her apron pocket demanded attention. The bags of takeout food sat stacked on the floor by the back door, smell of ginger and chilies bleeding into the sticky bar atmosphere. Footsteps echoed on the worn floorboards. Heavy. Deliberate. Aurora paused, her hand hovering over a stain that refused to budge. She didn't turn around. "The usual?" The voice was gravel vibrating over wire, deep and tired. She recognized the cadence. The way the consonants pulled in the back of the throat, the distinct lack of enthusiasm that defined Silas Blackwood. Aurora straightened her spine, dropping the rag into the bucket of soapy water with a splash. She turned, bracing herself. Silas stood in the doorway, the harsh streetlight cutting through his silhouette before spilling him into the dim safety of the bar. The years hadn't just accumulated on him; they had settled into the lines of his face, etching deep maps into a forehead that had once been smooth. His auburn hair was now a stormy mix of silver and grey, trimmed neatly to match his beard. The left leg of his trousers hung slightly lower than the right, the evidence of a knee that had seen better decades. He wore his usual suit, the fabric worn thin at the elbows, but he carried himself with the rigid spine of a man who hadn’t allowed himself to slump in decades. "You're working late," Silas said, limping toward the farthest stool. He signaled to the empty space beside him. "I'm never not late," Aurora replied, picking up the bottle of malt whiskey she kept behind the bar for special guests. "Yu-Fei’s orders were piled up. One of the drivers bailed." She poured two fingers into a crystal tumbler, sliding it across the bar. Silas reached out, his calloused fingers closing around the glass with a practiced ease. He didn't drink it. He just stared at the amber liquid swirling within. "I haven't seen you in what? Four years?" Silas asked, his eyes fixed on the glass. They were a dull hazel now, missing the sharpness of his youth. "About that." Aurora pulled a clean glass for herself, filling it with ginger ale from the tap. She leaned against the counter, studying him. He looked smaller in person, or perhaps it was just the illusion of age tricking her eyes. He used to tower over her, a looming figure of authority who always smelled of sandalwood and rain. Now, he looked like a man carrying a satchel full of rocks. "You look good, Rory," Silas said, finally tipping the glass back. The burn in his throat seemed to wake him up. "I'm a delivery girl, Silas. Not exactly Miss Universe." She twisted the cap off her ginger ale, the plastic cracking with a sharp snap. "I work hard. The scars aren't for show." Silas winced. He reached for the glass again, his movement slowing. "I know about the scars." "I saw you looking at my wrist." "It's a crescent," Silas murmured, not looking at her but at the map of the world taped to the wall behind her. "I remember the day. You were ten. Fell off the swing set." Aurora let out a short, dry laugh. "You were there." "I was visiting Eva." Aurora closed her eyes for a second, the memory slipping back into the black void where it belonged. Eva had been the glue that held their chaotic London lives together. Eva, who had brought Silas into their circle back in Cardiff before the exodus to the capital. Eva, who was likely the only reason Silas knew about the accident at all. "You looked different when I came back," Silas said, changing the subject. "I had to." Aurora opened her eyes, setting her glass down. "Evan didn't like people looking at me." Silas stiffened. The muscle in his jaw worked, a tick that hadn't been there before. The shadows in his eyes darkened. "I didn't know." "The emails stopped after I moved out," Aurora said, her voice flat. "I didn't have your number. I didn't know where you were. I just needed to be gone." Silas set his glass down, the liquid shaking. He picked up the silver signet ring on his right hand, turning it over and over between his fingers. "I was in Prague." "The spy stuff. Eva told me." "Prague was a mess." He rubbed his thumb over the engraving on the ring—a cipher Aurora hadn't learned to read yet. "I was in and out of hospitals, Rory. I didn't have the bandwidth to be a guardian for a runaway friend. I thought you had grown up. I thought Eva was handling the logistics." "That was the mistake, wasn't it? Assuming Eva could handle everything." Silas exhaled a long, rattling breath. He turned fully to face her, the dim bar light catching the grey in his beard. He looked older than sixty. He looked like a man who had sold his soul for survival, piece by piece, trade by trade. "I retired because of Prague," Silas confessed. He tapped the spot above his knee, right where the phantom ache usually lived. "My team didn't make it out. The Agency washed their memories, and the press wrote obituaries. It broke me. I came here to dry out, to disappear. I didn't mean to leave you behind." Aurora looked at her hands. The delivery bag emblazoned with the Golden Empress logo sat on the floor. She was the one who had changed, not him. He was a statue of guilt; she was a hurricane of survival. She had learned to survive by shutting down the parts of herself that felt, by leaving the abusive boyfriend who told her she was a burden, by learning how to navigate the city alone. She had become cool-headed. She had become the "Laila" and the "Malphora" her friends used to joke about when they went out. She was no longer the quiet girl with the crescent-shaped scar; she was a piece of debris floating in a river she didn't understand. "You didn't leave me, Silas. You left me with nothing." "I never thought—I didn't realize how bad it was." "You never called. You never asked." Aurora picked up the glass, the condensation slick against her palm. "I had to file a restraining order. I had to change my name. I didn't know who to turn to. I came to you and you were gone." Silas shook his head, a look of profound sorrow washing over his face. It wasn't pity; it was regret so heavy it seemed to pull at the floorboards of the bar. He stood up, his movement stiff, and reached across the counter. He covered her hand with his large, wrinkled fingers. "I'm sorry." His voice was barely a whisper. Aurora looked at his hand, then up at his hazel eyes. She saw the apology in the tiny crinkles by his nose, in the way he leaned in slightly, seeking forgiveness. She thought about the anger that had fueled her for three years, the fuel that had kept her warm during London winters and scared away the darkness in her apartment. She realized now that the anger had been her shield against the fact that she was alone. She squeezed his hand back. It was warm. It was solid. "Yu-Fei needs that food taken out," Aurora said softly, pulling away. She looked down at the bags, back to the reality of her night. "Are you staying?" "I'm not going anywhere." Aurora turned away to grab the bags of takeout. She pushed through the swing doors into the alley, the cool night air hitting her face, stark and clean compared to the heavy smoke of the bar. She lifted the canvas bags, feeling the weight settle into her shoulders. She looked back at the light spilling from the open door. Silas hadn't moved. He was standing exactly where he was, watching the door like a sentinel guarding a tomb. It was the first time she realized that while she had been surviving the underground, he had been hiding in plain sight, waiting for someone to walk back into the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.757
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.054
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1467
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1467
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"mechanical"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"etching"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"calloused fingers"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"looming"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"mechanical"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"etching"
5"crystal"
6"calloused fingers"
7"practiced ease"
8"looming"
9"chaotic"
10"navigate"
11"profound"
12"whisper"
13"stark"
14"weight"
15"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1461
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1165
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas17
Blackwood1
Aurora15
London2
Cardiff1
Eva3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.77
windowScore0.333
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a thunderstorm"
1"looked like a man carrying a satchel full"
2"looked like a man who had sold his soul f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.684
wordCount1461
matches
0"not looking at her but at the map of the world taped to the wall behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean33.2
std32.86
cv0.99
sampleLengths
0131
18
216
32
410
524
6140
718
831
940
1028
112
1269
1321
1432
1516
167
1734
1810
194
2061
2112
2218
2324
2429
2531
266
2755
2811
2945
3055
31119
3210
339
3445
3551
362
376
3878
3911
4027
414
4248
4361
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was standing was, watching"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"The years hadn't just accumulated on him; they had settled into the lines of his face, etching deep maps into a forehead that had once been smooth."
1"\"Prague was a mess.\" He rubbed his thumb over the engraving on the ring—a cipher Aurora hadn't learned to read yet."
2"He was a statue of guilt; she was a hurricane of survival."
3"She was no longer the quiet girl with the crescent-shaped scar; she was a piece of debris floating in a river she didn't understand."
4"It wasn't pity; it was regret so heavy it seemed to pull at the floorboards of the bar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1168
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.030821917808219176
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011986301369863013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean12.82
std8.11
cv0.633
sampleLengths
027
119
218
319
423
525
66
71
81
912
104
112
1210
134
1420
1516
164
1722
1827
1918
2022
2131
2210
238
2421
2510
2613
2714
284
299
3016
3112
322
3315
347
3517
3618
3712
3811
3910
4024
418
422
439
445
457
4622
4712
487
493
32.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.21052631578947367
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her knuckles brushed against a"
1"She was thirty minutes past"
2"She didn't turn around."
3"She recognized the cadence."
4"She turned, bracing herself."
5"His auburn hair was now"
6"He wore his usual suit,"
7"He signaled to the empty"
8"She poured two fingers into"
9"He didn't drink it."
10"He just stared at the"
11"They were a dull hazel"
12"She leaned against the counter,"
13"He looked smaller in person,"
14"He used to tower over"
15"She twisted the cap off"
16"He reached for the glass"
17"He picked up the silver"
18"He rubbed his thumb over"
19"He turned fully to face"
ratio0.523
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences86
matches
0"The neon green buzz of"
1"Aurora Carter swiped a damp"
2"Her knuckles brushed against a"
3"She was thirty minutes past"
4"The bags of takeout food"
5"Footsteps echoed on the worn"
6"Aurora paused, her hand hovering"
7"She didn't turn around."
8"The voice was gravel vibrating"
9"She recognized the cadence."
10"The way the consonants pulled"
11"Aurora straightened her spine, dropping"
12"She turned, bracing herself."
13"Silas stood in the doorway,"
14"The years hadn't just accumulated"
15"His auburn hair was now"
16"The left leg of his"
17"He wore his usual suit,"
18"Silas said, limping toward the"
19"He signaled to the empty"
ratio0.977
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Now, he looked like a"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He looked like a man who had sold his soul for survival, piece by piece, trade by trade."
1"She had learned to survive by shutting down the parts of herself that felt, by leaving the abusive boyfriend who told her she was a burden, by learning how to n…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She twisted, the plastic cracking with a sharp snap"
1"Aurora said, her voice flat"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"Silas confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.108
76.0921%