Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYJWB5J26HFGSANDD0VBQQ

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Duration:
57.1s
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$0.008775
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SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled through the rain-speckled window, casting the bar in a sickly glow that made everyone look slightly unwell. Aurora pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her jacket, her delivery shift finally done. The warmth hit her face like a wall. She nodded at Silas behind the bar—he raised a glass in acknowledgment, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light—and made her way toward the corner booth she'd claimed as her own over the past three years. Someone sat in it. She stopped mid-stride. The woman occupied the seat with the particular posture of someone waiting, though her attention was fixed on the tabletop, on the untouched glass of wine before her. Dark hair, cut short now, almost severe. A blazer that probably cost more than a month's rent at Aurora's flat. Something familiar in the angle of those shoulders, the way she held her cigarette—no, she wasn't smoking, just turning the unlit thing between her fingers. The woman looked up. Aurora's breath caught. "Rory." That voice. Lower than she remembered, rougher at the edges, but unmistakably hers. "Katherine." They stared at each other across the bar. Three years. Three years since Cardiff, since late nights in the university library, since Katherine had held her hair back at a party and told her she was making a mistake with Evan, since everything fell apart and Aurora ran and Katherine— Katherine had stayed. Finished her degree. Got the training contract at that firm in Bristol she'd always talked about. The one her father pulled strings for. "I heard you were in London." Katherine gestured at the seat opposite her. "Sit." Aurora remained standing. "How did you find me?" "Does it matter?" It didn't, really. Cardiff was a small city, and gossip travelled. Evan's crowd still talked about the girl who left. The girl who ran. Maybe someone had mentioned seeing her here, or maybe Katherine had simply combed London until she found what she was looking for. She'd always been thorough. Aurora sat. Up close, the changes were more apparent. The sharp lines of Katherine's face had softened, or perhaps the makeup was simply better applied. Her eyes—still that penetrating grey-green—carried shadows that no amount of concealer could hide. The blazer hung slightly loose on her frame. She'd always been thin, but this was different. This was deliberate. "You look good," Katherine said. "Liar." A smile flickered across Katherine's face. "You always could tell." The unlit cigarette kept turning between her fingers. Aurora noticed then that her nails were bitten down to the quick. The Katherine she remembered had manicures every fortnight without fail. "You're not smoking." "Quit. Eight months ago." Katherine set the cigarette on the table. "Old habits." "You kept the cigarette." "I kept the cigarette." Silas appeared at their booth, his limp barely audible over the murmur of the other patrons. He set down a pint of lager in front of Aurora without being asked. "Friend of yours?" "University," Aurora said. Silas studied Katherine for a moment—his hazel eyes sharp despite the easy smile he wore—and gave a small nod. "Another wine?" Katherine pushed her untouched glass away. "Whisky. Whatever you have that's decent." "Coming up." He left them in the weighted silence. Aurora watched Katherine watch the bar—the old maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a London that no longer existed, the faded booth seats that had seen better decades. "This place suits you." "Does it?" "Grungy. Out of the way. Full of people who don't ask questions." Katherine's mouth twisted. "Very you." "What's that supposed to mean?" "Nothing." She smoothed her blazer. "Just an observation." The whisky arrived. Katherine wrapped both hands around the glass, and Aurora caught sight of something on her left hand—no ring, but the pale band of skin where one had been. Recently removed. The skin was still irritated, red and raw. "You got married." Katherine's fingers tightened around the glass. "Briefly." "How briefly?" "Fourteen months. Separated at eleven. Divorced final last week." She downed half the whisky in one swallow. "His name was Oliver. He worked in finance. He was—" A pause. "He was fine." "Fine." "Boring. Safe. Exactly what I was supposed to want." Katherine laughed, but there was no humour in it. "My mother adored him." "And you?" "I adored the idea of him. The life he represented. The stability, the house in Clifton, the dinner parties where everyone discussed their portfolios and their holidays and their children's prospects." She finished the whisky. "I thought if I just... kept moving forward on the path, everything else would fall into place. The career, the husband, the house. All the things we're supposed to want." Aurora thought of her own mother, of Jennifer Carter née Ellis, who had never pushed but had always hoped. Who had watched her daughter walk away from Pre-Law and never said a word of disappointment, though it must have been there, buried somewhere beneath the acceptance. "And instead?" "Instead I realised I'd built an entire life out of things I didn't actually want." Katherine signalled for another drink. "Turns out that's the quickest way to end up exactly where you started. Only older. Only more tired." "And you came here because...?" "Because I needed to see someone who walked away." Katherine's gaze was steady now. "You left, Rory. You left everything—your degree, your family, your relationship. You just... left. You didn't explain yourself, didn't justify it, didn't wait for permission. You just went." "It wasn't that simple." "Nothing ever is." The second whisky arrived, and Katherine cupped it between her palms. "But you did it. You're here. You're—" She looked around the bar again. "You're something. Someone. I can't quite figure out what, but you're your own person. Not just a collection of other people's expectations." Aurora thought about her flat above the bar, cramped and perpetually damp. Her delivery shifts in all weathers. The freedom she'd found in anonymity, in being nobody in particular in a city of millions. The safety of Silas's network, his quiet protection, the way he never asked about the scars she'd carried with her from Cardiff—visible and invisible both. "It's not a glamorous life," she said finally. "Glamour was never the point." "What was the point, then?" Katherine was quiet for a long moment. Around them, the bar hummed with conversation, with the clink of glasses and the low rumble of laughter. Someone fed coins into the ancient jukebox in the corner. Johnny Cash started singing about walking lines. "I don't know anymore," Katherine admitted. "I thought I did. I thought the point was building something, creating something, becoming someone. But I looked up three months ago and realised I had no idea who that someone was. Just a collection of CV points and social obligations." She met Aurora's eyes. "I wanted to know if you figured it out. If leaving gave you the answer." "It gave me quiet." "That's not an answer." "It's enough of one." Katherine studied her face. Searching for something—truth, perhaps, or reassurance, or maybe just a version of the past she could hold onto. "Evan came back to Cardiff," she said quietly. "After you left. He told everyone you'd had some kind of breakdown. That he'd tried to help you, but you were too far gone." Aurora's hand went unconsciously to her left wrist, to the crescent scar hidden beneath her sleeve. "I bet he had a lot of sympathy." "You'd be surprised how many people believed him." "I wouldn't." "No." Katherine's voice softened. "I suppose you wouldn't." The jukebox moved to another song. Silas was watching them from the bar, his expression unreadable, though his hand rested casually near the phone. Ready, if she needed him. She raised her chin slightly—I'm fine—and his attention drifted elsewhere. "Why are you really here, Katherine?" "Because you're the only person who knew me before I became... this." She gestured vaguely at herself, at the blazer and the bitten nails and the raw skin where a wedding ring used to sit. "Everyone else only knows the version I showed them. The successful lawyer. The perfect wife. The good daughter. You knew me when I was still figuring out who I wanted to be, before I let everyone else decide for me." "And what do you want from me?" "Permission, maybe. To stop pretending I have it all together." Katherine laughed, and this time there was a trace of genuine bitterness in it. "Or absolution. For staying when you left. For choosing the safe path when you chose the hard one. For not calling, not checking in, not asking if you were okay when I knew—when I knew something was wrong." The weight of those words settled between them. Aurora felt the familiar tightness in her chest, the echo of those final months in Cardiff. The fights that left marks no one could see. The friends who looked away. Katherine had been the only one who'd said something, who'd pulled her aside at a party and asked if she was alright, really alright—and Aurora had lied, because that was easier, because admitting the truth would have meant confronting it. "You couldn't have fixed it." "I could have tried." "Would it have changed anything?" Katherine had no answer for that. She turned the empty whisky glass in a slow circle, watching the light refract through the crystal. "I'm not asking for forgiveness," she said finally. "I'm not sure I deserve it. I'm just... I'm tired of carrying it. The knowing. The wondering if I could have done something, said something, been someone who made a difference instead of just another person who watched and did nothing." Aurora looked at her old friend—really looked, past the expensive clothes and the carefully maintained composure, to the exhaustion underneath. The uncertainty. The grief for a life that looked perfect on paper and felt hollow in practice. They were not so different, she realised. Both of them running. The only difference was the direction. "I don't hate you, Katherine." It was the closest thing to forgiveness she could offer. Katherine seemed to understand, because something in her shoulders loosened, just slightly. "Thank you." The rain had stopped outside. Through the window, Aurora could see the wet streets glistening under the streetlamps, the city moving on without caring about the two women in the corner booth and the years between them. "Stay for another drink?" Katherine smiled—a real smile this time, small and tired and genuine. "I'd like that."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:39:19.15Z" 2/19/2026, 12:39:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
73.42% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She looked around [around]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.253
leniency0.506
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.127
71.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1781
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"really"
count4
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1781
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"unreadable"
5"perfect"
6"weight"
7"echo"
8"crystal"
9"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of those words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1758
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1129
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Katherine"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Katherine"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
Aurora19
Cardiff4
Katherine29
Evan2
Bristol1
London2
Jennifer1
Carter1
Ellis1
Pre-Law1
Cash1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Katherine"
5"Evan"
6"Jennifer"
7"Carter"
8"Ellis"
9"Cash"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Bristol"
2"London"
globalScore0.216
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1758
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean20.44
std22.25
cv1.089
sampleLengths
089
14
276
34
43
51
613
71
850
926
1014
118
123
1350
142
1555
165
171
1810
1930
203
2113
224
234
2430
253
263
2721
2812
292
3037
314
322
3317
345
358
3641
373
387
392
4032
411
4222
432
4465
4546
462
4738
485
4942
95.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"was fixed"
1"were bitten"
2"being asked"
59.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs190
matches
0"wasn't smoking"
1"was making"
2"was looking"
3"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences164
ratio0.079
matches
0"She nodded at Silas behind the bar—he raised a glass in acknowledgment, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light—and made her way toward the corner booth she'd claimed as her own over the past three years."
1"Something familiar in the angle of those shoulders, the way she held her cigarette—no, she wasn't smoking, just turning the unlit thing between her fingers."
2"Three years since Cardiff, since late nights in the university library, since Katherine had held her hair back at a party and told her she was making a mistake with Evan, since everything fell apart and Aurora ran and Katherine—"
3"Her eyes—still that penetrating grey-green—carried shadows that no amount of concealer could hide."
4"Silas studied Katherine for a moment—his hazel eyes sharp despite the easy smile he wore—and gave a small nod."
5"Aurora watched Katherine watch the bar—the old maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a London that no longer existed, the faded booth seats that had seen better decades."
6"Katherine wrapped both hands around the glass, and Aurora caught sight of something on her left hand—no ring, but the pale band of skin where one had been."
7"The safety of Silas's network, his quiet protection, the way he never asked about the scars she'd carried with her from Cardiff—visible and invisible both."
8"Searching for something—truth, perhaps, or reassurance, or maybe just a version of the past she could hold onto."
9"She raised her chin slightly—I'm fine—and his attention drifted elsewhere."
10"Katherine had been the only one who'd said something, who'd pulled her aside at a party and asked if she was alright, really alright—and Aurora had lied, because that was easier, because admitting the truth would have meant confronting it."
11"Aurora looked at her old friend—really looked, past the expensive clothes and the carefully maintained composure, to the exhaustion underneath."
12"Katherine smiled—a real smile this time, small and tired and genuine."
86.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1151
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"grey-green-carried shadows"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.04691572545612511
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.021720243266724587
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean10.72
std9.97
cv0.93
sampleLengths
022
119
28
340
44
53
628
77
813
925
104
113
121
132
1411
151
168
172
1840
193
203
2113
227
2313
241
253
265
273
283
298
309
314
3222
334
342
357
3616
3713
388
398
403
415
421
436
444
458
4612
4710
483
4911
67.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4329268292682927
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners71
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Maybe someone had mentioned seeing"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences98
matches
0"She nodded at Silas behind"
1"She stopped mid-stride."
2"They stared at each other"
3"It didn't, really."
4"She'd always been thorough."
5"Her eyes—still that penetrating grey-green-carried"
6"She'd always been thin, but"
7"He set down a pint"
8"He left them in the"
9"She smoothed her blazer"
10"She downed half the whisky"
11"She finished the whisky"
12"She looked around the bar"
13"Her delivery shifts in all"
14"she said finally"
15"She met Aurora's eyes"
16"she said quietly"
17"She raised her chin slightly—I'm"
18"She gestured vaguely at herself,"
19"She turned the empty whisky"
ratio0.235
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences98
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Aurora pushed through the door"
2"The warmth hit her face"
3"She nodded at Silas behind"
4"Someone sat in it."
5"She stopped mid-stride."
6"The woman occupied the seat"
7"A blazer that probably cost"
8"Something familiar in the angle"
9"The woman looked up."
10"Aurora's breath caught."
11"They stared at each other"
12"Katherine had stayed."
13"The one her father pulled"
14"Katherine gestured at the seat"
15"Aurora remained standing."
16"It didn't, really."
17"Cardiff was a small city,"
18"Evan's crowd still talked about"
19"The girl who ran."
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The green neon sign bled through the rain-speckled window, casting the bar in a sickly glow that made everyone look slightly unwell."
1"Katherine had been the only one who'd said something, who'd pulled her aside at a party and asked if she was alright, really alright—and Aurora had lied, becaus…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Katherine laughed (laugh)"
1"Katherine admitted (admit)"
2"Katherine laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.101
leniency0.203
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.076
79.1920%