Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYK4AG3N54GF2RCPNCTTDT

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.000785
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The low hum of conversation and the clinking of glasses provided a constant soundtrack to the usual Friday night at The Raven's Nest. Aurora Carter, or Rory as she preferred, wiped down the sticky counter with practiced ease. The scent of stale beer and lemon polish clung to the air, a familiar perfume that had been her constant companion for the past year. A delivery drone buzzed outside, a reminder of her day job and the precarious balance she maintained. Tonight felt heavier than most, a dull ache settled behind her ribs that had nothing to do with the cheap gin she sometimes sampled after closing. A figure detached itself from the shadows near the back booth, moving with a deliberate, measured gait. Silas Blackwood, his silver signet ring glinting under the low lights, approached her, a rare smile crinkling the corners of his hazel eyes. "Busy night, Rory." "Always on a Friday, Si," she replied, her voice a little rougher than she intended. She resisted the urge to check her reflection in the polished surface of the espresso machine. "Anything I can get for you?" He waved a dismissive hand. "Just surveying my kingdom. Though I swear that chap in the corner has been nursing the same pint for three hours." He gestured with his chin towards a man hunched over a dark tap, his face obscured by the brim of a fedora. Rory followed his gaze, a flicker of recognition sparking in her mind. The posture, the angle of the head. "He looks familiar," she mused, her brow furrowing. As if summoned, the man slowly turned. The fedora offered little concealment now. Rory’s breath hitched. The familiar sharp jawline, the unnerving stillness that had once captivated and terrified her. Evan. Her hand instinctively went to her left wrist, tracing the faint crescent scar hidden beneath her sleeve. The air crackled with unspoken history, a sudden, suffocating tension that had nothing to do with the bar’s usual atmosphere. Evan's eyes, dark and hard, met hers. A slow smile, devoid of warmth, spread across his lips. "Aurora Carter. Well, well. Fancy meeting you here." His voice, deep and resonant, cut through the din. Rory forced a breath, the air catching in her throat. "Evan." The name felt foreign on her tongue, a ghost from another life. She straightened her shoulders, a shield of practiced indifference rising around her. "Small world." He chuckled, a low rumble that sent an unsettling shiver down her spine. "Remarkably so. Still slinging drinks, are we?" His gaze swept over her, taking in the simple black uniform, the smudges of lipstick on her collar. It was a predatory assessment, the kind that had made her flee London in the first place. Silas watched the exchange, his expression unreadable, his gaze sharp and observant. He took a slow sip of his amber liquid, his slight limp barely noticeable as he shifted his weight. "I manage," Rory said, her voice tight. She turned back to the espresso machine, busying herself with a pointless wipe. Her knuckles were white. "What brings you to Soho?" "Just passing through," Evan said, his eyes never leaving her. "Heard this was a place to… network." He emphasized the word, his tone laced with a knowing irony. "They say it's a hub for… interesting people." "It's a pub, Evan," Rory countered, keeping her back to him. The scent of his cologne, a sharp, musky mixture, pricked at her senses. It was the same scent that had permeated her small London flat, a constant, suffocating reminder of his presence. "Is it?" He pushed himself away from the table, the chair scraping on the floor. He began to walk towards her, his movements fluid and unsettlingly confident. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. She could feel Silas’s quiet attention, a silent anchor in the rising tide of her panic. "You've changed, Rory," Evan said, stopping a few feet from the bar. He leaned a hip against it, his arms crossed. The worn leather of his jacket creaked. His hair, once a tousled mess, was now meticulously slicked back, revealing a sharp widow's peak. He looked like a predator who had shed its camouflage. "We all have," she replied, finally turning to face him. She met his gaze head-on, a flicker of defiance in her bright blue eyes. "Life happens." "Life? Or choices?" His smile widened, revealing a flash of teeth. "You ran, Rory. You always did have a talent for running." The accusation hung in the air, heavy and sharp. She remembered the slammed door, the hurried packing, the tearful goodbye with Eva. The sheer terror that had propelled her onto a train, leaving behind fragments of her life. And him. "I made a different choice," she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "One that suited me better." Evan let out a soft, disbelieving laugh. "Suited you better? Working for old man Cheung, delivering noodles? Is this the grand ambition Aurora Carter always carried?" He gestured vaguely with his chin towards the street beyond the bar’s entrance. Rory’s jaw tightened. The simple black uniform felt less like a disguise and more like a brand. "It pays the bills. And it’s honest work." "Honest?" He scoffed. "Since when was anything about you ever truly *honest*, Rory? You were always playing a part. Laila. Aurora. Malphora. Which one are you now?" The aliases tumbled out of his mouth, each one a jab, a reminder of the carefully constructed facade she’d worn for so long. She felt a blush creep up her neck. She hadn't expected him to remember. Or worse, to dredge it all up. Silas cleared his throat, a low, deliberate sound. "Evening, Evan, isn't it? Haven't seen you around these parts in a while." His voice was mild, yet it carried an implicit authority that made Evan pause. Evan’s eyes flickered to Silas, a flicker of suspicion in their depths. He recognized the man, perhaps, or sensed the quiet force behind him. "Silas. Still holding court?" "Someone has to," Silas replied with a small nod. He looked at Rory, a silent question in his expression. Rory looked from Silas to Evan, the chasm between her past and present widening with every passing second. Evan, a constant shadow she thought she'd outrun. Silas, the steady, quiet presence that grounded her. She felt a weariness settle deep in her bones, a regret for the innocence she'd lost, and for the choices that had led her to this unexpected, uncomfortable reunion. "I don't play parts anymore, Evan," she said, her voice softer now, but firm. She stepped away from the counter, moving to stand beside Silas. It was a small gesture, but it felt like an alliance declared. "This is me." Evan’s eyes narrowed, a flicker of something unreadable passing over his face. Anger? Disappointment? Or perhaps something more akin to amusement. He pushed himself off the bar, a slow, deliberate movement. "We'll see about that, Aurora," he said, his voice dropping to a low growl. "We always do." He turned and walked back towards the shadowy booth, his fedora casting a long, distorted shadow on the floor. The weight of his gaze lingered on Rory’s back long after he had settled back into his seat. Rory exhaled slowly, the relief leaving her weak-kneed. She leaned against the cool wood of the bar, the familiar scent of lemon polish now a comforting presence. She glanced at Silas, who gave her a subtle nod. The unspoken understanding passed between them, a silent acknowledgment of the storm that had just brushed past, and the shelter she had found.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:39:27.32Z" 2/19/2026, 12:39:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.618
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
84.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"truly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"reminder"
count3
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count4
6
word"furrowing"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count2
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
19
word"depths"
count1
20
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"familiar"
2"reminder"
3"measured"
4"glinting"
5"flicker"
6"furrowing"
7"tracing"
8"unspoken"
9"tension"
10"warmth"
11"down her spine"
12"unreadable"
13"weight"
14"could feel"
15"predator"
16"constructed"
17"facade"
18"flickered"
19"depths"
20"comforting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1271
ratio0.001
matches
0"honest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1063
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Friday1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory12
Blackwood1
London2
Silas10
Eva1
Evan10
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.936
windowScore0.667
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a predator who had shed its c"
1"felt like an alliance declared"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
74.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean39.72
std16.37
cv0.412
sampleLengths
0106
143
237
348
427
531
637
734
837
955
1031
1129
1236
1343
1449
1554
1626
1722
1840
1921
2039
2125
2227
2344
2435
2528
2619
2763
2840
2931
3054
3160
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1065
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027230046948356807
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008450704225352112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.34
std7.36
cv0.596
sampleLengths
023
115
225
317
426
517
623
73
815
916
106
115
1243
1312
147
158
167
176
183
1914
201
2117
2220
237
2410
2517
2610
2713
2812
292
3013
3125
3217
3312
3419
357
3613
374
385
3910
4018
418
4211
4313
4419
4515
4612
476
4816
4912
57.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36893203883495146
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences86
matches
0"she replied, her voice a"
1"She resisted the urge to"
2"He waved a dismissive hand."
3"He gestured with his chin"
4"she mused, her brow furrowing"
5"Her hand instinctively went to"
6"His voice, deep and resonant,"
7"She straightened her shoulders, a"
8"He chuckled, a low rumble"
9"His gaze swept over her,"
10"It was a predatory assessment,"
11"He took a slow sip"
12"She turned back to the"
13"Her knuckles were white."
14"He emphasized the word, his"
15"It was the same scent"
16"He pushed himself away from"
17"He began to walk towards"
18"She could feel Silas’s quiet"
19"He leaned a hip against"
ratio0.488
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences86
matches
0"The low hum of conversation"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
2"The scent of stale beer"
3"A delivery drone buzzed outside,"
4"Tonight felt heavier than most,"
5"A figure detached itself from"
6"Silas Blackwood, his silver signet"
7"she replied, her voice a"
8"She resisted the urge to"
9"He waved a dismissive hand."
10"He gestured with his chin"
11"Rory followed his gaze, a"
12"The posture, the angle of"
13"she mused, her brow furrowing"
14"The fedora offered little concealment"
15"Rory’s breath hitched."
16"The familiar sharp jawline, the"
17"Her hand instinctively went to"
18"The air crackled with unspoken"
19"Evan's eyes, dark and hard,"
ratio0.965
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"As if summoned, the man"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The scent of stale beer and lemon polish clung to the air, a familiar perfume that had been her constant companion for the past year."
1"Tonight felt heavier than most, a dull ache settled behind her ribs that had nothing to do with the cheap gin she sometimes sampled after closing."
2"The familiar sharp jawline, the unnerving stillness that had once captivated and terrified her."
3"The air crackled with unspoken history, a sudden, suffocating tension that had nothing to do with the bar’s usual atmosphere."
4"It was the same scent that had permeated her small London flat, a constant, suffocating reminder of his presence."
5"He looked like a predator who had shed its camouflage."
6"The sheer terror that had propelled her onto a train, leaving behind fragments of her life."
7"She felt a weariness settle deep in her bones, a regret for the innocence she'd lost, and for the choices that had led her to this unexpected, uncomfortable reu…"
8"The unspoken understanding passed between them, a silent acknowledgment of the storm that had just brushed past, and the shelter she had found."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she replied, her voice a little rougher than she intended"
1"she mused, her brow furrowing"
2"Rory said, her voice tight"
3"He pushed, the chair scraping on the floor"
4"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
5"she said, her voice softer now, but firm"
6"he said, his voice dropping to a low growl"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.0142%