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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYK8PPJYZ352NXTSF8A227
Run Details
Model:
Arcee AI: Trinity Large (Preview)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
80.13%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
48.33%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
91.33%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
93.75%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
76.58%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
74.25%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
91.09%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
28.38%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
83.92%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
78.9247%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rory pushed open the heavy
wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the
familiar
scent of whiskey and old wood greeting her like an old friend.
She'd been making deliveries to
Silas' bar for months now, but tonight was different. Tonight, she needed a drink.
The bar was busier than
usual, the low hum of conversation punctuated by occasional bursts of laughter.
Rory made her way to
the counter, her eyes
scanning
the room out of habit. That's when she saw him.
Silas Blackwood sat at a
corner table, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light from the stained glass lamp above. But it wasn't his appearance that made Rory's breath catch in her throat.
It was the woman sitting
across from him.
She was tall, with sharp
features and piercing green eyes.
Her hair was pulled back
in a severe bun, and she wore a tailored suit that screamed money and power. But Rory would
recognize that face
anywhere. "Laila?"
The name slipped out before
she could stop herself. The woman's head snapped up, her eyes widening in surprise. "Aurora?"
Rory felt a jolt of
something - shock, anger, hurt - as she watched Laila rise from her seat. She looked different. Harder.
The softness that had once
defined her features had
been replaced
by something more angular, more
calculating
. "What are you doing here?"
Rory asked, her voice carefully
neutral. "I could ask you the same thing,"
Laila replied, her tone equally
guarded. "I thought you were in Cardiff." "I was,"
Rory said, crossing her arms
over her chest. "I moved to London a few months ago. For work."
Laila nodded, but there was
something in her expression that made Rory's
stomach
twist. "I see. Well, it's good to see you, Aurora. It's been a long time." "Yeah,"
Rory agreed, her gaze flicking
to Silas.
He looked uncomfortable, his fingers
drumming against the table. "Too long." There was a beat of
silence
, heavy with
unspoken
words and memories. Rory cleared her throat, desperate to break the
tension
. "So, you two know each other?"
she asked, gesturing between Laila
and Silas. "We've worked together,"
Silas said, his voice carefully neutral
. "In the past." Laila smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "That's one way to put it." Rory felt a surge of irritation. "Right. Well, I should probably get back to work. It was... nice seeing you, Laila."
She turned to leave, but
Laila's voice stopped her. "Aurora, wait." Rory paused, not turning around. "What?" "I'm sorry," Laila said
softly
. "For everything. I know I hurt you, and I... I regret that. More than you know." Rory's hands
clenched into fists
at her sides. "Yeah, well. Water under the bridge, right?"
She walked away, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
She could feel Laila's eyes
on her back, but she didn't look back. She couldn't.
She made it to the
bar, ordering a whiskey neat from the bartender. As she waited for her drink, she caught Silas' eye. He gave her a small, sympathetic smile, but she looked away.
She couldn't deal with this
right now. Couldn't deal with the memories, the what-ifs, the regrets. Not here, not now.
She took her drink and
found a seat at the far end of the bar, away from prying eyes.
She sipped her whiskey, letting
the burn of the alcohol ground her in the present.
She thought about Laila, about
who she had been and who she had become. About the girl who had once held her hand in the dark, whispering promises of forever. About the woman who had left without a word, shattering Rory's heart into a million pieces.
She thought about the years
that had passed, the distance that had grown between them. About the secrets they had kept, the lies they had told. About the love they had lost.
She finished her drink in
one long swallow, relishing the burn as it slid down her throat.
She ordered another, determined to
drown out the memories, to forget the pain. But even as she drank, even as the alcohol clouded her mind, she couldn't forget. Couldn't forget the way Laila had looked at her, the way her name had sounded on Laila's lips. Couldn't forget the way her heart had leapt in her chest, even after all these years.
She thought about what Laila
had said, about her regret. About the apology that had come too late, the words that couldn't undo the damage that had been done. She thought about the girl she had been, the girl who had loved so fiercely, so blindly. About the woman she had become, hardened by heartbreak, by loss. She thought about the choices she had made, the paths she had taken. About the life she had built, the walls she had erected. About the loneliness that had become her constant companion. She finished her second drink, her vision blurring
slightly
. She knew she should stop, knew she should go home. But she couldn't bring herself to move, couldn't bring herself to face the world outside. So she sat there, lost in her thoughts, in her memories. She sat there, drowning in regret, in what-ifs. She sat there, a ghost of who she had been, a shadow of who she might have been. And as the night wore on, as the bar emptied around her, she finally let herself
feel
it all. The pain, the anger, the sorrow. She let herself
feel
the
weight
of the years, the burden of the
unspoken
words. She let herself remember, and she let herself grieve. For the love she had lost, for the girl she had been. For the woman she had become, and the woman she might never be. And as the first light of dawn crept through the windows, she finally stood up, her legs unsteady beneath her. She made her way to the door, her steps slow and deliberate. She didn't look back, didn't dare to hope. She simply walked away, leaving the ghosts of her past behind her. But even as she stepped out into the bright morning light, even as she breathed in the fresh air, she
knew that she
would never
truly
be free. That the
weight
of her regrets, the burden of her memories, would always be with her. And so she walked on, alone, into the uncertain future. A future that held no promises, no guarantees. A future that was hers to shape, hers to define. And as she walked, she whispered a silent prayer to the universe, to the gods of fate and chance. She prayed for strength, for courage. She prayed for the wisdom to learn from her mistakes, to grow from her pain. And most of all, she prayed for peace. For the peace that came with acceptance, with letting go. For the peace that came with forgiveness, with moving on. And as she walked, she felt a small spark of hope ignite within her chest. A hope that maybe, just maybe, she could find her way back to herself. That she could
heal, that she
could grow. And so she walked on, into the unknown, into the future. A future that was hers to shape, hers to define. And as she walked, she felt a small smile tug at her lips. A smile that spoke of resilience, of strength. A smile that spoke of a woman who had
been broken
, but who had not
been defeated
. A woman who had
been lost
, but who was finally finding her way home.
created_at
"2026-02-19T12:39:31.803Z"
2/19/2026, 12:39:31 PM
model
"arcee-ai/trinity-large-preview:free"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
259
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
83394
tokens_prompt
1094
tokens_completion
1809
native_tokens_prompt
938
native_tokens_completion
1554
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"b9d81865-ce9a-432a-9cd5-0d9be55e7cb5"
id
"chatcmpl-875b6697423fb110"
is_byok
false
latency
80
model_permaslug
"arcee-ai/trinity-large-preview"
provider_name
"Arcee AI"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771504771-Z0EBHbot3vonTFey0jyZ"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-875b6697423fb110"
total_cost
0
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Arcee AI"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Laila said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences
20
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.1
effectiveRatio
0.1
80.13%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
2
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"softly"
2
"slightly"
3
"truly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
48.33%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1258
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"scanning"
count
1
2
word
"calculating"
count
1
3
word
"stomach"
count
1
4
word
"silence"
count
1
5
word
"unspoken"
count
2
6
word
"tension"
count
1
7
word
"pounding"
count
1
8
word
"could feel"
count
1
9
word
"determined"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"scanning"
2
"calculating"
3
"stomach"
4
"silence"
5
"unspoken"
6
"tension"
7
"pounding"
8
"could feel"
9
"determined"
10
"weight"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenched into fists"
91.33%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
4
narrationSentences
99
matches
0
"g in surprise"
1
"felt a jolt"
2
"looked uncomfortable"
3
"g in regret"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
99
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
111
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
28
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1257
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
93.75%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"And as she walked, she whispered a silent prayer to the universe, to the gods of fate and chance."
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
37
wordCount
1136
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.23
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven
1
Nest
1
Tonight
1
Blackwood
1
Rory
14
Laila
12
Silas
4
Couldn
3
persons
0
"Raven"
1
"Blackwood"
2
"Rory"
3
"Laila"
4
"Silas"
places
0
"Tonight"
globalScore
0.884
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
90
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1257
matches
(empty)
76.58%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"recognize that face"
1
"knew that she"
2
"heal, that she"
74.25%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
27.33
std
11.2
cv
0.41
sampleLengths
0
44
1
37
2
41
3
37
4
10
5
11
6
40
7
11
8
19
9
20
10
28
11
19
12
21
13
13
14
12
15
14
16
21
17
11
18
6
19
21
20
15
21
24
22
34
23
20
24
34
25
46
26
32
27
30
28
49
29
29
30
28
31
33
32
34
33
37
34
40
35
34
36
32
37
20
38
44
39
28
40
40
41
28
42
37
43
21
44
38
45
14
91.09%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
99
matches
0
"was pulled"
1
"been replaced"
2
"been broken"
3
"been defeated"
4
"been lost"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
203
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
111
ratio
0.009
matches
0
"Rory felt a jolt of something - shock, anger, hurt - as she watched Laila rise from her seat."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
104
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
3
adverbRatio
0.028846153846153848
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.009615384615384616
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
111
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
111
mean
11.32
std
5.09
cv
0.45
sampleLengths
0
25
1
14
2
5
3
17
4
15
5
5
6
20
7
13
8
8
9
10
10
20
11
7
12
10
13
10
14
1
15
19
16
3
17
1
18
17
19
11
20
13
21
6
22
10
23
10
24
14
25
14
26
8
27
9
28
2
29
12
30
9
31
13
32
9
33
3
34
8
35
6
36
6
37
15
38
9
39
2
40
5
41
1
42
5
43
16
44
8
45
7
46
9
47
13
48
2
49
13
28.38%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
24
diversityRatio
0.26126126126126126
totalSentences
111
uniqueOpeners
29
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
97
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
83.92%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
33
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"She'd been making deliveries to"
1
"It was the woman sitting"
2
"She was tall, with sharp"
3
"Her hair was pulled back"
4
"She looked different."
5
"He looked uncomfortable, his fingers"
6
"she asked, gesturing between Laila"
7
"She turned to leave, but"
8
"She walked away, her heart"
9
"She could feel Laila's eyes"
10
"She made it to the"
11
"He gave her a small,"
12
"She couldn't deal with this"
13
"She took her drink and"
14
"She sipped her whiskey, letting"
15
"She thought about Laila, about"
16
"She thought about the years"
17
"She finished her drink in"
18
"She ordered another, determined to"
19
"She thought about what Laila"
ratio
0.34
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
65
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"Rory pushed open the heavy"
1
"She'd been making deliveries to"
2
"Tonight, she needed a drink."
3
"The bar was busier than"
4
"Rory made her way to"
5
"That's when she saw him."
6
"Silas Blackwood sat at a"
7
"It was the woman sitting"
8
"She was tall, with sharp"
9
"Her hair was pulled back"
10
"The name slipped out before"
11
"The woman's head snapped up,"
12
"Rory felt a jolt of"
13
"She looked different."
14
"The softness that had once"
15
"Rory asked, her voice carefully"
16
"Laila replied, her tone equally"
17
"Rory said, crossing her arms"
18
"Laila nodded, but there was"
19
"Rory agreed, her gaze flicking"
ratio
0.67
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
97
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
60
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"But it wasn't his appearance that made Rory's breath catch in her throat."
1
"The softness that had once defined her features had been replaced by something more angular, more calculating."
2
"Laila nodded, but there was something in her expression that made Rory's stomach twist."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
10
uselessAdditionCount
4
matches
0
"Rory asked, her voice carefully neutral"
1
"Laila replied, her tone equally guarded"
2
"Rory agreed, her gaze flicking to Silas"
3
"Silas said, his voice carefully neutral"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences
20
tagDensity
0.35
leniency
0.7
rawRatio
0.143
effectiveRatio
0.1
78.9247%