Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYKE3V862TGVCPEXMV5M6V

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Duration:
22.8s
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$0.004862
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Alibaba

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the corrugated iron roof of the abandoned Camden Tube station, a rhythmic drumming that did little to mask the coppery tang of dried blood. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape, her boots crunching on shattered glass and damp gravel. The air down here tasted stale, recycled through decades of neglect, yet beneath the rot lay something sharper. Ozone. Burnt sugar. She checked her wrist. The worn leather of her watch strap felt rough against her skin as she noted the time. 03:14. Too late for commuters, too early for cleanup crews. Perfect for things that preferred the dark. "Quinn." DS Miller stood near the platform edge, his face pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights. He held a evidence bag in one gloved hand, waving it like a white flag. "You need to see this," Miller said, his voice tight. "Clean cut. No struggle. Victim just... dropped." Quinn approached the body. A young man, mid-twenties, lay sprawled across the tracks. His eyes stared up at the arched ceiling, wide and unseeing. His clothes were expensive, tailored silk that looked out of place amidst the grime of the underworld. "Drop it," Quinn ordered, nodding at the bag. Miller lowered his hand. "Toxicology will confirm, but I'd bet my pension on a heart attack. Maybe an overdose. Look at the face. Peaceful." "Peaceful doesn't leave burn marks on the soles of the shoes." Quinn crouched, ignoring the protest of her knees. She leaned in close. The victim's Italian leather loafers sat pristine, save for the left sole. A perfect circle of ash marred the leather, as if he had stepped onto a hot plate. The surrounding gravel showed no scorch marks. No fire had touched the ground. The heat had come from inside the shoe, or through it. "He steps on something hot, jumps back, has a seizure, and dies?" Miller scoffed, shifting his weight. "That's a stretch, Harlow. There's no weapon. No signs of a fight. The CCTV from the street above shows him entering alone ten minutes ago. Nobody followed him down." "CCTV doesn't see everything, Miller." Quinn scanned the platform. Her brown eyes narrowed, picking out details the floodlights missed. Dust motes danced in the beams, swirling in patterns that defied the still air. Near the victim's right hand, a pile of dirt seemed to have been disturbed, not by a fall, but by something dragging itself out of the ground. She stood, her military precision evident in the sharpness of her movements. She walked a wide circle around the body, her gaze sweeping the walls. Graffiti covered the tiled surfaces, layers of tags overlapping like ancient strata. Most were typical gang markings. Some, however, pulsed with a faint, residual energy that made the hair on her arms stand up. "Three years ago," Quinn muttered, more to herself than Miller. "Morris found a body just like this. Same burn. Same look of surprise." "Morris chased ghosts, Quinn. We both know how that ended." Miller stepped closer, lowering his voice. "Don't go down that rabbit hole again. This is a straightforward DOA. Let the coroner take him, write the report, go home." "Straightforward doesn't smell like burnt sugar." Quinn moved toward the disturbed dirt. She knelt again, pulling a penlight from her pocket. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating fine grains of sand that didn't match the local geology. This sand was white, almost luminescent, and mixed with tiny shards of bone. "Bag this," she commanded, pointing the light at the sample. "And bag the shoe. Don't touch the ash." Miller sighed, the sound echoing off the tunnel walls. He rummaged in his kit for fresh evidence bags. "You're making this complicated. The lab will say it's chemical residue. Some new designer drug cooking off in his sole." "The lab says what we tell them to look for, Miller. If we ask for drugs, they find drugs. If we ask for anomalies, they find anomalies." She stood and walked to the edge of the platform, looking down the dark tunnel where the tracks disappeared into shadow. The darkness felt heavy, pressurized. It wasn't just an absence of light; it felt like a physical barrier. "Ever heard of the Veil Market?" Quinn asked, her back still to him. Miller paused, the plastic of the evidence bag crinkling in his grip. "Urban legend. Stuff coppers tell rookies to scare them. A black market that moves around? Come on." "It moves every full moon," Quinn said, turning to face him. Her sharp jawline tightened. "Tonight's the full moon. This station was scheduled for demolition next week. Perfect cover for a pop-up shop." "So what? Our vic came here to buy magic beans and died of fright?" Miller tossed the bagged shoe into the collection box with a clatter. "That's not a case, Harlow. That's a fairy tale." "Fairy tales don't leave ash that defies physics." Quinn walked back to the head of the platform. She stopped near a service door, half-hidden behind a stack of rotting wooden pallets. The handle was cold to the touch, but the metal around the lock shimmered with a oily residue. She pulled a small brass object from her deep coat pocket. The Veil Compass. The casing bore a thick patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye. Miller stepped back, his eyes widening. "Where did you get that?" "Confiscated. Six months ago. From a suspect who claimed he could walk through walls." "You're carrying contraband?" "I'm carrying a tool." Quinn held the compass flat in her palm. The needle didn't point north. It spun lazily, then jerked, snapping toward the service door with violent conviction. The needle vibrated, humming against her skin. "See that?" Quinn whispered. "It's a magnet," Miller argued, though his voice lacked conviction. "There's wiring behind that wall. Old tube infrastructure." "There hasn't been power down here for a decade." Quinn stepped toward the door. The air grew colder, the smell of ozone intensifying until it stung the back of her throat. She reached out, her fingers hovering inches from the handle. The compass needle swung wildly now, pointing not just at the door, but slightly downward, as if the source lay beneath the floor itself. "The victim didn't die here," Quinn realized, the pieces clicking into place with the precision of a bolt action. "He died crossing a threshold. The burn on his shoe? That's friction. Thermal backlash from stepping through a rift." "A rift," Miller repeated, the word sounding foreign on his tongue. He looked at the body, then at the compass, then back at Quinn. "You think he walked into another dimension?" "I think he walked into the Market. And something inside didn't like him leaving." Quinn holstered the compass and drew her service weapon. The weight of the gun felt familiar, grounding. She checked the chamber, the metallic click loud in the sudden silence. "Stay behind me," she ordered. "Harlow, if you open that door and there's just a squatter or a pile of trash, I'm writing you up for endangerment." "If I open that door and find what I think is there, you'll be thanking me for not letting it out." She gripped the cold handle. The oily residue smeared onto her glove, glowing faintly blue before fading. She pushed. The door swung inward with a groan of rusted hinges, revealing not a maintenance closet, but a steep stone staircase descending into a warm, amber glow. The sound of chatter, bartering, and strange, chiming bells drifted up from below, mingling with the scent of exotic spices and old blood. Miller sucked in a breath, his hand going to his own holster. "That's... that's not possible." "Evidence doesn't lie, Miller," Quinn said, starting down the stairs, her eyes scanning the shadows for movement. "People do. And sometimes, the world does too." She paused on the third step, listening. A scream echoed from the depths, cut short. "Move," she commanded, her voice leaving no room for argument. "We have a second victim."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.043
92.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count3
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"amidst"
count1
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"shattered"
2"perfect"
3"silk"
4"amidst"
5"pristine"
6"weight"
7"scanned"
8"pulsed"
9"gloom"
10"echoing"
11"shimmered"
12"etched"
13"vibrated"
14"familiar"
15"silence"
16"scanning"
17"echoed"
18"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1355
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount912
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Miller13
Italian1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
places(empty)
globalScore0.568
windowScore0.667
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical barrier"
1"sigils that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.214
wordCount1355
matches
0"not by a fall, but by something dragging itself out of the ground"
1"not just at the door, but slightly downward, as if the source lay beneath the floor it"
2"not a maintenance closet, but a steep stone staircase descending into a warm, amber glow"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean28.23
std17.9
cv0.634
sampleLengths
066
138
21
333
417
541
68
724
811
965
1046
115
1255
1359
1423
1538
166
1745
1818
1938
2027
2139
2213
2329
2433
2535
2649
2742
2811
2914
303
3137
324
3318
349
3556
3638
3731
3814
3929
405
4122
4221
4368
4416
4525
4615
4715
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences115
ratio0.009
matches
0"It wasn't just an absence of light; it felt like a physical barrier."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount914
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.020787746170678335
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007658643326039387
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.78
std6.68
cv0.567
sampleLengths
027
118
218
31
42
54
617
71
89
97
101
1118
1215
1310
147
154
169
1711
1817
198
204
2120
2211
238
244
2512
2617
277
286
2911
3017
3129
325
334
3410
3514
3627
3712
3813
3912
405
4117
4210
4313
4416
4522
466
476
489
4917
71.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4649122807017544
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners53
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Too late for commuters, too"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences81
matches
0"She checked her wrist."
1"He held a evidence bag"
2"His eyes stared up at"
3"His clothes were expensive, tailored"
4"She leaned in close."
5"Her brown eyes narrowed, picking"
6"She stood, her military precision"
7"She walked a wide circle"
8"She knelt again, pulling a"
9"she commanded, pointing the light"
10"He rummaged in his kit"
11"She stood and walked to"
12"It wasn't just an absence"
13"Her sharp jawline tightened."
14"She stopped near a service"
15"She pulled a small brass"
16"It spun lazily, then jerked,"
17"She reached out, her fingers"
18"He looked at the body,"
19"She checked the chamber, the"
ratio0.284
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences81
matches
0"Rain lashed against the corrugated"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The air down here tasted"
3"She checked her wrist."
4"The worn leather of her"
5"DS Miller stood near the"
6"He held a evidence bag"
7"Miller said, his voice tight"
8"Quinn approached the body."
9"A young man, mid-twenties, lay"
10"His eyes stared up at"
11"His clothes were expensive, tailored"
12"Quinn ordered, nodding at the"
13"Miller lowered his hand."
14"Quinn crouched, ignoring the protest"
15"She leaned in close."
16"The victim's Italian leather loafers"
17"A perfect circle of ash"
18"The surrounding gravel showed no"
19"The heat had come from"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rain lashed against the corrugated iron roof of the abandoned Camden Tube station, a rhythmic drumming that did little to mask the coppery tang of dried blood."
1"The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating fine grains of sand that didn't match the local geology."
2"The casing bore a thick patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye."
3"The oily residue smeared onto her glove, glowing faintly blue before fading."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Miller said, his voice tight"
1"Quinn muttered, more to herself than Miller"
2"Quinn asked, her back still to him"
3"Quinn said, turning to face him"
4"Miller argued, though his voice lacked conviction"
5"Miller repeated, the word sounding foreign on his tongue"
6"she commanded, her voice leaving no room for argument"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Quinn ordered (order)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
2"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
3"Miller argued (argue)"
4"Miller repeated (repeat)"
5"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.261
74.4777%