Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYKHGKSNNJZEPEAG9892SX

Run Details

Duration:
10.7s
Cost:
$0.002524

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of the Raven's Nest blurred into a smear of light as Detective Harlow Quinn burst through the bar's door. Rain pelted her salt-and-pepper hair, droplets cascading down her sharp jaw. Her worn leather watch caught a glint of streetlight as she scanned the empty bar. "Where'd he go?" she muttered. Silas, the bartender, didn't even look up. Just a slight shake of his head. Quinn's boot heels clicked against the wooden floor. She moved past the black-and-white photographs and old maps, her military precision cutting through the dim light. The bookshelf at the back caught her eye. One quick push revealed a hidden doorway. A glimpse of a dark jacket disappeared down a narrow stairwell. "Metropolitan Police!" she shouted. No response. The stairs descended into darkness. Quinn's hand instinctively brushed her holster. Three years since losing her partner DS Morris, and every chase felt like unfinished business. The stairwell opened into a cavernous underground space. Shadowy figures moved between makeshift stalls. Bottles with unnatural colors. Artifacts that seemed to pulse with their own strange light. The Veil Market. Her target weaved through the crowd. Marketplace vendors with inhuman features turned to watch, then quickly looked away. Nobody wanted trouble with a cop. Quinn pushed past a stall selling what looked like preserved animal hearts in crystal jars. The suspect ducked behind a curtain of hanging chains that clinked with strange metallic sounds. She was deep now. Far from backup. Far from anything resembling standard police procedure. Her breath came faster. Not from exertion. From something else. Something that felt like the same supernatural current that had claimed Morris. The chase continued.
total_cost0.002524

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount279
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount279
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"cascading"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
highlights
0"cascading"
1"glint"
2"scanned"
3"pulse"
4"crystal"
5"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences34
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences34
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences34
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords275
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount270
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn4
Silas1
Morris2
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Silas"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.759
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences22
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like unfinished business"
1"Artifacts that seemed to pulse with their own strange light"
2"looked like preserved animal hearts in cr"
3"felt like the same supernatural current"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount275
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean21.15
std13.48
cv0.637
sampleLengths
049
15
214
340
411
56
626
731
824
930
1014
1122
123
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs40
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount274
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.032846715328467155
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0072992700729927005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences34
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences34
mean8.09
std4.91
cv0.607
sampleLengths
023
111
215
35
47
57
68
717
88
97
1011
114
122
135
146
1515
168
176
184
1910
203
216
2212
236
2415
2515
264
273
287
294
303
313
3212
333
97.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6470588235294118
totalSentences34
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"Just a slight shake of"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences31
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"She moved past the black-and-white"
2"Her target weaved through the"
3"She was deep now."
4"Her breath came faster."
ratio0.161
72.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount24
totalSentences31
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Rain pelted her salt-and-pepper hair,"
2"Her worn leather watch caught"
3"Silas, the bartender, didn't even"
4"Quinn's boot heels clicked against"
5"She moved past the black-and-white"
6"The bookshelf at the back"
7"A glimpse of a dark"
8"The stairs descended into darkness."
9"Quinn's hand instinctively brushed her"
10"The stairwell opened into a"
11"Shadowy figures moved between makeshift"
12"Bottles with unnatural colors."
13"Artifacts that seemed to pulse"
14"The Veil Market."
15"Her target weaved through the"
16"Marketplace vendors with inhuman features"
17"Nobody wanted trouble with a"
18"Quinn pushed past a stall"
19"The suspect ducked behind a"
ratio0.774
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The suspect ducked behind a curtain of hanging chains that clinked with strange metallic sounds."
1"Something that felt like the same supernatural current that had claimed Morris."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
79.9926%