Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYKVXZ0WC59QH4VZPZXVNF

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Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.195600

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed before them, their trunks twisted into impossible spirals that hurt to look at directly. Rory touched the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt, its warmth pulsing against her chest like a second heartbeat. "This is it?" She glanced at Isolde, who stood beside her with that unsettling stillness the Half-Fae possessed. No footprints marked where she'd walked through the damp leaves. "The Grove reveals itself only when it chooses." Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected something Rory couldn't name. "Step between the third and seventh oak when the wind stills." Nyx's form rippled at the edge of Rory's vision, their shadow-body flowing like smoke. "I sense... displacement. The Veil is thin here." "Thin?" Rory squinted at the space between the trees. The air shimmered, a heat-mirage effect despite the October chill. "Is that safe?" "Safety is an illusion mortals cling to." Isolde moved forward, her silver hair catching light that didn't exist in the overcast sky. "The Grove has accepted your presence. That is enough." The wind died. Complete stillness fell over Richmond Park, unnatural in its totality. Even the distant traffic sounds vanished. Rory's breath caught as the space between the oaks shifted, revealing a narrow passage that hadn't existed seconds before. "After you, then." She tried for levity, but her voice came out strained. Isolde stepped through first, disappearing as if walking through a curtain. Nyx followed, their form stretching and distorting as they passed the threshold. Rory hesitated, fingers closing around the pendant. The passage pulled at her. Not physically, but something deeper. She took a breath and walked forward. The world tilted. Colors blazed across her vision—hues that had no names, that shouldn't exist. The ground beneath her feet was soft moss, but also crystal, but also water. Her mind struggled to process the contradictions. She stumbled, catching herself against what might have been a tree or a pillar of starlight. "Steady." Nyx's whisper came from everywhere and nowhere. "Your mortal senses are adjusting." Rory blinked hard, and the world settled into something her brain could parse. They stood in a circular clearing perhaps fifty feet across. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn asters, summer roses tangled with winter hellebores. The flowers swayed without wind, turning their faces to track movement like curious animals. Above, the sky was wrong. Instead of grey October clouds, aurora-like ribbons of color danced across a twilight that belonged to no earthly hour. The light they cast changed constantly—now silver, now gold, now shades that made her teeth ache. "Welcome to my Grove." Isolde stood at the clearing's center beside a pool of water so still it might have been polished obsidian. "Time moves as it wills here. We may speak without interruption." Rory took a tentative step forward. The moss beneath her feet felt too soft, too warm. A cluster of bluebells chimed as she passed, actually chimed, like tiny silver bells. She jerked back. "The flowers here remember their Fae origins." Isolde's lips curved in what might have been amusement. "They mean no harm. Merely curious about visitors." "Right. Curious flowers." Rory forced herself to move deeper into the clearing. The Heartstone's warmth intensified, spreading through her chest. "This place feels..." "Alive." Nyx's form solidified as they spoke, taking on sharper definition in the strange light. "Not merely inhabited. The Grove itself is aware." A sound like distant music drifted through the air—pipes or flutes, but played in harmonies that human instruments couldn't achieve. Rory's feet wanted to move to the rhythm. She planted them firmly, remembering Eva's warnings about Fae music. "You're wise to resist." Isolde approached the pool, her reflection wavering in ways that defied physics. "The Grove tests all who enter. It seeks to know your heart." "My heart's my own, thanks." But even as Rory spoke, she felt the Grove's attention like fingers trailing across her thoughts. Not invasive, exactly. More like being studied by something vast and patient. The clearing's edge drew her attention. Beyond the circle of strange light, shadows pressed close. Not darkness—something denser. The spaces between spaces that Nyx had mentioned. Trees grew there, but their shapes twisted into geometries that made her stomach lurch. "Don't stare too long into the between-spaces." Isolde's warning came soft. "mortal minds can lose themselves trying to understand what lies there." Rory turned away, focusing instead on the pool. Its surface reflected not the dancing sky above, but stars. Thousands of them, arranged in no constellation she recognized. As she watched, they moved, swirling into new patterns like living things. "The pool shows truth." Isolde knelt at its edge, careful not to disturb the water. "Past, present, future—all are one here. The Grove exists outside linear time." "That's why an hour here—" "Can be minutes or days in your world, yes." Isolde's reflection in the star-filled water looked younger, older, different. All versions at once. "The Grove chooses what time means within its borders." A flutter of movement caught Rory's eye. A butterfly landed on a nearby rose, but its wings were made of stained glass, throwing prismatic patterns across the petals. It regarded her with eyes too intelligent for an insect before lifting away on impossible wings. "Everything here is between." Nyx moved closer to the pool, their shadow-form reflecting as solid darkness against the stars. "Not quite Fae, not quite mortal. The Grove is a bridge." "A bridge to what?" But even as Rory asked, she felt the answer pressing against her awareness. The Grove connected everything—Earth, Fae, perhaps even the demon realms. A nexus point where all worlds touched. The music grew louder, more insistent. Rory found herself humming along before catching herself. The melody was inside her now, weaving through her thoughts. Beautiful. Terrible. Both. "The Grove is singing your story." Isolde's voice carried harmonics that hadn't been there before. "It knows why you've come, even if you don't yet understand yourself." Water that wasn't water lapped at the pool's edges despite its stillness. The flowers turned their faces toward Rory in unison, a garden of witnesses. The very air tasted of honey and metal and starlight. "I feel..." Rory paused, trying to articulate the sensation. Like standing at the edge of a cliff. Like the moment before lightning strikes. Like coming home to a place she'd never been. "You feel the possibilities." Isolde rose, and for a moment her form flickered—showing wings, showing armor, showing nothing at all. "The Grove exists in all states simultaneously. While you're here, so do you." The Heartstone burned against Rory's skin now, not painful but urgent. The pendant wanted something from this place. Or perhaps the Grove wanted something from it. The two powers circled each other like wary animals. "Your pendant bears the touch of Dymas." Isolde's eyes fixed on where the Heartstone rested beneath Rory's shirt. "Demon-craft and Fae magic rarely coexist peacefully. The Grove is... curious about this contradiction." Around them, the impossible flowers began to glow. Soft at first, then brighter, until the clearing blazed with bioluminescent light. Colors bled into each other, creating new spectrums. Rory's shadow multiplied, cast in directions that gravity shouldn't allow. "Is it safe to be here?" She had to raise her voice over the singing that wasn't quite music, wasn't quite wind. "Safe is not a word that applies to the Grove." Isolde's form was becoming less solid, more part of the strange light. "But you are protected. The Grove has accepted you as guest, not prey." The distinction mattered. Rory could feel the power here, old and wild and barely contained. This place could unmake her, scatter her across realities like dandelion seeds. But it chose not to. For now. "Show her." Nyx's voice carried urgency. "The Grove's patience is not infinite." Isolde nodded, gesturing to the pool. The star-filled water swirled, forming patterns that almost made sense. Almost. Rory leaned closer, drawn by a compulsion she couldn't name. In the depths, images formed. London burning with cold fire. Shadows moving through the streets with purpose. A figure in a crown of ice and starlight. The Heartstone, blazing like a small sun. Her own face, but wrong—eyes that held depths no human eyes should have. "What is this?" "Possibility." Isolde's hand hovered over the water, not quite touching. "The Grove shows what might be, not what must be. Your choices matter, Aurora Carter. More than you know." The images shifted. Now she saw the Veil itself, that barrier between worlds. It writhed like a living thing, shot through with cracks of brilliant light. Things pressed against it from the other side. Hungry things. Patient things. "The solstice approaches." Isolde's voice came from very far away. "The Veil weakens. What has been separated seeks reunification."
total_cost0.1956

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.51
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"wavering"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"depths"
count2
highlights
0"loomed"
1"warmth"
2"shimmered"
3"chill"
4"crystal"
5"whisper"
6"firmly"
7"wavering"
8"stomach"
9"lurch"
10"dancing"
11"flickered"
12"could feel"
13"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1458
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1127
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Isolde17
Half-Fae1
Rory22
Nyx7
October2
Richmond1
Park1
Eva1
Fae3
Grove3
Earth1
Water1
Like3
Veil1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Rory"
4"Nyx"
5"October"
6"Eva"
7"Fae"
8"Water"
9"Like"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.524
windowScore0.667
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if walking through a curtain"
1"quite music, wasn't quite wind"
2"quite wind"
3"not quite touching"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.058
wordCount1458
matches
0"Not physically, but something deeper"
1"not the dancing sky above, but stars"
2"not painful but urgent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
63.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean29.16
std10.82
cv0.371
sampleLengths
036
128
228
322
422
531
638
713
830
917
103
1149
1213
1355
1440
1534
1633
1724
1823
1923
2038
2128
2233
2340
2422
2539
2627
275
2832
2944
3030
3134
3227
3327
3435
3532
3633
3735
3832
3938
4022
4135
4234
4312
4427
4546
463
4729
4838
4919
96.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"been polished"
1"being studied"
2"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences142
ratio0.056
matches
0"Colors blazed across her vision—hues that had no names, that shouldn't exist."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn asters, summer roses tangled with winter hellebores."
2"The light they cast changed constantly—now silver, now gold, now shades that made her teeth ache."
3"A sound like distant music drifted through the air—pipes or flutes, but played in harmonies that human instruments couldn't achieve."
4"Not darkness—something denser."
5"The Grove connected everything—Earth, Fae, perhaps even the demon realms."
6"\"You feel the possibilities.\" Isolde rose, and for a moment her form flickered—showing wings, showing armor, showing nothing at all."
7"Her own face, but wrong—eyes that held depths no human eyes should have."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1141
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03768624014022787
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007887817703768623
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean10.27
std5.19
cv0.506
sampleLengths
018
118
218
310
417
511
614
78
89
910
103
1122
129
133
1410
156
1619
1713
1811
1912
207
215
225
237
243
2512
2614
277
2816
298
305
3113
3210
3318
3414
355
3619
3716
3823
3911
406
4110
4214
433
4416
458
4612
478
483
4915
73.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4788732394366197
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners68
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Even the distant traffic sounds"
1"Instead of grey October clouds,"
2"More like being studied by"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences112
matches
0"She glanced at Isolde, who"
1"She tried for levity, but"
2"She took a breath and"
3"Her mind struggled to process"
4"She stumbled, catching herself against"
5"They stood in a circular"
6"She jerked back."
7"She planted them firmly, remembering"
8"Its surface reflected not the"
9"It regarded her with eyes"
10"She had to raise her"
11"Her own face, but wrong—eyes"
12"It writhed like a living"
ratio0.116
67.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences112
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed before"
1"Rory touched the Heartstone pendant"
2"She glanced at Isolde, who"
3"Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected"
4"Nyx's form rippled at the"
5"Rory squinted at the space"
6"The air shimmered, a heat-mirage"
7"Isolde moved forward, her silver"
8"The wind died."
9"Rory's breath caught as the"
10"She tried for levity, but"
11"Isolde stepped through first, disappearing"
12"Nyx followed, their form stretching"
13"Rory hesitated, fingers closing around"
14"The passage pulled at her."
15"She took a breath and"
16"The world tilted."
17"Colors blazed across her vision—hues"
18"The ground beneath her feet"
19"Her mind struggled to process"
ratio0.786
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now she saw the Veil"
ratio0.009
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Trees grew there, but their shapes twisted into geometries that made her stomach lurch."
1"Water that wasn't water lapped at the pool's edges despite its stillness."
2"Her own face, but wrong—eyes that held depths no human eyes should have."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She tried, but her voice came out strained"
1"Isolde approached, her reflection wavering in ways that defied physics"
2"Nyx moved, their shadow-form reflecting as solid darkness against the stars"
3"Rory paused, trying to articulate the sensation"
4"Isolde's hand hovered, not quite touching"
88.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx's form solidified (solidify)"
1"Rory spoke (speak)"
2"She had to (had to)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.163
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.122
80.0993%