| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.51 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1475 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1475 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "firmly" | | 7 | "wavering" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1458 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 69 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Isolde | 17 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | Nyx | 7 | | October | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Water | 1 | | Like | 3 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "October" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Fae" | | 8 | "Water" | | 9 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.524 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if walking through a curtain" | | 1 | "quite music, wasn't quite wind" | | 2 | "quite wind" | | 3 | "not quite touching" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.058 | | wordCount | 1458 | | matches | | 0 | "Not physically, but something deeper" | | 1 | "not the dancing sky above, but stars" | | 2 | "not painful but urgent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.15% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 29.16 | | std | 10.82 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 96.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "been polished" | | 1 | "being studied" | | 2 | "were made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Colors blazed across her vision—hues that had no names, that shouldn't exist." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn asters, summer roses tangled with winter hellebores." | | 2 | "The light they cast changed constantly—now silver, now gold, now shades that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "A sound like distant music drifted through the air—pipes or flutes, but played in harmonies that human instruments couldn't achieve." | | 4 | "Not darkness—something denser." | | 5 | "The Grove connected everything—Earth, Fae, perhaps even the demon realms." | | 6 | "\"You feel the possibilities.\" Isolde rose, and for a moment her form flickered—showing wings, showing armor, showing nothing at all." | | 7 | "Her own face, but wrong—eyes that held depths no human eyes should have." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03768624014022787 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007887817703768623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 10.27 | | std | 5.19 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 73.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4788732394366197 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 89.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the distant traffic sounds" | | 1 | "Instead of grey October clouds," | | 2 | "More like being studied by" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Isolde, who" | | 1 | "She tried for levity, but" | | 2 | "She took a breath and" | | 3 | "Her mind struggled to process" | | 4 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 5 | "They stood in a circular" | | 6 | "She jerked back." | | 7 | "She planted them firmly, remembering" | | 8 | "Its surface reflected not the" | | 9 | "It regarded her with eyes" | | 10 | "She had to raise her" | | 11 | "Her own face, but wrong—eyes" | | 12 | "It writhed like a living" |
| | ratio | 0.116 | |
| 67.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed before" | | 1 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "She glanced at Isolde, who" | | 3 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 4 | "Nyx's form rippled at the" | | 5 | "Rory squinted at the space" | | 6 | "The air shimmered, a heat-mirage" | | 7 | "Isolde moved forward, her silver" | | 8 | "The wind died." | | 9 | "Rory's breath caught as the" | | 10 | "She tried for levity, but" | | 11 | "Isolde stepped through first, disappearing" | | 12 | "Nyx followed, their form stretching" | | 13 | "Rory hesitated, fingers closing around" | | 14 | "The passage pulled at her." | | 15 | "She took a breath and" | | 16 | "The world tilted." | | 17 | "Colors blazed across her vision—hues" | | 18 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 19 | "Her mind struggled to process" |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees grew there, but their shapes twisted into geometries that made her stomach lurch." | | 1 | "Water that wasn't water lapped at the pool's edges despite its stillness." | | 2 | "Her own face, but wrong—eyes that held depths no human eyes should have." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She tried, but her voice came out strained" | | 1 | "Isolde approached, her reflection wavering in ways that defied physics" | | 2 | "Nyx moved, their shadow-form reflecting as solid darkness against the stars" | | 3 | "Rory paused, trying to articulate the sensation" | | 4 | "Isolde's hand hovered, not quite touching" |
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| 88.78% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx's form solidified (solidify)" | | 1 | "Rory spoke (speak)" | | 2 | "She had to (had to)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.082 | | leniency | 0.163 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |