Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYKZ7WHXJK143005DDEHN7

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Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000285
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the pavement, a cold,relentless drumming that blurred the neon reflections of Soho’s street signs. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted in the damp night air as she pushed her salt-and-pepper cropped hair back from her sharp jawline. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her left wrist, a metronome to the pounding of her own heart. The suspect, a shadow in the downpour, had vanished around the corner of a narrow alley, leaving only the echo of hurried footsteps and the scent of ozone on the damp brick. Quinn’s military precision kicked in. She didn’t run, but moved with controlled urgency, her boots splashing through puddles that mirrored the flickering green neon of the Raven’s Nest sign above a grimy doorway. The bar’s secret room, accessible through a hidden bookshelf, was a known haunt for the supernatural and the desperate. Her partner’s death three years ago, a case shrouded in unexplained supernatural origins, had taught her to trust no one, especially not in places like this. The alley opened onto a wider street, deserted except for a lone, dripping dumpster. Quinn’s eyes scanned the wet pavement, searching for a trace. A discarded cigarette butt, still warm, lay near the dumpster’s base. She crouched, her gloved hand brushing the cold metal. The butt was fresh, the tobacco still dark. The suspect had paused here, perhaps to catch his breath or check a map. Quinn’s gaze snapped upwards, tracking the faint, irregular pattern of light filtering through the grimy skylight of the Raven’s Nest’s hidden entrance. She pushed through the heavy, unmarked door of the bar. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of stale beer, damp wool, and something else – a faint, metallic tang beneath the usual pub musk. The walls were lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs, their edges curling in the low light. A bartender, a man with a neatly trimmed beard, polished a glass with a rag that smelled of lemon oil. He didn’t look up. Quinn’s eyes darted to the bookshelf near the back. The books looked ordinary, but she knew the trick. She pressed her gloved palm against the second shelf from the top, feeling for the slight give. It moved. A hidden panel slid open, revealing a narrow staircase descending into darkness. “He went down,” Quinn stated, her voice low but carrying in the quiet bar. The bartender’s eyes flicked towards the staircase, then back to his glass. “You seen anyone matching this description? Tall, dark coat, running?” The bartender shrugged, his expression unreadable. “Just the usual crowd. Lost souls looking for a drink or a deal.” He didn’t mention the bone token requirement for the Veil Market, a detail Quinn already knew. The bone token was a key, a symbol of entry into the hidden world beneath the city, a world her partner had stumbled into and never returned from. Quinn didn’t wait. She took the stairs two at a time, the wooden steps groaning under her weight. The air grew colder, thicker, smelling of damp earth and something organic, like decaying leaves. At the bottom, a narrow corridor led to a heavy, ancient-looking door. Quinn’s hand hovered over the handle, the weight of her watch on her wrist a constant reminder of the time ticking away, of the danger closing in. The bone token. She didn’t have one. The suspect had it, probably. He’d used it to gain entry. Quinn’s knuckles whitened on the door handle. Her partner’s death echoed in her mind, a cold, sharp reminder of what happened when you crossed into the Veil Market unprepared. The supernatural, the unknown – it had taken him. Should she follow? The chase was her duty, but the Veil Market was a place where rules didn’t apply, where the supernatural lurked in the shadows. A soft, rhythmic tapping came from behind the door. Not a knock, but a deliberate, insistent sound, like a heartbeat against wood. It stopped. Silence. Then, the handle turned. The door creaked open a fraction, revealing a pair of eyes, wide and wary, peering out from the darkness within. A hand, rough and calloused, pushed the door wider, revealing a face partially obscured by shadow. “Detective Quinn,” a voice said, low and familiar. “You shouldn’t be here.” It was Tomás Herrera, his warm brown eyes holding a mix of concern and something else – resignation? He held a small, ornate bone token in his hand, its surface smooth and cold. “The suspect is inside. He came looking for something specific. Something dangerous.” Quinn’s gaze flicked past him, into the gloom of the Veil Market. The air hummed with a low, unnatural energy. Strange lights, like captured fireflies, pulsed in the distance. The scent of exotic spices and ozone hung heavy. The bone token was the key, but it was also a symbol of the danger within. Her partner had died here. Her instincts screamed at her to turn back, to call for backup, to stay on the streets where she understood the rules. But the suspect was inside. And the chase… it had a momentum of its own. The rain lashed against the window of the hidden room, a relentless reminder of the world she’d left behind. The Veil Market was a place of shadows and secrets, a place where the supernatural bled into the mundane. To follow meant stepping into the unknown, into a territory where her experience meant nothing, where the rules she lived by were meaningless. “Then I’ll find him,” Quinn said, her voice firm, cutting through the tension. She didn’t look at Tomás, didn’t acknowledge the warning in his eyes. “Where is he?” Tomás hesitated, then stepped aside, holding the bone token out towards her. “This way. But be careful. The Veil Market doesn’t forgive mistakes.” Quinn took the bone token, its coldness seeping into her glove. She looked at it, then at the dark doorway. The rain continued its assault outside, a curtain of grey. Inside, the Veil Market waited, a labyrinth of shadows and secrets. The chase had led her here. The decision was made. She stepped through the doorway, the bone token clutched in her hand, the sound of the rain fading behind her as she entered the heart of the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"reminder"
count3
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"echo"
2"footsteps"
3"scanned"
4"flicked"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"reminder"
8"echoed"
9"rhythmic"
10"silence"
11"familiar"
12"gloom"
13"pulsed"
14"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1043
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount981
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven2
Nest2
Veil6
Market6
Tomás3
Herrera1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Market"
5"Tomás"
6"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.837
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.959
wordCount1043
matches
0"Not a knock, but a deliberate, insistent sound, like a heartbeat against wood"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
67.49% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean61.35
std23.7
cv0.386
sampleLengths
089
178
288
377
449
536
663
772
882
965
1012
1145
1281
1376
1428
1523
1679
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"were lined"
1"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"Inside, the air was thick with the smell of stale beer, damp wool, and something else – a faint, metallic tang beneath the usual pub musk."
1"The supernatural, the unknown – it had taken him."
2"It was Tomás Herrera, his warm brown eyes holding a mix of concern and something else – resignation?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount983
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.022380467955239063
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007121057985757884
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.72
std7.58
cv0.596
sampleLengths
016
122
219
332
45
528
619
726
814
910
1011
119
128
1314
1422
1510
1626
1717
1820
194
209
219
2217
232
2412
2514
2612
2710
286
2929
3028
313
3215
3315
3412
3527
363
374
385
396
407
4122
429
433
4423
459
4613
472
481
494
43.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2926829268292683
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners24
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, the handle turned."
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She didn’t run, but moved"
2"Her partner’s death three years"
3"She crouched, her gloved hand"
4"She pushed through the heavy,"
5"He didn’t look up."
6"She pressed her gloved palm"
7"He didn’t mention the bone"
8"She took the stairs two"
9"She didn’t have one."
10"He’d used it to gain"
11"Her partner’s death echoed in"
12"It was Tomás Herrera, his"
13"He held a small, ornate"
14"Her partner had died here."
15"Her instincts screamed at her"
16"it had a momentum of"
17"She didn’t look at Tomás,"
18"She looked at it, then"
19"She stepped through the doorway,"
ratio0.27
27.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rain lashed the pavement, a"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted"
2"Her worn leather watch ticked"
3"The suspect, a shadow in"
4"Quinn’s military precision kicked in."
5"She didn’t run, but moved"
6"The bar’s secret room, accessible"
7"Her partner’s death three years"
8"The alley opened onto a"
9"Quinn’s eyes scanned the wet"
10"A discarded cigarette butt, still"
11"She crouched, her gloved hand"
12"The butt was fresh, the"
13"The suspect had paused here,"
14"Quinn’s gaze snapped upwards, tracking"
15"She pushed through the heavy,"
16"The walls were lined with"
17"A bartender, a man with"
18"He didn’t look up."
19"Quinn’s eyes darted to the"
ratio0.865
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"To follow meant stepping into"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rain lashed the pavement, a cold,relentless drumming that blurred the neon reflections of Soho’s street signs."
1"She didn’t run, but moved with controlled urgency, her boots splashing through puddles that mirrored the flickering green neon of the Raven’s Nest sign above a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn stated, her voice low but carrying in the quiet bar"
1"He didn’t, a detail Quinn already knew"
2"Quinn said, her voice firm, cutting through the tension"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"He didn’t (do)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.444
79.2826%