Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYM2N234S0G25JXG676QZP

Run Details

Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.027750
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down Dean Street, her worn leather boots slapping through puddles that reflected the garish neon of Soho's nightlife. Twenty meters ahead, the figure in the dark hoodie vaulted over a bicycle rack with practiced ease. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" The suspect didn't even glance back. Quinn's lungs burned as she pushed harder, her sharp jaw clenched against the cold needles of rain that pelted her face. The suspect took a sharp left into an alley, and Quinn followed, her shoulder grazing the wet brick wall as she rounded the corner at full speed. The alley opened onto Greek Street. A black taxi honked as the suspect darted across the road between moving traffic. Quinn raised her badge high and charged after him, forcing a Mercedes to slam its brakes. The driver leaned on the horn, but she was already past, closing the distance. She'd been tailing this one for three weeks. Tommy Herrera, the former paramedic who'd somehow found employment patching up gangbangers and drug dealers in Shoreditch. His name kept appearing in her investigation, always at the edges, always just out of reach. Tonight she'd finally spotted him leaving The Raven's Nest, that dive bar where half her suspects seemed to congregate. Herrera cut through Old Compton Street, weaving between clusters of theater-goers huddled beneath umbrellas. Quinn shouldered past them, ignoring the protests. Her target had youth and desperation on his side, but she had endurance. Eighteen years on the force, and she'd never lost a foot chase yet. The rain intensified, turning the streets into rivers of reflected light. Red, blue, green—every storefront bled color into the flowing water. Herrera glanced back for the first time, and Quinn caught a glimpse of his face beneath the hood. Fear. Good. Let him be scared. He turned down a narrow side street she didn't recognize, one of those medieval lanes that still threaded through London's modern façade. The walls pressed close on either side, and the sounds of Soho faded behind them. Quinn's hand instinctively went to her hip, checking for her baton. Still there. Her radio bounced against her other hip. The lane spilled into a small courtyard. Herrera stopped, spinning to face her. His chest heaved, and rain dripped from his nose. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck caught what little light penetrated this forgotten space. "Nowhere to run, Tommy." "You don't understand." His accent thickened with exertion, consonants sharp. "You need to let me go." "Not how this works." Quinn advanced slowly, hands visible, non-threatening. Standard approach. "Just want to talk. Ask you some questions about your clientele." "I provide medical care to people who can't access it through normal channels. That's not a crime." "Practicing without a license is." Quinn took another step. "But I'm not interested in that. I want to know about The Raven's Nest. The people you meet there." Herrera's eyes darted left, toward what looked like a service entrance to one of the surrounding buildings. A metal door, painted black, almost invisible against the dark brick. No handle on the outside, but Quinn noticed something—a small indentation at chest height. "Don't even think about it." He bolted. Quinn surged forward, but Herrera was faster over the short distance. He pulled something from his pocket—it gleamed white in the darkness—and pressed it into the indentation. The door swung inward with a pneumatic hiss that shouldn't have come from a service entrance. She caught the door before it could close, yanking it open. Beyond lay not a building interior but a staircase descending into earth and stone. Industrial lights lined the walls at irregular intervals, casting harsh shadows. The air that rose from below carried strange scents: incense, ozone, something metallic underneath. Herrera was already halfway down the first flight, his footsteps echoing. Quinn hesitated. This wasn't procedure. She should call for backup, wait for support. But she'd lost suspects before by following protocol, and this was different. This was connected to everything she'd been investigating, all the strange threads that had started appearing three years ago, right around when Morris— No. Focus. She descended. The staircase went deeper than any Tube station she'd ever visited. The walls changed from modern concrete to older brick, then to stone that looked centuries old. The temperature dropped with each level, and the sounds from above disappeared entirely, replaced by a distant hum that seemed to come from the walls themselves. At the bottom, the passage opened into a tunnel that stretched in both directions. Victorian era, she guessed from the architecture, but the lighting was new. Herrera stood thirty meters to her left, caught in the intersection of light and shadow. Behind him, the tunnel mouth glowed with a warmer illumination, and voices drifted out—many voices, speaking in languages she couldn't identify. "Last chance, Quinn." Herrera's voice bounced off the curved ceiling. "Turn around. Forget you saw this." "You know my name." "Everyone knows your name down here. The detective who keeps asking questions. Keeps poking into things she shouldn't." "What is this place?" "Somewhere you're not supposed to be. Somewhere that operates on rules you don't understand." "Try me." Herrera ran his hand through his wet curls, water droplets scattering. The scar on his left forearm caught the light as he moved. "The Veil Market. It's neutral ground. You follow me in there, you're not police anymore. You're just another person, subject to their justice, their laws." "There's only one set of laws that matter, and I enforce them." "Your laws don't reach down here." The hum grew louder, and Quinn realized it wasn't coming from the walls. It was coming from ahead, from whatever lay beyond the tunnel mouth. Music? Machinery? Something else entirely? Herrera turned and walked backward into the light, his hands raised in a gesture that might have been surrender or warning. "Don't say I didn't give you a choice." Then he disappeared into the glow. Quinn's right hand found her radio. Protocol dictated she call this in. Report the location. Request backup. But what would she say? That she'd chased a suspect into an underground tunnel that shouldn't exist? That he'd entered some kind of market beneath Camden? They'd pull her off the case. Again. Just like after Morris. The warm light beckoned. Beyond it lay answers to questions she'd been asking for three years. Questions about the cases that made no sense, the witnesses who disappeared, the evidence that defied explanation. Her thumb hovered over the radio's call button. Behind her, the staircase climbed back to rain and neon and the familiar dangers of London's streets. Ahead, the unknown hummed with possibility and threat. Quinn took her hand off the radio. She checked her baton one more time, rolled her shoulders back with military precision, and walked toward the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn advanced slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
95.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"jaw clenched"
2"charged"
3"standard"
4"footsteps"
5"echoing"
6"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Victorian era, she guessed from the architecture, but the lighting was new."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount961
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Dean1
Street3
Soho2
Greek1
Mercedes1
Herrera11
Shoreditch1
Raven1
Nest1
Old1
Compton1
London2
Saint1
Christopher1
Standard1
Morris2
Tube1
Camden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Greek"
4"Shoreditch"
5"Old"
6"Compton"
7"London"
globalScore0.72
windowScore0.667
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a service entrance to one of"
1"hum that seemed to come from the walls themselves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.877
wordCount1140
matches
0"not a building interior but a staircase descending into earth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27.8
std19.79
cv0.712
sampleLengths
044
13
254
350
460
547
645
757
837
94
1016
1123
1217
1328
1442
155
162
1743
1850
1911
2048
212
222
2353
2462
2516
264
2718
284
2914
302
3148
3212
336
3430
3529
366
3754
3833
3933
4026
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"wasn't coming"
1"was coming"
10.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences108
ratio0.046
matches
0"Red, blue, green—every storefront bled color into the flowing water."
1"No handle on the outside, but Quinn noticed something—a small indentation at chest height."
2"He pulled something from his pocket—it gleamed white in the darkness—and pressed it into the indentation."
3"This was connected to everything she'd been investigating, all the strange threads that had started appearing three years ago, right around when Morris—"
4"Behind him, the tunnel mouth glowed with a warmer illumination, and voices drifted out—many voices, speaking in languages she couldn't identify."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02481902792140641
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005170630816959669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean10.56
std6.46
cv0.612
sampleLengths
027
117
23
36
421
527
66
714
816
914
108
1117
1216
1319
1414
157
1613
1713
1811
1910
2018
211
221
234
2422
2515
2611
272
287
297
306
319
3215
334
3410
356
3610
372
3811
3917
409
4119
4217
4311
4414
455
462
4711
4816
4916
82.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5277777777777778
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners57
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then he disappeared into the"
1"Just like after Morris."
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences78
matches
0"She'd been tailing this one"
1"His name kept appearing in"
2"Her target had youth and"
3"He turned down a narrow"
4"Her radio bounced against her"
5"His chest heaved, and rain"
6"His accent thickened with exertion,"
7"He pulled something from his"
8"She caught the door before"
9"She should call for backup,"
10"It was coming from ahead,"
11"They'd pull her off the"
12"Her thumb hovered over the"
13"She checked her baton one"
ratio0.179
75.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences78
matches
0"The suspect didn't even glance"
1"Quinn's lungs burned as she"
2"The suspect took a sharp"
3"The alley opened onto Greek"
4"A black taxi honked as"
5"Quinn raised her badge high"
6"The driver leaned on the"
7"She'd been tailing this one"
8"Tommy Herrera, the former paramedic"
9"His name kept appearing in"
10"Tonight she'd finally spotted him"
11"Herrera cut through Old Compton"
12"Quinn shouldered past them, ignoring"
13"Her target had youth and"
14"The rain intensified, turning the"
15"Herrera glanced back for the"
16"He turned down a narrow"
17"The walls pressed close on"
18"Quinn's hand instinctively went to"
19"Her radio bounced against her"
ratio0.769
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain hammered the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down Dean Street, her worn leather boots slapping through puddles that reflected the garish neon o…"
1"Quinn's lungs burned as she pushed harder, her sharp jaw clenched against the cold needles of rain that pelted her face."
2"This was connected to everything she'd been investigating, all the strange threads that had started appearing three years ago, right around when Morris—"
3"The walls changed from modern concrete to older brick, then to stone that looked centuries old."
4"The temperature dropped with each level, and the sounds from above disappeared entirely, replaced by a distant hum that seemed to come from the walls themselves…"
5"Questions about the cases that made no sense, the witnesses who disappeared, the evidence that defied explanation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn advanced slowly, hands visible, non-threatening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4885%