Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYMCWGVJB12HPB75S39ZQT

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Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.005025
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of the raven sign flickered against the wet London pavement as Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest. Raindrops clung to her straight black hair as she shrugged off her soaked jacket, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood washing over her like a memory. Behind the bar, a man with grey-streaked auburn hair looked up from the glass he was polishing. His hazel eyes widened almost imperceptibly, then narrowed in recognition. Aurora froze mid-step, one hand still on her jacket collar. "Silas?" His fingers stilled around the tumbler. "Laila." The old nickname hung between them like smoke. He hadn't called her that in seven years. She moved closer, taking in the lines around his eyes that hadn't been there before, the way his neatly trimmed beard now showed more grey than auburn. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light as he set the glass down. "I didn't know you were back in London." "Few months now." His voice carried the same quiet authority she remembered, but something beneath it had changed—rougher, like gravel underfoot. "You look well." Aurora slid onto a barstool, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she'd never broken. "You don't. You look tired." Silas raised an eyebrow but didn't rise to the bait. Instead, he reached beneath the bar and produced a bottle of her favourite whiskey. "Drink?" She nodded, watching him pour with that same precision she recalled from her childhood, when he'd been her father's colleague, then her confidant after her parents' divorce. The walls around them were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, some new since she'd last been here, others hauntingly familiar. "Still collecting maps, I see." "Still collecting stories, you mean." He slid the glass toward her, their fingers brushing for a fraction of a second. "What brings you to my bar after all this time?" "I live upstairs now. Flat above." She took a sip, the warmth spreading through her chest. "Small world." "Smallest." Silas leaned against the back counter, favoring his left leg—the one with the old knee injury she'd only learned about years after it happened. "I heard about Cardiff. And Evan." Aurora's grip tightened on the glass. "Of course you did. You hear everything." "Not everything." His gaze drifted to the black-and-white photograph behind her—a younger version of himself standing in front of Prague Castle, arm in a sling. "Not nearly enough." The unspoken words hung between them, heavier than the London fog outside. He'd asked her to join him after his early retirement, offered her a job, a purpose. She'd chosen university instead, then Evan, then the life that had nearly broken her. "You never answered my letters." Her voice barely carried over the soft jazz playing from hidden speakers. Silas turned to wipe down the bar with a cloth, his movements methodical. "You never needed me to." "Everyone needs someone, Silas. Even you." She watched his shoulders tense almost imperceptibly. "What happened in Prague? The real story, not the official one." He set the cloth down and met her eyes directly for the first time since she'd entered. "Some truths are too heavy to carry, Aurora. Even for old friends." "Then share the weight." She reached across the bar, her fingers nearly touching his. "That's what friends do." Silas studied her face for a long moment, as if searching for the girl he'd known in the woman before him. "The operation wasn't botched. It was betrayed." Aurora leaned back, the implications settling in her mind like stones in water. "By who?" "The question is always who benefits." He tapped the silver signet ring on the bar, a nervous gesture she'd never seen him make before. "The same people who benefited from your father's sudden career change after that case in Belfast." Her breath caught in her throat. "My father was involved?" "Your father wanted out. They gave him an exit strategy. I took the fall." Silas's voice dropped to a near whisper. "Your safety was part of the deal." Aurora stared at the photograph of Prague, then back at Silas's weathered face. The weight of years pressed down on her—all the choices, all the paths not taken. "You sacrificed your career for mine?" "I made a choice. You made yours." He gestured around the bar. "We're both here now. That's something." She finished her whiskey in one swallow, the burn a welcome distraction from the ache in her chest. "I should have listened to you. About law school. About Evan. About everything." Silas poured her another drink without asking. "Regret is a luxury I can't afford. Neither can you." "Is that why you never contacted me? To spare me the luxury?" "To spare us both the lie that we could go back." He moved closer to her side of the bar, the limp in his left leg more pronounced now. "People change, Aurora. Cities change. The world changes." "But some things don't." She reached out and touched the photograph of Prague. "Like loyalty." Silas covered her hand with his, the silver signet ring cool against her skin. "Like regret." The jazz song ended, leaving only the sound of rain against the windows and the distant clink of glasses from the back room. For a moment, they were just two old friends in a dimly lit bar, the years between them stretching like the maps on the walls—full of destinations chosen and roads not traveled. Aurora pulled her hand away gently. "I should get upstairs. Early delivery tomorrow." Silas nodded, already moving back behind the bar. "The door to the back room is always open. If you ever need anything." "I know." She stood, pulling on her still-damp jacket. "It's good to see you, Silas." "You too, Laila." The old nickname again, softer this time. "Be careful out there." Aurora smiled faintly. "Always am." As she pushed open the heavy door and stepped back into the rainy London night, the green raven sign reflected in the puddles at her feet, she wondered how many years it would be before they spoke again, and who they would be by then.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.041
95.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"methodical"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"tracing"
3"eyebrow"
4"warmth"
5"unspoken"
6"methodical"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1036
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount743
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London3
Aurora8
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Prague3
Castle1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
2"Castle"
globalScore0.894
windowScore0.667
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if searching for the girl he'd known in the woman before him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1036
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.67
std12.84
cv0.521
sampleLengths
056
127
211
323
445
58
624
725
825
949
105
1130
1218
1331
1413
1528
1642
1717
1818
1924
2029
2118
2228
2315
2440
2510
2628
2734
2818
2931
3017
3112
3237
3315
3416
3555
3613
3722
3815
3914
405
4145
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was polishing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences83
ratio0.072
matches
0"\"Few months now.\" His voice carried the same quiet authority she remembered, but something beneath it had changed—rougher, like gravel underfoot."
1"Aurora slid onto a barstool, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she'd never broken."
2"\"Smallest.\" Silas leaned against the back counter, favoring his left leg—the one with the old knee injury she'd only learned about years after it happened."
3"\"Not everything.\" His gaze drifted to the black-and-white photograph behind her—a younger version of himself standing in front of Prague Castle, arm in a sling."
4"The weight of years pressed down on her—all the choices, all the paths not taken."
5"For a moment, they were just two old friends in a dimly lit bar, the years between them stretching like the maps on the walls—full of destinations chosen and roads not traveled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount438
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0365296803652968
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0091324200913242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.48
std8.41
cv0.674
sampleLengths
027
129
217
310
410
51
66
79
88
927
1018
118
1221
133
1420
155
1610
1714
181
1927
2022
215
2220
2310
2416
252
2625
276
286
297
3025
313
3212
3316
3414
3517
3613
375
3813
3911
4017
4112
4214
434
4421
457
4613
472
4824
4916
75.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4819277108433735
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners40
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Instead, he reached beneath the"
ratio0.02
44.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences50
matches
0"His hazel eyes widened almost"
1"His fingers stilled around the"
2"He hadn't called her that"
3"She moved closer, taking in"
4"His voice carried the same"
5"She nodded, watching him pour"
6"He slid the glass toward"
7"She took a sip, the"
8"His gaze drifted to the"
9"He'd asked her to join"
10"She'd chosen university instead, then"
11"Her voice barely carried over"
12"She watched his shoulders tense"
13"He set the cloth down"
14"She reached across the bar,"
15"He tapped the silver signet"
16"Her breath caught in her"
17"He gestured around the bar"
18"She finished her whiskey in"
19"He moved closer to her"
ratio0.44
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Raindrops clung to her straight"
2"His hazel eyes widened almost"
3"Aurora froze mid-step, one hand"
4"His fingers stilled around the"
5"The old nickname hung between"
6"He hadn't called her that"
7"She moved closer, taking in"
8"The silver signet ring on"
9"His voice carried the same"
10"Aurora slid onto a barstool,"
11"Silas raised an eyebrow but"
12"She nodded, watching him pour"
13"The walls around them were"
14"He slid the glass toward"
15"She took a sip, the"
16"Silas leaned against the back"
17"Aurora's grip tightened on the"
18"His gaze drifted to the"
19"The unspoken words hung between"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He slid, their fingers brushing for a fraction of a second"
1"She took, the warmth spreading through her chest"
2"She reached, her fingers nearly touching his"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.6203%