| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.306 | | leniency | 0.612 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.041 | |
| 95.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1050 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1050 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "methodical" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1036 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 743 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Aurora | 8 | | Carter | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 9 | | Prague | 3 | | Castle | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Prague" | | 2 | "Castle" |
| | globalScore | 0.894 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for the girl he'd known in the woman before him" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1036 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 24.67 | | std | 12.84 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 55 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Few months now.\" His voice carried the same quiet authority she remembered, but something beneath it had changed—rougher, like gravel underfoot." | | 1 | "Aurora slid onto a barstool, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she'd never broken." | | 2 | "\"Smallest.\" Silas leaned against the back counter, favoring his left leg—the one with the old knee injury she'd only learned about years after it happened." | | 3 | "\"Not everything.\" His gaze drifted to the black-and-white photograph behind her—a younger version of himself standing in front of Prague Castle, arm in a sling." | | 4 | "The weight of years pressed down on her—all the choices, all the paths not taken." | | 5 | "For a moment, they were just two old friends in a dimly lit bar, the years between them stretching like the maps on the walls—full of destinations chosen and roads not traveled." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 438 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0365296803652968 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0091324200913242 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 12.48 | | std | 8.41 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 75.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4819277108433735 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he reached beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 44.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "His hazel eyes widened almost" | | 1 | "His fingers stilled around the" | | 2 | "He hadn't called her that" | | 3 | "She moved closer, taking in" | | 4 | "His voice carried the same" | | 5 | "She nodded, watching him pour" | | 6 | "He slid the glass toward" | | 7 | "She took a sip, the" | | 8 | "His gaze drifted to the" | | 9 | "He'd asked her to join" | | 10 | "She'd chosen university instead, then" | | 11 | "Her voice barely carried over" | | 12 | "She watched his shoulders tense" | | 13 | "He set the cloth down" | | 14 | "She reached across the bar," | | 15 | "He tapped the silver signet" | | 16 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 17 | "He gestured around the bar" | | 18 | "She finished her whiskey in" | | 19 | "He moved closer to her" |
| | ratio | 0.44 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon glow of" | | 1 | "Raindrops clung to her straight" | | 2 | "His hazel eyes widened almost" | | 3 | "Aurora froze mid-step, one hand" | | 4 | "His fingers stilled around the" | | 5 | "The old nickname hung between" | | 6 | "He hadn't called her that" | | 7 | "She moved closer, taking in" | | 8 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 9 | "His voice carried the same" | | 10 | "Aurora slid onto a barstool," | | 11 | "Silas raised an eyebrow but" | | 12 | "She nodded, watching him pour" | | 13 | "The walls around them were" | | 14 | "He slid the glass toward" | | 15 | "She took a sip, the" | | 16 | "Silas leaned against the back" | | 17 | "Aurora's grip tightened on the" | | 18 | "His gaze drifted to the" | | 19 | "The unspoken words hung between" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He slid, their fingers brushing for a fraction of a second" | | 1 | "She took, the warmth spreading through her chest" | | 2 | "She reached, her fingers nearly touching his" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |