| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the grove hummed finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.781 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.04 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 92.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1980 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1980 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "long shadow" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "fluttered" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1968 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 30 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1853 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Silas | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Laila | 1 | | London | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Malphora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Malphora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 81.19% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like rusted keys and sugar" | | 1 | "sounded like it belonged to a different er" | | 2 | "sounded like a woman who remembered songs" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.033 | | wordCount | 1968 | | matches | | 0 | "not with a voice but with a memory" | | 1 | "not merely full of creatures but full of attention, as if eyes hovered within leaves" | | 2 | "not beneath weight but beneath expectation" | | 3 | "not like a heart but like a drum counting down" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 33.93 | | std | 24.49 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 88 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 72 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 76 | | 28 | 86 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 64 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 46 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 52 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 98.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "being recognised" | | 1 | "being folded" | | 2 | "been borrowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 330 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind outside the stones lay flat and sleeping; inside, leaves sighed in a rhythm that didn't match the world beyond." | | 1 | "Wildflowers leaned forward and unhoused their night scent—sweet, old, and wrong for the season." | | 2 | "For a second, the grove answered with an echo that wasn't an echo; it rearranged her words into something softer, a half-sentence that left meaning hanging like a torn seam." | | 3 | "Under the pulse, something old as the stones hummed—not sound, texture." | | 4 | "It shaped itself from the hush behind the stones and still sounded like it belonged to a different era—papered and re-edged." | | 5 | "The pendant's glow throbbed; the crimson caught in the darkness and flung back a colour like dried wine." | | 6 | "She moved again toward the centre of the grove, and the temperature shifted in increments; cool trickled from the trees, then heat crept up from the roots." | | 7 | "A laugh answered—thin and layered, as if several people had laughed into the same echoing cup." | | 8 | "Time loosened its ties; a moth fluttered across her vision and left months of dust in its wake." | | 9 | "Aurora heard the scrape of fabric—again the impression of someone wearing old clothes, clothes that had held conversations." | | 10 | "She felt the words like cold water thrown over her, and a sound—very soft—like paper being folded a thousand times, creased and uncreased, thrummed from the boundary stones." | | 11 | "She had been reasonable once; law school had taught her contingency plans and forms of argument." | | 12 | "The word she had not used in years—Malphora—slipped out of her like a lock yielding to pressure." | | 13 | "It stepped and the grass around it did not bend; it didn't need to." | | 14 | "A face arranged itself from the dark in a way that blurred the line between human and reflection—features that seemed both too familiar and rearranged." | | 15 | "Every sensible plan she'd made in the last months — to leave Evan, to take a job that kept her busy, to answer the unknown benefactor with caution and open eyes — evaporated into the night's stillness." | | 16 | "The figure took two steps forward, and sunlight-lightning—or moonlight—caught the edge of a cheekbone." | | 17 | "The figure's mouth began to move and formed the first word of something she thought she wouldn't hear again, and she opened her mouth to answer, to argue, to demand—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1865 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.028418230563002682 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0032171581769436996 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 12 | | std | 8.57 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 35.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.23780487804878048 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed the pendant flat" | | 1 | "She had told herself nothing" | | 2 | "Her jacket hair drawn tight" | | 3 | "It was louder than last" | | 4 | "It pulsed as if something" | | 5 | "Her voice landed on the" | | 6 | "She moved deeper, steps careful," | | 7 | "It shouldn't have." | | 8 | "Her laugh came short." | | 9 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 10 | "She had followed a stranger's" | | 11 | "She trusted answers more than" | | 12 | "It wasn't the rhythm of" | | 13 | "It was too slow and" | | 14 | "It wasn't a voice she" | | 15 | "It shaped itself from the" | | 16 | "Her throat tightened." | | 17 | "She slid her free hand" | | 18 | "Her words left a small" | | 19 | "She moved again toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.393 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 128 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Moonlight slicked their faces and" | | 2 | "Aurora tuned her breath to" | | 3 | "The silver chain whispered as" | | 4 | "She pressed the pendant flat" | | 5 | "She had told herself nothing" | | 6 | "A stupid promise, spoken alone" | | 7 | "The grove accepted it without" | | 8 | "The boundary oaks breathed." | | 9 | "The wind outside the stones" | | 10 | "Something in the air tasted" | | 11 | "Wildflowers leaned forward and unhoused" | | 12 | "Her jacket hair drawn tight" | | 13 | "The pendant thudded warm and" | | 14 | "It was louder than last" | | 15 | "It pulsed as if something" | | 16 | "Her voice landed on the" | | 17 | "The petals of a bluebell" | | 18 | "She moved deeper, steps careful," | | 19 | "It shouldn't have." |
| | ratio | 0.948 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed the pendant flat against the crescent scar on her left wrist, and the warmth hopped along her skin as if it recognised the scar's little habit of re…" | | 1 | "The wind outside the stones lay flat and sleeping; inside, leaves sighed in a rhythm that didn't match the world beyond." | | 2 | "For a second, the grove answered with an echo that wasn't an echo; it rearranged her words into something softer, a half-sentence that left meaning hanging like…" | | 3 | "She had followed a stranger's instructions to a place that held no address on any map, guided by a light the size of a thumbnail that had started pulsing in poc…" | | 4 | "It left behind the smell of wet paper and the sudden, wrong certainty that footsteps tracked every path she'd taken from Cardiff to London to here." | | 5 | "The answer came as a line of words she had not spoken aloud for years: the name of the barrister who'd sat at his polished desk and smiled like a trap, the soft…" | | 6 | "It sounded pleased in a way that made the hair along her arms prick." | | 7 | "Aurora heard the scrape of fabric—again the impression of someone wearing old clothes, clothes that had held conversations." | | 8 | "The grove felt alive in a way that made the hair on her skin stand at attention: not merely full of creatures but full of attention, as if eyes hovered within l…" | | 9 | "Silence fell heavy and then layered, as if the grove considered multiple answers and layered them into one that had no single truth." | | 10 | "It had the clarity of someone who had been listening to incantations for a long time and had learned to repeat them in perfect tones." | | 11 | "Every sensible plan she'd made in the last months — to leave Evan, to take a job that kept her busy, to answer the unknown benefactor with caution and open eyes…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.656 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.048 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |