Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYMK1T8PQN3RRZKT332XAK

Run Details

Duration:
4m 56s
Cost:
$0.028559
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drilled the pavement like buckshot. Detective Harlow Quinn cut through the downpour, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped severe against her skull, military bearing reduced to stark function. Eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police had taught her that wet prey made mistakes—slipping on iron grates, misjudging the glare off wet tarmac, leaving tracks that glowed under sodium streetlamps. The suspect—hood up, shoulders twitching with adrenaline—vaulted a railing at the end of Brick Lane and vanished into the arterial veins of Camden. She checked her watch. Water beaded on the worn leather strap, the same band she'd cinched three years ago tomorrow morning, right before they found DS Morris in that empty warehouse with his heart stopped and his eyes open. Her jaw tightened, sharp angles cutting through the dim light. She didn't believe in anniversaries. She believed in momentum. Her shoes struck concrete in a rhythm that matched her pulse. The suspect had fifteen meters, maybe twenty. A silhouette against the sodium glare, then nothing. Steam rose from a vent as Quinn passed into the industrial belt near the canal. Fewer lights here. Fewer cameras. The kind of darkness that swallowed sound and regurgitated it as echoes. The figure glanced back. Pale flash—porcelain mask, or perhaps skin bleached by something worse than London's perpetual winter. Then they dropped. Not stumbled. Dropped, straight down, through a maintenance hatch that gaped like a missing tooth in the pavement. Quinn skidded to the edge. Her fingers scraped rough brick. Rusted iron steps descended into absolute black, carrying the stench of ozone and wet stone and something fermented. Below, footsteps rang hollow—descending, without end, into the city's buried architecture. She took the stairs three at a time. Her left wrist burned where the watch band chafed, eighteen years of habit wearing the leather soft and thin against her skin. Her breath came sharp, controlled. Military precision demanded oxygen discipline, not the ragged gasps of a rookie chasing dip artists through Spitalfields market. Each exhale fogged in the sudden cold. Forty steps. Fifty. The walls shifted from modern brick to Victorian ceramic, white tiles with a green stripe bisecting the grime. Abandoned Tube station. She knew these bones—London's sealed infrastructure, the veins they'd left to rot after the Blitz, forgotten by Transport for London but remembered by other things. A glow pulsed ahead. Not sodium. Not LED. Something blue and liquid that cast no shadows, that made her retinas ache with its wrongness. Quinn emerged onto a platform that shouldn't exist. The suspect stood at the platform's lip, facing a gate of brass and obsidian that shimmered like heat haze over asphalt. Beyond it, a cavern yawned—the old station tunnels converted into a bazaar that hurt to look at directly. Stalls lined the curved walls, their wares glowing with bioluminescence, with trapped lightning, with substances that moved against gravity in glass jars. Figures haggled in whispers that skittered along the ceiling like rodents. A vendor with a goat's head weighed pearls on a scale made of human finger bones. The air tasted of copper and myrrh. The Veil Market. Quinn flattened herself against the tunnel mouth. Her heart pounded against her ribs, an insistent prisoner trying to escape its cage of bone, but her hands stayed steady. She'd seen enough death to recognize its architecture. Morris hadn't died in a warehouse from cardiac arrest. He'd died somewhere like this. Somewhere that filed no paperwork, that spat bodies back into the world with no explanation but natural causes, leaving behind case files that gathered dust and questions that rotted her sleep. A gatekeeper materialized from the tilework. Seven feet tall, proportions scraped from a nightmare, wearing a porter's uniform stiff with decades of dust and mold. It held a ledger that dripped ink upward, defying gravity, the pages turning themselves. "Token." The word emerged not from a mouth but from the air itself, grinding like tectonic plates shifting beneath the crust, vibrating in Quinn's molars. The suspect reached into a coat pocket. Withdrew something white and slender. A bone—fifth metacarpal, human, or close enough to pass. The gatekeeper tilted its head, empty sockets where eyes should have been, then stepped aside. The brass bars screamed as they parted, a sound like tearing metal. The suspect slipped through. The crowd swallowed them whole, the hood disappearing behind a stall draped in velvet that moved without wind. Quinn stepped onto the platform. Her shoes squeaked on tile, too loud. The gatekeeper rotated, slow as rusted machinery, fixing her with that eyeless stare. Rainwater dripped from her chin onto the platform. It pooled dark as ink, refusing to evaporate in the strange warmth. "Token." She had her warrant card. She had her service Glock, heavy and reassuring against her ribs in its shoulder holster. She had eighteen years of believing the world operated on evidence, on cause and effect, on the certainty that her partner had made a mistake that night in the docks, had encountered a mugger with bad intentions rather than something that wore a human shape like a cheap suit. Above, the storm rattled Camden's streets. Normal people slept in normal beds. Below, the Market breathed—ancient, hungry, trading in contraband that defied physics and potions that rewrote memories. Quinn's hand drifted to her holster. Stopped. Morris had drawn his weapon in that warehouse. Morris had fired three rounds, marked in the wall behind him. The coroner had found the slugs intact, unexplained, while Morris lay dead from cardiac arrest at thirty-four, his face frozen in an expression the police photographer had called "surprise." The gatekeeper waited. Eternal. Patient. She could climb the stairs. Return to the surface. File the report. Let the suspect vanish into London's substrate, another unsolved entry in the ledger, another ghost for her collection. Keep her pension. Keep her sanity. Keep her life in the daylight world where monsters wore human masks and she knew the rules. Her fingers brushed the scarred leather of her watch strap. Three years of not knowing. Eighteen years of service. The weight of both pressed against her sternum, heavy as a bulletproof vest. The brass gate hummed. Beyond it, the suspect moved deeper, toward a stall where a woman with too many joints in her fingers counted out vials of liquid starlight. The truth waited there—whatever had killed Morris, whatever laws this place operated under, whatever real shape the world took when you peeled back the veneer. Quinn reached into her coat. Past her weapon, past her radio, to the evidence bag she'd carried since the crime scene six hours ago. Inside: a shard of white ceramic from the latest victim's apartment. Skeletal. Ancient. Pulled from a wall that showed no break on the outside. She held it out. "Let me through." The gatekeeper leaned down. Its breath smelled of iron and grave soil and the spaces between stars. The ceramic shard trembled in Quinn's steady grip. The creature straightened. Stepped aside. The brass screamed open. Quinn stood at the threshold. The Market exhaled against her face, warm and predatory, offering answers wrapped in teeth and danger. She adjusted her collar, set her shoulders to that familiar military angle, and lifted her foot to cross.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"grave"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"pulse"
2"echoes"
3"porcelain"
4"footsteps"
5"pulsed"
6"shimmered"
7"velvet"
8"warmth"
9"weight"
10"grave"
11"trembled"
12"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1198
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1192
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Metropolitan1
Police1
Brick1
Lane1
Camden2
Morris6
London4
Spitalfields1
Victorian1
Tube1
Blitz1
Transport1
Veil1
Market3
Glock1
Keep3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Camden"
4"Morris"
5"Blitz"
6"Market"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Spitalfields"
4"Victorian"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
33.06% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.669
wordCount1198
matches
0"no explanation but"
1"not from a mouth but from the air itself, grinding like tectonic plates shifting"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean37.44
std29.03
cv0.775
sampleLengths
080
158
258
321
418
539
6109
724
8103
93
1081
1139
121
1324
1448
1522
1645
171
1869
1928
2055
215
2253
2332
2454
2548
264
273
2825
295
304
3139
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs204
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences116
ratio0.078
matches
0"Eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police had taught her that wet prey made mistakes—slipping on iron grates, misjudging the glare off wet tarmac, leaving tracks that glowed under sodium streetlamps."
1"The suspect—hood up, shoulders twitching with adrenaline—vaulted a railing at the end of Brick Lane and vanished into the arterial veins of Camden."
2"Pale flash—porcelain mask, or perhaps skin bleached by something worse than London's perpetual winter."
3"Below, footsteps rang hollow—descending, without end, into the city's buried architecture."
4"She knew these bones—London's sealed infrastructure, the veins they'd left to rot after the Blitz, forgotten by Transport for London but remembered by other things."
5"Beyond it, a cavern yawned—the old station tunnels converted into a bazaar that hurt to look at directly."
6"A bone—fifth metacarpal, human, or close enough to pass."
7"Below, the Market breathed—ancient, hungry, trading in contraband that defied physics and potions that rewrote memories."
8"The truth waited there—whatever had killed Morris, whatever laws this place operated under, whatever real shape the world took when you peeled back the veneer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.017427385892116183
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008298755186721991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.33
std8.51
cv0.824
sampleLengths
06
121
230
323
44
535
610
75
84
911
107
118
1215
133
142
1512
164
1714
183
192
2016
215
225
2318
2411
258
2622
275
2818
297
302
311
3218
333
3425
354
362
372
3816
398
4021
4118
4222
4311
4416
457
463
477
4821
498
57.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.4396551724137931
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners51
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then they dropped."
1"Somewhere that filed no paperwork,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences101
matches
0"She checked her watch."
1"Her jaw tightened, sharp angles"
2"She didn't believe in anniversaries."
3"She believed in momentum."
4"Her shoes struck concrete in"
5"Her fingers scraped rough brick."
6"She took the stairs three"
7"Her left wrist burned where"
8"Her breath came sharp, controlled."
9"She knew these bones—London's sealed"
10"Her heart pounded against her"
11"She'd seen enough death to"
12"He'd died somewhere like this."
13"It held a ledger that"
14"Her shoes squeaked on tile,"
15"It pooled dark as ink,"
16"She had her warrant card."
17"She had her service Glock,"
18"She had eighteen years of"
19"She could climb the stairs."
ratio0.238
93.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences101
matches
0"Rain drilled the pavement like"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn cut through"
2"The suspect—hood up, shoulders twitching"
3"She checked her watch."
4"Water beaded on the worn"
5"Her jaw tightened, sharp angles"
6"She didn't believe in anniversaries."
7"She believed in momentum."
8"Her shoes struck concrete in"
9"The suspect had fifteen meters,"
10"A silhouette against the sodium"
11"Steam rose from a vent"
12"The kind of darkness that"
13"The figure glanced back."
14"Quinn skidded to the edge."
15"Her fingers scraped rough brick."
16"She took the stairs three"
17"Her left wrist burned where"
18"Her breath came sharp, controlled."
19"Military precision demanded oxygen discipline,"
ratio0.733
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police had taught her that wet prey made mistakes—slipping on iron grates, misjudging the glare off wet tarmac, leaving tra…"
1"Her shoes struck concrete in a rhythm that matched her pulse."
2"Something blue and liquid that cast no shadows, that made her retinas ache with its wrongness."
3"The suspect stood at the platform's lip, facing a gate of brass and obsidian that shimmered like heat haze over asphalt."
4"Stalls lined the curved walls, their wares glowing with bioluminescence, with trapped lightning, with substances that moved against gravity in glass jars."
5"Somewhere that filed no paperwork, that spat bodies back into the world with no explanation but natural causes, leaving behind case files that gathered dust and…"
6"It held a ledger that dripped ink upward, defying gravity, the pages turning themselves."
7"The crowd swallowed them whole, the hood disappearing behind a stall draped in velvet that moved without wind."
8"She had eighteen years of believing the world operated on evidence, on cause and effect, on the certainty that her partner had made a mistake that night in the …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6157%