Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYMKGKZTMDGNPQEABDQ6RQ

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21.2s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the door chimed, a sound Rory usually associated with the end of her shift. Tonight, it signalled the beginning. She slid a crate of empty bottles behind the bar, the glass clinking a familiar rhythm against the worn wood. Silas was polishing a tumbler, his movements economical and precise, a man who had performed this same action a thousand times. His silver signet ring caught the low light. "A word, Rory." He didn't look up from his task. She straightened, wiping her hands on a dishtowel. "If it's about the broken pint glass, I already told you, it was a tourist. Loud shirt. No spatial awareness." "Not the glass." He set the glass down with a soft click. "The man at the corner table. The one trying to become one with the shadows." Rory glanced over. The man was a study in stillness, his back to the wall, face partially obscured by the dim lighting of The Raven's Nest. He nursed a single malt, the amber liquid catching the light as he swirled it. Something about the set of his shoulders, the way he held his head, pricked at a memory she'd long since buried. "Should I be concerned?" "That depends on your memory." Silas finally met her gaze, his hazel eyes missing nothing. "He asked for you by name. Not Rory. Aurora." The name hit her like a punch to the gut. Aurora. The girl who wore cardigans and debated constitutional law. The girl who had a crescent-shaped scar on her wrist from falling off a swing in Bute Park. The girl who had left Cardiff in a hurry, leaving behind more than just an abusive ex. She walked towards the table, her footsteps silent on the old floorboards. As she drew closer, the shadows receded, revealing a face she hadn't seen in five years. It was older, harder, the softness of youth scraped away and replaced with something sharp and unforgiving. But the eyes were the same. A bright, piercing blue that had once been able to see straight through her. "Evan." He offered a thin, humourless smile. "Aurora. Or do you prefer Rory now? Silas called you that." Her hand instinctively went to her left wrist, tracing the small, faded scar through the fabric of her sleeve. "What are you doing here, Evan? How did you even find me?" "A man in my line of work has resources." He gestured to the empty chair opposite him. "Please. Sit. Let's not make a scene." She remained standing. "Your line of work? Last I heard, you were chasing ambulances for a two-bit firm in the Bay." "People change." He took a slow sip of his whisky. "You certainly have. Delivery driver. Living in a flat above a bar. It's a long way from a pupillage at a London chambers." "I like my life." The lie felt thin in the smoky air. "Do you?" He leaned forward, the light catching the tired lines around his eyes. "I saw your friend Eva last month. She told me everything. How you ran. How you're hiding." Rory pulled out the chair and sat, the legs scraping against the floorboards. "I'm not hiding. I'm living. There's a difference." "Is there?" He placed his glass on the table, the sound deliberate. "You used to have plans. Arguments about the rule of law over dinner. You were going to change the world, one meticulously crafted brief at a time. Now you ferry sweet and sour pork to students in Kennington." "And you're what? A successful man? You look tired, Evan. And you're drinking alone in a corner of a pub you had to track me down in. Who's really winning here?" The smile vanished. "I came to offer you something." "I don't want anything from you." "You haven't even heard it." He slid a folded piece of paper across the table. It was thick, expensive stock. "There are people asking questions. About your father. About his work in Dublin before he moved back to Cardiff." Rory stared at the paper, her blood running cold. "My father's a barrister. He's been a barrister for thirty years." "A very good one. But he wasn't always just a barrister, was he?" Evan’s voice was low, conspiratorial. "There was a time, early in his career, when he did some... consulting. For people who prefer to operate outside the courts." "You're lying." "Am I?" He leaned back, a flicker of the old, arrogant Evan she remembered returning to his expression. "Ask him about Belfast. 1998. The Good Friday Agreement. A lot of loose ends needed tying up. Your father was very good at tying loose ends." The bar seemed to fade away, the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, all of it dissolving into a dull hum. Her father, a man of impeccable integrity, a man who quoted Latin at the dinner table and believed in the sanctity of the law above all else. It was absurd. It was impossible. "Get out." "Aurora, this is real. These people aren't like me. They don't just shout and break things. They make problems disappear. And right now, your father is a problem they've decided to revisit." She stood up, her chair scraping loudly. "I said, get out." He rose slowly, his movements fluid and controlled. He was taller than she remembered, his frame filling the space between their table and the rest of the bar. He tossed a few notes onto the table. "Keep the paper." He paused, his blue eyes locking with hers. For a moment, she saw the boy she had once loved, the boy who had held her hand in the rain and promised her the world. Then it was gone, replaced by the cold, calculating stranger before her. "You can't run from this, Rory. Not forever." He turned and walked towards the door, his back straight, his gait confident. The bell chimed again, and he was gone, leaving behind the scent of expensive whisky and the faint, metallic tang of a past she thought she had escaped. Rory sank back into her chair, her fingers trembling as she reached for the folded paper. As she unfolded it, she saw a single name printed in stark, black letters. A name she hadn't heard in over a decade. A name that meant nothing and everything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.054
81.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"calculating"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"footsteps"
2"tracing"
3"flicker"
4"calculating"
5"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount654
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Raven1
Nest1
Bute1
Park1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Latin1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
places
0"Bute"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1059
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.26
std21.28
cv0.703
sampleLengths
071
110
228
327
462
54
624
755
865
91
1017
1131
1224
1321
1433
1512
1631
1721
1850
1931
209
216
2239
2320
2440
252
2644
2756
282
2932
3011
3136
3249
338
3487
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs102
matches
0"was polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount655
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.025954198473282442
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00916030534351145
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.24
std7.82
cv0.591
sampleLengths
017
15
220
321
48
510
68
720
812
915
103
1123
1215
1321
144
1515
169
1710
181
199
2018
2117
2212
2316
2417
256
2614
271
286
2911
3019
3112
3217
337
343
3518
3610
3723
3812
3914
4017
4113
428
4312
4438
4531
463
476
486
4915
66.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners36
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then it was gone, replaced"
ratio0.019
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences54
matches
0"She slid a crate of"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He didn't look up from"
3"She straightened, wiping her hands"
4"He set the glass down"
5"He nursed a single malt,"
6"She walked towards the table,"
7"It was older, harder, the"
8"He offered a thin, humourless"
9"Her hand instinctively went to"
10"He gestured to the empty"
11"She remained standing."
12"He took a slow sip"
13"He leaned forward, the light"
14"He placed his glass on"
15"He slid a folded piece"
16"It was thick, expensive stock."
17"He leaned back, a flicker"
18"Her father, a man of"
19"It was absurd."
ratio0.5
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"Tonight, it signalled the beginning."
2"She slid a crate of"
3"Silas was polishing a tumbler,"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"He didn't look up from"
6"She straightened, wiping her hands"
7"He set the glass down"
8"Rory glanced over."
9"The man was a study"
10"He nursed a single malt,"
11"Something about the set of"
12"Silas finally met her gaze,"
13"The name hit her like"
14"The girl who wore cardigans"
15"The girl who had a"
16"The girl who had left"
17"She walked towards the table,"
18"It was older, harder, the"
19"A bright, piercing blue that"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas was polishing a tumbler, his movements economical and precise, a man who had performed this same action a thousand times."
1"The girl who had a crescent-shaped scar on her wrist from falling off a swing in Bute Park."
2"Her father, a man of impeccable integrity, a man who quoted Latin at the dinner table and believed in the sanctity of the law above all else."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, the light catching the tired lines around his eyes"
1"He paused, his blue eyes locking with hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9105%