| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1745 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1745 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "amidst" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "tapestry" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "magnetic" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "potential" | | 17 | "silk" | | 18 | "stark" | | 19 | "unreadable" | | 20 | "warmth" | | 21 | "pulsed" | | 22 | "shattered" | | 23 | "gloom" | | 24 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 148 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 196 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1737 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1404 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Shade | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.538 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like Earth flora" | | 1 | "looked like green velvet" | | 2 | "circles that seemed to spiral inward forever" | | 3 | "as if holding their breath" | | 4 | "looked like a dried stick again" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1737 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 109 | | mean | 15.94 | | std | 13.43 | | cv | 0.842 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | |
| 84.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 196 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Occasional gaps in the foliage revealed glimpses of impossible geometry—triangles that shouldn't close, circles that seemed to spiral inward forever." | | 1 | "It reflected a different place entirely—a burning landscape under a amber sun." | | 2 | "A face formed in the reflection, twisted and screaming, before a hand seemed to reach up from beneath the water—on the other side." | | 3 | "The air here wasn't just cold; it was ancient." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1412 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03328611898016997 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007082152974504249 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 196 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 196 | | mean | 8.86 | | std | 5.14 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 40.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2755102040816326 | | totalSentences | 196 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 69.93% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the burning landscape remained." | | 1 | "Even the glowing leaves seemed" | | 2 | "Then, slowly, it recoiled, folding" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Her wrist burned." | | 1 | "She pulled the crimson gem" | | 2 | "She wore no coat despite" | | 3 | "They offered a hand, fingers" | | 4 | "It grounded her." | | 5 | "She stepped forward." | | 6 | "She looked down." | | 7 | "It wasn't dirt, but a" | | 8 | "She took a breath." | | 9 | "It coated the back of" | | 10 | "She caught herself, the Heartstone" | | 11 | "It reflected a different place" | | 12 | "She approached the pool's edge." | | 13 | "She pushed a branch aside," | | 14 | "They felt like wet silk." | | 15 | "They entered the shadow of" | | 16 | "It carried the dust of" | | 17 | "It was black, thorny, and" | | 18 | "She didn't touch the sapling," | | 19 | "She held the crimson stone" |
| | ratio | 0.182 | |
| 22.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 125 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone oaks loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter paused, the toes" | | 2 | "The air shimmered here, a" | | 3 | "Her wrist burned." | | 4 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 5 | "She pulled the crimson gem" | | 6 | "Isolde stood amidst the trees," | | 7 | "The Half-Fae didn't turn, her" | | 8 | "She wore no coat despite" | | 9 | "Rory pocketed the stone and" | | 10 | "The sprawling city lights of" | | 11 | "A patch of darkness detached" | | 12 | "Nyx rose, their humanoid silhouette" | | 13 | "The violet glow of their" | | 14 | "They offered a hand, fingers" | | 15 | "Rory gripped the hilt of" | | 16 | "The moonsilver metal bit into" | | 17 | "It grounded her." | | 18 | "She stepped forward." | | 19 | "The sensation hit her gut" |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Occasional gaps in the foliage revealed glimpses of impossible geometry—triangles that shouldn't close, circles that seemed to spiral inward forever." | | 1 | "Isolde turned away from the pool, her silver hair swirling around her legs as if caught in an underwater current." | | 2 | "The black sapling shuddered, its thorns elongating, reaching toward the stone in her hand." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |