Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYMQR2A5XE7PC8DWTHF0XM

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Duration:
47.0s
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$0.013742
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stone oaks loomed ahead, their bark pale and bleached like old bone. Aurora Carter paused, the toes of her boots hovering over the threshold. The air shimmered here, a faint distortion rippling like heat off asphalt, but this heat carried a chill. Her wrist burned. The small crescent scar on her left hand throbbed in time with the pulse of the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. She pulled the crimson gem out, watching the inner light flare, brightening to match the rhythm of a second heartbeat. "The Veil wears thin tonight." Isolde stood amidst the trees, silver hair spilling down her back like liquid mercury. The Half-Fae didn't turn, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the space between the two central monoliths. She wore no coat despite the London winter, her feet bare on the frost-slicked grass. Rory pocketed the stone and glanced back. The sprawling city lights of Richmond flickered in the distance, a comforting grid of orange and gold. Ahead lay only shadow and the promise of something else. "After you, then." A patch of darkness detached itself from the trunk of a nearby chestnut. Nyx rose, their humanoid silhouette elongating until they stood a full head taller than Rory. The violet glow of their eyes cast faint illumination on the moss. They offered a hand, fingers tapering into smoke. "I dislike places where the rules of physics are merely suggestions." Rory gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver metal bit into her palm, freezing cold. It grounded her. "Physics went out the window the moment a shadow started buying me drinks." She stepped forward. The sensation hit her gut like a missed step on a staircase. Gravity twisted. The smell of exhaust fumes and damp rotting leaves vanished, replaced instantly by the scent of ozone and crushed jasmine. The transition was absolute. One moment, winter in London. The next, eternal twilight. Rory spun around. The monoliths were gone. The city was gone. A dense canopy of twisted ironwood trees arched overhead, their leaves shimmering with bioluminescent veins of violet and blue. The sky above wasn't a solid ceiling but a swirling tapestry of indigo clouds, motionless yet shifting. "Beautiful, isn't it? In the way a venomous snake is beautiful." Nyx drifted closer to a massive fern that unfurled from the forest floor. The fronds trembled at their proximity, recoiling from the cold aura of the Shade. Isolde glided forward, her movements silent. No sound came from her passage. No footprints marked the loam where she stepped. "We do not tread on the Grove, Rory. We tread within it. Mind your thoughts. The flowers listen." Rory swallowed hard and tightened her grip on the dagger. She looked down. Wildflowers bloomed in patches of vibrant orange, electric blue, and neon pink. None of them looked like Earth flora. One resembled a trumpet made of glass, another a cluster of grapes that hissed softly as the wind brushed past. "Where is this?" "Between." Isolde pointed a slender finger toward a path that wound deeper into the wood. It wasn't dirt, but a carpet of moss so thick and spongy it looked like green velvet. "You are in the pocket. The space where the Fae Courts touch your world, just a breath away. Time here is... fluid." Rory checked her watch. The second hand stuttered, ticking forward three times, then snapping back once. "Fluid. Right." She took a breath. The air tasted sweet, cloying, like overripe fruit. It coated the back of her throat. "Keep moving." They walked. The path sloped downward, spiralling into the heart of the grove. The trees grew denser, their branches interlocking to form a living tunnel. Occasional gaps in the foliage revealed glimpses of impossible geometry—triangles that shouldn't close, circles that seemed to spiral inward forever. Nyx kept close to Rory, their shadow form flickering whenever they passed a patch of particularly strong light filtering through the canopy. "The light here is abrasive. It feels like it's trying to scrub the darkness right off me." "Perhaps it is." Rory stumbled over a root that hadn't been there a second ago. She caught herself, the Heartstone flaring hot against her chest. The root wriggled, pulling back into the earth. She froze. "Did that root just move?" "Everything here moves. Everything here eats. Eventually." Isolde stopped before a clearing. The space opened up into a vast amphitheatre of white stone. In the centre stood a pool of water, still as glass. But it didn't reflect the sky. It reflected a different place entirely—a burning landscape under a amber sun. Rory felt a pull. A magnetic tug in her chest. The pendant seared her skin, demanding she step closer. "What is that?" She approached the pool's edge. The water was black, yet the reflection showed fire and vineyards. "A window. And a warning." Isolde stood beside her, her reflection absent from the water. Only the burning landscape remained. "That looks like Dymas." Rory recognised the description from the old texts she’d been scouring since receiving the pendant. The endless feasts. The vineyards. "Gluttony has a scent. It carries even across the Veil." Nyx leaned over the water, their form distorting the image. "The Prince has been busy." The surface of the pool rippled. A face formed in the reflection, twisted and screaming, before a hand seemed to reach up from beneath the water—on the other side. Rory jumped back, drawing the Fae-Forged blade. The silver edge hummed, a low, dangerous note. The water settled. The image returned to the amber fields. "It cannot hurt you. Not yet." Isolde turned away from the pool, her silver hair swirling around her legs as if caught in an underwater current. "But the rift is widening. The solstice approaches." Rory stared at the blade, then at the water. The cold metal in her hand vibrated, resonating with the pulse of the pendant. "Why show me this?" "Because you carry the key." Isolde gestured to the pendant. "And because the path to Dymas begins where the shadows fall longest." Nyx drifted toward a cluster of ancient ruins on the far side of the clearing. Massive pillars, broken and overgrown with luminescent ivy, stood like the bones of giants. "I know a thing or two about long shadows." Rory sheathed the dagger, though she didn't let go of the hilt. The unease coiled in her stomach, tightening with every breath of that sweet, heavy air. This place was beautiful, yes. A masterpiece of nature and magic twisted together. But it was also a cage. The way the trees watched them, the way the flowers turned their heads... "Where to?" "To the Stones of Memory. They remember the way between worlds." Isolde began to walk again, her feet barely touching the ground. "Stay close. The Grove is playful tonight." Rory followed. The further they went, the quieter the world became. The strange chimes of the forest died away, leaving a heavy, suffocating silence. Even the glowing leaves seemed to dim, as if holding their breath. Ahead, the ruins loomed. Statues of faceless gods lined the path, their hands outstretched. Rory passed one, feeling a static charge raise the hairs on her arms. "I feel like I'm being sized up." "You are meat. Magic. Potential." Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like wind through dead leaves. "To this place, you are a new flavour." Rory swallowed, her throat dry. She pushed a branch aside, wincing as the leaves brushed her skin. They felt like wet silk. They entered the shadow of the ruins. The temperature plummeted. The air here wasn't just cold; it was ancient. It carried the dust of millennia. At the centre of the ruin lay a circle of flat stones. In the middle of the circle, a single sapling grew. It was black, thorny, and barren, stark against the vibrant life of the rest of the grove. Isolde stopped before it. "This is the anchor. The point where the Veil is held together by sheer will." Rory stepped forward. The pendant burned now, a steady, unrelenting heat against her sternum. "It looks dead." "It sleeps. And it dreams of fire." Isolde reached out a hand. She didn't touch the sapling, but hovered her fingers inches from the black thorns. "Rory. Place the pendant on the stone." Rory looked at the Heartstone, then at the dead tree, then at Nyx. The Shade flickered, their violet eyes unreadable. "You sure that's a good idea?" "Good is a mortal concept. Necessity is universal." Rory untangled the chain from her neck. The moment the gem left her skin, the warmth vanished, replaced by a sudden, biting chill. She held the crimson stone in her palm. It pulsed, casting red light over the grey stones. She stepped into the circle. The silence shattered. A sound like a thousand church bells ringing underwater exploded in her ears. The ground shook. The black sapling shuddered, its thorns elongating, reaching toward the stone in her hand. Rory didn't drop it. She forced her hand to stay steady. "What's happening?" "It sees you." Isolde's voice was calm, barely audible over the ringing. "Show it the blade." Rory drew the Fae-Forged dagger with her free hand. The moonsilver flared, a brilliant white arc cutting through the unnatural gloom. The light from the blade hit the Heartstone. The red light fractured. The ringing stopped. The sapling froze. Then, slowly, it recoiled, folding in on itself until it looked like a dried stick again. Rory exhaled, a breath she didn't know she was holding. Her knees shook. "Well. That wasn't ominous at all." Nyx drifted closer, reforming into a solid shape. "On the contrary. That was remarkably hospitable. It could have simply erased you from existence." "The choice is made." Isolde walked into the circle, standing before Rory. She reached out and took the pendant from Rory's loose grip. As she touched it, the silver chain turned to gold in her hand, then back to silver. "The Veil recognizes you now. The path is open." She handed it back. "Don't lose that." Rory fastened the chain around her neck, the skin at her throat still stinging from the cold. "Where exactly does this path go?" Isolde pointed to the ground at Rory's feet. Rory looked down. The moss had died. In its place was a spiral of ash, slowly unspooling, leading into the darkness beneath the ruins. "Down."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"tapestry"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"unreadable"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"shattered"
count1
23
word"gloom"
count1
24
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"shimmered"
2"chill"
3"throbbed"
4"pulse"
5"amidst"
6"flickered"
7"comforting"
8"tapestry"
9"trembled"
10"electric"
11"velvet"
12"magnetic"
13"vibrated"
14"stomach"
15"silence"
16"potential"
17"silk"
18"stark"
19"unreadable"
20"warmth"
21"pulsed"
22"shattered"
23"gloom"
24"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
94.59% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences196
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1737
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1404
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone4
Half-Fae1
London2
Richmond1
Rory27
Fae-Forged3
Shade2
Earth1
Nyx8
Isolde13
persons
0"Carter"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Rory"
3"Shade"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Earth"
globalScore0.538
windowScore0.333
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like Earth flora"
1"looked like green velvet"
2"circles that seemed to spiral inward forever"
3"as if holding their breath"
4"looked like a dried stick again"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1737
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences196
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean15.94
std13.43
cv0.842
sampleLengths
043
144
25
346
434
53
648
711
823
913
103
1134
1213
1347
1411
1527
1620
1718
1852
193
201
2131
2222
2316
242
2519
262
2745
2822
2917
303
3130
322
335
347
355
3640
3719
383
3916
405
4115
424
4320
4410
4515
4629
4715
4810
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was holding"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences196
ratio0.02
matches
0"Occasional gaps in the foliage revealed glimpses of impossible geometry—triangles that shouldn't close, circles that seemed to spiral inward forever."
1"It reflected a different place entirely—a burning landscape under a amber sun."
2"A face formed in the reflection, twisted and screaming, before a hand seemed to reach up from beneath the water—on the other side."
3"The air here wasn't just cold; it was ancient."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1412
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03328611898016997
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007082152974504249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences196
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences196
mean8.86
std5.14
cv0.58
sampleLengths
013
112
218
33
421
520
65
714
817
915
107
1117
1210
133
1413
1515
1612
178
1811
1911
209
213
2213
233
2412
252
2620
274
285
294
303
314
324
3319
3417
3511
3613
3714
386
396
408
4118
4210
433
4412
457
4620
473
481
4914
40.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2755102040816326
totalSentences196
uniqueOpeners54
69.93% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences143
matches
0"Only the burning landscape remained."
1"Even the glowing leaves seemed"
2"Then, slowly, it recoiled, folding"
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences143
matches
0"Her wrist burned."
1"She pulled the crimson gem"
2"She wore no coat despite"
3"They offered a hand, fingers"
4"It grounded her."
5"She stepped forward."
6"She looked down."
7"It wasn't dirt, but a"
8"She took a breath."
9"It coated the back of"
10"She caught herself, the Heartstone"
11"It reflected a different place"
12"She approached the pool's edge."
13"She pushed a branch aside,"
14"They felt like wet silk."
15"They entered the shadow of"
16"It carried the dust of"
17"It was black, thorny, and"
18"She didn't touch the sapling,"
19"She held the crimson stone"
ratio0.182
22.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences143
matches
0"The stone oaks loomed ahead,"
1"Aurora Carter paused, the toes"
2"The air shimmered here, a"
3"Her wrist burned."
4"The small crescent scar on"
5"She pulled the crimson gem"
6"Isolde stood amidst the trees,"
7"The Half-Fae didn't turn, her"
8"She wore no coat despite"
9"Rory pocketed the stone and"
10"The sprawling city lights of"
11"A patch of darkness detached"
12"Nyx rose, their humanoid silhouette"
13"The violet glow of their"
14"They offered a hand, fingers"
15"Rory gripped the hilt of"
16"The moonsilver metal bit into"
17"It grounded her."
18"She stepped forward."
19"The sensation hit her gut"
ratio0.874
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Occasional gaps in the foliage revealed glimpses of impossible geometry—triangles that shouldn't close, circles that seemed to spiral inward forever."
1"Isolde turned away from the pool, her silver hair swirling around her legs as if caught in an underwater current."
2"The black sapling shuddered, its thorns elongating, reaching toward the stone in her hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.7519%