Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYMZ1T5ZK95W9VBJYWRR1J

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Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.070980
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hit Soho in sheets, turning the gutters into rivers that swallowed cigarette butts and takeaway wrappers whole. Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the brick wall of a kebab shop and watched the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest bleed its reflection across the wet pavement. Her leather watch strap had gone dark with moisture. She didn't bother wiping it. Herrera emerged from the bar's front door at 11:47. She clocked the Saint Christopher medallion catching the neon light before she registered anything else — the way he held his left arm close to his body, the messenger bag slung tight across his chest, the quick birdlike sweep of his head as he checked the street in both directions. Not the movements of a man stepping out for a smoke. The movements of a man carrying something he shouldn't be. She gave him a twenty-metre lead before stepping off the wall. His pace was brisk but not panicked. North up Dean Street, cutting left onto Bateman, his trainers slapping the wet pavement in a steady rhythm. Quinn matched it, keeping her stride even, her black jacket zipped to her throat. The rain was a gift — it kept heads down, hoods up, eyes on the ground. Nobody looked at anybody in weather like this. She was just another shape moving through the downpour. He turned right onto Frith Street and she almost lost him behind a group of students spilling out of a pub. She sidestepped, caught the flash of his dark curly hair under a streetlamp, and kept moving. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She ignored it. Three years she'd been circling this group. Three years since Morris went into that warehouse in Deptford and came out in a body bag with a coroner's report that read "cardiac arrest" despite the fact that his eyes had been completely white when they found him. No capillaries burst, no medical explanation. Just white, like someone had poured milk into his skull. She'd pushed for a second autopsy. Denied. Pushed for an investigation into the people he'd been surveilling. Denied. Filed her own reports, gathered her own evidence, burned through two therapists and what remained of her marriage. And now Tomás Herrera was half-running through the rain with a bag full of something, and she was going to find out what. He crossed Charing Cross Road against the light, forcing a black cab to lean on its horn. Quinn waited for a gap in traffic and followed. He was heading north now, the pace quickening. She could see the tension in his shoulders, the way his hand kept drifting to the bag's strap. He knew. Somehow he knew, or at least suspected. She shortened the gap to fifteen metres. Camden. He was heading toward Camden. The streets narrowed and the crowds thinned as they moved past the shuttered market stalls, their corrugated fronts slick with rain. A fox darted across the road ahead, its eyes two coins of reflected light. Herrera turned down a side street she didn't recognize — no, she did recognize it. She'd walked past it a dozen times during her surveillance runs. A dead end. Chain-link fence at the back, loading dock for a restaurant that had closed six months ago. She slowed. Dead end meant confrontation, and she hadn't called for backup. Her hand found the extendable baton in her jacket pocket, fingers wrapping around the cold metal cylinder. But Herrera didn't stop at the fence. He veered left, ducked behind a dumpster, and disappeared. Quinn broke into a run. Her boots hammered the wet concrete, puddles detonating under her feet. She rounded the dumpster and found a metal door set into the wall at knee height — an old service entrance, the kind that led down to utility tunnels or forgotten basements. It hung open an inch, pale light leaking from below. She crouched. Listened. Heard the fading echo of footsteps descending, and beneath that, something else — a hum, like the murmur of a crowd, rising from underground. The sensible thing was to call it in, wait for support, file the location in her report and come back with a warrant. The sensible thing was what the Met had trained into her over eighteen years of service. Procedure. Chain of command. Documentation. Morris had followed procedure. Morris was dead. She pulled the door open and went through. The staircase was industrial — riveted iron steps, a handrail crusted with rust that she didn't trust enough to touch. The light came from somewhere below, warm and amber, nothing like the fluorescent flicker she'd expected. The air changed as she descended, growing warmer, carrying scents that didn't belong together: sandalwood, copper, ozone, something floral she couldn't name. The hum resolved into distinct sounds — voices, the clink of glass, a low persistent drumming that might have been music or might have been a machine. At the bottom of the stairs she found a corridor tiled in the old London Underground style — cream ceramic with a green border, chipped and stained but unmistakable. An abandoned Tube station. She'd read about them in the files she kept locked in her desk at home, the ones that would end her career if anyone found them. The Veil Market. A black market for things that shouldn't exist, things that moved every full moon to a new location beneath the city. A figure sat on a wooden stool beside a heavy curtain that blocked the corridor ahead. Old woman, face like a dried riverbed, fingers busy with a piece of string that she was knotting into shapes. She looked up at Quinn with eyes that were too bright, too aware. "Token." Quinn stopped. "Sorry?" "Bone token, love. Can't come through without one." Quinn pulled out her warrant card and held it up. The old woman examined it with the enthusiasm of someone being shown a child's drawing. "That's very nice. Bone token." "Metropolitan Police. I'm in pursuit of a suspect who—" "I don't care if you're in pursuit of the Holy Ghost." The woman returned to her knotting. "No token, no entry. That's the rule." Quinn looked past her at the curtain. The sounds from beyond it were louder here — a dozen conversations tangled together, laughter, the sharp crack of something that could have been wood splitting or a small explosion. The scent of copper had grown stronger, thick enough to taste. "The man who came through here thirty seconds ago. Dark hair, olive skin, messenger bag. Where did he go?" The old woman's fingers paused on the string. Something shifted in her expression — not fear, but a recalculation, the look of a woman reassessing the cost of a particular interaction. "Lots of people come through here. I don't keep a guest book." Quinn crouched to bring herself level with the woman's gaze. The sharp line of her jaw caught the amber light. She held the eye contact for a long five seconds. "Three years ago, a detective sergeant named Morris came looking into places like this. He died. Nobody could explain how. I think you know what kind of people do business behind that curtain, and I think you know that some of them are dangerous enough to kill a police officer and make it look like his heart just stopped. So I'm going to ask you one more time. The man with the bag. Where?" The old woman studied her. The string had gone still between her fingers. "You don't have a token." "No." "You don't know what's in there." "No." "And you want to go in anyway." Quinn straightened. Her clothes were soaked through, water still dripping from the hem of her jacket onto the tiled floor. The baton sat heavy in her pocket. Everything she'd been trained to do screamed at her to go back up those stairs, call for backup, follow the book. The book had gotten Morris killed. The book had covered up whatever happened to his eyes. "I want answers." The old woman held her gaze for another moment, then reached into the folds of her shawl and produced a small object — a disc the color of old ivory, roughly the size of a two-pound coin, carved with symbols Quinn didn't recognize. Bone. Actual bone. "One-time use. Gets you in, doesn't get you out. You want to leave, you find your own way." Quinn took the token. It was warm, warmer than it should have been from sitting in an old woman's pocket. The carved symbols seemed to shift under her thumb, though she told herself that was the poor lighting. "Why are you helping me?" The woman picked up her string again. "I'm not helping you. I'm letting you make your own mistake. Big difference." Quinn turned the token over in her palm. It weighed almost nothing. She thought about Morris — the way he'd called her that last night, voice tight, saying he'd found something, something wrong, that he needed to see it for himself before he could explain. She'd told him to wait. He hadn't. She pushed through the curtain. The abandoned station opened before her like the split belly of a whale. The old platform stretched out in both directions, its edges crowded with stalls made from salvaged wood, draped fabric, and what looked like animal hide. Strings of lights crisscrossed overhead — not electric bulbs but glass spheres filled with something luminous and faintly alive, pulsing with their own slow rhythm. The crowd was dense but moved with a strange courtesy, bodies never quite touching, everyone maintaining a precise buffer of personal space as though the consequences of accidental contact were severe. She couldn't see Herrera. The messenger bag, the medallion, the dark curly hair — all swallowed by the Market's throat. The stalls sold things she couldn't categorize. Jars of liquid that changed color when she looked at them directly. Bundles of dried herbs that whispered. A taxidermied crow with three eyes, all of which blinked. A man at a table dealt cards made of what appeared to be thin sheets of hammered silver, each one reflecting a different face back at whoever held it. Quinn's hand found the baton in her pocket again. Her warrant card was a joke down here — she'd understood that from the old woman's reaction. Whatever authority she carried on the streets above meant nothing in this place. She was alone, unarmed except for a metal stick and eighteen years of stubbornness, in a market that traded in things she didn't have names for. A vendor caught her eye — a tall figure wrapped in dark linen, their stall a table covered in small glass vials. One of the vials contained something that glowed the exact white of Morris's dead eyes. Quinn stopped walking. "What is that?" The vendor tilted their head. "Depends on your need." "That one. The white one. What's in it?" "Extracted sight. Very rare, very expensive. Taken from a dying man with strong vision. Strong will." The vendor's mouth curled. "Police officer, I think the harvester said." Quinn's fingers went numb around the baton. The rain above was a distant memory. The Market hummed and pulsed around her, indifferent to the fact that her partner's stolen sight sat in a vial on a folding table beneath Camden, priced and labeled like a bottle of wine. She released the baton. Reached for the vial instead. "Price," she said. The vendor's smile widened.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"completely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"echo"
2"footsteps"
3"flicker"
4"resolved"
5"electric"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1920
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1673
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn16
Raven1
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
Dean1
Street2
Bateman1
Frith1
Morris6
Deptford1
Tomás1
Herrera5
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Camden3
Met1
London1
Underground1
Tube1
Veil1
Market3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
6"Tomás"
7"Herrera"
8"Met"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Frith"
4"Deptford"
5"Charing"
6"Cross"
7"Road"
8"London"
9"Underground"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like animal hide"
95.83% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.042
wordCount1920
matches
0"not fear, but a recalculation, the look of a woman reassessing the cost of"
1"not electric bulbs but glass spheres filled with something luminous"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean31.48
std27.97
cv0.888
sampleLengths
063
180
211
372
446
598
623
768
86
980
1029
1116
1258
1327
1444
157
168
1785
1883
1949
201
213
228
2325
245
259
2624
2748
2819
2931
3012
3130
3274
3313
345
351
366
371
387
3964
403
4146
4218
4338
445
4520
4652
475
4894
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"being shown"
1"been trained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs281
matches
0"was heading"
1"was heading"
2"was knotting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences158
ratio0.101
matches
0"She clocked the Saint Christopher medallion catching the neon light before she registered anything else — the way he held his left arm close to his body, the messenger bag slung tight across his chest, the quick birdlike sweep of his head as he checked the street in both directions."
1"The rain was a gift — it kept heads down, hoods up, eyes on the ground."
2"Herrera turned down a side street she didn't recognize — no, she did recognize it."
3"She rounded the dumpster and found a metal door set into the wall at knee height — an old service entrance, the kind that led down to utility tunnels or forgotten basements."
4"Heard the fading echo of footsteps descending, and beneath that, something else — a hum, like the murmur of a crowd, rising from underground."
5"The staircase was industrial — riveted iron steps, a handrail crusted with rust that she didn't trust enough to touch."
6"The hum resolved into distinct sounds — voices, the clink of glass, a low persistent drumming that might have been music or might have been a machine."
7"At the bottom of the stairs she found a corridor tiled in the old London Underground style — cream ceramic with a green border, chipped and stained but unmistakable."
8"The sounds from beyond it were louder here — a dozen conversations tangled together, laughter, the sharp crack of something that could have been wood splitting or a small explosion."
9"Something shifted in her expression — not fear, but a recalculation, the look of a woman reassessing the cost of a particular interaction."
10"The old woman held her gaze for another moment, then reached into the folds of her shawl and produced a small object — a disc the color of old ivory, roughly the size of a two-pound coin, carved with symbols Quinn didn't recognize."
11"She thought about Morris — the way he'd called her that last night, voice tight, saying he'd found something, something wrong, that he needed to see it for himself before he could explain."
12"Strings of lights crisscrossed overhead — not electric bulbs but glass spheres filled with something luminous and faintly alive, pulsing with their own slow rhythm."
13"The messenger bag, the medallion, the dark curly hair — all swallowed by the Market's throat."
14"Her warrant card was a joke down here — she'd understood that from the old woman's reaction."
15"A vendor caught her eye — a tall figure wrapped in dark linen, their stall a table covered in small glass vials."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1661
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.015653220951234198
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004214328717639976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean12.15
std10.45
cv0.86
sampleLengths
019
130
29
35
49
550
611
710
811
97
1018
1114
1216
138
149
1521
1616
176
183
197
2039
216
2210
236
241
2510
261
2718
2823
2917
309
318
3218
332
347
357
361
375
3821
3914
4015
4111
423
4316
442
4510
4617
477
489
495
48.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.35443037974683544
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners56
55.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"Just white, like someone had"
1"Somehow he knew, or at"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences121
matches
0"Her leather watch strap had"
1"She didn't bother wiping it."
2"She clocked the Saint Christopher"
3"She gave him a twenty-metre"
4"His pace was brisk but"
5"She was just another shape"
6"He turned right onto Frith"
7"She sidestepped, caught the flash"
8"Her phone buzzed in her"
9"She ignored it."
10"She'd pushed for a second"
11"He crossed Charing Cross Road"
12"He was heading north now,"
13"She could see the tension"
14"She shortened the gap to"
15"He was heading toward Camden."
16"She'd walked past it a"
17"Her hand found the extendable"
18"He veered left, ducked behind"
19"Her boots hammered the wet"
ratio0.298
38.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences121
matches
0"The rain hit Soho in"
1"Harlow Quinn pressed her back"
2"Her leather watch strap had"
3"She didn't bother wiping it."
4"Herrera emerged from the bar's"
5"She clocked the Saint Christopher"
6"The movements of a man"
7"She gave him a twenty-metre"
8"His pace was brisk but"
9"Quinn matched it, keeping her"
10"The rain was a gift"
11"Nobody looked at anybody in"
12"She was just another shape"
13"He turned right onto Frith"
14"She sidestepped, caught the flash"
15"Her phone buzzed in her"
16"She ignored it."
17"She'd pushed for a second"
18"He crossed Charing Cross Road"
19"Quinn waited for a gap"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The rain hit Soho in sheets, turning the gutters into rivers that swallowed cigarette butts and takeaway wrappers whole."
1"Chain-link fence at the back, loading dock for a restaurant that had closed six months ago."
2"She rounded the dumpster and found a metal door set into the wall at knee height — an old service entrance, the kind that led down to utility tunnels or forgott…"
3"The air changed as she descended, growing warmer, carrying scents that didn't belong together: sandalwood, copper, ozone, something floral she couldn't name."
4"The hum resolved into distinct sounds — voices, the clink of glass, a low persistent drumming that might have been music or might have been a machine."
5"She'd read about them in the files she kept locked in her desk at home, the ones that would end her career if anyone found them."
6"A black market for things that shouldn't exist, things that moved every full moon to a new location beneath the city."
7"A figure sat on a wooden stool beside a heavy curtain that blocked the corridor ahead."
8"The sounds from beyond it were louder here — a dozen conversations tangled together, laughter, the sharp crack of something that could have been wood splitting …"
9"The crowd was dense but moved with a strange courtesy, bodies never quite touching, everyone maintaining a precise buffer of personal space as though the conseq…"
10"One of the vials contained something that glowed the exact white of Morris's dead eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.4865%