Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNED6NK420A5HQ9YMQXKW

Run Details

Duration:
33.9s
Cost:
$0.033320
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The old record player in the corner spun a low, mournful jazz tune, the needle’s hiss a comfortable counterpoint to the gentle clink of glasses. Aurora Carter ran a soft cloth over the polished mahogany of the bar top, her movements rhythmic and sure. Light from the green neon sign above the door bled through the frosted glass, painting the worn floorboards in an ethereal glow. It was a slow Tuesday at The Raven’s Nest. Most of the regulars were tucked into their usual booths, lost in quiet conversation. Silas Blackwood sat at the far end of the bar, poring over invoices, the silver of his signet ring catching the dim light as he turned a page. He was a mountain of quiet presence, a permanent fixture in her London life. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, metallic sound that sliced through the bar's warm hum. A man stepped inside, shaking the damp from a dark wool coat. He was tall, and the suit he wore looked expensive, though it was rumpled from a long day. He moved with a kind of weary purpose, settling onto a stool at the opposite end of the bar from Silas, directly in front of her. He kept his eyes down, staring into the wood grain as if it held some profound answer. His hair, once a thick, unruly brown, was now shorter, tamed, with threads of silver at the temples. "A double Laphroaig. Neat." The voice hit her first. A low rumble, the edges softened by a familiar Cardiff lilt she had not heard in years. It was a ghost in the machine, a sound she thought she had successfully exorcised. Her hand stilled on the bar. She kept her own eyes down, focusing on the selection of single malts, her black hair falling forward to veil her face. She reached for the distinctive green bottle, her movements suddenly deliberate, a little too precise. The amber liquid swirled into the glass, the peaty scent sharp in the air. She slid the tumbler across the bar, the glass whispering against the polished wood. She did not look up. He placed a few notes on the counter. "Thanks." A pause stretched, thick and heavy. "My God. Aurora?" She finally lifted her head. Her bright blue eyes, cool and guarded, met his. The face was older, etched with lines of fatigue she did not recognise, but it was him. Evan. The shape of his mouth, the way his brow furrowed. A past she had buried under the cobblestones of a new city. "It's Rory now." Her voice was a flat stone skipping over a frozen lake. Recognition warred with disbelief on his face. "Rory. Right. Of course." He picked up his glass, his fingers trembling almost imperceptibly. "What are you doing here? I thought you were… well, I didn't know *what* to think." "I work here." She folded the cloth in her hands, a small, repetitive motion. The barrier of the bar felt a thousand miles wide. "What brings you to London, Evan?" "A conference. Finance." He took a long swallow of the whisky, his throat working. The fire of the drink seemed to do nothing to warm him. "You know, the usual soul-crushing nonsense. It pays the bills." He gestured vaguely with the glass. "This is a long way from Pre-Law at Cardiff." "I needed a change of scenery." "A change of scenery," he repeated, the words hollow. "Is that what they called it? You just vanished. Eva wouldn't say a word. Your parents…" He trailed off, looking down into his drink. "I guess I can't blame them." Down the bar, Silas shifted his weight, the leg of his stool scraping softly against the floor. He wasn’t looking at them, but Rory felt the weight of his attention, a silent, comforting anchor. "They knew I was safe," she said, her tone leaving no room for argument. "You look good, Rory. Different." His eyes scanned her face, then dropped to her hands resting on the bar. They fell on her left wrist, on the small, pale crescent of a scar just visible below the cuff of her sleeve. A shadow passed over his features, a flinch of memory so profound it was almost a physical blow. He looked away, back at the wall of bottles behind her. The silence thickened, filled with the ghosts of shouted words and slammed doors. "London suits you," he finally managed, his voice thin. "You seem… harder." "Stronger." The correction was quiet but absolute. He gave a dry, humourless laugh. "Yeah, that too." He drained his glass, the ice clinking against the bottom with a lonely finality. "Another?" She took the glass without a word and refilled it. Her movements were economical, detached. She was a different person from the girl who used to shrink under his gaze, the girl whose world had narrowed to the four walls of his temper. This place, this city, Silas—they had reforged her. As she placed the fresh drink before him, his fingers brushed against hers. She recoiled. It was a tiny, involuntary flinch, a bare whisper of a movement, but in the echoing silence between them, it was a gunshot. His hand fell back as if burned. The veneer of polite reunion shattered. "I still think about it," he said, his voice barely audible over the saxophone on the record player. "What I did. The person I was." Rory picked up her cloth and began wiping down a clean section of the bar. "We all have things we'd rather forget." "I don't want to forget." His gaze was intense now, stripped of all pretence. "Forgetting would be too easy. I have to live with it. I just… I hoped you were okay. That you'd found something good." "I have." Her chin lifted, a gesture of defiance. Her eyes flickered towards Silas, who now stood, his limp more pronounced as he began collecting empty glasses from a nearby table. He moved with a quiet authority that filled the space. Evan followed her gaze to the older man with the grey-streaked auburn hair. A flicker of understanding, or perhaps misunderstanding, crossed his face. He turned back to her, his expression grim. "I was an idiot back then, Rory. A monster." Aurora stopped wiping the bar. She placed the cloth down with unnerving stillness and met his desperate, pleading eyes. The scent of whisky and old regrets hung between them like a shroud. "People don't change, Evan." Her voice was soft, but each word was a perfectly sharpened shard of glass. "They just get better at hiding it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.065
86.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"profound"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"rhythmic"
2"profound"
3"familiar"
4"lilt"
5"etched"
6"furrowed"
7"weight"
8"comforting"
9"scanned"
10"silence"
11"whisper"
12"echoing"
13"shattered"
14"flickered"
15"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"d with disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1103
ratio0.001
matches
0"what"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount919
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
London1
Silas5
Cardiff1
Recognition1
Rory2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Recognition"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1103
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean38.03
std29.39
cv0.773
sampleLengths
0131
173
235
34
4113
518
654
714
837
930
1051
116
1239
1334
1414
1583
1612
177
1824
1951
2038
2113
2225
2322
2437
2541
2640
2732
2825
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"were tucked"
1"was rumpled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs132
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences88
ratio0.011
matches
0"This place, this city, Silas—they had reforged her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.0249728555917481
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013029315960912053
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean12.53
std6.34
cv0.506
sampleLengths
025
119
222
39
414
528
614
717
812
918
1026
1117
1218
134
145
1517
1615
176
1822
1915
2014
2114
225
238
247
253
265
279
2817
291
3010
3112
3214
337
3414
3516
3614
3710
386
3914
4012
4116
429
436
449
4524
466
4717
4817
4914
54.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3522727272727273
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences72
matches
0"It was a slow Tuesday"
1"He was a mountain of"
2"He was tall, and the"
3"He moved with a kind"
4"He kept his eyes down,"
5"His hair, once a thick,"
6"It was a ghost in"
7"Her hand stilled on the"
8"She kept her own eyes"
9"She reached for the distinctive"
10"She slid the tumbler across"
11"She did not look up."
12"He placed a few notes"
13"She finally lifted her head."
14"Her bright blue eyes, cool"
15"Her voice was a flat"
16"He picked up his glass,"
17"She folded the cloth in"
18"He took a long swallow"
19"He gestured vaguely with the"
ratio0.597
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences72
matches
0"The old record player in"
1"Aurora Carter ran a soft"
2"It was a slow Tuesday"
3"Silas Blackwood sat at the"
4"He was a mountain of"
5"The bell above the door"
6"A man stepped inside, shaking"
7"He was tall, and the"
8"He moved with a kind"
9"He kept his eyes down,"
10"His hair, once a thick,"
11"The voice hit her first."
12"A low rumble, the edges"
13"It was a ghost in"
14"Her hand stilled on the"
15"She kept her own eyes"
16"She reached for the distinctive"
17"The amber liquid swirled into"
18"She slid the tumbler across"
19"She did not look up."
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, metallic sound that sliced through the bar's warm hum."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He picked up, his fingers trembling almost imperceptibly"
1"she said, her tone leaving no room for argument"
2"He drained, the ice clinking against the bottom with a lonely finality"
3"Her chin lifted, a gesture of defiance"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.065
78.3496%