Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNEHP0F9HXTXTK75CNDVA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.083615
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon buzzed above the door like a trapped insect. Rory balanced a stack of takeaway containers against her hip, shoulder wedged against the frame, and kicked the door open with her heel. The smell hit first—old wood, spilled lager, the ghost of a thousand cigarettes that hadn't been smoked indoors for over a decade but had soaked into the grain of the bar like memory. Half past ten on a Wednesday. The Raven's Nest held maybe a dozen bodies, most of them solo drinkers nursing their poison with the particular devotion of people who had nowhere pressing to be. Silas stood behind the bar polishing a glass he'd already polished twice, the way he did when his knee was bothering him and standing still felt better than pacing. "Yu-Fei says you still owe her for last Thursday," Rory said, setting the containers on the bar top. Silas didn't look up. "Yu-Fei says a lot of things." "She also says if you don't pay by Friday she's cutting you off. No more char siu, no more crispy duck, nothing." His hands stopped moving. "That woman runs her kitchen like a military operation." "That woman feeds you three nights a week." Rory slid the receipt across the bar. "Sign." He signed it with his left hand, the silver signet ring on his right catching the low amber light from the overhead fixtures. Then his gaze drifted over her shoulder toward the far corner booth, and something shifted in his expression—a tightening around the mouth, a slight narrowing of the eyes that she'd learned to read over the past year like weather changes. "Friend of yours?" Rory turned to look. The woman in the corner booth sat with both hands wrapped around a glass of red wine as though it were the only warm thing in the room. She was maybe late fifties, thin in a way that suggested discipline rather than deprivation. Silver hair cut sharp at the jaw. Good coat—dark navy, well-tailored. She stared at the wall of old photographs beside her booth like she was searching for a face in them. "Silas?" He set down the glass. Picked up another one. "I haven't seen that woman in fourteen years." Rory waited. She'd learned that too—how Silas parceled out information the way a miser parceled out coins, one at a time and only when the silence grew expensive enough. "Her name is Catherine Hale. We worked together. Before." Before. The word that covered everything from his previous life. Before the bar, before the limp, before whatever happened in Prague that he referred to only in the space between sentences. "She looks like she's waiting for someone." "She's not." Silas set both hands flat on the bar top. "She knows I'm here. She's giving me the choice." Rory glanced between them—the woman in the booth who hadn't once looked toward the bar, and Silas, whose stillness had taken on the quality of stone. "You going over?" "Get yourself a drink, Rory." He poured her a half-pint of the bitter she liked without waiting for an answer and then moved out from behind the bar. The limp was worse tonight. She watched him cross the room with the uneven gait that he usually masked better, each step deliberate, his reflection sliding across the old maps that papered the walls. Catherine Hale looked up when his shadow fell across her table. Something crossed her face—not surprise, not relief. Recognition. The kind that carried weight. "Silas." "Cate." Neither of them moved to embrace or shake hands. He slid into the booth across from her, and the leather seat exhaled beneath him. Rory turned away, positioned herself at the far end of the bar with her half-pint, and did what she did best—listened while appearing not to. "You look old," Catherine said. "You look thin." "I am thin. I am also old." She took a sip of her wine. "Your leg's worse." "My leg's the same it's been for twelve years." "You're favoring it more. You were always stubborn about the physio." "You came to London to discuss my physical therapy regime?" A pause. The jukebox in the corner—an actual jukebox, one of Silas' affectations—clicked between tracks and landed on something with a muted trumpet. "I retired," Catherine said. "Six months ago. They gave me a clock." "A clock." "Crystal. Quite hideous. Has an inscription. Thirty-one years of dedicated service." She turned the wine glass by its stem. "I keep it in the downstairs loo." "Fitting." "I thought so." Another pause. Rory took a sip of her bitter and studied the photographs on the wall nearest her—faces she didn't know, places she'd never been. Silas had never explained any of them. She'd stopped asking. "I'm in London for a conference," Catherine said. "Counter-intelligence symposium at the Royal United Services Institute. Advisory capacity. They trot us out like show horses now, the retired ones. We give talks about lessons learned, and everyone nods and then goes on to make exactly the same mistakes." "So nothing's changed." "Everything's changed. That's rather the problem." She set her wine glass down. "The kids they're sending out now—God, Silas. They're all algorithms and satellite feeds. Not one of them can sit in a café in Vienna for six hours watching a door without checking their phone." "You sound like every generation complaining about the next." "I sound like someone who knows what the work costs." That landed. Rory saw it—the way Silas' shoulders pulled back a fraction, the way his right hand moved to his left knee beneath the table. Unconscious. A tell, if you knew what to look for. "Is that why you're here?" His voice had dropped half a register. "To reminisce about costs?" Catherine didn't answer immediately. She looked at the photographs on the wall again, and this time Rory followed her gaze to a particular one—black and white, slightly overexposed. Three people standing in front of what looked like a bridge, winter coats, blurred faces. Rory had walked past it a hundred times without noticing it. "That one's new," Catherine said. "It's been up for nine years." "Then it's new since the last time I was here." Silence. The trumpet on the jukebox found a note and held it, trembling. "You came once," Silas said. "You came once, in the first year. Sat in that exact seat. Drank exactly one glass of that same terrible Merlot and told me I was wasting myself." "You were." "And then you left, and I didn't hear from you for fourteen years. No call when Margaret died. Nothing when they gave me the discharge papers. Not a word." "I know." "So why now, Cate?" She pressed her thumb against the base of her wine glass and watched the red shift and settle. In the bar's low light, the lines around her eyes deepened into something that looked carved rather than worn. "Robert's dead." Rory didn't know the name, but she knew its impact. Silas went still in a way that was different from his usual composure—not the deliberate stillness of a man who had trained himself to hold, but the involuntary freeze of something struck. "When?" "Three weeks ago. Pancreatic. Fast, at least. His daughter called me. Apparently he'd left instructions." "Instructions." "He wanted us both notified. Specifically. By name." She reached into the pocket of her coat and produced an envelope—heavy cream stock, unsealed. She placed it on the table between them. "His daughter said he'd written these before the diagnosis. Before he even knew." Silas looked at the envelope the way a man looks at an unexploded device he's been trained to defuse but hasn't touched in years. He didn't pick it up. "Robert Hale," he said. "Your husband." "My ex-husband. For twenty-two years now." "Your ex-husband who I—" "Yes." The word shut the sentence like a door. Rory's fingers tightened around her glass. She understood, without specifics, the topography of what lay between these two people. A shared history that had fault lines running through it. "I didn't come to open anything, Silas." Catherine's voice had shifted. Quieter. Stripped of the sardonic edge she'd been wielding like a screen. "I came because a man who meant something to both of us is gone, and I didn't want to carry that envelope around anymore. It's yours. Whatever's in it is between you and him." "He's dead, Cate. There is no between." "Then it's between you and whatever you did with what happened." Silas' jaw worked. His hazel eyes had gone dark, the amber gone out of them like a fire banked for the night. He looked at the envelope, then at Catherine, then past her to the photographs on the wall—that overexposed shot of three people on a bridge in winter. "Prague," he said. "Yes." "He was the third." "He was always the third. In everything." Catherine picked up her wine and finished it in one long swallow, then set the glass down with a precision that spoke of practice. "I blamed you for a long time. You know that." "You told me. Quite clearly. In that debrief room with four people watching." "I blamed you because it was easier than blaming the work. Or blaming him for volunteering. Or blaming myself for not—" She stopped. Drew a breath through her nose. "I was very good at blame, back then. World class. Could have gone professional." "You did go professional. We all did." A ghost of a smile. It didn't reach her eyes. "I suppose we did." Rory set her glass down silently and slipped off the bar stool. She moved to the back of the bar, found the bottle of Jameson that Silas kept on the third shelf for occasions he never specified, and poured two measures into short glasses. She carried them to the booth without a word, set one in front of each of them, and walked back to her station. Catherine looked at the whiskey, then across the room at Rory with an expression of mild surprise. "She yours?" Catherine asked. "She lives upstairs. She's no one's." "Smart girl." "Too smart for delivery work. I keep telling her that." "You always did collect strays." "And you always mistook keeping people close for collecting them." Catherine picked up the whiskey. Held it but didn't drink. "I came to say I'm sorry, Silas. Not for the debrief. For the fourteen years after it." He looked at her for a long time. His hand found the envelope on the table and his fingers rested on its edge—not gripping, not pushing it away. Just touching it, the way you touch something to confirm it's real. "Robert wrote to me. A dying man wrote letters to settle what the living couldn't be bothered to." "That's not—" "That's exactly what happened." His voice was even. Almost gentle. Which was worse, Rory thought. The gentleness meant the anger had aged past heat into something colder and more permanent. "You retired six months ago. You could have come then. You could have come any time in fourteen years. You chose to come now because a dead man gave you permission." Catherine set the whiskey down without drinking it. Her hand was steady. Everything about her was steady except her eyes, which had taken on the bright, hard quality of something under pressure. "You're right." "I know I'm right." "And I know that my being right about your leg doesn't make you stretch it. We're very good at knowing and very poor at doing. Both of us. All three of us." She glanced at the envelope. "Robert included." The jukebox clicked again. The trumpet was gone, replaced by piano—sparse, unhurried. Silas picked up the whiskey. He didn't toast. He didn't say a word. He drank it the way he did everything now—measured, deliberate, alone even in company. Then he slid the envelope into the inside pocket of his waistcoat and placed both hands flat on the table. "Stay for another glass," he said. Not warm. Not cold. Factual, like a weather report. "I'll pour you something that isn't that Merlot." Catherine studied his face. Whatever she found there, it was enough. She nodded once. Silas stood, the left leg straightening a beat behind the right, and made his way back toward the bar. He passed Rory without meeting her eyes, but his hand brushed the bar top near her elbow—a gesture so brief it could have been accidental if she didn't know him. She stayed where she was, nursing the last of her bitter, watching him select a bottle from the shelf with the same care he gave to everything that mattered. Across the room, Catherine Hale sat alone in the booth beneath photographs of people and places that had outlived their context, her steady hands folded on the table, waiting for a glass of something better from a man she'd wounded by absence—the quietest and most durable weapon either of them had ever deployed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences91
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.484
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2192
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2192
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"crystal"
3"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences191
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1386
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Catherine"
discoveredNames
Wednesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas12
Prague1
Rory17
Hale2
Catherine15
Unconscious1
Silence1
Quieter1
Drew1
Jameson1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Hale"
5"Catherine"
6"Silence"
7"Drew"
8"Jameson"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.887
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a bridge, winter coats, blurr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.462
wordCount2163
matches
0"not the deliberate stillness of a man who had trained himself to hold, but the involuntary freeze of something struck"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs104
mean20.8
std19.83
cv0.953
sampleLengths
067
163
218
310
422
513
616
763
87
974
101
1117
1229
139
1431
157
1620
1726
183
195
2057
2124
221
231
2449
255
263
2717
289
2911
3010
3123
3212
332
3426
351
363
3735
3848
393
4046
419
4210
4335
4416
4554
465
476
4810
4913
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"been smoked"
1"been trained"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was bothering"
1"was searching"
2"was, nursing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences191
ratio0.099
matches
0"The smell hit first—old wood, spilled lager, the ghost of a thousand cigarettes that hadn't been smoked indoors for over a decade but had soaked into the grain of the bar like memory."
1"Then his gaze drifted over her shoulder toward the far corner booth, and something shifted in his expression—a tightening around the mouth, a slight narrowing of the eyes that she'd learned to read over the past year like weather changes."
2"Good coat—dark navy, well-tailored."
3"She'd learned that too—how Silas parceled out information the way a miser parceled out coins, one at a time and only when the silence grew expensive enough."
4"Rory glanced between them—the woman in the booth who hadn't once looked toward the bar, and Silas, whose stillness had taken on the quality of stone."
5"Something crossed her face—not surprise, not relief."
6"Rory turned away, positioned herself at the far end of the bar with her half-pint, and did what she did best—listened while appearing not to."
7"The jukebox in the corner—an actual jukebox, one of Silas' affectations—clicked between tracks and landed on something with a muted trumpet."
8"Rory took a sip of her bitter and studied the photographs on the wall nearest her—faces she didn't know, places she'd never been."
9"Rory saw it—the way Silas' shoulders pulled back a fraction, the way his right hand moved to his left knee beneath the table."
10"She looked at the photographs on the wall again, and this time Rory followed her gaze to a particular one—black and white, slightly overexposed."
11"Silas went still in a way that was different from his usual composure—not the deliberate stillness of a man who had trained himself to hold, but the involuntary freeze of something struck."
12"\"He wanted us both notified. Specifically. By name.\" She reached into the pocket of her coat and produced an envelope—heavy cream stock, unsealed."
13"He looked at the envelope, then at Catherine, then past her to the photographs on the wall—that overexposed shot of three people on a bridge in winter."
14"His hand found the envelope on the table and his fingers rested on its edge—not gripping, not pushing it away."
15"The trumpet was gone, replaced by piano—sparse, unhurried."
16"He drank it the way he did everything now—measured, deliberate, alone even in company."
17"He passed Rory without meeting her eyes, but his hand brushed the bar top near her elbow—a gesture so brief it could have been accidental if she didn't know him."
18"Across the room, Catherine Hale sat alone in the booth beneath photographs of people and places that had outlived their context, her steady hands folded on the table, waiting for a glass of something better from a man she'd wounded by absence—the quietest and most durable weapon either of them had ever deployed."
99.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1029
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04081632653061224
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009718172983479106
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences191
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences191
mean11.32
std9.92
cv0.876
sampleLengths
011
123
233
36
428
529
618
74
86
922
104
119
1215
131
1423
1540
167
1728
1815
197
204
2120
221
235
244
258
262
2727
289
291
309
3121
327
3311
349
3526
363
375
3823
395
4029
4111
427
431
445
451
461
479
4815
4925
46.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.32460732984293195
totalSentences191
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"Then his gaze drifted over"
1"Just touching it, the way"
2"Then he slid the envelope"
ratio0.03
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences100
matches
0"His hands stopped moving."
1"He signed it with his"
2"She was maybe late fifties,"
3"She stared at the wall"
4"He set down the glass."
5"She'd learned that too—how Silas"
6"He poured her a half-pint"
7"She watched him cross the"
8"He slid into the booth"
9"She took a sip of"
10"She turned the wine glass"
11"She'd stopped asking."
12"She set her wine glass"
13"His voice had dropped half"
14"She looked at the photographs"
15"She pressed her thumb against"
16"She reached into the pocket"
17"She placed it on the"
18"He didn't pick it up."
19"She understood, without specifics, the"
ratio0.36
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon buzzed above"
1"Rory balanced a stack of"
2"The smell hit first—old wood,"
3"The Raven's Nest held maybe"
4"Silas stood behind the bar"
5"Rory said, setting the containers"
6"Silas didn't look up."
7"His hands stopped moving."
8"Rory slid the receipt across"
9"He signed it with his"
10"Rory turned to look"
11"The woman in the corner"
12"She was maybe late fifties,"
13"She stared at the wall"
14"He set down the glass."
15"She'd learned that too—how Silas"
16"The word that covered everything"
17"Silas set both hands flat"
18"Rory glanced between them—the woman"
19"He poured her a half-pint"
ratio0.84
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Before the bar, before the"
ratio0.01
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Raven's Nest held maybe a dozen bodies, most of them solo drinkers nursing their poison with the particular devotion of people who had nowhere pressing to b…"
1"She watched him cross the room with the uneven gait that he usually masked better, each step deliberate, his reflection sliding across the old maps that papered…"
2"Silas went still in a way that was different from his usual composure—not the deliberate stillness of a man who had trained himself to hold, but the involuntary…"
3"Everything about her was steady except her eyes, which had taken on the bright, hard quality of something under pressure."
4"She stayed where she was, nursing the last of her bitter, watching him select a bottle from the shelf with the same care he gave to everything that mattered."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She reached, unsealed"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences91
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