Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNP1ZX05JDBNN5Q9TFYPZ

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.004414
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones formed a jagged circle against the bruised purple sky of Richmond Park, their bark blackened and slick with evening dew. Aurora Carter stepped between them, the hem of her delivery trousers catching on a patch of thistles she hadn't seen in the fading light. The air inside the boundary tasted different, thick and sweet like rotting lilies, a stark contrast to the exhaust-choked wind whipping through the rest of the park. She clutched the strap of her insulated bag, knuckles white, though the Golden Empress orders inside had long since been delivered. This wasn't about work. The pendant against her collarbone pulsed, a rhythmic throb of heat that matched the sudden hammering of her own heart. Rory stopped just past the threshold. The wildflowers here bloomed in violent clusters of red and violet, defying the November chill, but their petals looked too heavy, drooping as if weighted by unseen water. Silence pressed against her ears, not the peaceful quiet of a city park at night, but a vacuum that sucked away the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of ordinary leaves. She scanned the clearing, her bright blue eyes darting from shadow to shadow. The reason she came—the whisper Eva passed along about a way out, a permanent exit from the life that constantly chased her—felt foolish now. A twig snapped behind her. She spun around, hand diving into her pocket for the pepper spray she kept next to her keys. Nothing stood there but the looming oaks, their branches twisted into shapes that resembled grasping fingers. The wind didn't blow here; the leaves hung motionless, yet the sound repeated. *Snap.* Closer this time. Not the dry crack of wood under a boot, but the wet tear of something soft breaking. Rory backed away from the sound, her heel sinking into moss that felt spongy and unnervingly warm. The Heartstone pendant burned hotter, searing her skin through her thin t-shirt. She ignored the pain, focusing on the perimeter. The stones seemed to have shifted. When she entered, the gap between the northern and eastern monoliths faced the path home. Now, that opening stared into a wall of dense, impenetrable thicket. The geometry of the grove had folded in on itself. "Is anyone there?" Her voice came out flat, stripped of the courage she usually wore like armor. The words died instantly, absorbed by the heavy air before they could echo. From the corner of her eye, a flash of movement flickered near the base of the largest stone. She whipped her head toward it. Empty space. Just the sway of a fern that hadn't moved a second ago. She blinked, rubbing the grit from her eyes, telling herself it was fatigue, the long shifts at the restaurant, the lack of sleep since fleeing Evan's last threat. But the certainty coiled in her gut, cold and hard. She was not alone. The scent of ozone mixed with the floral rot, sharp and metallic. The pendant vibrated violently now, a constant hum against her sternum. It wasn't just near a Hel portal; it was reacting to the fabric of this place unraveling. Rory took a step toward the stones, intending to force her way back through the boundary, but the ground beneath her feet rippled. The moss retreated, pulling back like a living tide to reveal soil that looked too much like dried skin, cracked and flaking. A low whisper drifted from the darkness beyond the flowers. It sounded like her name, but the vowels were stretched, distorted into a gurgling chant. *"Rorrrry..."* She froze, breath hitching in her throat. The voice didn't come from one direction; it emanated from everywhere at once, vibrating in the soles of her shoes. She scanned the tree line again. Between the trunks, shapes stood where there had been none before. Tall, slender silhouettes that blended perfectly with the bark, visible only when she stopped moving. As soon as she shifted her weight, they dissolved back into the woodwork. Her pulse roared in her ears, drowning out the whisper. She forced her legs to move, walking backward toward the center of the grove, keeping her eyes on the perimeter. The flowers turned their heads as she passed, the blooms tracking her movement with a slow, creaking rotation. Petals unfurled to reveal centers that looked suspiciously like human eyes, blinking in unison. Rory squeezed her eyes shut for a fraction of a second, a desperate attempt to reset her vision. When she opened them, the silhouettes had advanced. They stood just outside the ring of wildflowers, motionless, facing her. No features marred their smooth, bark-like faces, yet she felt their gaze boring into her, heavy and hungry. The temperature plummeted, frost crystallizing on the warm moss, creating a halo of ice around her boots. The pendant grew hot enough to sting. She fumbled with the clasp, fingers trembling, but the chain refused to yield, as if the silver had fused to her skin. The warmth spread outward, tracing the veins in her arm, creeping up her neck. It wasn't comforting heat; it felt like a fever breaking, a sign of infection. A sound like wet dragging came from her left. She turned slowly. One of the figures had stepped into the flowerbed. It moved with a jerky, unnatural gait, limbs bending at angles that defied anatomy. It didn't walk; it unfolded, segment by segment, closing the distance without seeming to traverse the space between them. The others followed, stepping over the vibrant blooms without crushing a single petal. Rory's back hit the central cluster of stones. Cold granite bit into her spine. She pressed herself against the rough surface, searching for a handhold, a crack, anything to climb or squeeze through. The stone felt slick, coated in a slimy substance that smelled of old blood. She wiped her hand on her trousers, leaving a dark smear. The lead figure stopped ten feet away. It tilted its head, a sickening crack echoing in the stillness. The whispering grew louder, overlapping voices now, some sounding like Eva, others like her father, all twisted into something unrecognizable. They spoke of running, of hiding, of how she could never truly leave. "You don't belong here," she whispered, the words trembling. The figure raised an arm. Where a hand should have been, a cluster of sharp, black thorns protruded from the wrist, dripping a clear, viscous fluid. It pointed at the pendant glowing against her chest. The light from the crimson gem cast long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and slither across the ground toward her feet. Rory kicked at the encroaching shadows, but they passed through her boots like smoke, leaving a trail of numbness in their wake. Her toes went cold, then lost all sensation. The numbness crawled up her ankles, a creeping paralysis. She tried to push off the stone, to run, but her legs refused to respond. She slid down the trunk, landing hard on the skin-like soil. The circle of figures tightened. They made no sound now, no footsteps, no breathing. Just the endless, rhythmic pulsing of the Heartstone, which seemed to sync with the slow, deliberate approach of the things in the dark. The wildflowers closed their eye-like centers one by one as the shadows swallowed the clearing, leaving only the faint, crimson glow of the pendant and the bright, terrified reflection in Rory's own eyes. The lead figure loomed over her, blocking out the starless sky. The thorns hovered inches from her face. The scent of rotting lilies became overwhelming, choking her, filling her lungs with the taste of grave dirt. She opened her mouth to scream, but the air refused to enter her lungs. The silence returned, absolute and suffocating, as the thorn-tipped finger descended.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:40:51.013Z" 2/19/2026, 12:40:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"scanned"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"looming"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"unraveling"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
18
word"comforting"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"dancing"
count1
21
word"footsteps"
count1
22
word"loomed"
count1
23
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"throb"
4"chill"
5"silence"
6"scanned"
7"whisper"
8"looming"
9"searing"
10"echo"
11"flickered"
12"vibrated"
13"unraveling"
14"weight"
15"pulse"
16"warmth"
17"tracing"
18"comforting"
19"echoing"
20"dancing"
21"footsteps"
22"loomed"
23"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
81.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1302
ratio0.002
matches
0"Snap."
1"\"Rorrrry...\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1294
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
November1
Eva2
Closer1
Heartstone2
Evan1
Hel1
Rory7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Empress"
2"November"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like her name, but the vowels were"
1"felt like a fever breaking, a sign of i"
2"shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and slither across the ground toward her feet"
46.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.536
wordCount1302
matches
0"not the peaceful quiet of a city park at night, but a vacuum"
1"Not the dry crack of wood under a boot, but the wet tear of something soft breaking"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
81.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean62
std26.89
cv0.434
sampleLengths
0121
1103
25
368
479
530
680
785
826
972
1062
1172
1257
1367
1458
1551
169
1761
1865
1970
2061
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"been delivered"
1"were stretched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was reacting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences94
ratio0.064
matches
0"The reason she came—the whisper Eva passed along about a way out, a permanent exit from the life that constantly chased her—felt foolish now."
1"The wind didn't blow here; the leaves hung motionless, yet the sound repeated."
2"It wasn't just near a Hel portal; it was reacting to the fabric of this place unraveling."
3"The voice didn't come from one direction; it emanated from everywhere at once, vibrating in the soles of her shoes."
4"It wasn't comforting heat; it felt like a fever breaking, a sign of infection."
5"It didn't walk; it unfolded, segment by segment, closing the distance without seeming to traverse the space between them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1298
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.026964560862865947
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00847457627118644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.85
std6.88
cv0.497
sampleLengths
025
124
227
321
44
520
66
728
832
913
1024
115
1218
1316
1413
154
1617
1717
1812
198
206
2115
2211
2310
2417
2513
2618
276
282
2912
3028
3110
324
3312
3411
3517
3623
3722
3810
3915
401
417
4220
436
4411
4515
4613
4710
4820
4918
45.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3191489361702128
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners30
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Just the sway of a"
1"Just the endless, rhythmic pulsing"
ratio0.022
85.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences92
matches
0"She clutched the strap of"
1"She scanned the clearing, her"
2"She spun around, hand diving"
3"She ignored the pain, focusing"
4"Her voice came out flat,"
5"She whipped her head toward"
6"She blinked, rubbing the grit"
7"She was not alone."
8"It wasn't just near a"
9"It sounded like her name,"
10"She froze, breath hitching in"
11"She scanned the tree line"
12"Her pulse roared in her"
13"She forced her legs to"
14"They stood just outside the"
15"She fumbled with the clasp,"
16"It wasn't comforting heat; it"
17"She turned slowly."
18"It moved with a jerky,"
19"It didn't walk; it unfolded,"
ratio0.337
52.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences92
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter stepped between them,"
2"The air inside the boundary"
3"She clutched the strap of"
4"This wasn't about work."
5"The pendant against her collarbone"
6"Rory stopped just past the"
7"The wildflowers here bloomed in"
8"She scanned the clearing, her"
9"The reason she came—the whisper"
10"A twig snapped behind her."
11"She spun around, hand diving"
12"Nothing stood there but the"
13"The wind didn't blow here;"
14"Rory backed away from the"
15"The Heartstone pendant burned hotter,"
16"She ignored the pain, focusing"
17"The stones seemed to have"
18"The geometry of the grove"
19"Her voice came out flat,"
ratio0.815
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now, that opening stared into"
1"As soon as she shifted"
ratio0.022
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The pendant against her collarbone pulsed, a rhythmic throb of heat that matched the sudden hammering of her own heart."
1"The wildflowers here bloomed in violent clusters of red and violet, defying the November chill, but their petals looked too heavy, drooping as if weighted by un…"
2"Silence pressed against her ears, not the peaceful quiet of a city park at night, but a vacuum that sucked away the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of ord…"
3"Nothing stood there but the looming oaks, their branches twisted into shapes that resembled grasping fingers."
4"Rory backed away from the sound, her heel sinking into moss that felt spongy and unnervingly warm."
5"She blinked, rubbing the grit from her eyes, telling herself it was fatigue, the long shifts at the restaurant, the lack of sleep since fleeing Evan's last thre…"
6"The moss retreated, pulling back like a living tide to reveal soil that looked too much like dried skin, cracked and flaking."
7"Tall, slender silhouettes that blended perfectly with the bark, visible only when she stopped moving."
8"The warmth spread outward, tracing the veins in her arm, creeping up her neck."
9"It moved with a jerky, unnatural gait, limbs bending at angles that defied anatomy."
10"The stone felt slick, coated in a slimy substance that smelled of old blood."
11"The light from the crimson gem cast long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and slither across the ground toward her feet."
12"Just the endless, rhythmic pulsing of the Heartstone, which seemed to sync with the slow, deliberate approach of the things in the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, the words trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
73.7203%