| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1306 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1306 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "looming" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "unraveling" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "comforting" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "dancing" | | 21 | "footsteps" | | 22 | "loomed" | | 23 | "grave" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1302 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Snap." | | 1 | "\"Rorrrry...\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1294 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | November | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Closer | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like her name, but the vowels were" | | 1 | "felt like a fever breaking, a sign of i" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and slither across the ground toward her feet" |
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| 46.39% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.536 | | wordCount | 1302 | | matches | | 0 | "not the peaceful quiet of a city park at night, but a vacuum" | | 1 | "Not the dry crack of wood under a boot, but the wet tear of something soft breaking" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 62 | | std | 26.89 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 121 | | 1 | 103 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 80 | | 7 | 85 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 61 |
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| 97.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "been delivered" | | 1 | "were stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The reason she came—the whisper Eva passed along about a way out, a permanent exit from the life that constantly chased her—felt foolish now." | | 1 | "The wind didn't blow here; the leaves hung motionless, yet the sound repeated." | | 2 | "It wasn't just near a Hel portal; it was reacting to the fabric of this place unraveling." | | 3 | "The voice didn't come from one direction; it emanated from everywhere at once, vibrating in the soles of her shoes." | | 4 | "It wasn't comforting heat; it felt like a fever breaking, a sign of infection." | | 5 | "It didn't walk; it unfolded, segment by segment, closing the distance without seeming to traverse the space between them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1298 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.026964560862865947 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00847457627118644 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.85 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.497 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 45.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3191489361702128 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the sway of a" | | 1 | "Just the endless, rhythmic pulsing" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 85.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the strap of" | | 1 | "She scanned the clearing, her" | | 2 | "She spun around, hand diving" | | 3 | "She ignored the pain, focusing" | | 4 | "Her voice came out flat," | | 5 | "She whipped her head toward" | | 6 | "She blinked, rubbing the grit" | | 7 | "She was not alone." | | 8 | "It wasn't just near a" | | 9 | "It sounded like her name," | | 10 | "She froze, breath hitching in" | | 11 | "She scanned the tree line" | | 12 | "Her pulse roared in her" | | 13 | "She forced her legs to" | | 14 | "They stood just outside the" | | 15 | "She fumbled with the clasp," | | 16 | "It wasn't comforting heat; it" | | 17 | "She turned slowly." | | 18 | "It moved with a jerky," | | 19 | "It didn't walk; it unfolded," |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 52.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped between them," | | 2 | "The air inside the boundary" | | 3 | "She clutched the strap of" | | 4 | "This wasn't about work." | | 5 | "The pendant against her collarbone" | | 6 | "Rory stopped just past the" | | 7 | "The wildflowers here bloomed in" | | 8 | "She scanned the clearing, her" | | 9 | "The reason she came—the whisper" | | 10 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 11 | "She spun around, hand diving" | | 12 | "Nothing stood there but the" | | 13 | "The wind didn't blow here;" | | 14 | "Rory backed away from the" | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant burned hotter," | | 16 | "She ignored the pain, focusing" | | 17 | "The stones seemed to have" | | 18 | "The geometry of the grove" | | 19 | "Her voice came out flat," |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, that opening stared into" | | 1 | "As soon as she shifted" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant against her collarbone pulsed, a rhythmic throb of heat that matched the sudden hammering of her own heart." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here bloomed in violent clusters of red and violet, defying the November chill, but their petals looked too heavy, drooping as if weighted by un…" | | 2 | "Silence pressed against her ears, not the peaceful quiet of a city park at night, but a vacuum that sucked away the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of ord…" | | 3 | "Nothing stood there but the looming oaks, their branches twisted into shapes that resembled grasping fingers." | | 4 | "Rory backed away from the sound, her heel sinking into moss that felt spongy and unnervingly warm." | | 5 | "She blinked, rubbing the grit from her eyes, telling herself it was fatigue, the long shifts at the restaurant, the lack of sleep since fleeing Evan's last thre…" | | 6 | "The moss retreated, pulling back like a living tide to reveal soil that looked too much like dried skin, cracked and flaking." | | 7 | "Tall, slender silhouettes that blended perfectly with the bark, visible only when she stopped moving." | | 8 | "The warmth spread outward, tracing the veins in her arm, creeping up her neck." | | 9 | "It moved with a jerky, unnatural gait, limbs bending at angles that defied anatomy." | | 10 | "The stone felt slick, coated in a slimy substance that smelled of old blood." | | 11 | "The light from the crimson gem cast long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and slither across the ground toward her feet." | | 12 | "Just the endless, rhythmic pulsing of the Heartstone, which seemed to sync with the slow, deliberate approach of the things in the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |