Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNP3NKB53WDY7VFSWFM2K

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Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.028671
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of stale beer and decades-old wood polish. Rory shouldered through the door at half-past ten, still wearing the thermal bag straps that had left grooves across her shoulders. One more shift done. One more day survived. The green neon above the entrance flickered behind her as she stepped into the familiar gloom. She stopped two steps inside. Eva sat at the far end of the bar, her blonde hair swept into a twist that probably cost more than Rory made in a week. Designer coat draped over the stool beside her. Manicured fingers wrapped around a glass of something amber that caught the low light. Their eyes met. Rory's stomach dropped through the floor. "Christ," Eva breathed. Silas glanced up from polishing a tumbler, his hazel eyes moving between them with the careful assessment of a man who'd spent thirty years reading rooms. He set the glass down without a word and disappeared through the doorway behind the bar. "Eva." Rory's voice came out flat. She moved toward the bar because standing by the door felt worse than sitting. "What are you doing here?" "I could ask you the same thing." Eva's accent had changed, the edges smoothed away. Private school polish layered over their shared Cardiff roots. "I thought you were still at university. Finishing your degree." "That was four years ago." "Four years." Eva took a slow sip. "You never called." Rory slid onto a stool three down from her. The photos on the walls watched them. Prague, Budapest, Belfast. Silas had a thing for cities with scars. "You knew where I was." "Did I?" Eva turned fully now. Her face had changed too. Sharper. The softness around her eyes gone, replaced by something harder. "You vanished, Rory. One day you're in Cardiff, the next your phone's disconnected and your flat's empty." "You told me to come to London." "I said you could crash on my sofa for a few days. Get away from that wanker." Eva's perfectly applied lipstick pressed into a thin line. "Not disappear into thin air for four bloody years." The door to the back opened. Silas emerged with a bottle of whiskey, the good stuff he kept hidden, and poured two fingers into a glass. Slid it across the bar to Rory without asking. She wrapped her hands around it. "I needed space." "Space." Eva laughed, but nothing in it sounded amused. "Is that what we're calling it?" "What would you call it?" "Running away." The whiskey burned going down. Rory set the glass on the scarred wood. "You got married." Eva's hand moved instinctively to her left ring finger, then away. The gesture quick enough to mean something. "How did you—" "Your mum mentioned it. Ran into her at Tesco two years back." "You spoke to my mother?" "She spoke at me. Showed me pictures on her phone. Big wedding. Castell Coch. Very posh." Eva's jaw tightened. "Matthew's family wanted traditional." "Matthew." Rory picked up the glass again, swirled the amber liquid. "Investment banker?" "Solicitor. Corporate law." "Of course he is." "What's that supposed to mean?" "Nothing. Just sounds exactly like the sort of bloke you'd marry." Eva's chair scraped against the floor as she swiveled to face her fully. "You don't get to do that. You don't get to disappear for four years and then sit here making judgments about my life." "I'm not—" "Yes, you are." Eva's voice cracked around the edges. "You're sitting there in your delivery uniform, looking at me like I'm some sort of sellout because I didn't burn my entire life down." Rory studied the maps on the walls. Budapest looked particularly detailed. "How's the campaign work going?" Eva went very still. "I left the charity." "When?" "Does it matter?" "You were going to change the world. Housing rights. That was your whole thing." "People grow up, Rory. They get real jobs. Mortgages. Responsibilities." "Right. Responsibilities." Rory finished the whiskey. "Like matching sofas and dinner parties in Richmond." "Putney, actually." Eva's voice had gone cold. "And you'd know all about my life if you'd bothered to answer any of my messages. The fifty-odd texts I sent before I finally gave up." "I didn't have anything to say." "Bollocks. You didn't want to face me." The words hung between them, sharp and true. Silas moved past them, collecting empties from the nearby tables. His limp more pronounced than usual. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he worked. Giving them space but close enough to intervene if needed. "What happened to you?" Eva's voice had gone quiet. "Where's the girl who stood on the union steps yelling about tuition fees? Who dragged me to protests every other weekend?" "She's delivering lo mein in Soho and living above a bar." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I've got." Eva pulled her coat off the adjacent stool, laid it across her lap. The fabric probably cost what Rory made in a month. "I came here looking for Silas, actually. My firm's handling a property dispute. His name came up in the title search for this building." "Small world." "Tiny." Eva smoothed invisible wrinkles from her coat. "I didn't expect to find you here." "Story of my life." "Don't." Eva looked at her properly then, really looked. Her eyes catalogued everything. The thermal bag straps' indentations. The cheap trainers. The small crescent scar on Rory's left wrist that she used to trace with her thumb when they'd sit up talking until dawn. "Don't do the flippant thing. I'm not some stranger you need to perform for." "Aren't you though?" The words landed between them like shattered glass. Eva stood. Gathered her coat. Her hands moved with practiced efficiency, every gesture controlled. "I should go. Matthew's expecting me." Rory nodded. Pushed her empty glass across the bar. "You know what's funny?" Eva paused at the door, one hand on the frame. The green neon behind her turned her blonde hair strange colors. "I used to wonder what I'd say if I ever saw you again. Rehearsed whole conversations in my head." She turned back, and her eyes were bright in the dim light. "Turns out I don't have anything to say either." The door closed behind her with a soft click. Silas reappeared, refilled Rory's glass without comment. His hazel eyes carried something that might have been sympathy. "Don't." "Wasn't going to say a word." He went back to polishing glasses. "Old friend?" "Something like that." "Looked like more than something." Rory stared at the photographs on the walls. All those wounded cities, frozen in black and white. "Yeah. It was."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva turned fully [fully]"
1"Eva's voice cracked around [around]"
2"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.086
82.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"gloom"
3"stomach"
4"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1111
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount632
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory15
Silas5
Private1
Cardiff1
Budapest2
Belfast1
Eva19
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Budapest"
2"Belfast"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1111
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean16.58
std15.82
cv0.954
sampleLengths
056
15
248
33
46
53
642
725
834
95
1010
1132
1239
137
1435
1541
163
1715
185
192
2016
2121
2212
235
2416
257
2613
273
284
295
3011
3136
322
3333
3416
358
361
373
3814
3910
4014
4133
426
437
448
4540
4630
4711
484
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences128
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount547
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.04936014625228519
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.016453382084095063
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean8.68
std6.26
cv0.722
sampleLengths
011
121
24
34
416
55
626
78
814
93
106
113
1226
1316
146
1514
165
1715
189
1910
205
217
223
239
247
253
268
275
286
295
301
3110
3217
337
3426
359
366
3720
389
396
403
419
426
435
442
455
468
473
4811
497
75.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4765625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences71
matches
0"She stopped two steps inside."
1"Their eyes met."
2"He set the glass down"
3"She moved toward the bar"
4"Her face had changed too."
5"She wrapped her hands around"
6"His limp more pronounced than"
7"Her eyes catalogued everything."
8"Her hands moved with practiced"
9"She turned back, and her"
10"His hazel eyes carried something"
11"He went back to polishing"
ratio0.169
23.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences71
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Rory shouldered through the door"
2"The green neon above the"
3"She stopped two steps inside."
4"Eva sat at the far"
5"Designer coat draped over the"
6"Their eyes met."
7"Rory's stomach dropped through the"
8"Silas glanced up from polishing"
9"He set the glass down"
10"Rory's voice came out flat"
11"She moved toward the bar"
12"Eva's accent had changed, the"
13"Eva took a slow sip"
14"Rory slid onto a stool"
15"The photos on the walls"
16"Prague, Budapest, Belfast."
17"Silas had a thing for"
18"Eva turned fully now"
19"Her face had changed too."
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory shouldered through the door at half-past ten, still wearing the thermal bag straps that had left grooves across her shoulders."
1"Silas glanced up from polishing a tumbler, his hazel eyes moving between them with the careful assessment of a man who'd spent thirty years reading rooms."
2"His hazel eyes carried something that might have been sympathy."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva's accent had, the edges smoothed away"
1"She turned back, and her eyes were bright in the dim light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Eva laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
81.7402%