| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I glanced around [around]" | | 1 | "I said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "I asked suddenly [suddenly]" | | 3 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 73.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 945 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 945 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "mechanical" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of his words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 942 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 671 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.98% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like old whiskey and regret" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 942 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 14.06 | | std | 9.73 | | cv | 0.692 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 46.15% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was polishing" | | 1 | "was going" | | 2 | "was going" |
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| 83.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "He finally met my gaze, and something flickered in his eyes—surprise, maybe." | | 1 | "I stared at my reflection in the mirror behind the bar—pale skin, dark circles under my eyes, hair pulled back in a messy bun." |
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| 97.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 674 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04302670623145401 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017804154302670624 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 9.71 | | std | 5.9 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 59.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.41237113402061853 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Just putting one foot in" | | 1 | "Maybe it was time to" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "I slid onto the barstool," | | 1 | "he said without looking up" | | 2 | "I glanced around the empty" | | 3 | "He finally met my gaze," | | 4 | "I shrugged, pulling out my" | | 5 | "I took a long sip," | | 6 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 7 | "I laughed, a bitter sound" | | 8 | "He ignored my sarcasm." | | 9 | "I stared at my reflection" | | 10 | "I said finally" | | 11 | "His voice was soft, almost" | | 12 | "He'd watched me fall in" | | 13 | "He'd been there for all" | | 14 | "I admitted, my voice barely" | | 15 | "I laughed again, but this" | | 16 | "He slid a shot glass" | | 17 | "I hesitated, then downed it" | | 18 | "I said, setting the glass" | | 19 | "We sat in silence for" |
| | ratio | 0.633 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest smelled like" | | 1 | "I slid onto the barstool," | | 2 | "Silas was polishing glasses, his" | | 3 | "he said without looking up" | | 4 | "I glanced around the empty" | | 5 | "He finally met my gaze," | | 6 | "I shrugged, pulling out my" | | 7 | "Silas poured me a pint" | | 8 | "I took a long sip," | | 9 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 10 | "I laughed, a bitter sound" | | 11 | "He ignored my sarcasm." | | 12 | "I stared at my reflection" | | 13 | "I said finally" | | 14 | "His voice was soft, almost" | | 15 | "The question hung between us," | | 16 | "Silas had known me since" | | 17 | "He'd watched me fall in" | | 18 | "He'd been there for all" | | 19 | "I admitted, my voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Because even though I might" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned against the bar, studying me with those sharp eyes that had seen too much." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I admitted, my voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |