Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNTATEYG6PXSZR4T01KG0

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Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.072455
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The platform tiles still bore the ghost of their original cream and green, though decades of grime had dulled them to the color of old teeth. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung between two rusted pillars and let her eyes adjust to the portable floodlights her team had set up along the disused platform edge. The abandoned station beneath Camden smelled of standing water and something else — copper, maybe, or burnt sugar. She couldn't place it. "Watch the third rail housing," Sergeant Osei called from further down the platform. "Power's been cut since the sixties, but someone's run cables through here." Quinn stepped over a bundle of insulated wire that snaked across the platform and disappeared into the tunnel mouth. Her worn leather watch caught the floodlight as she checked the time. Quarter past two in the morning. She'd been asleep forty minutes before the call came. The body lay at the far end of the platform, near what had once been the station master's office. A man, mid-fifties, dressed in a tweed coat that looked expensive enough to belong in Mayfair rather than twenty meters beneath Camden High Street. He was on his back with his arms at his sides, palms up, fingers curled inward like a man catching rain. No visible wounds. No blood. His expression was the problemnot pain, not fear, but something Quinn had seen only once before. Awe. A dead man's face frozen in wonder. She crouched beside the body and pulled on a nitrile glove. The overhead fluorescents her team had rigged cast everything in a flat, surgical white that stripped the scene of shadow. She preferred shadow. Shadow told you where things were hiding. "Pathologist gives preliminary cause as cardiac arrest," Osei said, appearing at her shoulder with his tablet. He was young, thorough, and far too willing to accept the first answer. "No signs of struggle, no defensive wounds. Wallet's still in his jacket — Marcus Hale, fifty-three, address in Belgravia. Six hundred quid in cash, untouched." "So a rich man in a tweed coat suffered a heart attack in an abandoned Tube station at God-knows-when, and nobody robbed him." "Stranger things, ma'am." Quinn didn't answer. She lifted Hale's left hand. The fingertips were stained dark, almost black, but not with ink. The discoloration started at the nailbed and faded in a gradient toward the second knuckle, as though he'd dipped his fingers in something that had wicked upward through the skin. She raised the hand closer to the light. The staining had a faint iridescence to it, like petrol on wet asphalt. "What did the pathologist make of this?" Osei leaned in. "Mentioned it. Said it could be chemical exposure. They'll run tox when they get him on the table." Quinn set the hand down and turned her attention to the floor around the body. The platform had collected decades of dust and debris — broken tiles, pigeon feathers, the dessicated husk of a rat — but in the immediate vicinity of the corpse, the dust had been disturbed in a pattern. Not footprints. The disturbance radiated outward from the body in concentric rings, like ripples in a pond that had been frozen mid-expansion. She stood and backed up three paces to see it more clearly. "Get forensics to photograph this from above. I want the full radius of these markings." "Markings?" She pointed. Osei squinted, shifted, then she watched the recognition land on his face. "Could be from the paramedics," he offered. "They were first on scene." "Paramedics don't walk in perfect circles." She left him to arrange the photographs and moved toward the station master's office. The door was gone — had been gone for years by the look of the hinges, which were scabbed with rust — and the room beyond had been converted into something that made Quinn stop at the threshold. Stalls. Or what remained of them. Wooden trestle tables lined the walls, most collapsed or overturned. Fabric canopies in deep jewel tones — amethyst, sapphire, a red so dark it was nearly black — hung from hooks driven into the ceiling. Some had been torn down and lay in heaps. Glass jars littered the floor, most shattered, their contents reduced to stains and residue. A few remained intact on a shelf bolted to the far wall, and Quinn crossed the room to examine them. The jars held liquids of varying opacity and color. One appeared to contain moths suspended in amber fluid, their wings spread and motionless, preserved in positions of flight. Another held what looked like mercury, but it moved against gravity, climbing the interior walls of the jar in slow, deliberate tendrils. She didn't touch it. The whole room had the atmosphere of a bazaar packed up in panic. Quinn turned slowly, cataloging. A wooden crate in the corner held dozens of small objects wrapped in cloth. She knelt and unwrapped one. A brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch, its casing blooming with verdigris. The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not any alphabet she'd encountered in eighteen years of forgery cases, smuggling rings, or organized crime. She held it flat in her palm. The needle swung, then steadied, pointing not north but toward the tunnel mouth behind her. She rotated ninety degrees. The needle followed, maintaining its bearing on the tunnel. Quinn wrapped the compass back in its cloth and stood. She pulled out her phone and photographed the room in methodical sections — walls, floor, ceiling, each table, each jar. "Ma'am?" Osei was at the doorway, tablet pressed against his chest. His face had changed. The professional ease was gone. "What is this place?" "That's what we're going to find out." She stepped past him and back onto the platform. "Who called it in?" "Anonymous. Burner phone. Caller said there was a body in the old station and gave specific directions to the access point through the Camden Lock basement." "Someone wanted us to find him." "Or wanted to do the right thing." "The right thing would have been calling 999 and staying on the line. This person knew the location of a hidden entrance to a station that doesn't appear on any current TfL map. They knew exactly where the body was. They called, gave directions, and vanished. That's not civic duty, Osei. That's stage management." She walked back to the body. Crouched again. This time she opened the tweed coat and checked the interior pockets. In the breast pocket, her fingers found a small disc the size of a two-pound coin. She drew it out. Bone — off-white, smooth, slightly warm to the touch. One side bore a symbol that matched the script on the compass face. The other side was blank. "What's that, then?" Osei asked. Quinn turned the disc in the floodlight. "Looks like a token. Some kind of pass." "For what?" She glanced back at the room full of stalls and jars and impossible mercury. "For entry." She sealed the bone token in an evidence bag, but her mind was already running. A wealthy man from Belgravia comes to a hidden market beneath Camden. He carries a token that grants him access. Something happens — something that freezes a look of awe on his face and stops his heart. The market clears out. Someone calls the police and leads them straight to the body, but not before the vendors pack up. Except they didn't pack up cleanly. They left product behind. They left the stalls. They left in a rush. Quinn stood and looked at the concentric rings in the dust around the body. Something had radiated outward from Marcus Hale — or inward toward him. The paramedics hadn't made those marks. Neither had anyone walking. The pattern was too uniform, too symmetrical. It looked like the aftermath of a shockwave, the kind left in snow or sand after a detonation, but there was no blast damage, no char, no debris pattern consistent with an explosion. "Osei. The caller. Male or female?" He checked his tablet. "Female. Young, dispatch said. Sounded frightened." Quinn filed that. She walked the full length of the platform, scanning the ground. Near the entrance — a steel door that opened onto a narrow staircase leading up to the Camden Lock basement — she found a book. Leather-bound, small enough to fit in a coat pocket. It had been dropped rather than placed, lying face-down and splayed open. She picked it up and turned it over. The cover bore no title. Inside, the pages were covered in dense handwritten notes in two different hands. One wrote in English, a cramped academic script. The other wrote in the same unknown symbols that appeared on the compass and the bone token. Between the pages, someone had pressed a sprig of dried rosemary. It crumbled when she opened to that page. The English notes referenced something called "rift instability" and mentioned coordinates that could have been map references. One passage, underlined twice, read: *The alignment is accelerating. HM insists on attending the next opening despite the readings. I've told him the compass activity alone should be enough to postpone, but he won't hear it.* HM. Hale, Marcus. Quinn closed the book and bagged it. She walked back to the body and stood over it, looking down at the face caught in its final expression. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had worn a similar look. Not identical — Morris's eyes had been open, and they'd carried something closer to terror than wonder — but the same fundamental quality. The look of someone who had seen something the human face wasn't built to process. The pathologist had ruled Morris's death a stroke. Quinn had accepted it at the time because accepting it was easier than the alternative, which was admitting that the marks on the floor of that warehouse in Deptford — concentric, radiating, perfectly symmetrical — had no rational explanation. She looked at the rings in the dust around Marcus Hale. "Osei. Pull everything we have on Hale. Financial records, travel, known associates. I want to know every place this man has been in the last six months." "Cardiac arrest, ma'am. If the pathologist confirms it—" "The pathologist is going to confirm that his heart stopped. I don't dispute that his heart stopped. I'm interested in what stopped it." She pulled off the nitrile glove and shoved it in her pocket. "A man doesn't come to a place like this to have a heart attack. He came here to buy something, or sell something, or see something. Whatever it was, it killed him. And someone who knew exactly what happened wanted us standing here looking at it." "You think we're being played?" Quinn looked at the room of stalls, the jars of impossible things, the compass that didn't point north. The bone token in its evidence bag felt like it was generating its own gravity in her coat pocket. "I think someone opened a door they couldn't close. And now they need help they can't ask for directly." She turned toward the exit, her footsteps precise and measured against the old platform tiles. Behind her, the floodlights hummed, casting the scene in their flat, honest light. But Quinn had noticed something the lights couldn't reveal — the shadow under the nearest trestle table fell in the wrong direction. Away from the light source, where it should have stretched toward the wall, it reached instead toward the tunnel mouth. Toward whatever the compass needle pointed at. She stopped. Looked at it for a long, still moment. Then she kept walking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1934
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"perfectly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1934
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"aftermath"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"shattered"
2"etched"
3"methodical"
4"aftermath"
5"scanning"
6"footsteps"
7"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences132
matches
0"n in wonder"
1"p in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords31
totalWords1946
ratio0.016
matches
0"The alignment is accelerating. HM insists on attending the next opening despite the readings. I've told him the compass activity alone should be enough to postpone, but he won't hear it."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1548
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn16
Camden4
Osei6
Mayfair1
High1
Street1
Hale4
Belgravia1
Marcus3
Lock1
English2
Morris3
Deptford1
One4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Osei"
3"Hale"
4"Marcus"
5"Morris"
6"One"
places
0"Camden"
1"Mayfair"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Deptford"
globalScore0.983
windowScore1
72.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like mercury, but it moved against"
1"looked like the aftermath of a shockwave"
2"felt like it was generating its own gra"
45.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.542
wordCount1946
matches
0"not pain, not fear, but something Quinn had seen only once before"
1"not fear, but something Quinn had seen only once before"
2"not north but toward the tunnel mouth behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"admitting that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean36.72
std34.27
cv0.933
sampleLengths
080
125
246
395
441
554
623
73
870
97
1021
1186
1215
131
1414
1512
166
1752
18134
194
20111
2130
2224
2320
2426
256
267
2754
2867
295
3015
312
3216
3393
3476
356
3610
37111
3819
3953
403
4177
4247
4311
4427
458
4681
475
4837
4919
81.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences132
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"been frozen"
2"was gone "
3"been gone"
4"were scabbed"
5"been converted"
6"been torn"
7"was etched"
8"was gone"
9"been dropped"
10"were covered"
11"been open"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs262
matches
0"were hiding"
1"was admitting"
2"was generating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences158
ratio0.089
matches
0"The abandoned station beneath Camden smelled of standing water and something else — copper, maybe, or burnt sugar."
1"His expression was the problem — not pain, not fear, but something Quinn had seen only once before."
2"The platform had collected decades of dust and debris — broken tiles, pigeon feathers, the dessicated husk of a rat — but in the immediate vicinity of the corpse, the dust had been disturbed in a pattern."
3"The door was gone — had been gone for years by the look of the hinges, which were scabbed with rust — and the room beyond had been converted into something that made Quinn stop at the threshold."
4"Fabric canopies in deep jewel tones — amethyst, sapphire, a red so dark it was nearly black — hung from hooks driven into the ceiling."
5"The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not any alphabet she'd encountered in eighteen years of forgery cases, smuggling rings, or organized crime."
6"She pulled out her phone and photographed the room in methodical sections — walls, floor, ceiling, each table, each jar."
7"Bone — off-white, smooth, slightly warm to the touch."
8"Something happens — something that freezes a look of awe on his face and stops his heart."
9"Something had radiated outward from Marcus Hale — or inward toward him."
10"Near the entrance — a steel door that opened onto a narrow staircase leading up to the Camden Lock basement — she found a book."
11"Not identical — Morris's eyes had been open, and they'd carried something closer to terror than wonder — but the same fundamental quality."
12"Quinn had accepted it at the time because accepting it was easier than the alternative, which was admitting that the marks on the floor of that warehouse in Deptford — concentric, radiating, perfectly symmetrical — had no rational explanation."
13"But Quinn had noticed something the lights couldn't reveal — the shadow under the nearest trestle table fell in the wrong direction."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1534
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.027379400260756193
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0045632333767926985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean12.32
std9.27
cv0.753
sampleLengths
026
132
218
34
413
512
619
712
86
99
1019
1124
1221
133
142
1518
161
177
1811
1920
203
217
2216
2313
2425
2523
263
273
285
2911
3030
318
3213
337
343
3518
3615
3737
382
3920
4012
4115
421
432
4412
457
465
476
4814
4938
66.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4177215189873418
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners66
55.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"Away from the light source,"
1"Then she kept walking."
ratio0.017
94.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences121
matches
0"She couldn't place it."
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"She'd been asleep forty minutes"
3"He was on his back"
4"His expression was the problem"
5"She crouched beside the body"
6"She preferred shadow."
7"He was young, thorough, and"
8"She lifted Hale's left hand."
9"She raised the hand closer"
10"She stood and backed up"
11"She left him to arrange"
12"She didn't touch it."
13"She knelt and unwrapped one."
14"She held it flat in"
15"She rotated ninety degrees."
16"She pulled out her phone"
17"His face had changed."
18"She stepped past him and"
19"She walked back to the"
ratio0.314
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences121
matches
0"The platform tiles still bore"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The abandoned station beneath Camden"
3"She couldn't place it."
4"Sergeant Osei called from further"
5"Quinn stepped over a bundle"
6"Her worn leather watch caught"
7"Quarter past two in the"
8"She'd been asleep forty minutes"
9"The body lay at the"
10"A man, mid-fifties, dressed in"
11"He was on his back"
12"His expression was the problem"
13"A dead man's face frozen"
14"She crouched beside the body"
15"The overhead fluorescents her team"
16"She preferred shadow."
17"Shadow told you where things"
18"Osei said, appearing at her"
19"He was young, thorough, and"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A man, mid-fifties, dressed in a tweed coat that looked expensive enough to belong in Mayfair rather than twenty meters beneath Camden High Street."
1"The disturbance radiated outward from the body in concentric rings, like ripples in a pond that had been frozen mid-expansion."
2"The door was gone — had been gone for years by the look of the hinges, which were scabbed with rust — and the room beyond had been converted into something that…"
3"Something happens — something that freezes a look of awe on his face and stops his heart."
4"Quinn had accepted it at the time because accepting it was easier than the alternative, which was admitting that the marks on the floor of that warehouse in Dep…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the doorway tablet pressed (press)"
1"The English notes (note)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.118
83.2437%