| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "looming" | | 14 | "vibrated" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1128 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Check the grove tonight. Isolde hasn't responded in three days. Just look. Don't go in." |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1118 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | November | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | England | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Thames | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "England" | | 3 | "Thames" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller than they'd been moments ago, their pale heads turning to follow her movement" | | 1 | "quite resolve into a proper shape—her eyes slid off it, refusing to properly focus" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 25.07 | | std | 20.56 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 2 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter against the November chill and checked her phone—22:47." | | 1 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, the occasional night bird—cut off abruptly." | | 2 | "Isolde usually left markers here, small signs that she'd been present—a arrangement of acorns, fresh cuttings from herbs that didn't grow in England." | | 3 | "It didn't quite resolve into a proper shape—her eyes slid off it, refusing to properly focus." | | 4 | "For a moment—one terrible, suspended moment—nothing moved." | | 5 | "Only the creature remained visible—or rather, the absence of light where it stood became somehow darker than the darkness surrounding it." | | 6 | "She squeezed through the gap between standing stones, felt that strange resistance of the boundary, pushed through—" |
| |
| 90.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1129 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04428697962798937 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015943312666076175 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 8.61 | | std | 6.17 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 10 |
| |
| 65.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4307692307692308 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Only silence remained." | | 1 | "More like fabric dragging across" | | 2 | "Too tall to be human." | | 3 | "Too still to be anything" | | 4 | "Still silent except for that" | | 5 | "Still refusing to take proper" | | 6 | "Then it spoke." | | 7 | "Only the creature remained visible—or" |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come because Silas asked" | | 1 | "He'd slid a folded note" | | 2 | "It had been doing that" | | 3 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 4 | "She circled it slowly, scanning" | | 5 | "She turned in a slow" | | 6 | "Her words came out steadier" | | 7 | "They simply moved, stems bending" | | 8 | "She'd almost reached the boundary" | | 9 | "It didn't quite resolve into" | | 10 | "She stumbled backwards, hand flying" | | 11 | "She went down hard, palms" | | 12 | "She'd backed directly into it," | | 13 | "She grabbed the chain with" | | 14 | "It vibrated in her bones," | | 15 | "She pulled herself up." | | 16 | "It had to be." | | 17 | "She'd entered through these oaks" | | 18 | "She squeezed through the gap" | | 19 | "Her chest burned." |
| | ratio | 0.213 | |
| 98.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The screen flickered, signal dropping" | | 3 | "She'd come because Silas asked" | | 4 | "He'd slid a folded note" | | 5 | "Isolde hasn't responded in three" | | 6 | "The pendant beneath her shirt" | | 7 | "It had been doing that" | | 8 | "Rory stepped between two oak" | | 9 | "The air changed." | | 10 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—distant" | | 11 | "The dense, muffling silence of" | | 12 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible abundance" | | 13 | "The clearing stretched before her," | | 14 | "The fog that had been" | | 15 | "The air lay clear and" | | 16 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 17 | "The pendant's pulse quickened." | | 18 | "Rory moved further in, trainers" | | 19 | "Whatever kept this place caught" |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, barely visible through the fog that coiled between the ancient oaks." | | 1 | "It had been doing that more frequently lately, irregular heartbeats that matched no pattern she could discern." | | 2 | "The clearing stretched before her, circular and perfect, ringed by trees that stood too still." | | 3 | "Rory sucked in air that tasted of exhaust and dead leaves and the Thames, beautiful mundane London air." | | 4 | "The sound grew louder, more insistent, as if whatever made it had grown bold enough to approach the threshold it had never crossed before." |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |