Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNYVAARGPMMN2Q7YF1MZJ

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Duration:
46.9s
Cost:
$0.008076
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell of Brick Lane seeped through the floorboards—a thick, oily miasma of cumin, cardamom, and frying onions. It clung to the curtains, the sofa, and the towering stacks of books that threatened to topple over in the cramped hallway. Aurora Carter stared at the three heavy deadbolts on the front door. Three locks for a girl who ran away. Another knock sounded. Harder this time. Impatient. She checked her watch. Eva wasn’t due back for hours. If it was the landlord asking about the unauthorized cat again, she was going to lose her temper. She flipped the first lock, then the second. The third gave a groan of protest before sliding back. She pulled the door open. The hallway light flickered, illuminating a charcoal suit cut sharp enough to slice glass. The man standing on the doormat adjusted his cuffs, the ivory handle of a cane catching the yellow light. He smelled of ozone and expensive cologne, a scent that immediately drowned out the curry house below. Rory’s breath hitched in her throat. She gripped the edge of the door until her knuckles turned white. "You've got to be joking." Lucien Moreau looked up. One eye was the colour of polished amber, the other a void of absolute black. He didn't smile. He didn't frown. He simply looked, his gaze dragging over her face as if checking for damage. "May I come in?" "No." "Very well." He leaned against the doorframe, blocking the escape route. Not that he needed to block it physically; his presence alone did the work, filling the tiny entrance with a suffocating weight. The cane tapped against the floorboards. *Tap. Tap. Tap.* "Ptolemy is going to scratch you if you stand there," she said, keeping her voice flat. "I like the cat. The cat has good taste." A tabby cat wound its way through Rory’s legs, arching its back and hissing low in its throat at the visitor. Lucien glanced down, the black eye swirling slightly, and the cat immediately backed away, tail puffed, disappearing behind a stack of ancient scrolls. "Bullying animals now? That's a new low, even for you." "Animals sense power, Rory. They respect it." "I respect a lot of things. You aren't one of them." She moved to slam the door. His hand shot out, catching the wood. No strain showed in his fingers, no tremble in his wrist. He held the heavy fire door open as if it were made of cardboard. "Let go." "We need to talk." "We talked three months ago. You said what you had to say. I left. End of story." "Is it?" He stepped forward. The hallway was too narrow for this. She had to tilt her head back to meet his gaze. The memories hit her like a physical blow—the secret meetings in the back of Silas’s bar, the way he looked at her across a crowded room, the sharp betrayal when she realized he had used her information to broker a deal with a warlord. "Get out of my building, Lucien." "Silas sent me." Rory paused. "Silas hates you." "Silas hates that I charge double on weekends. He also hates that a banshee is currently tearing apart his cellar, and he requires someone who speaks the language of the dead to negotiate a ceasefire." "Call a medium." "I tried. They're busy. Or dead. It’s hard to keep track." He reached into his jacket. Rory flinched, her hand automatically going to the back pocket where she kept a fold-out knife. He noticed the movement. The corner of his mouth twitched—a ghost of a smirk that didn't reach his strange eyes. Slowly, he pulled out a slim, silver flask. He unscrewed the cap and took a drink, his throat working. "I’m not here for you, Aurora. I’m here because Silas owes me a favour, and collecting it means saving his liquor licence." Rory stared at him. The scars on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom echo of the night they met—the night he saved her from a pair of trolls but refused to explain why. He was chaos wrapped in Italian silk. Trouble with a capital T. "Eva will kill you if you bleed on her rug." "I never bleed." "That’s because you’re soulless." He laughed, a short, sharp sound. He finally let go of the door, stepping back into the dingy corridor of the flat. He smoothed his lapel, the platinum hair gleaming under the buzzing fluorescent light. "I’ll wait downstairs. In the bar." "Silas’s bar is closed." "I have a key." "Of course you do." "Five minutes." He turned to leave. His cane clicked rhythmically against the linoleum. Rory watched him go, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She hated that he still affected her like this. She hated the way the air felt electric when he was near, the way her body screamed *danger* and *stay* all at once. "Wait." He stopped. He didn't turn around. "You can't just walk in here after everything," she said to his back. "You can't just act like you own the city because you’re a half-demon with a fancy suit and a drinking problem." Lucien turned. The amber eye glinted. "I don't own the city, Rory. I own the secrets people keep in it. Including yours." "I don't have secrets from you." "Don't you?" He took a step back toward her. The distance between them vanished again. The scent of ozone filled her nose, overpowering the curry. He reached out, his fingers hovering near her face, tracing the line of her jaw without touching it. "You left Cardiff," he said, his voice dropping to a whisper. "You left the law degree. You left the ex-boyfriend who liked to use fists instead of words. You came here to hide. But you’re not hiding, are you? You’re delivering takeaway for the Golden Empress and living above a bar run by a werewolf." "I’m living my life." "You’re surviving. There is a difference." He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against her shoulder. A light touch. A warning. "Five minutes. If you aren't down there, I will have to assume you’ve decided to join the banshee. And I charge extra for rescuing stubborn women." "Go to hell, Lucien." "Born there, darling. I’m just visiting." He walked away. This time, he didn't stop. He descended the stairs, the sound of his footsteps fading into the ambient noise of the street. Rory closed the door. She slid the first bolt home. Then the second. Her hand shook as she grabbed the third. Ptolemy crept out from behind the scrolls, eyeing the door suspiciously. He meowed, demanding dinner. "I know," Rory whispered, leaning her forehead against the cool wood of the door. "I know." She looked around the flat. Books on magic, on law, on demonology. A life half-built. She looked at her wrist, at the small crescent scar. Then she looked at the door. She undid the bolts. One. Two. Three.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"throbbed"
3"echo"
4"silk"
5"gleaming"
6"electric"
7"tracing"
8"whisper"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1164
ratio0.004
matches
0"Tap. Tap. Tap."
1"danger"
2"stay"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount809
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory8
Silas1
Italian1
Lucien3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Italian"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if checking for damage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1164
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean17.12
std17.46
cv1.02
sampleLengths
060
17
246
35
450
518
65
739
84
91
102
1140
1216
139
1444
1510
167
1711
1838
192
204
2117
222
2365
246
253
265
2735
283
2911
3041
3119
3222
3345
3410
353
364
3735
386
394
404
414
422
4356
441
456
4634
476
4816
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences130
ratio0.038
matches
0"The smell of Brick Lane seeped through the floorboards—a thick, oily miasma of cumin, cardamom, and frying onions."
1"Not that he needed to block it physically; his presence alone did the work, filling the tiny entrance with a suffocating weight."
2"The memories hit her like a physical blow—the secret meetings in the back of Silas’s bar, the way he looked at her across a crowded room, the sharp betrayal when she realized he had used her information to broker a deal with a warlord."
3"The corner of his mouth twitched—a ghost of a smirk that didn't reach his strange eyes."
4"The scars on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom echo of the night they met—the night he saved her from a pair of trolls but refused to explain why."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02822085889570552
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013496932515337423
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean8.95
std7.97
cv0.89
sampleLengths
018
122
212
38
43
53
61
74
86
918
108
1110
125
1314
1419
1517
166
1712
185
194
2015
213
223
2314
244
251
262
279
2822
296
301
311
321
3316
349
3521
3623
3710
387
3911
406
417
4211
4314
442
454
4617
472
483
497
45.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.35384615384615387
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Slowly, he pulled out a"
1"Then the second."
2"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.038
15.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences80
matches
0"It clung to the curtains,"
1"She checked her watch."
2"She flipped the first lock,"
3"She pulled the door open."
4"He smelled of ozone and"
5"She gripped the edge of"
6"He didn't smile."
7"He didn't frown."
8"He simply looked, his gaze"
9"He leaned against the doorframe,"
10"she said, keeping her voice"
11"She moved to slam the"
12"His hand shot out, catching"
13"He held the heavy fire"
14"He stepped forward."
15"She had to tilt her"
16"He reached into his jacket."
17"He noticed the movement."
18"He unscrewed the cap and"
19"He was chaos wrapped in"
ratio0.513
28.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences80
matches
0"The smell of Brick Lane"
1"It clung to the curtains,"
2"Aurora Carter stared at the"
3"Another knock sounded."
4"She checked her watch."
5"Eva wasn’t due back for"
6"She flipped the first lock,"
7"The third gave a groan"
8"She pulled the door open."
9"The hallway light flickered, illuminating"
10"The man standing on the"
11"He smelled of ozone and"
12"Rory’s breath hitched in her"
13"She gripped the edge of"
14"Lucien Moreau looked up."
15"He didn't smile."
16"He didn't frown."
17"He simply looked, his gaze"
18"He leaned against the doorframe,"
19"The cane tapped against the"
ratio0.863
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"If it was the landlord"
ratio0.013
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"It clung to the curtains, the sofa, and the towering stacks of books that threatened to topple over in the cramped hallway."
1"He simply looked, his gaze dragging over her face as if checking for damage."
2"A tabby cat wound its way through Rory’s legs, arching its back and hissing low in its throat at the visitor."
3"He reached out, his fingers hovering near her face, tracing the line of her jaw without touching it."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping to a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.047
82.7726%