Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYNZJFFATJR9ERECKRYCCT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.009088
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest sign cast an eerie glow over the wet pavement. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter against the London drizzle, the delivery box balanced against her hip. Three years. Three years since she'd last stood on this street corner, three years since she'd fled Cardiff with nothing but a backpack and a broken heart. The heavy oak door of Silas' bar yielded to her push, releasing warmth and the low murmur of conversation into the cool evening air. The familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapped around her like a forgotten blanket. The walls, adorned with their collection of old maps and black-and-white photographs, remained unchanged—frozen in time while she had been anything but. She scanned the room instinctively, her eyes landing behind the bar where a figure polished a glass with methodical precision. Grey-streaked auburn hair, a neatly trimmed beard, and the silver signet ring that had always caught the light just so. Silas Blackwood. Six years since their last conversation, though it felt like a lifetime had passed between them. He looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers across the room. The glass stopped midway through its polishing rotation. Time seemed to hang suspended in the amber lighting of the bar. "Aurora?" The name—not Rory, not Carter, but Aurorasent a jolt through her. It was the name he'd always used when they were alone, when the weight of the world pressed in on them both. "Silas." Her voice surprised her, steadier than she felt. He set the glass down with deliberate care, his movements betraying the slight limp in his left leg that age had only worsened. "I heard you were back in London." "Word travels fast in your circles." "Some circles never close completely." He gestured to the stool before him. "Drink?" Rory slid onto the leather seat, the delivery box resting at her feet. "Just a soda. I'm still working." Silas raised an eyebrow but said nothing as he poured the drink, ice clinking against glass. The silence between them stretched, filled with the ghosts of conversations past and the weight of all that remained unsaid. "You look different," he finally said, sliding the glass across the polished bar. "Older." "Isn't that the point of time passing?" She ran a hand through her straight black hair, a nervous habit she'd never outgrown. "You haven't changed much. Still running intelligence operations from behind a bar?" "The operations have changed. So has the intelligence." He leaned forward, elbows on the bar, the signet ring glinting. "Last time we spoke, you were determined to make your father proud. Pre-Law at Cardiff, with a promising future ahead." Rory's fingers found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, tracing its outline unconsciously. "Plans change." "So I heard. Something about an abusive ex and a hasty departure." His tone was gentle but probing. "Eva reached out, didn't she?" "You know she did." Rory took a sip of her soda, the cold liquid doing little to quench the heat rising in her cheeks. "You always know everything." "Not everything." Silas turned away briefly to serve another customer, giving her a moment to breathe. When he returned, his expression had softened. "I worried about you, Aurora." "You didn't have to." "Didn't I?" He picked up a cloth, wiping at a spot on the bar that didn't exist. "After Prague, after everything... I thought you understood that people who matter are worth worrying about." The Prague operation. The one that had ended his career in MI6, that had left him with a permanent knee injury and a collection of scars that went far deeper than bone. The operation she had helped him plan, the one he had refused to let her join despite her insistence. "I understood plenty," she said, her voice dropping to match the lowered lights of the bar. "I understood that you make decisions for people without consulting them. That you think you know what's best." His fingers stilled on the bar cloth. "I was trying to protect you." "From what? Living my own life? Making my own mistakes?" She shook her head. "That's the problem with spies, Silas. You think you're saving the world one secret at a time, but really you're just manipulating people to fit your version of reality." The words hung between them, sharper than any knife. Silas straightened, the years of command evident in the set of his shoulders. "And what version of reality are you living in now, Aurora? Delivering food for a Chinese restaurant, living above a bar because it's convenient? Is this the life you imagined when we planned your future?" "At least it's my life. Not one you scripted for me." She stood abruptly, reaching for the delivery box at her feet. "I should go. My shift—" "Wait." His hand shot across the bar, not touching her but creating a barrier she couldn't ignore. "I'm sorry." "For what?" "For everything. For Prague. For pushing you away. For not being the friend you needed when Evan—" He stopped, the name hanging in the air between them. Rory's breath caught. "You knew about Evan?" "I know many things." Silas withdrew his hand, the silver signet ring catching the light as he did. "Including that the people who matter most rarely stay gone forever." She sank back onto the stool, the anger draining out of her as quickly as it had arrived. "Why didn't you say something?" "And what would I have said?" He shook his head. "You had already made your choice. You were leaving Cardiff, leaving him, leaving the life everyone expected of you. My interference wouldn't have helped." "Since when do you care about interference?" A small smile touched her lips, the first genuine one since entering the bar. Silas returned the smile, the lines around his eyes softening. "Since Prague. Since I realized that some things are more important than operations, than secrets, than carefully constructed plans." The weight of his words settled around them, heavier than the London rain outside. Rory looked at her hands, at the crescent scar that marked her past, at the delivery uniform that marked her present. "I missed you, you know," she said quietly. "Even when I was angry with you." "The feeling was mutual." Silas reached beneath the bar, pulling out a small envelope. "I kept this for you. Thought you might come back eventually." Rory took the envelope, recognizing her own handwriting on the front. The letter she had written to him before leaving Cardiff, the one she had never sent. The one that contained all her fears, her dreams, her regrets. "You never opened it." "Some things are meant to be read at the right time." He gestured to the envelope. "Now seems as good as any." With trembling fingers, Rory broke the seal, unfolding the paper that had yellowed slightly with age. Her eyes scanned the words she had written years ago, the words of a younger woman who still believed the world could be saved with the right plan, the right protection, the right person guiding her way. "You were right," she said, refolding the letter. "About everything." Silas reached across the bar, his fingers briefly brushing hers. "No, Aurora. I wasn't right. I was just afraid. And fear makes fools of us all." The sounds of the bar faded into the background as they sat there, two old friends who had lost their way and found each other again in the amber light of The Raven's Nest. The green neon sign continued to cast its glow over the London streets, a beacon for those who knew how to find their way home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
49.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"Silas turned away [away]"
2"She stood abruptly [abruptly]"
3"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.755
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.151
80.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"really"
2"quickly"
3"carefully"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"scripted"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"methodical"
4"weight"
5"eyebrow"
6"silence"
7"glinting"
8"determined"
9"tracing"
10"scripted"
11"constructed"
12"beacon"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his words"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1281
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount840
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter2
London3
Cardiff2
Blackwood1
Rory8
Aurora2
Silas8
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a lifetime had passed between"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.342
wordCount1281
matches
0"not Rory, not Carter, but Aurora"
1"not Carter, but Aurora"
2"not touching her but creating a barrier she couldn't ignore"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean27.85
std16.27
cv0.584
sampleLengths
060
162
258
331
41
533
69
730
86
913
1019
1136
1214
1334
1439
1517
1623
1728
1828
194
2033
2151
2234
2313
2443
2557
2627
2719
282
2927
307
3129
3223
3334
3421
3529
3635
3715
3825
3938
404
4122
4253
4310
4426
4559
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences94
ratio0.021
matches
0"The walls, adorned with their collection of old maps and black-and-white photographs, remained unchanged—frozen in time while she had been anything but."
1"The name—not Rory, not Carter, but Aurora—sent a jolt through her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount387
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.025839793281653745
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007751937984496124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.63
std8.23
cv0.604
sampleLengths
016
117
22
325
424
516
622
720
820
92
1016
1111
128
1312
141
1511
1622
179
1823
197
206
2112
221
2313
246
2516
2620
2713
281
2922
3012
3119
3220
3315
342
3518
365
3724
384
3916
407
415
424
4317
4416
453
4629
4719
4816
4918
65.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4574468085106383
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences60
matches
0"She scanned the room instinctively,"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"It was the name he'd"
3"Her voice surprised her, steadier"
4"He set the glass down"
5"He gestured to the stool"
6"he finally said, sliding the"
7"She ran a hand through"
8"He leaned forward, elbows on"
9"His tone was gentle but"
10"He picked up a cloth,"
11"she said, her voice dropping"
12"His fingers stilled on the"
13"She shook her head"
14"She stood abruptly, reaching for"
15"His hand shot across the"
16"He stopped, the name hanging"
17"She sank back onto the"
18"He shook his head"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.383
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her jacket"
2"The heavy oak door of"
3"The familiar scent of aged"
4"The walls, adorned with their"
5"She scanned the room instinctively,"
6"He looked up, his hazel"
7"The glass stopped midway through"
8"Time seemed to hang suspended"
9"The name—not Rory, not Carter,"
10"It was the name he'd"
11"Her voice surprised her, steadier"
12"He set the glass down"
13"He gestured to the stool"
14"Rory slid onto the leather"
15"Silas raised an eyebrow but"
16"The silence between them stretched,"
17"he finally said, sliding the"
18"She ran a hand through"
19"He leaned forward, elbows on"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Grey-streaked auburn hair, a neatly trimmed beard, and the silver signet ring that had always caught the light just so."
1"The one that had ended his career in MI6, that had left him with a permanent knee injury and a collection of scars that went far deeper than bone."
2"Rory looked at her hands, at the crescent scar that marked her past, at the delivery uniform that marked her present."
3"With trembling fingers, Rory broke the seal, unfolding the paper that had yellowed slightly with age."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stopped, the name hanging in the air between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7925%