Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYP01MY5DXBTVGYSDXQPRJ

Run Details

Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.001334
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Camden High Street, carving rivulets through the grime and turning the gaslights into smoky, drowning orbs. Harlow Quinn sprinted, her heavy soles scuffing the wet pavement, her breath hitching in her chest. The air tasted of iron and stagnant water, a sharp contrast to the stinging cold wind. Ahead, a figure in a heavy, oil-stained coat scrambled over a dumpster, vaulting onto the rusted railing of a shopfront. He didn't look back until he reached the roof edge, turning only long enough to glare over his shoulder. His face was obscured by the brim of a wool cap, but the olive hue of his skin gleamed slick in the streetlamp glare. "End of the line, Detective." Harlow slammed into the brick wall, her shoulder absorbing the impact. She shook out her arms, checking the grip on her service weapon. The rain plastered her salt-and-pepper cropped hair to her skull, cold and tight. She looked up at the rooftop. He was already moving, a silhouette against the grey sky. She didn't chase him up the ladder immediately. Instead, she unholstered the .38, aiming at the rain-slicked tiles above. "Morris didn't check the roof. There are too many variables up there." "Morris didn't have the merchandise." She gritted her teeth. "Get down here." He laughed, a harsh, jagged sound that bounced off the brickwork. He threw something—a heavy object that clattered against the pavement and skidded to a halt at her boots. A silver vial, half-buried in the puddle, its contents swirling dark and viscous. "I've got the goods. You've got the badge. Someone's losing tonight." He turned and vaulted off the building, vanishing into the labyrinth of alleys that hugged the back of the market district. Harlow stared at the vial. Her jaw tightened. She didn't pick it up. She holstered her gun and broke into a sprint, following the faint, scraping sound of footsteps leading away from the main thoroughfare and down into the shadowed mouth of an unmarked service alley. The rain here was heavier, driven by the canyon walls of brick and wood. The footsteps didn't pause. They led toward an old, boarded-up Tube station entrance, the 'A' in Underground faded and peeling. A flicker of movement in the gloom caught her eye—a shadow detaching itself from the brickwork. Harlow slowed, putting a hand on the wall to steady herself. She knew this area. It was supposed to be cleared out months ago. The station had been closed after the structural failure, deemed unsafe, then abandoned. The speculation on the gossip forums was different. They said the concrete had healed, that the doors no longer needed keys, only a trade. She spotted him ahead, cutting through the maintenance hatch wedged into the concrete embankment. The door hissed as it disengaged from the frame, revealing a dark, vertical shaft. "Quinn, you really shouldn't come." She didn't respond, just vaulted the low wall and dropped into the shaft, landing hard on the concrete stairs. The air down here was still, stagnant, smelling of ozone and something sweet, like rotting fruit. The descent seemed endless. The walls were damp, slick with condensation. Her boots made rhythmic thuds, bouncing off the concrete walls. Down she went, deeper than the Tube ever went, past the subterranean rivers and the dormant tracks. When she finally hit the bottom, she found herself in a massive, cavernous space. It was a disused platform, lined with rusted tracks that curved away into absolute blackness. The ceiling was a web of exposed pipes and cables. He was waiting at the end of the platform, back to her, examining a small, brass door set into the far wall. "The Veil Market," she said, her voice echoing. He turned. He took a slow step toward her, wiping his hands on his coat. The scar on his left forearm, pale and raised, glistened in the dim, flickering light of a gas lantern he’d lit. "Talk fast." "You're investigating the disappearances. The ones that didn't end up in morgue bags." "The clique," she said, keeping her distance, her eyes scanning the perimeter for traps. "You work for them now, don't you?" "I deliver packages. Sometimes medicine, sometimes poison. Depends on the customer." He reached into his pocket. Harlow raised the .38. He froze. "Just the stuff inside the vial," she said. "The map." She lowered the gun an inch. "What?" "The drug isn't the map. It's the key to find the cache." He smiled, a crooked, desperate thing. "You want to find what killed Morris, don't you? You want justice." "I want the truth." "And this is the only place you get close to it." Harlow looked at the brass door. To someone without the proper token, it looked like solid metal. She knew the rumors: bone from the recently departed, cut from the knuckles, used to bypass the wards. She looked at the man's hands, at the slight callous on his index finger. He had the file. He tossed the vial to her. She caught it, the glass cold and firm in her grip. "Now go. Before the moon shifts." She caught the vial, slipped it into her inner pocket. She looked at the dark tunnel leading away from the door, deep into the earth, where the neon signs of an underground city would bloom if the doors opened. It was the heart of the city's rot, a place where standard police procedure vanished, where forensic evidence turned to ash. A sound from the darkness—a clink of metal against metal, a low whispersent a chill down her spine. This wasn't just a black market; it was a portal. He pushed the brass door with both hands. It groaned, grinding against a seal that hadn't been broken in years. A slit of light, stark and unnatural, appeared across the threshold. Outside of it, a green neon sign flickered to life: *The Veil Market*. Harlow stood her ground, her boots planted on the damp concrete, her eyes narrowing. She could turn around. She could go back up those stairs, back to the rain, back to the safety of the daylight and the departmental bureaucracy. She could file a report claiming she lost the suspect in a flooded tunnel and leave the rest to the bureaucracy. But if she did, the truth about Morris died down here with it. "I'm coming with you," she said, keeping her hand on her weapon but taking a deliberate step forward. He stepped back, the light from the neon wash washing over his face, turning his olive skin pale. "You don't know what you're walking into." "I know exactly what I'm doing." She stepped across the threshold, the air instantly shifting from cold damp to the heavy, suffocating heat of a thousand people moving in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1144
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1144
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"variables"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"variables"
1"footsteps"
2"flicker"
3"gloom"
4"rhythmic"
5"echoing"
6"scanning"
7"standard"
8"whisper"
9"chill"
10"down her spine"
11"stark"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1134
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Veil Market"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount978
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Tube"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Tube2
Harlow7
Veil1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tube"
2"Harlow"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like solid metal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1134
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"healed, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.37
std18.89
cv0.716
sampleLengths
053
163
25
352
431
55
67
742
811
921
1046
1150
1261
1328
145
1535
1638
1739
1822
198
2036
212
2213
2321
2422
258
262
277
2830
294
3011
3153
3217
336
3460
3528
3644
3761
3813
3918
4025
416
4225
87.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"was obscured"
1"was supposed"
2"been closed"
3"been broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was waiting"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"He threw something—a heavy object that clattered against the pavement and skidded to a halt at her boots."
1"A flicker of movement in the gloom caught her eye—a shadow detaching itself from the brickwork."
2"A sound from the darkness—a clink of metal against metal, a low whisper—sent a chill down her spine."
3"This wasn't just a black market; it was a portal."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount414
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, oil-stained coat"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.03140096618357488
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.012077294685990338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.81
std6.5
cv0.55
sampleLengths
021
116
216
320
419
524
65
711
812
913
106
1110
128
1311
1412
155
164
173
1811
1918
2013
2111
2221
235
243
255
2633
2714
284
2916
3016
3111
324
339
3413
358
3616
3714
3814
395
4019
4116
424
437
4410
4517
4614
4715
4810
4922
36.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3020833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners29
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Instead, she unholstered the .38," 1/1/2038, 12:00:00 AM
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences76
matches
0"He didn't look back until"
1"His face was obscured by"
2"She shook out her arms,"
3"She looked up at the"
4"He was already moving, a"
5"She didn't chase him up"
6"She gritted her teeth."
7"He laughed, a harsh, jagged"
8"He threw something—a heavy object"
9"He turned and vaulted off"
10"Her jaw tightened."
11"She didn't pick it up."
12"She holstered her gun and"
13"They led toward an old,"
14"She knew this area."
15"It was supposed to be"
16"They said the concrete had"
17"She spotted him ahead, cutting"
18"She didn't respond, just vaulted"
19"Her boots made rhythmic thuds,"
ratio0.579
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences76
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted, her heavy"
1"The air tasted of iron"
2"He didn't look back until"
3"His face was obscured by"
4"Harlow slammed into the brick"
5"She shook out her arms,"
6"The rain plastered her salt-and-pepper"
7"She looked up at the"
8"He was already moving, a"
9"She didn't chase him up"
10"She gritted her teeth."
11"He laughed, a harsh, jagged"
12"He threw something—a heavy object"
13"A silver vial, half-buried in"
14"He turned and vaulted off"
15"Harlow stared at the vial."
16"Her jaw tightened."
17"She didn't pick it up."
18"She holstered her gun and"
19"The rain here was heavier,"
ratio0.895
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"To someone without the proper"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted, her heavy soles scuffing the wet pavement, her breath hitching in her chest."
1"He threw something—a heavy object that clattered against the pavement and skidded to a halt at her boots."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice echoing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7468%