Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYP0564MT79528NRBB26Y2

Run Details

Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.001857
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove was too still. Rory adjusted the strap of her backpack, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit. The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly against her collarbone, its warmth inconsistent. She’d come here because Eva swore the grove held answers, but the place felt wrong. Not dangerous, not yet. Just... off. Like walking into a room where someone had rearranged the furniture and didn’t tell you. Moonlight filtered through the ancient oaks, casting long, skeletal shadows across the standing stones. The wildflowers shouldn’t have been blooming in November, but they sprawled in riotous color underfoot, petals unnervingly vibrant in the dark. Rory exhaled, watching her breath mist in the cold. The grove was supposed to be a shortcut, a way to bypass the hours of research she’d been drowning in. Now, she wasn’t so sure. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Rory froze. The sound hadn’t been close, but it wasn’t the wind. Too deliberate. She turned her head slowly, scanning the tree line. Nothing moved. “Hello?” Her voice didn’t echo. The grove swallowed it whole. The pendant flared hot against her skin. She reached for it instinctively, the crimson gem humming under her fingertips. Eva had warned her about this—the Heartstone reacted to things unseen. Rory’s pulse kicked up. She wasn’t alone. Another sound. Not a snap this time, but a whisper of fabric, like someone brushing against low-hanging branches. Behind her. Rory spun. The grove was empty. Her breath came faster now. She could leave. She should leave. But the stones loomed ahead, marking the heart of the clearing, and something tugged at her—curiosity or stupidity, she wasn’t sure. The pendant’s warmth spread, insistent. She took a step forward. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like damp velvet. The wildflowers swayed, though there was no breeze. Rory’s boots sank slightly into the earth, as if the ground itself was softening beneath her. A low, rhythmic hum filled the space between the trees. Not a voice. Not an animal. Just... vibration. It thrummed in her ribs, in her teeth. The pendant pulsed in time. Rory’s fingers tightened around the strap of her backpack. “Okay,” she muttered. “This is fine.” A shadow flickered at the edge of her vision. She jerked her head to the side. Nothing. Just the play of moonlight and leaves. But the back of her neck prickled. She was being watched. The humming grew louder. Rory took another step. The standing stones were close now, their surfaces rough with carvings she couldn’t make out in the dark. The air smelled wrong—sickly sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot. Something brushed her shoulder. She gasped, whirling, but there was nothing there. Just the empty grove. The pendant burned against her chest. “Stop it,” she hissed, though she wasn’t sure who she was talking to. Herself. The grove. Whatever was playing games with her. The humming stopped. Silence crashed down, sudden and suffocating. Rory’s ears rang with the absence of sound. The flowers had stilled. Even the shadows seemed to hold their breath. Then, from the trees—a laugh. Soft. Giggling. Childlike. Rory’s blood turned to ice. The laughter came again, closer this time. Playful. Taunting. It skittered through the underbrush, just out of sight. “Who’s there?” Her voice shook. No answer. Just another giggle, this time from her right. Rory backed toward the standing stones, her heartbeat thundering in her ears. The pendant was scalding now, the chain biting into her neck. She didn’t dare take her eyes off the trees. A figure darted between the oaks. Small. Quick. Gone before she could focus. Her breath hitched. “Eva?” The laughter came again, but it wasn’t Eva’s. It was wrong. Too high. Too sharp. Like something trying to mimic joy and failing. The ground beneath her feet shifted. Rory looked down. The wildflowers were wilting, petals curling black at the edges. The earth darkened, damp spreading in inky tendrils toward her boots. The humming returned, warped now—a dissonant, grating noise that set her teeth on edge. The pendant’s glow flickered, dimming as if drained. Something moved in the trees. Not a shadow this time. A shape. Hunched. Watching. Rory’s hands trembled. She took a step back. Another. The figure tilted its head. Then it stepped into the moonlight. Rory didn’t scream. The sound lodged in her throat, trapped. The thing staring back at her wore Eva’s face—but the eyes were wrong. Too wide. Too black. The smile stretched too far. “You’re not her,” Rory whispered. The thing that wasn’t Eva giggled again. The pendant went cold.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:41:01.356Z" 2/19/2026, 12:41:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"scanning"
3"echo"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"loomed"
7"velvet"
8"rhythmic"
9"flickered"
10"silence"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords767
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount754
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Eva5
November1
Herself1
Rory15
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"November"
3"Herself"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
69.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.304
wordCount767
matches
0"Not a snap this time, but a whisper of fabric, like someone brushing against low-hangi"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean16.32
std15.75
cv0.965
sampleLengths
074
169
27
325
41
59
67
730
820
92
104
1137
125
1334
1431
1515
169
1726
184
1933
204
2118
2222
233
2426
255
263
275
2818
295
3010
3132
326
337
344
3523
366
3724
3822
3914
409
415
426
4332
445
457
464
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"was supposed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was softening"
1"was being"
2"was talking"
3"was playing"
4"was scalding"
5"were wilting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences125
ratio0.056
matches
0"Rory adjusted the strap of her backpack, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit."
1"Eva had warned her about this—the Heartstone reacted to things unseen."
2"But the stones loomed ahead, marking the heart of the clearing, and something tugged at her—curiosity or stupidity, she wasn’t sure."
3"The air smelled wrong—sickly sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot."
4"Then, from the trees—a laugh."
5"The humming returned, warped now—a dissonant, grating noise that set her teeth on edge."
6"The thing staring back at her wore Eva’s face—but the eyes were wrong."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount762
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wrong—sickly sweet, like"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03805774278215223
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007874015748031496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean6.14
std4.67
cv0.761
sampleLengths
09
118
211
315
44
51
61
715
814
921
109
1120
125
137
142
1510
162
179
182
191
204
215
227
2312
2411
254
263
272
2816
292
302
314
325
333
343
3521
365
375
3810
398
4016
4110
423
433
441
451
468
475
489
493
46.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.336
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just the play of moonlight"
1"Just the empty grove."
2"Even the shadows seemed to"
3"Then, from the trees—a laugh."
4"Just another giggle, this time"
5"Then it stepped into the"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences91
matches
0"She’d come here because Eva"
1"She turned her head slowly,"
2"Her voice didn’t echo."
3"She reached for it instinctively,"
4"She wasn’t alone."
5"Her breath came faster now."
6"She could leave."
7"She should leave."
8"She took a step forward."
9"It thrummed in her ribs,"
10"She jerked her head to"
11"She was being watched."
12"She gasped, whirling, but there"
13"she hissed, though she wasn’t"
14"It skittered through the underbrush,"
15"Her voice shook"
16"She didn’t dare take her"
17"Her breath hitched."
18"It was wrong."
19"She took a step back."
ratio0.22
53.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly"
3"She’d come here because Eva"
4"Moonlight filtered through the ancient"
5"The wildflowers shouldn’t have been"
6"Rory exhaled, watching her breath"
7"The grove was supposed to"
8"A twig snapped somewhere to"
9"The sound hadn’t been close,"
10"She turned her head slowly,"
11"Her voice didn’t echo."
12"The grove swallowed it whole."
13"The pendant flared hot against"
14"She reached for it instinctively,"
15"Eva had warned her about"
16"Rory’s pulse kicked up."
17"She wasn’t alone."
18"The grove was empty."
19"Her breath came faster now."
ratio0.813
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now, she wasn’t so sure."
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The humming returned, warped now—a dissonant, grating noise that set her teeth on edge."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.857
78.6409%