Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYP0S2K9R5ABEJ8EZ7BG5Q

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.006565
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The boundary line felt like walking through a curtain of static electricity. Aurora crossed it, the hair on her arms rising beneath the leather jacket. Richmond Park disappeared behind the wall of ancient oak standing stones. Their bark groaned, shifting against the earth without wind. The air inside tasted of ozone and wet earth, thick enough to coat the tongue. She stopped. The silence here possessed weight. It pressed against her eardrums, drowning out the distant hum of London traffic. No cars passed. No trains rumbled. The city ceased to exist beyond the perimeter. Aurora lifted the Heartstone Pendant. The deep crimson gemstone hung from the silver chain, resting against her collarbone. Heat radiated from the stone, seeping into her skin. The glow pulsed, a rhythmic thrum matching the beat of her own heart. She traced the edge of the gem with her thumb. The surface felt smooth, like polished glass, yet it burned. "Show yourself." Her voice died instantly. The air swallowed the sound. No echo returned. The words vanished into the damp soil. Wildflowers surrounded her boots. Petals of violet and white opened wide despite the November chill. Dew coated the leaves, glittering in the faint light emitted by the stone. Nothing moved. No insects chirped. No leaves rustled. The blooms stood rigid, painted onto the landscape. She walked toward the centre of the clearing. Grass crunched under her trainers. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched. She rubbed the skin with her thumb. The sensation spread up her arm, tightening the muscles in her shoulder. Her straight shoulder-length black hair stuck to her neck. Sweat cooled on her skin. She checked her watch. The hands spun counter-clockwise. A branch snapped behind her. Aurora spun. The stones stood silent. Shadows pooled between the roots of the oaks, darker than the surrounding night. She held her breath. The pendant burned hotter. The silver chain grew warm against her neck. "I know you're there." Nothing answered. The darkness remained absolute beyond the circle of crimson light. She continued forward. The path curved around a cluster of foxgloves. The flowers towered higher than normal, brushing her waist. Their bells hung heavy, closed tight. She reached out. The petals felt waxy. Cold. Like plastic. Sap oozed from the stem, clear and viscous. It stained her glove. A whisper drifted from the left. Not words. Just air moving over vocal cords. Dry. Rasping. Aurora froze. Her bright blue eyes scanned the tree line. The darkness shifted. A shape detached itself from the trunk of an oak. It stood tall. Too tall. Limbs elongated, joints bending at angles that defied anatomy. The silhouette wavered. Heat haze distorted the form. She stepped back. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled, catching herself on the rough bark of a stone. The Heartstone flared. Crimson light washed over the clearing, revealing the wildflowers in stark detail. Each petal looked carved from wax. The light cast long shadows that stretched toward her. The shadows moved independent of the light source. The shape moved again. It slid across the ground without lifting its feet. Friction made no sound. "This isn't funny." Her hand shook. She clenched it into a fist. The nail dug into her palm. Pain grounded her. She focused on the physical sensation. The cold air bit at her exposed neck. The smell of ozone strengthened, mixing with the scent of rotting lilies. The odour clogged her nose. She gagged. Another snap. Closer. To the right. She turned. The shadows lengthened. They stretched toward her boots. The light from the pendant dimmed, then surged. The fluctuation matched the shifting shadows. The rhythm accelerated. Her pulse hammered in her throat. Aurora backed against the central stone. Cold moisture seeped through her jacket. She watched the perimeter. The standing stones formed a cage. The gaps between them seemed narrower than before. The wood expanded. Roots pushed up through the soil. Bark split with audible cracks. "Time moves differently here," she muttered. The words hung in the air. They did not fade. They solidified, visible vapour in the cold. A low hum vibrated through the ground. It travelled up her legs, settling in her chest. The pendant grew hot enough to sting. She did not drop it. Her fingers tightened around the gemstone. Skin blistered. She ignored the pain. Blood mixed with the silver chain. Leaves rustled above. She looked up. The canopy blocked the sky. No stars shone through. Only the black weave of branches. Something moved among them. Heavy. Deliberate. Weight bowed the limbs. Twigs snapped under pressure. A twig fell. It landed on her shoulder. She brushed it off. The wood felt warm. Pulsing. Like a vein. Fluid leaked from the end. She circled the stone. Her footsteps made no sound now. The grass absorbed the noise. The silence returned, heavier than before. It pressed against her chest, making each breath a labour. Lungs struggled to draw air. Diaphragm spasmed. The whisper came again. Closer. Behind her ear. Moisture hit her lobe. Breath smelled of stale earth. Aurora whipped around. Empty air. The wildflowers stood still. The petals did not tremble. The air remained stagnant. Dust motes hung suspended. She checked the pendant. The crimson glow flickered. The silver chain twisted on its own, winding tighter around her neck. She clawed at the metal. It resisted. The links felt like wire. Cutting into the skin. "Let go." She pulled. The chain bit into her skin. A thin line of blood welled up. The pendant swung free, striking her sternum. The heat intensified. Smoke rose from the gem. The smell of burnt hair filled the space. The shadows between the stones coalesced. They formed shapes. Humanoid. Multiple. They stood at the edge of the light. Faces remained obscured. Only the outline of heads and shoulders visible. Tall. Immobile. They surrounded her. Aurora stood her ground. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The sound echoed in the quiet clearing. Blood rushed in her ears. She wiped sweat from her brow. Her hand came away red. One of the shapes stepped forward. The grass did not bend under its weight. It hovered inches above the ground. The air shimmered around its form. Distortion. Light bent around the figure. She reached into her pocket. Her fingers closed around the keys to her flat. Metal teeth dug into her skin. A weapon. Improvised. Sharp edges. She held them between her knuckles. The shape tilted its head. No eyes glinted in the dark. Just void. Hollow spaces where features should exist. Darkness poured from the sockets. The hum grew louder. It vibrated in her teeth. The wildflowers began to close. Petals folded inward. The scent of lilies turned sour. Rot spread through the clearing. Leaves blackened. Stems withered. Aurora shifted her weight. Her muscles coiled. The pendant pulsed rapidly now. A warning. Or a beacon. The light strobed. Shadows jumped with each flash. The shape raised an arm. Long fingers extended. They pointed at her chest. At the stone. The gesture held command. Joints clicked. Bone rubbed on bone. She took a breath. The air tasted of ash. Dust coated her throat. She swallowed. The lump in her throat remained. The shadows surged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count2
13
word"footsteps"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"rhythmic"
4"traced"
5"echo"
6"chill"
7"whisper"
8"scanned"
9"wavered"
10"stark"
11"pulse"
12"vibrated"
13"footsteps"
14"flickered"
15"echoed"
16"shimmered"
17"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences231
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences231
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences235
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1187
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
November1
Aurora8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"November"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like walking through a curtain of"
1"seemed narrower than before"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1202
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.62
std17.13
cv0.598
sampleLengths
060
134
260
32
419
544
662
75
835
94
1012
1148
1216
1345
1458
1517
163
1751
186
1933
2044
216
2217
2346
2435
2525
2638
2717
2822
2936
302
3138
3235
3333
3432
3531
3624
3732
3825
3926
4021
413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences231
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs228
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences235
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"moving over vocal cords."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.018487394957983194
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0033613445378151263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences235
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences235
mean5.11
std2.88
cv0.563
sampleLengths
012
113
211
39
415
52
65
713
83
93
108
115
1213
139
1413
1510
1610
172
184
195
203
217
224
2311
2413
252
263
273
288
298
305
318
327
3312
349
355
364
374
385
392
404
4113
424
434
448
454
462
4710
483
498
48.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3446808510638298
totalSentences235
uniqueOpeners81
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences192
matches
0"Just air moving over vocal"
1"Only the black weave of"
2"Only the outline of heads"
3"Light bent around the figure."
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences192
matches
0"Their bark groaned, shifting against"
1"It pressed against her eardrums,"
2"She traced the edge of"
3"Her voice died instantly."
4"She walked toward the centre"
5"She rubbed the skin with"
6"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
7"She checked her watch."
8"She held her breath."
9"She continued forward."
10"Their bells hung heavy, closed"
11"She reached out."
12"It stained her glove."
13"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
14"It stood tall."
15"She stepped back."
16"Her heel caught on a"
17"She stumbled, catching herself on"
18"It slid across the ground"
19"Her hand shook."
ratio0.276
19.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount169
totalSentences192
matches
0"The boundary line felt like"
1"Aurora crossed it, the hair"
2"Richmond Park disappeared behind the"
3"Their bark groaned, shifting against"
4"The air inside tasted of"
5"The silence here possessed weight."
6"It pressed against her eardrums,"
7"The city ceased to exist"
8"Aurora lifted the Heartstone Pendant."
9"The deep crimson gemstone hung"
10"Heat radiated from the stone,"
11"The glow pulsed, a rhythmic"
12"She traced the edge of"
13"The surface felt smooth, like"
14"Her voice died instantly."
15"The air swallowed the sound."
16"The words vanished into the"
17"Wildflowers surrounded her boots."
18"Petals of violet and white"
19"Dew coated the leaves, glittering"
ratio0.88
26.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences192
matches
0"To the right."
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
85.0060%