Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYP7RET5CSAXQT84WEV1QT

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Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.208830

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Aurora finished scrubbing curry sauce off her delivery jacket. Three sharp raps, precise and measured. She froze, hands still damp, recognizing the rhythm. Only one person knocked like that—like punctuation at the end of a perfectly constructed sentence. She dried her hands on her jeans and crossed to the door, pulse quickening. Through the peephole, platinum hair gleamed under the corridor's fluorescent light. Lucien. Of course he'd found her new address. Information was his currency, after all. Aurora undid the locks—all three of them—and pulled the door open just enough to block the entrance with her body. "No." Lucien's heterochromatic gaze swept over her, cataloguing the changes since they'd last met. Six months. Six months since she'd walked out of his Mayfair office and sworn she was done with the supernatural world. Done with him. "Bonsoir to you too, ma chérie." His accent wrapped around the words like smoke. He wore his usual charcoal suit, not a thread out of place despite the East London drizzle beading on his shoulders. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light as he shifted his weight. "May I come in?" "I said no." "You said many things that night." His amber eye—the human one—held something that might have been regret. The black demon eye remained unreadable. "Not all of them were true." "They were true enough." Aurora's fingers tightened on the doorframe. The crescent scar on her wrist ached, the way it always did when she was stressed. "What do you want, Lucien?" "To talk." "We talked. It didn't end well." "As I recall, it ended with you throwing a rather expensive bottle of Château Margaux at my head." "You ducked." "Self-preservation is hardly a character flaw." He paused, and for the first time, she noticed the tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers drummed against his cane. Lucien Moreau, always in control, was nervous. "Rory, please. Five minutes." She wanted to slam the door. Every self-protective instinct screamed at her to shut him out before he could slide past her defenses again. But something in his voice—a rawness she'd rarely heard—made her step back. "Five minutes." He entered her flat with the same fluid grace that had first caught her attention two years ago, when she'd stumbled into a demon bar by accident and he'd kept her from becoming someone's midnight snack. His gaze swept the cramped space, taking in the stacks of newspapers she'd been using to job hunt, the half-eaten takeaway from Golden Empress, the conspicuous absence of anything magical. "You're living like a mundane." "I am a mundane." She closed the door but didn't lock it. Let him know he wasn't staying. "That's what I kept trying to tell you." "Non. You are many things, Aurora Carter, but mundane is not among them." He turned to face her, and the small space suddenly felt smaller. "A mundane would not have survived what you survived. Would not have—" "Don't." The word came out sharper than intended. "Don't romanticize it. I got lucky, that's all. Lucky that Eva knew who to call. Lucky that you were bored enough to help. Lucky that I didn't end up as collateral damage in your world's politics." "Luck." He tested the word like wine on his tongue. "Is that what you tell yourself?" "It's the truth." "The truth is that you saved the Keeper of the Seven Seals from assassination. The truth is that you decoded the Morrighan Cipher when scholars had failed for centuries. The truth is—" "The truth is that I'm tired, Lucien." She sank onto her secondhand sofa, suddenly exhausted. "I'm tired of looking over my shoulder. Tired of wondering if the person serving my coffee is human. Tired of pretending that any of this is normal." He moved closer, cane clicking against the floor. "And you think hiding here, delivering Chinese food, pretending to be someone you're not—this is better?" "It's safer." "For whom?" The question hung between them. She remembered the last job they'd worked—the one that went sideways. The one where she'd nearly died because he'd withheld information, because he'd thought he was protecting her by keeping her in the dark about the true danger. "You lied to me." "I omitted certain details." "You let me walk into a trap." "I miscalculated." For the first time, his composure cracked. "I thought I could control the situation. I thought..." He stopped, jaw tightening. "I was wrong." Aurora looked up at him, startled. Lucien Moreau didn't admit fault. It wasn't in his nature—demon or human. "Say that again." His lips quirked, almost a smile. "Don't press your fortune." "Why are you here, Lucien? Really. Because if this is about another job—" "It's not about a job." "Then what?" He was quiet for a long moment, studying her with those mismatched eyes. When he spoke, his voice was low, careful. "Do you know what the worst part of being half-demon is?" The change of subject threw her. "I—what?" "It's not the politics or the constant testing of loyalties. It's not even the way both worlds look at you with suspicion." He set his cane against the wall and moved closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and smoky. "It's the assumption that because demon blood runs in my veins, I am incapable of certain... human experiences." "Lucien—" "You asked why I'm here." He sat beside her on the sofa, maintaining a careful distance. "I'm here because for six months, I've rehearsed what I would say when I saw you again. Hundreds of clever words, perfect turns of phrase. I'm here because none of them matter." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. "What does matter?" "You were right to leave." The admission seemed to cost him. "I made decisions for you, chose which truths to share and which to withhold. I treated you like—" "Like a mundane." "Oui." He laughed, short and bitter. "Ironic, non? You insist you're ordinary while I couldn't see past how extraordinary you are. I wanted to keep you separate from the uglier aspects of my world, not realizing..." "That I was already in it." "That you had the right to choose your own risks." They sat in silence. Outside, rain drummed against the windows. Somewhere below, the curry house's extraction fan hummed. Aurora studied his profile—the sharp cheekbones, the slight tension around his mouth. He looked tired. When had she last seen Lucien Moreau look anything less than perfectly composed? "You hurt me." "I know." "I trusted you." "I know that too." "And if I said I can't do that again? Trust you?" He turned to her then, and she saw something in his expression she'd never seen before. Uncertainty. "Then I would say that trust is earned, not given. And I would ask—not assume—if you might allow me the chance to earn yours again." "That's very human of you." "Perhaps you're a bad influence." Despite everything, she felt her lips twitch. "Eva says the same thing." "How is the terrifying Miss Crawford?" "Still terrifying. Still trying to convince me that normal is overrated." "Wise woman." "Biased woman. She thinks you're good for me." "And what do you think?" Aurora considered the question. Six months ago, she'd have had an answer ready. Now, sitting close enough to feel the warmth of him, to see the rain droplets still clinging to his hair, she found certainty harder to grasp. "I think you're dangerous." "Yes." "I think you're manipulative." "Guilty." "I think you have a hero complex disguised as ruthless pragmatism." His eyebrows rose. "That's... actually quite perceptive." "And I think..." She turned to face him properly, tucking one leg under her. "I think you're here because you're lonely." Something flickered across his face—surprise, perhaps, or recognition. "Takes one to know one?" "Something like that." They watched each other, the space between them charged with unspoken history. Aurora remembered other moments like this—the almost-kiss after the Seven Seals incident, the night they'd hidden from blood witches in a Camden crypt and she'd fallen asleep against his shoulder, the way he'd looked at her when she'd solved the cipher, like she'd hung the moon. "I can't go back to how things were," she said finally. "I won't be kept in the dark again." "I wouldn't ask you to." "And I won't pretend the last six months didn't happen." "Nor would I." "So where does that leave us?" Lucien reached out, hesitated, then gently took her hand. His thumb brushed over the crescent scar on her wrist—the old wound from a childhood accident that had nothing to do with his world and everything to do with who she was. "Perhaps," he said softly, "it leaves us here. In this moment. With a choice to make." "You make it sound simple." "Nothing about this is simple." His grip on her hand tightened fractionally. "But then, you've never been one for simple, have you?" Aurora looked at their joined hands—his pale and elegant, hers still stained with curry sauce under the nails. Such different worlds they came from. But maybe Eva was right. Maybe normal was overrated. "Your five minutes are up." "So they are." But he didn't move to leave. Neither did she move to make him. The rain continued its rhythm against the windows. Somewhere in the building, someone was cooking something with garlic. Her neighbor's television murmured through the thin walls. All perfectly ordinary sounds of a perfectly ordinary evening, except for the half-demon holding her hand like she was something precious and breakable and worth the risk. "Lucien?" "Mm?" "Next time you show up at my door unannounced, bring wine. Good wine." His smile was slow and genuine—not the practiced charm he wore like armor, but something real. "French or Italian?" "Surprise me. But if I throw it at your head again—" "I'll deserve it?" "You'll definitely deserve it." He lifted her hand to his lips, a gesture that should have felt archaic but somehow didn't. "D'accord. Until next time, then." "Until next time." But he still didn't move to leave, and she didn't pull her hand away, and the rain kept falling, and maybe—just maybe—that was enough for now.
total_cost0.20883

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His accent wrapped around [around]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"her hand tightened fractionally [fractionally]"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.078
71.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count4
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"very"
4"gently"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"constructed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"constructed"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"unreadable"
5"tension"
6"perfect"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
9"complex"
10"flickered"
11"charged"
12"unspoken"
13"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"was nervous"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1700
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount965
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Mayfair1
East1
London1
Lucien6
Moreau3
Golden1
Empress1
Let1
Seven1
Seals1
Camden1
Eva1
Six3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.588
wordCount1700
matches
0"not the practiced charm he wore like armor, but something real"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean16.83
std16.64
cv0.989
sampleLengths
043
139
220
31
437
553
63
729
831
92
106
1118
122
1339
1436
152
1666
175
1826
1937
2044
2116
223
2332
2442
2524
262
272
2843
294
304
317
3225
3318
343
3510
3613
375
382
3932
407
4161
421
4348
449
4529
463
4736
486
4910
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was stressed"
1"was overrated"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"wasn't staying"
1"was protecting"
2"was cooking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences169
ratio0.083
matches
0"Only one person knocked like that—like punctuation at the end of a perfectly constructed sentence."
1"Aurora undid the locks—all three of them—and pulled the door open just enough to block the entrance with her body."
2"\"You said many things that night.\" His amber eye—the human one—held something that might have been regret."
3"But something in his voice—a rawness she'd rarely heard—made her step back."
4"She remembered the last job they'd worked—the one that went sideways."
5"It wasn't in his nature—demon or human."
6"\"It's not the politics or the constant testing of loyalties. It's not even the way both worlds look at you with suspicion.\" He set his cane against the wall and moved closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and smoky."
7"Aurora studied his profile—the sharp cheekbones, the slight tension around his mouth."
8"Something flickered across his face—surprise, perhaps, or recognition."
9"Aurora remembered other moments like this—the almost-kiss after the Seven Seals incident, the night they'd hidden from blood witches in a Camden crypt and she'd fallen asleep against his shoulder, the way he'd looked at her when she'd solved the cipher, like she'd hung the moon."
10"His thumb brushed over the crescent scar on her wrist—the old wound from a childhood accident that had nothing to do with his world and everything to do with who she was."
11"Aurora looked at their joined hands—his pale and elegant, hers still stained with curry sauce under the nails."
12"His smile was slow and genuine—not the practiced charm he wore like armor, but something real."
13"But he still didn't move to leave, and she didn't pull her hand away, and the rain kept falling, and maybe—just maybe—that was enough for now."
95.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount986
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04563894523326572
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014198782961460446
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean10.06
std8.64
cv0.859
sampleLengths
014
16
28
315
414
511
61
77
86
920
101
1113
122
1319
143
1514
1621
1714
184
193
2017
216
226
2310
2416
255
262
276
2818
292
3028
317
324
336
3418
3512
362
3736
3830
395
4012
416
428
4325
4412
458
4636
4710
486
493
69.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4556213017751479
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners77
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences84
matches
0"Only one person knocked like"
1"Of course he'd found her"
2"Somewhere below, the curry house's"
3"Such different worlds they came"
4"Maybe normal was overrated."
5"Somewhere in the building, someone"
ratio0.071
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences84
matches
0"She froze, hands still damp,"
1"She dried her hands on"
2"His accent wrapped around the"
3"He wore his usual charcoal"
4"His amber eye—the human one—held"
5"He paused, and for the"
6"She wanted to slam the"
7"He entered her flat with"
8"His gaze swept the cramped"
9"She closed the door but"
10"He turned to face her,"
11"He tested the word like"
12"She sank onto her secondhand"
13"He moved closer, cane clicking"
14"She remembered the last job"
15"He stopped, jaw tightening"
16"It wasn't in his nature—demon"
17"His lips quirked, almost a"
18"He was quiet for a"
19"He set his cane against"
ratio0.417
96.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences84
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"She froze, hands still damp,"
2"She dried her hands on"
3"Information was his currency, after"
4"Aurora undid the locks—all three"
5"Lucien's heterochromatic gaze swept over"
6"His accent wrapped around the"
7"He wore his usual charcoal"
8"The ivory handle of his"
9"His amber eye—the human one—held"
10"The black demon eye remained"
11"Aurora's fingers tightened on the"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"He paused, and for the"
14"Lucien Moreau, always in control,"
15"She wanted to slam the"
16"Every self-protective instinct screamed at"
17"He entered her flat with"
18"His gaze swept the cramped"
19"She closed the door but"
ratio0.726
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now, sitting close enough to"
ratio0.012
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He entered her flat with the same fluid grace that had first caught her attention two years ago, when she'd stumbled into a demon bar by accident and he'd kept …"
1"His thumb brushed over the crescent scar on her wrist—the old wound from a childhood accident that had nothing to do with his world and everything to do with wh…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stopped, jaw tightening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.02
89.0767%