Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYPA83A2TAXTW1K77NKSYD

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000289
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker echoedlike a gunshot in the cramped hallway. Rory froze mid-reach for her keys, her breath catching. She’d been expecting a delivery, not this. The knock wasn’t frantic, but it wasn’t polite either—it was Lucien Moreau, and he’d just shattered the fragile peace she’d built around Eva’s flat. She pushed the door open a sliver, peering out into the narrow corridor. Moonlight sliced through the grimy window above, illuminating his silhouette framed in the doorway. He didn’t look away, his gaze sharp, assessing. His platinum hair, usually meticulously slicked, looked slightly wind-tousled. The ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh, not quite hidden. His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, unreadable. “Rory,” he said, his voice low, carrying the faint scent of expensive cologne and something else, something ancient. “Or should I call you Laila? Or Malphora?” He pushed the door open wider, stepping inside without invitation. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, shot out from behind the sofa, tail puffed, and skittered across the worn carpet, vanishing under the coffee table. The sudden movement made the thin walls shudder. “Lucien,” she replied, her voice tight, closing the door behind him. She crossed her arms, trying to project indifference, but her knuckles were white where she gripped the wood. “What brings you to my doorstep at this hour?” The flat smelled of old paper, curry spices, and the faint, metallic tang of her own anxiety. Books were stacked precariously on every surface—ancient tomes, grimoires, journals covered in cryptic symbols. A half-empty mug of cold tea sat on the rickety table. He didn’t answer immediately. He took in the chaos, his eyes lingering on the scar on her left wrist, the crescent moon etched into pale skin. “I heard you left the restaurant,” he finally said, his voice smooth as polished obsidian. “Yu-Fei Cheung’s. The Golden Empress. You’re not delivering dumplings anymore, Rory.” He gestured vaguely towards the door, a silent question hanging in the air. “I quit,” she snapped, the word sharp enough to make Ptolemy peek out from under the table, ears twitching. “I’m not delivering anything anymore, Lucien. Especially not to you.” She moved towards the small kitchenette, her movements stiff. “Want some tea? It’s cold, but it’s all I’ve got.” He followed her, his footsteps silent on the worn floorboards. He stopped near the sink, watching her as she fumbled with the kettle. “You’re avoiding me,” he stated, not a question. “Since Cardiff. Since... everything.” She whirled around, the kettle rattling in her hands. “Everything?” The word tasted like ash. “You left. You just... vanished. After everything we had.” The scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom ache from the accident that had nearly ended her life, a memory Lucien had witnessed. “You disappeared without a word.” “I had to,” he countered, his voice hardening. “The world isn’t safe for you, Rory. Not anymore. Not with the things I am.” He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floor, a subtle threat. “The demons, the hunters... they’re closing in. You’re a target.” “A target?” she scoffed, pouring water into the kettle. “Because I’m friends with Eva? Because I know too much?” She slammed the kettle onto the stove, the sound echoing in the small space. “You think I’m stupid? You think I don’t know what you are? Half-demon? A fixer for the supernatural underworld? You think I didn’t see the way you moved, the way you looked at me?” He stepped closer, his presence filling the tiny room. “I didn’t leave you, Rory. I was forced to go into hiding. The Council... they’re hunting me. They’d kill you to get to me.” His amber eye held hers, intense and pleading. “I came back because I need you. You’re the only one who can help me.” “Help you?” she spat, turning away. “By dragging me into your dangerous world? By putting me in the line of fire?” She leaned against the counter, her breath coming fast. “You promised me forever, Lucien. You promised me safety. You promised me you’d never leave.” The memory of his cold, empty bed in Cardiff, the silence after his final message, burned in her chest. “You broke every single one of those promises.” “I didn’t break them,” he whispered, his voice rough. “I broke myself. I had to protect you. I thought... I thought if I was gone, they’d leave you alone.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. “I never stopped loving you, Rory. Not for a second.” She jerked her arm away, the contact sending a jolt through her. “Love?” The word felt like a knife. “You used me, Lucien. You used my trust, my friendship. You used my fear. You left me broken, and now you come back asking for help? After everything?” “I know it’s a lot,” he admitted, his voice thick. “But you’re the only one who understands. The only one who can see past the demon.” He paused, his gaze drifting to the books lining the shelves. “You’re the only one who ever saw me, truly saw me.” He took a step back, his posture suddenly defensive. “I know I don’t deserve a second chance. But I need you to hear me out. Please.” The kettle began to whistle, a sharp, insistent sound that cut through the heavy silence. Rory stared at it, the steam rising like ghosts. The flat was small, suffocating. The past was a weight pressing down on her shoulders. Lucien Moreau stood in her doorway, half-demon, broken, and somehow, still terrifyingly, achingly familiar. The door to her heart was still locked, but the key was trembling in her hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"The word tasted like [like]"
3"The word felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.16
84.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"unreadable"
2"etched"
3"footsteps"
4"throbbed"
5"echoing"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount595
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Moreau2
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Books1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite hidden"
1"felt like a knife"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
38.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean62.67
std17.75
cv0.283
sampleLengths
0111
167
280
365
448
535
652
747
867
956
1072
1150
1247
1374
1469
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"were stacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences63
ratio0.048
matches
0"The knock wasn’t frantic, but it wasn’t polite either—it was Lucien Moreau, and he’d just shattered the fragile peace she’d built around Eva’s flat."
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, unreadable."
2"Books were stacked precariously on every surface—ancient tomes, grimoires, journals covered in cryptic symbols."
98.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.041390728476821195
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.018211920529801324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean14.92
std8.22
cv0.551
sampleLengths
010
19
27
324
413
514
68
79
810
97
1018
1118
1223
138
1411
1518
1626
1714
1811
194
2022
2115
2224
2319
2419
2510
2610
2713
288
294
309
316
3232
335
348
3529
3610
379
3824
3934
409
4132
4215
436
4424
4534
468
479
4831
4910
44.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36507936507936506
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences53
matches
0"She’d been expecting a delivery,"
1"She pushed the door open"
2"He didn’t look away, his"
3"His platinum hair, usually meticulously"
4"His eyes—one amber, one black—held"
5"he said, his voice low,"
6"He pushed the door open"
7"she replied, her voice tight,"
8"She crossed her arms, trying"
9"He didn’t answer immediately."
10"He took in the chaos,"
11"he finally said, his voice"
12"He gestured vaguely towards the"
13"she snapped, the word sharp"
14"She moved towards the small"
15"He followed her, his footsteps"
16"He stopped near the sink,"
17"he stated, not a question"
18"She whirled around, the kettle"
19"he countered, his voice hardening"
ratio0.623
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences53
matches
0"The brass knocker echoedlike a"
1"Rory froze mid-reach for her"
2"She’d been expecting a delivery,"
3"The knock wasn’t frantic, but"
4"She pushed the door open"
5"Moonlight sliced through the grimy"
6"He didn’t look away, his"
7"His platinum hair, usually meticulously"
8"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
9"His eyes—one amber, one black—held"
10"he said, his voice low,"
11"He pushed the door open"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, shot"
13"The sudden movement made the"
14"she replied, her voice tight,"
15"She crossed her arms, trying"
16"The flat smelled of old"
17"Books were stacked precariously on"
18"A half-empty mug of cold"
19"He didn’t answer immediately."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she replied, her voice tight, closing the door behind him"
1"he finally said, his voice smooth as polished obsidian"
2"He gestured vaguely, a silent question hanging in the air"
3"She moved, her movements stiff"
4"he countered, his voice hardening"
5"She slammed, the sound echoing in the small space"
6"She leaned, her breath coming fast"
7"he whispered, his voice rough"
8"He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
9"he admitted, his voice thick"
10"He paused, his gaze drifting to the books lining the shelves"
11"He took, his posture suddenly defensive"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"he stated (state)"
2"she spat (spit)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.286
66.8293%